内容正文:
人教新版
Unit 6 A Day in the Life
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Nrite about your school day
(描写上学日日常)
人教新版初一上Unit6 A Day in the Life
写作任务Write about your school day(描写上学日日常)
一、申题
包文体
记叙文(按时间顺序描述一天的活动)
2话题
自己的上学日日常(从早到晚的主要活动)
3人称
以第一人称1为主
4时态
一般现在时(描述每天重复发生的事情)
5要点
,开头总体介绍:I am a student.I have a busy school day.
,按时间顺序写出起床、上学、上课、午餐、放学后的活动
,描述2~3个主要时间段的具体活动
,表达对学校生活的感受(可选)
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、
文章结构(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
一句话引出话题,说明自己的上学日
示例:I am a student.Let me tell you about my school day.
段落
内容要点
中间
按时间顺序描述一天的活动:早晨起床、早餐、上学;上午上课、课间;中午午餐、休
息;下午继续上课、课外活动;傍晚放学回家、做作业
结尾
总结感受或结束语
示例:This is my school day.I think it is busy but happy..
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词get up起床
have breakfast吃早餐
go to school去上学
词cass课;班级
stat开始finish结束
词have lunch吃午餐
go home回家do homework做作业
词watch TV看电视
go to bed上床睡觉
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
get up at six o'clock/six thirty
在六点六点半起床
have breakfast with my family
和家人吃早餐
3
go to school by bus on foot
乘公交/步行去上学
又
have English /math Chinese class
上英语/数学/语文课
play basketball football with
5
和同学打篮球/踢足球
classmates
6
do my homework in the evening
晚上做作业
7
go to bed at about nine o'clock
大约九点上床睡觉
基础造句
1 I get up at six thirty and then I have breakfast.
2 I usually go to school by bus with my friend.
3 The first class starts at eight o'clock.
4I have lunch at school with my classmates.
5After school,I play basketball for an hour.
6I do my homework from seven to eight in the evening.
7 I go to bed at nine,and that's my day.
四、好词好句(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
busy
忙碌的
2
interesting
有趣的
relaxing
令人放松的
4
different
不同的(如classes are different every day)
5
active
活跃的(如I am active in class)
6
tired
累的(但happy)
加分句型
时间顺序连接句
(让文章流畅)
First,I get up at six o'clock.
Then I have breakfast quickly.
After that,I go to school.
At noon,I have lunch with my classmates.
In the afternoon,the classes start again.
After school,I usually play sports or go home.
Finally,I go to bed at nine.
描述活动细节
The first class is English.I like it very much because it's interesting.
I always listen carefully in class and answer questions.
At lunchtime,I often talk with my friends and eat healthy food.
表达感受/总结
My school day is busy but full of fun.
I enjoy every day at school because I can learn new things and meet my friends.
Although I feel a little tired,I am always happy.
五、写作模板
模板一(完整版)
I am a student.Let me tell you about my school day.
In the morning,I get up at
Then I
I go to school at
Classes
start at
In the morning,we have
and
I like
best
because
At noon,I
In the afternoon,we have
and
After school,I
In the evening,I
Then I
at
This is my school day.I think it is
模板二(简洁版)
My school day starts at
Then I
We have
classes in the morning.I like
best.At noon,I
In the
afternoon,we
After school,I
in the evening.I go to bed at
I think my school day is
六、作文仿写
范文一
I am a student.Let me tell you about my school day.
I get up at six thirty.Then I have breakfast with my mum and dad.I go to school by bus at
seven o'clock.The first class starts at eight.In the morning,we have English,math and
Chinese.I like English best because it is interesting and fun.
At noon,I have lunch at school.I eat rice,chicken and vegetables.In the afternoon,we have
two classes.After school,I play basketball with my classmates for half an hour.I go home at
five o'clock.In the evening,I do my homework.Then I watch TV for a short time.I go to bed
at nine o'clock.
This is my school day.I think it is busy but happy.
范文二
Hi,I'm Li Ming.I want to share my school day with you.
My day starts early.I get up at six o'clock.After breakfast,I walk to school because my home
is near.School begins at eight.We have four classes in the morning.My favorite subject is
music because it is relaxing.
At twelve,I eat lunch.I like to talk with my friends during lunch time.In the afternoon,we
have two classes,and then we do sports.I like running.I go home at four thirty.I do my
homework from five to six.After dinner,I read some books.I go to bed at nine.
My school day is full and happy.I love it!
写作小贴士
,使用First/Then/After that/Finally等连接词让顺序清楚
,记得用一般现在时,动词要注意第三人称单数(但这里是第一人称,所以动词原形即可)
>每个时间段写1~2句话,不要太多细节
,字数控制在80~100词,检查拼写和时态
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍上学日日常
约98词
Dear Tom,
I'd like to tell you about my school day.Every morning I get up at 6:30 and go to school by
bus.
1Classes start at 8:00.We have four lessons in the morning,like English,math and Chinese.
2 At noon I have lunch with my classmates and we chat for a while.
3 In the afternoon we have two more classes,then I join the basketball club until 5:00.
After school I go home,do my homework and watch TV.I really enjoy my busy but happy day!
Yours,
Li Wei
拓展范文2描写上学日课堂与课间
约96词
Dear Lucy,
Let me share what a typical school day looks like for me.
Morning:I arrive at school by 7:50.We read English or Chinese aloud for 20 minutes before
the first bell.
Lessons:Teachers explain new things,and we take notes.I find science class the most
interesting.
Break time:Between classes I often play jokes with friends in the hallway.Lunch break is
the best-we eat,talk and laugh together.
Afternoon:We study until 4:30,then clean the classroom.
I love every part of my school day!
Yours,
Zhang Hao