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Unit 5 Love Mother Nature
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write about your hometown
(介绍家乡)
Unit 5 Love Mother Nature
导作任务Write about your hometown(介绍家乡)
一、审题
口文体
描写说明文(以介绍为主,可适当加入个人感受)
2话题
介绍家乡的地理位置、自然环境、特色事物(如山水、气候、动植物、著名景点等)
3人称
以第一人称my hometown/we/I为主
4时态
一般现在时(描述事实和常态)
5要点
,开头点明家乡名称及地理位置
,描述1~2个自然特色(如山、河、公园、天气等)
,可提及人与自然的和谐关系或对家乡的热爱
6字数
80~100词
二、文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
直接介绍自己的家乡在哪儿
My hometown is a small town in Fujian.It is near the sea.
中间
具体介绍家乡的自然环境或特色
>①地理位置与气候
段落
内容要点
>②自然景物(仙、水、花、树、动物)
>③人们与自然相处的方式(如种树、爱护环境)
结尾
表达对家乡的感情或呼吁保护自然
三、
核心组词造句
核心词汇
词hometown家乡
mountain山
river河流
词
lake湖
park公园tree树
词flower花
clean干净的
bea utiful美丽的
词fresh新鲜的
air空气
nature自然
词love爱
protect保护
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
in the north/south/east/west of...
在.北部/南部/东部/西部
2
be famous for...
以.…闻名
3
a lot of trees and flowers
许多树木和花草
4
clean and fresh air
干净新鲜的空气
5
birds singing in the trees
鸟儿在树上唱歌
6
people take care of...
人们照顾/爱护…
基础造句
1My hometown is in the south of China.
2 There is a beautiful river near my home.
3 The air is very fresh and clean.
4People plant trees every spring.
5I love my hometown because it is like a garden.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
peaceful
宁静的
2
green
绿色的/绿树成荫的
3
lovely
可爱的
序号
单词
释义
4
wonderful
绝妙的
5
environment
环境
6
protect
保护
7
nature lover
热爱自然的人
加分句型
地理位置句
My hometown lies in a valley by the sea/at the foot of a mountain.
描军自然句
The hills are covered with green trees,and wild flowers bloom everywhere in spring.
You can see fish swimming in the clear river and hear birds singing in the trees.
人与自然句
People here always keep the streets and parks clean.
Everyone tries to protect the environment and love Mother Nature.
结尾升华句
I hope more people can come to enjoy the beauty of my hometown.
We should all do our part to keep our hometown beautiful forever.
五、写作模板
My Hometown
My hometown is
(地名).tis
(位置,如in the north of/near a big city),
In my hometown,you can see
(自然景物,如a big lake,many green hills).The air
5
(形容词),and the sky is
(形容词).People here(人们的行为,如
plant trees every year often walk in the park).
I love my hometown because
(理由,如it is beautiful and peaceful)).I want to
(愿望,如protect it and keep it clean).
六、作文仿写
题目
Write about your hometown
范文
My Hometown
My hometown is a small village in the west of Fujian.It is not big,but it is very beautiful.
There is a clear river running through the village.Fish swim in the river,and birds sing in the
trees along the banks.The hills around are covered with green trees.The air is fresh and
clean.People here love nature.They plant flowers in front of their houses and never throw
rubbish into the river.
I love my hometown.I hope it will always be so lovely and peaceful.
(约80词)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍家乡
约96词
Dear Tom,
I am glad to tell you something about my hometown.It is a small but beautiful city in the
south of China,known for its ancient culture.First,there is a famous river running through the
city,and you can see many stone bridges over it.Second,the local food is delicious,
especially the rice noodles with chicken soup.Third,people here are very friendly and warm-
hearted.Besides,every year there is a traditional dragon boat race on the river.I love my
hometown and hope you can visit it one day.
Yours,
Li Ming
拓展范文2介绍家乡
约91词
Dear Lisa,
Let me introduce my hometown to you.It is a beautiful coastal city located on the east coast,
with wonderful beaches.First,you can enjoy the sea view and swim in the clean water.
Second,there are many fresh seafood restaurants,and you must try the grilled fish.Third,the
weather is pleasant all year round,so you can visit anytime.Besides,my hometown is famous
for its annual kite festival,which draws many visitors.I am proud of my hometown and
believe you will fall in love with it too.
Yours,
Zhang Wei