内容正文:
人教新版
Unit 5 Fun Clubs
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题,Email a club leader to join the club
(发邮件申请加入杜团)
人教新版初一上Unit5 Fun Clubs
导作任务Email a club leader to join the club(发邮件申请加入社团)
一、申题
包文体
申请邮件(邮件格式,必须有称呼、正文、结束语、署名)
2话题
向社团负责人发邮件,表达加入社团的意愿
③人称
以第一人称I为主,辅以第二人称you(指杜团负责人)
4时态
一般现在时(介绍自己的兴趣、能力)+一般将来时(表达希望加入后的打算)
5要点
,点明写信目的:想加入哪个社团
,介绍自己的兴趣爱好或特长(与社团相关)
,说明自己能做些什么或为什么适合
,表达希望被接受的愿望,并请求回复
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
打招呼+开内见山,说明写信目的(想加入某杜团)
中间
介绍自己的兴趣或特长(如喜欢唱歌、画画、打球等),说明自己能做哪些贡献(如会弹
吉他、擅长绘画等)
段落
内容要点
结尾
表达希望加入的愿望,请求回复,并礼貌结束
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词
club社团
join加入
词leader负责人interest兴趣
词
skil技能
enjoy享受,喜欢
词activity活动
member成员
词practice练习
hope希望
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
join the club
加入社团
2
be interested in...
对.…感兴趣
3
be good at...
擅长…
4
have fun doing sth.
做某事很有趣
5
learn new things
学习新东西
6
make friends
交朋友
7
look forward to your reply
期待您的回复
基础造句
1I am writing to join your club.(我写信申请加入您的杜团。)
2 I am very interested in music.(我对音乐很感兴趣。)
3 I can play the guitar well..(我吉他弹得很好。)
4 I hope I can become a member of your club..(我希望成为你们杜社团的一员.)
5I will try my best to do well in club activities.
(我会尽力做好社团活动。)
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
talented
有亨华的
2
wonderful
精彩的
3
improve
提高,改善
序号
单词
释义
4
experience
经历,体验
5
really
真正地(加强语气)
6
creative
有创意的
加分句型
表达兴趣类
I have a great interest in...
I really enjoy doing ..
What interests me most is...
说明能力类
I am good at...and I have learned it for...years.
I can...very well because I practice it every day.
I have a lot of experience in...
请求加入类
I would be very happy if you could accept me.
I hope you can give me a chance to join the club.
I look forward to doing activities with other members.
结尾礼貌句
Thank you for reading my email.
Please let me know if I can join.
I am looking forward to your reply.
五、
写作模板
Dear
My name is
I am writing to join your Club
I am very interested in
_(topic:music art sports reading etc.).I have been
(doing activity)for
(time).I am good at(specific skill).I think
I can
(help with/contribute to)the club.
I hope I can become a member of your club and learn more with everyone.Thank you for
your time.
Yours,
六、作文仿写
题目
你想加入学校的音乐俱乐部(Music Club),请给俱乐部负责人Mr.Brown写一封申请邮件。内容包括:
,你非常喜欢音乐
,你会弹钢琴,已经学了三年
〉你希望加入后可以一起演奏、交朋友
,期待回复
范文
Dear Mr.Brown,
My name is Li Hua.I am writing to join your Music Club.
I am very interested in music.I have learned to play the piano for three years,and I am good
at it.I really enjoy playing classical pieces.I think I can play with other members and make
the club more wonderful.
I hope I can become a member of your club.I would love to learn new songs and make friends
there.Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Hua
(约90词,符合要求)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1申请加入英语俱乐部
约98词
Dear Mr.Chen,
I am Li Hua from Class 3,Grade 8.I am writing to apply for membership in the English Club.
1I love English and often watch English movies.
2I want to improve my speaking and listening skills.
I am good at making short speeches and can help organize activities.
I promise to take part in every meeting and follow the club rules.I really hope to join and
learn with everyone.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展范文2
申请加入篮球俱乐部
约95词
Dear Captain Wang,
My name is Zhang Wei,a student from Class 5.I am writing to ask if I can join the Basketball
Club.
I have played basketball for two years.
I practice every weekend and know the basic skills.
I am a team player and always respect others.
I will attend all training sessions and follow your instructions.It would be great to be part of
the team.
Thank you for considering my request.
Yours,
Zhang Wei