Unit 7 Fun after school 写作精讲精练-2026-2027学年七年级英语上册单元话题写作精讲（沪教版）

污教新版 U7 Fun after school 初一上 写作精讲精练 写作话题·Write a description of an after-school activity (描写一项课外活动) 河教新版初一上Unit7 Fun after school 写作任务Write a description of an after-school activity(描写一项课外活动) 一、审题 ①文体：描述性短文（记叙+描写，以“我”的视角记录一次课外活动） 2话题：介绍自己参加的一项课外活动，如篮球、画画、合唱、科学社团等 ③人称：以第一人称I/we为主 4时态：一般现在时（描述常规活动）或一般过去时（描述某一次具体活动），本单元以一般现在时为主 5要点 ，活动名称及参与时间、地点 ,活动内容（做了什么） ,个人感受或收获（为什么喜欢） ,适当细节（如人数、氛围、过程） 6字数 60~80词（初一上学期标准要求） 二、 文章结构 (三段式) 段落 内容要点 开头 引出活动名称、时间、地点。（例：I join the school football club every Tuesday afternoon. 中间 具体描写活动内容。可分2~3小点：热身、练习、比赛；或画画步骤、合唱排练等。 结尾 总结感受或收获。（例：I feel happy and energetic after the activity..It makes my after-school life colourful.) 三、核心组词造句 核心词汇 词activity活动 cIub俱乐部 team团队 词 practice练习 fun有趣的 enjoyable爷人愉快的 词together一起 learn学习 improve提高 词relax放松 常用短语 序号 短语 释义 1 after-school activity 课外活动 take part in 参加 3 play basketball /football/the piano 打篮球/踢足球/弹钢琴 4 have fun doing sth 做某事很开心 5 learn a lot from.… 从.学到很多 o work as a team 团队合作 7 make new friends 交新朋友 % feel proud /happy relaxed 感到自豪快乐放松 基础造句 We practice playing basketball in the gym every Monday. 2I learn how to draw well from the art club. 3 It is a good way to relax after a long day of classes 4 We always have fun together when we sing in the choir. 四、好词好句 (更详细) 高级好词 序号 单词 释义 1 colourful 丰富多彩的 2 energetic 充满活力的 3 meaningful 有意义的 4 skill 技能 5 experience 经历 memora ble 难忘的 加分句型 开头引出 ,My favourite after-school activity is+活动名称. )I am a member of+社团名称， ,Evey+时间，I go to十地点to+动词. 描写过程 (含连接词) First,we warm up.Then,the coach teaches us some skills.Finally,we have a small game. We usually start by...After that,we...At the end,we... 表达感受与收获 It not only helps me relax but also makes me stronger. I can not only have fun but also make new friends. This activity teaches me the importance of team spirit. I feel proud when our team wins. 结尾升华 After-school activities make my school life more colourful and meaningful. I really enjoy it and I hope I can keep doing it. 五、导作模板 My After-school Activity My favourite after-school activity is I do it every with my First,we Then,we Sometimes we _I really enjoy the time because This activity makes me I think it is a good way to I will keep doing it in the future. 六、作文仿写 仿导一 篮球俱乐部 73词 My After-school Activity My favourite after-school activity is playing basketball.I join the school basketball club every Tuesday and Friday afternoon. First,we warm up by running and stretching.Then,we practice shooting and passing. Sometimes we have a match against another team.I really enjoy the time because I can work with my teammates and have fun. This activity makes me strong and energetic.I think it is a good way to relax after class.I will keep doing it in the future. 「仿写二美术杜团 70词 My After-school Activity My favourite after-school activity is drawing in the art club.I go there every Thursday after school. First,the teacher shows us some pictures.Then,we draw by ourselves.Sometimes we paint together outside.I like it because I can use my imagination and feel relaxed. This activity helps me improve my drawing skills.It also makes my after-school life colourful.I am proud of my pictures! 仿得三 合唱团 68词 My After-school Activity I am a member of the school choir.We practice singing every Wednesday afternoon. First,we warm up our voices.Then,we learn new songs by singing along with the piano.At the end,we sing the whole song together.I like choir because everyone works as a team. It makes me happy and confident.I think singing is a wonderful after-school activity! 写作小贴士 >选你真正参加过的活动，写细节更真实。 ,注意连接词：First,Then,Finally/At last。 ,结尾写出“收获或感受”，让文章更有温度。 >字数不足时可以加一句“I also../Besides,.”扩充内容。 拓展范文背诵积累 拓展范文1描写课外活动：校园篮球队 约96词 Dear Tom, Welcome to our school basketball club!I'm glad to share what we do after school. First,we practice passing and shooting for about 30 minutes every day.Second,we often play friendly matches against other classes,which helps us improve teamwork.Third,our coach teaches us sportsmanship and how to stay healthy. Joining this club is a great way to make friends and relax after class.I hope you will come and have fun with us! Yours, Li Wei 拓展范文2描写课外活动：英语读书俱乐部 约95词 Dear Lisa, I'd like to tell you about our English Reading Club-a wonderful after-school activity. First,we choose one English book each month and read it together.Second,we meet every Thursday to discuss the story and share our favorite parts.Third,we practice speaking English by retelling plots and acting out scenes. This club helps me improve my reading and speaking skills.It also makes learning English fun. I believe you will enjoy it too! Yours, Chen Jie