摘要:
该高中英语讲义聚焦高考应用文写作核心考点,覆盖推荐类投稿的内容要点完整、语言连贯规范、情境扣题精准等考查要求。知识点按“方法指导-审题分析-范文解析-仿写训练-模板总结”逻辑架构,通过考点梳理(句子连接四招、三问扣题法)、方法指导(指代与连接词运用)、真题训练(2024浙江高考真题)等环节,帮助学生突破写作连贯与扣题难点,体现复习教学的系统性和针对性。
资料特色在于创新性教学策略,如“句子连接四招”和“三问扣题法”,结合核心素养中的语言能力和思维品质,设计仿写练习要求运用“Requiring...作状语”“its...making...独立主格”等结构,强化语言表达的逻辑性与准确性。模板化复习(推荐类投稿固定框架)帮助学生在有限时间内高效构建作文,为教师把控复习节奏提供清晰路径,有效提升学生的应考能力和写作得分率。
内容正文:
应用文写作:三个方法让你的作文连得起来、扣得住题
——以2024年浙江高考1月推荐类投稿为例
一、原题
请你写一篇短文向校英文报"Sports and Health"栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:1.介绍这项运动;2.说明推荐理由。词数80左右,开头已给出:Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
二、写之前先搞懂三个方法
方法一:句子之间要连得上
我改卷时发现一个通病:很多同学每句话语法都对,但放在一起读着就是别扭。问题出在句子之间没有连起来。其实就四招:
第一,指代。上句说rope skipping,下句就用it或this activity,别重复。
第二,连接词。Moreover表递进,However表转折,Therefore表结果,Most importantly表强调。有了这些词,阅卷老师一眼就看出你的逻辑。
第三,同义词换着用。exercise、activity、workout来回用,不重复又扣题。
第四,并列结构。both...and...、not only...but also...,句子显得整齐。
说简单点:每写完一句,看下一句开头和上一句结尾有没有关系。没关系就加个连接词。
方法二:每句话开头要接得上
作文读着流畅,秘密在每句话的开头。上句说"跳绳是好运动",下句最好从"它"说起,别突然跳到"学生们都很忙"。三种套路:
平行式:It... It... It... 每句都从同一个东西说起,适合介绍事物。
延续式:上句结尾变下句开头,比如...exercise. This exercise... 适合深入说一个点。
派生式:Moreover... Most importantly... 从一个主题分出几个方面,推荐类作文用这个最好,层次清楚。
方法三:每句话内容要扣得住
跑题是大忌。每写一句话问自己三个问题:和"推荐课间运动"有关系吗?这个理由和"课间"这个场景有关系吗?读者要费力猜我的意思吗?
举个例子:写"跳绳能减肥"就和课间没关系,改成"跳绳3分钟能快速提神"就扣题了。三个问题有一个答不上来,这句话就该改。
三、用这三个方法来审题
文体是投稿,面向同学,语气要亲切别太正式。两个要点:介绍运动+推荐理由。80词左右分三段:
第一段提问开头,引出推荐的运动,20词左右。
第二段是主体,介绍运动特点加两三个理由,55词左右。用派生式推进,Moreover和Most importantly分层。
第三段一句话呼吁收尾,15词左右。
运动我选跳绳。理由好写:不需要器材、不占地方、3分钟就能提神。而且rope skipping这个词学生都认识,不会拼错。
四、范文(三段,约105词)
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Do you often feel worn out after sitting through a 40-minute class? You are not alone. What if I told you that a simple three-minute activity could solve this problem?
The activity I recommend is rope skipping. Requiring no special equipment or much space, it gets your heart beating fast and your blood flowing, thus refreshing both your body and mind. Moreover, it can be done alone or with friends, its lively rhythm making even a short break enjoyable. Most importantly, just three minutes of skipping is enough to drive away tiredness and sharpen your focus for the next class.
Next time you feel sleepy during the break, grab a rope and give it a try. A small change may bring a big difference.
五、这篇范文里值得学的东西
词:普通词换成得分词
普通表达
范文用的词
为什么好
feel sleepy
feel worn out
worn out"疲惫不堪",比sleepy准确
try
give it a try
短语比单个动词自然
make you focused
sharpen your focus
sharpen"使敏锐",高考高频动词
helpful
refreshing
refreshing"令人精神焕发的",更具体
句:简单句合并成高级句
普通写法:Rope skipping is good. It needs no equipment.
范文写法:Requiring no special equipment or much space, it gets your heart beating fast.
差别在哪?用现在分词Requiring作原因状语,一句话把两个意思说完,比两个简单句高级。
普通写法:It is fun. You can do it with friends.
范文写法:It can be done alone or with friends, its lively rhythm making even a short break enjoyable.
差别在哪?用独立主格its lively rhythm making...补充说明,这个结构应用文和读后续写都能用,加分。
语法点:这三个结构背下来直接套
① 现在分词作原因状语:Requiring no special equipment, ... = Because it requires no special equipment, ...
② 独立主格:its lively rhythm making... = and its lively rhythm makes...
③ 现在分词作结果状语:thus refreshing both your body and mind = and thus it refreshes...
六、仿写练习(用上面的方法自己写一遍)
题目:向校英文报"Reading Club"栏目投稿,推荐一本适合高中生的课外书,内容包括:1.介绍这本书;2.说明推荐理由。词数80左右,开头已给出:A Book Worth Reading.
先自己写,再看下面的参考范文。注意用上Requiring...、its...making...、thus...这三个结构。
参考范文
A Book Worth Reading.
Do you often find it hard to choose a book that is both interesting and meaningful? You are not alone. What if I told you that a short novel could change the way you see the world?
The book I recommend is The Old Man and the Sea by Ernest Hemingway. Telling a simple story of an old fisherman fighting a giant fish, it carries a deep message about courage and perseverance, thus inspiring readers never to give up. Moreover, the language is simple yet powerful, its short sentences making the story easy to follow. Most importantly, just a few hours of reading is enough to finish this slim book and gain a lifetime of wisdom.
Next time you look for a book to read, pick up The Old Man and the Sea. A short book may leave a long-lasting impression.
看出来了吗?结构和上一篇完全一样:提问引入→介绍+三个理由→呼吁收尾。把模板背熟,换个主题就能写。
七、考场上别犯这几个错
别写成"怎么跳绳"。题目要的是推荐理由,不是动作要领。不要写"双手握绳,手腕发力"。
理由别太泛。"有益健康"谁都会写,得分低。要写"3分钟提神""不占空间"这种和课间直接相关的。
词数别超。80词左右,写120就过了。两个理由说透就行。
时态别乱。介绍运动用一般现在时,从头到尾保持一致。
开头别重写。Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!已经印在答题卡上了,再写浪费词数。
八、推荐类投稿模板(背下来)
适用:向校报、公众号、栏目推荐一项活动、一本书、一部电影、一个去处。
[标题已给]
Do you often ______ (学生常见困扰)? You are not alone. What if I told you that ______ (推荐事物) could solve this problem?
The ______ I recommend is ______. Requiring no ______ (不需要的条件), it ______ (效果1), thus ______ (效果2). Moreover, it can be done ______ (方式), its ______ making ______ (额外好处). Most importantly, just ______ (时间/数量) is enough to ______ (核心好处).
Next time you ______ (场景), ______ (行动呼吁). A small change may bring a big difference.
模板里Requiring...、its...making...、thus...这三个结构是固定加分点,不要换。横线处根据题目填内容就行。
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