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北师大新版
Unit 3 Home and Places
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Describing Your Dream Home(描写理想中的家)
Where Is the City Library?(介绍市图书馆位置)
Unit 3 Home and Places
导作任务本单元包含两个写作任务:
1 Describing Your Dream Home(描写理想中的家)
2 Where Is the City Library?(介绍市图书馆位置)
任务一
Describing Your Dream Home(描写理想中的家)
一、申题
①文体
描述性短文(以第一人称“我”的视角展开,无需书信格式)
2话题
描写自己梦想中的家一一包括位置、外观、房间布局、环境等
3人称
以第一人称I/We为主,有时用第三人称t指代房子
4时态
一般现在时(描述梦想中的家,用“is/are/has/have")
5要点
,开头点题:I have a dream home.
,写出梦想家的位置(如near the sea,in the countryside)
>描述2~3个主要房间或特色(如garden,balcony,big kitchen)
,说明为什么喜欢这个家(理由简单、真实)
,结尾表达感受
6字数
60~80词(初一上标准)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
直接说出理想中的家→I have a dream home.Itis..
中间
分2~3点具体描述家的样子(位置+房间+特色)
结尾
表达对家的喜爱或期待→This is my dream home.I love it very much.
三、
核心组词造句
核心词汇
词dream梦想的;house/home房子/家;garden花园;balcony阳台;living room客厅;
bedroom卧室
词kitchen厨房;bathroom浴室;big/large大的;beautiful美丽的;quiet安静的;clean干净
的
词comfortable舒适的;next to在.旁边;behind在..后面;in front of在.前面
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
a dream home
梦想中的家
2
in the countryside
在乡村
J
near the sea
靠近大海
4
a big garden with flowers
有花的大花园
a comfortable bedroom
舒适的卧室
6
a nice view from the window
窗外的美景
个
do homework
做作业
8
play with friends
和朋友玩
9
have fun
玩得开心
10
feel happy warm
感到快乐/温暖
基础造句
1 My dream home is near the sea.I can see the sea from my window every day.
2 There is a big living room.My family can watch TV and talk together there.
3I have a nice bedroom.It is quiet and clean.I can read books in it.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
cozy
温馨的、舒适的
2
spacious
宽做的
bright
明亮的
4
peaceful
宁静的
5
lovely
可爱的、美好的
6
modern
现代的
>
traditional
传统的
加分句型
开头多样化
I always dream of a house that is...
My ideal home is...
位置描写
It is located in /on near...
There are many trees and flowers around it.
功能描写
I can do my homework in my study,and my parents can cook in the kitchen.
The garden is a good place for my family to have a picnic.
感受升华
Living in such a home makes me feel relaxed and happy.
I hope I can have this dream home one day.
五、导作模板
I have a dream home.
It is
(位置)
In my dream home,there is /are
(房间/特色).I like
because
Also,there is a
(另一个特色).My family can
(活动)there.
This is my dream home.I love it very much.
六、作文仿写
范文
I have a dream home.It is near the sea.I can see the blue sea and white clouds from my
window.
In my dream home,there is a big living room.My family can watch TV and play games
together.Also,there is a lovely garden with many flowers.I can read books and drink tea in
the garden.My bedroom is small but cozy.I feel warm and quiet there.
This is my dream home.I hope I can live in it one day.
任务二司
Where Is the City Library?(介绍市图书馆位置)
一、申题
①文体
说明性短文/方位介绍文(可用对话形式或短文,此处以短文为例)
2话题
介绍市图书馆的具体位置、周围地标、如何到达
3人称
主要以第三人称t(图书馆),或者用you对读者说话
4时态
一般现在时
5要点
,指出图书馆的名称和整体位置(如in the city center,on Green Street)
,描述图书馆周边的建筑或街道(如next to the park,across from the hospital)
>说明如何从某地到达(如walk straight,turn left)
,可简单补充图书馆特点(如big,q uiet,many books)
,结尾可鼓励大家去
⑥字数
60~80词
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
点明介绍对象→The city library is on.,Let me tell you where the city library
is.
中间
分2~3步描述位置和路线
第一步:图书馆所在街道或大区域
第二步:周边标志性建筑(如school,,park,hospital))
第三步:如何从附近已知地点到达
结尾
总结或推荐→It's a good place to read.You can go there on weekends,
三、
核心组词造句
核心词汇
词library图书馆;city城市;center中心;street街道;next to在.,旁边;across from在..
对面
词between.and..在..和..之间;behind在..后面;in front of在.前面;turn left/
right左转/右转;go straight直走;walk along沿着..走
词cross穿过;at the corner在拐角处;restaurant餐馆;hospital医院;park公园;school学
校;supermarket超市
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
on the left right
在左边/右边
2
at the end of the street
在街道尽头
3
next to the park
在公园旁边
4
across from the hospital
在医院对面
between the bank and the post
在银行和邮局之间
5
office
6
walk straight for 5 minutes
直走5分钟
>
turn left at the first crossing
在第一个十字路口左转
d
it takes about 10 minutes to walk
步行大约需要10分钟
基础造句
1The city library is on Green Street.It is next to a big park.
2 You can walk straight from the school.Then turn right at the traffic lights.The library is on your
left.
3There is a supermarket across from the library.You can buy snacks before reading.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
located
坐落于
2
convenient
方便的
3
landmark
地标
4
peaceful
安静的(形容图书馆氛围)
5
spacious
宽做的
6
modern
现代化的
well-known
著名的
加分句型
位置表达
The city library is located in the heart of the city.
It lies between a school and a park.
If you stand at the library gate,you can see the hospital across the street.
路线说阴
To get there,you need to go straight along Renmin Road and then turn left at the second
crossing
It's not difficult to find.Just follow the signs.
推荐理由
The library is quiet and has many interesting books.You can spend a whole afternoon there.
It is a great place for both children and adults to read and learn.
五、写作模板
The city library is
(具体位置)
It is
(周围地标1).
(周围地标2)is across from it.
If you are at
(起始地点),you can
(路线1).Then
(路线2).Finally,
you will see the library on your
(方向).
The library is big and quiet.You can read books,do homework or just relax there.I think
you will like it.
六、作文仿写
范文
The city library is on Green Street.It is next to a big park.A hospital is across from the library.
If you are at the school,walk straight for 5 minutes.Then turn left at the first crossing.The
library is on your right.It is a modern and quiet building.There are many books and
comfortable chairs inside.
You can go there on weekends.I think you will have a good time reading in the library.
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1
描军理想中的家
约96词
Dear Lucy,
I'd like to tell you about my dream home.It is a small but cozy house near a lake.First,there
is a big garden with flowers and a swing.Second,the living room has large windows,so
sunlight comes in all day.My favorite room is my study:I put a bookshelf and a soft chair
there.Finally,I want a balcony where I can enjoy the sunset.
I hope my dream can come true one day.What about yours?
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展范文2
介绍市图书馆位置
约94词
Dear Tom,
Welcome to our city!Let me tell you how to find the city library.It is on Green Street,between
the park and the post office.The library is a tall white building with a red roof.
First,go straight along Main Road and turn left at the traffic lights.Second,walk past the
supermarket,and you will see the library on your right.It is open from 9 a.m.to 8 p.m.every
day
I hope you enjoy reading there!
Yours,
Lin Tao