内容正文:
污教新版
U3 Our digital lives
初二上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write your opinions about the internet(
(发表对互联网的看法)
河教新版初二上U3 Our digital lives
写作任务Write your opinions about the internet(发表对互联网的看法)
一、申题
包文体
观点议论短文(类似小议论文,无需书信格式,直接表述个人看法)
2话题
对互联网(the internet)的看法,可谈优点、缺点或两方面都谈
3人称
以第一人称I或we为主,也可用you来与读者对话
4时态
一般现在时(陈述观点、事实)
5要点
,开头:明确表达自己对互联网的总体看法(如“有用”“方便”或“有利有弊”)
>中间:列出2~3条具体理由或例子,支撑观点
,结尾:总结观点,或表达对互联网使用的建议/期待
6字数
80~100词
二
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
引出话题,表明自己对互联网的看法(可先写一句总述)
中间
分条说明理由,每条用First/Second/Third或For one thing/For another
连接;每条理由搭配一个简单的例子或解释(如“上网查资料”“和朋友聊天”)
段落
内容要点
结尾
再次强调观点,或给出使用互联网的小建议(如“要合理使用”)
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词internet互联网
词online在线的
词
information信息
词useful有用的
词
convenient方便的
词communicate交流
词search搜索
词
problem问题
词
waste浪费
词balance平衡
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
search for information
搜索信息
2
keep in touch with friends
与朋友保持联系
3
play online games
玩在线游戏
4
do homework online
在线做作业
5
spend too much time on...
花太多时间在…
6
be bad for eyesight
对视力不好
7
use the internet wisely
明智地使用互联网
基础造句
1The internet is very useful.We can search for information quickly.
2 It is convenient to communicate with friends online.
3But if we spend too much time on it,it may be bad for our study.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
helpful
有帮助的
序号
单词
释义
2
educational
有教育意义的
harmful
有害的
4
take control of
控制
5
make good use of
充分利用
6
in a proper way
以适当的方式
加分句型
「引出观点的万能句
In my opinion,the internet is a double-edged sword.
I think the internet has both advantages and disadvantages.
As for me,the internet is very helpful in our daily life.
说明理由(含长句)
First,it helps us get information easily and quickly,which makes learning more convenient.
Second,we can talk to friends far away without spending much money.
However,if we don't use it properly,it may waste our time and even affect our health.
结尾升华句
So we should learn to use the internet wisely and make good use of it.
Only in this way can the internet become a good friend to us.
I hope everyone can enjoy the benefits of the internet while staying away from its harms.
五、写作模板
模板(纯观点型)
In my opinion,the internet is very
(useful helpful important).
First,it helps us
(do something).For example,
Second,we can
(do something else).It makes our life
However,we should also be careful because
All in all,if we use the internet in a right way,it will be a great tool for us
模板(平衡观点型)
I think the internet has both good and bad sides.
On the one hand,_
On the other hand,
Personally,I believe we should(balance use wisely).
Let's make the internet a part of our happy and healthy life.
六、作文仿写
范文一
(偏向优点)
In my opinion,the internet is very useful.
First,it helps us search for information quickly.For example,when I have a question for my
homework,I can find the answer online in seconds.Second,we can comm unicate with friends
far away.We can talk,send photos,or even have video calls.
However,we shouldn't spend too much time on it.It may be bad for our eyes.
All in all,if we use the internet wisely,it will make our life better.
范文二
(平衡观点)
I think the internet has both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand,it makes studying easier.We can watch educational videos and learn new
things.On the other hand,some students play online games too much and forget their
homework.
In my opinion,we should balance study and entertainment.Use the internet to learn,but
don't let it take up all your time.
Only in this way can we enjoy a healthy digital life.
字数参考:每篇约90~100词,符合初中写作要求。
难度:句型简洁,核心词汇为沪教新版U3重点词汇,难度贴近中考。
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1
给朋友关于互联网学习的建议
约93词
Dear Tom,
You asked for my opinions about the internet.I think it is a powerful tool if used wisely.Here
are my suggestions.
1 Use the internet to search for useful learning materials and online courses.
2 Join study groups or forums to discuss problems with others.
3Remember to limit your screen time and avoid too much entertainment.
The internet helps you learn anytime,anywhere,but you must stay focused.I hope you can
make good use of it!
Yours,
Li Ming
拓展范文2
给同学关于互联网利弊的看法
约92词
Dear Jack,
On the topic of the internet,I'd like to share my view.It brings both benefits and challenges.
1 It makes communication fast and convenient,and gives us access to the latest news.
2 However,too much time online can damage your eyesight and reduce your real-life
interactions.
3 So you should balance online and offline activities,and always protect your personal
information.
Follow these tips,and the internet will be a great helper in your life.
Yours,
Chen Wei