读后续写第2讲 以2024新课标卷为例—骨架法 讲义-2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写核心考点，围绕情节连贯、伏笔回收、主题升华等考查要求，通过“五定构思”构建知识框架，结合真题再现、伏笔清单梳理、范文思路讲解等教学环节，帮助学生建立从原文分析到续写创作的逻辑链条，体现复习的系统性和针对性。 资料创新采用“五定十句”骨架法和伏笔回收策略，如“十句背诵模板”通过固定外壳与情节填充结合，提升学生语言表达规范性和灵活性，培养语言能力与思维品质。设置核心词汇替换、句式解析、同义句转换等分层训练，配合真题范文示范，确保学生在有限时间内掌握高分技巧，为教师把控复习节奏、提升学生应考能力提供有效指导。

读后续写"五定十句"满分骨架法（二） 2024新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷 雨夜打车与陌生人信任 主打方法：伏笔回收法 一、真题再现 I met Gunter on a cold, wet September evening. I planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight was delayed by an hour and a half, and I touched down just 30 minutes before the last bus departed. I ran like crazy through the airport and jumped into the first taxi. The driver Gunter had not heard of the bus station. I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, he rang up a friend, and after a long discussion he started the car. With just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station, where a long queue was still waiting. Gunter parked behind the bus, turned around and smiled, "We made it." Just then I realised I had zero cash. My Portuguese bankcard failed several times on his card machine. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as the queue thinned out. Gunter pointed to a cash machine at the entrance. I jumped out, made a mad dash for it and popped my card in, only to read: "Out of order. Sorry." 续写第一段开头语： I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 续写第二段开头语： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. 二、物尽其用·伏笔回收清单 本篇是"物尽其用"的最佳范例——续写必须与第二段首句"as promised（如约）"严丝合缝，因此第一段末尾必须埋下"四天后再付"的约定。逐处回收如下： storm延误、只剩30分钟（第1段） → 第一段以stranded by the storm / miss the last bus重述窘迫，制造紧迫 zero cash、银行卡失败、ATM故障（第4-5段） → 第一段以dead machine / no other way to pay承接"坏消息" queue thinning（第4段） → 第一段queue was thinning fast强化赶车压力，推动"我"提出折中方案 Gunter的big smile、热心问路（第2-3段） → 第一段他再次选择信任，性格前后一致 第二段首句as promised / Four days later → 第一段末必须写出"四天后回维也纳再付＋互留联系方式"的约定 10欧元感谢（续写自创伏笔） → 第二段以the promised ten euros精准回扣 dropped me off、cold wet evening → 第二段以where he had dropped me off / that rainy night呼应 三、五定构思 【定旨】陌生人之间的诚实与信任，善意在一来一回中传递 【定脉】第一段：告知ATM坏了→说明赶车紧迫→提出四天后补付加10欧→Gunter同意并留联系方式；第二段：如约见面还钱→他拒收酬金只约一杯啤酒→结下友谊→升华 【定调】第一人称、一般过去时；情绪：窘迫焦急→如释重负→感激温暖 【定接】紧承told him the bad news先讲坏消息；第一段末埋"约定"以呼应as promised，这是全篇得分关键 【定句】第一段用独立主格写窘迫、用一句对话提出方案；第二段用独立主格＋非谓语写重逢，结尾点出trust的力量 四、范文思路讲解 本文以"一次雨夜打车的付款风波"为线索展开，从赶车的窘迫，到无法付款的焦急，再到司机给予信任、四天后如约还钱的温暖，凸显陌生人之间诚实与信任的可贵。 根据第一段首句"I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news"可知，第一段要写"我"跑回告知ATM故障，说明赶车的紧迫处境，提出四天后回维也纳再付款的折中办法，最终取得Gunter信任、留下联系方式后上车。 根据第二段首句"Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised"可知，第二段要写四天后"我"如约见到Gunter并还钱，而他拒收额外的10欧元、只约一杯啤酒，两人结下友谊，结尾升华主题。 五、原创高分范文 Paragraph 1 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. I gestured helplessly at the dead machine, my shoulders sagging. The queue was thinning fast, so I explained in a trembling voice that, stranded by the storm, I would otherwise miss the last bus. After a pause, I added timidly, "I'll return to Vienna in four days. Could I pay you then, with an extra ten euros?" Gunter studied me briefly, then a warm smile spread across his face. Nodding, he agreed and scribbled his number on a scrap of paper, trust shining in his eyes. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up where he had dropped me off days before. The moment our eyes met, we hugged like long-lost friends, that rainy night melting into laughter. When I offered the promised ten euros, he pushed it back, saying, "Buy me a beer next time you're in Vienna." I nodded, a lump rising in my throat. With a firm handshake we promised to keep in touch, and I realised a stranger's trust could turn a disastrous night into a memory worth cherishing forever. （一）核心词汇（普通词 → 高级词） sag v. 下垂、垮下 （普通词：drop） queue n. 队伍 （普通词：line） trembling adj. 发抖的 （普通词：shaking） stranded adj. 受困的 （普通词：stuck） timidly adv. 怯怯地 （普通词：shyly） scribble v. 草草写下 （普通词：write quickly） a scrap of paper 小纸片 （普通词：small paper） push back 推回、回绝 （普通词：give back） long-lost adj. 长久未见的 （普通词：separated for long） cherish v. 珍惜 （普通词：value） （二）句式解析 ① I gestured helplessly at the dead machine, my shoulders sagging. 【解析】独立主格"名词＋现在分词"作伴随状语，my shoulders sagging 相当于 and my shoulders sagged。一个动作叠加一个身体细节，窘迫立刻具象，比单写 I was sad 高级。 【仿写】I stared at the closed door, my heart sinking. ② The queue was thinning fast, so I explained in a trembling voice that, stranded by the storm, I would otherwise miss the last bus. 【解析】长难句：so 连接并列句，that 引导宾语从句，stranded by the storm 是过去分词短语插入从句作原因状语（＝because I was stranded）。otherwise"否则"暗示严重后果，紧迫感拉满，又回扣原文 storm 伏笔。 【仿写】The clock was ticking fast, so I whispered in a nervous voice that, trapped in the heavy rain, I would otherwise miss the final train. ③ After a pause, I added timidly, "I'll return to Vienna in four days. Could I pay you then, with an extra ten euros?" 【解析】一句直接引语推进情节。Could I…? 委婉提出方案，比间接转述更有现场感；with an extra ten euros 介词短语作伴随，自然带出"感谢金"伏笔，为第二段回扣做铺垫。 【仿写】After a moment, I asked softly, "I'll come back next week. Could I repay you then, with a small gift?" ④ Nodding, he agreed and scribbled his number on a scrap of paper, trust shining in his eyes. 【解析】现在分词 Nodding 作伴随状语放句首，独立主格 trust shining in his eyes 放句尾，两头非谓语夹住动作链，节奏紧凑；trust shining 定格情绪、埋下"信任"主题，勾连第二段。 【仿写】Smiling, she nodded and wrote down her address on a napkin, warmth glowing in her eyes. ⑤ He picked me up where he had dropped me off days before. 【解析】where 引导地点状语从句，回接原文 drop off 伏笔；had dropped 过去完成时早于 picked 一般过去时，时态精准体现"故地重逢"，是伏笔回收的句式体现。 【仿写】She met me where we had first met years ago. ⑥ The moment our eyes met, we hugged like long-lost friends, that rainy night melting into laughter. 【解析】The moment 引导时间状语从句＝As soon as；独立主格 that rainy night melting into laughter 把"雨夜"融进"笑声"，一个画面完成由苦到甜的情绪转折，意象高级。 【仿写】The moment the door opened, we rushed into each other's arms, all the anxiety fading into relief. ⑦ When I offered the promised ten euros, he pushed it back, saying, "Buy me a beer next time you're in Vienna." 【解析】现在分词 saying 作伴随状语，把"推回钱"与"说话"两个动作合为一句，对话自然嵌入动作链，不显堆砌；promised 过去分词作定语，精准回扣第一段约定。 【仿写】When I handed over the money, she waved it away, laughing, "Just treat me to coffee someday." ⑧ With a firm handshake we promised to keep in touch, and I realised a stranger's trust could turn a disastrous night into a memory worth cherishing forever. 【解析】With a firm handshake 介词短语作方式状语；turn A into B 是结尾升华万能公式；worth cherishing forever 是形容词短语作后置定语修饰 memory（＝which is worth cherishing）。全句收束全文、点出 trust 主题。 【仿写】With a warm hug we said goodbye, and I realised a small act of kindness could turn a terrible day into a moment worth remembering forever. （三）同义句转换（普通句 → 高级句） 普通：I was very sad and didn't know what to do. 高级：I gestured helplessly at the dead machine, my shoulders sagging. 点拨：用独立主格 my shoulders sagging 替代笼统的 I was sad，身体细节让窘迫具象化。 普通：Because I was trapped by the storm, I would miss the last bus. 高级：Stranded by the storm, I would otherwise miss the last bus. 点拨：过去分词 stranded 作状语替代 because 从句，otherwise 一词制造紧迫感。 普通：He nodded and agreed. There was trust in his eyes. 高级：Nodding, he agreed, trust shining in his eyes. 点拨：现在分词开头＋独立主格收尾，两个短句合为一句，节奏紧凑。 普通：As soon as we saw each other, we hugged. The rainy night became laughter. 高级：The moment our eyes met, we hugged like long-lost friends, that rainy night melting into laughter. 点拨：The moment 替代 as soon as，独立主格 melting into laughter 把环境与情绪融合。 普通：He pushed the money back. He said, "Buy me a beer..." 高级：He pushed it back, saying, "Buy me a beer next time you're in Vienna." 点拨：现在分词 saying 把两个动作合一，对话自然嵌入动作链。 普通：A bad night became a good memory because of his trust. 高级：A stranger's trust could turn a disastrous night into a memory worth cherishing forever. 点拨：turn A into B 升华公式＋worth doing 后置定语，结尾有力点题。 六、十句背诵模板（背外壳·填内容） 用法：“背”是固定外壳（必须背熟，括号处按题目情节替换）；“填”是本篇示范；“词”是可直接挑选的替换词块。考场背外壳、填情节，换一篇照样套用。 第一段·问题推进段（窘迫升级→提出方案→获得信任） 第1句【承接首句·独立主格写窘迫】 背：I ＋(无助地动作) at ＋(眼前事物), my ＋(身体部位) ＋doing. 填：I gestured helplessly at the dead machine, my shoulders sagging. 词：gestured / stared / glanced；helplessly / nervously / anxiously；shoulders sagging / heart sinking / hands trembling 第2句【困境升级·分词插入＋otherwise】 背：(外部压力), so I explained in a (情绪) voice that, (过去分词表原因), I would otherwise (最坏结果). 填：The queue was thinning fast, so I explained in a trembling voice that, stranded by the storm, I would otherwise miss the last bus. 词：in a trembling / choked / weak voice；stranded / trapped / caught by…；would otherwise miss / lose / fail 第3句【提出方案·一句直接引语】 背：After a pause, I added (副词), "(方案 / 委婉问句)?" 填：After a pause, I added timidly, "I'll return to Vienna in four days. Could I pay you then, with an extra ten euros?" 词：timidly / softly / hesitantly；Could I…? / Would it be all right if…? 第4句【对方反应·神态转变】 背：Sb (打量) briefly, then a (形容词) smile spread across one's face. 填：Gunter studied me briefly, then a warm smile spread across his face. 词：studied / eyed / watched；warm / gentle / reassuring smile 第5句【段末埋约定·非谓语＋独立主格定格】 背：(现在分词), he agreed and (动作), (抽象名词) shining in his eyes. 填：Nodding, he agreed and scribbled his number on a scrap of paper, trust shining in his eyes. 词：Nodding / Smiling；scribbled / jotted；trust / warmth / hope shining 第二段·解决升华段（如约还钱，信任升华） 第1句【承接重逢·where从句回收伏笔】 背：Sb (接上我) where he had (过去的动作) (时间) before. 填：He picked me up where he had dropped me off days before. 词：picked me up / met me；dropped me off / left me；days / weeks before 第2句【重逢画面·The moment＋独立主格】 背：The moment our eyes met, we (动作) like (比喻), (名词) doing. 填：The moment our eyes met, we hugged like long-lost friends, that rainy night melting into laughter. 词：hugged / embraced；long-lost friends / old pals 第3句【关键互动·分词嵌入对话】 背：When I (递上), he (推回), saying, "(一句台词)." 填：When I offered the promised ten euros, he pushed it back, saying, "Buy me a beer next time you're in Vienna." 词：offered / handed over；pushed / waved it back 第4句【情绪定格·独立主格】 背：I nodded, a (情绪名词) rising in my throat. 填：I nodded, a lump rising in my throat. 词：a lump rising / tears welling up / warmth flooding in 第5句【结尾升华·turn A into B】 背：…, and I realised (名词) could turn a (糟糕的) (时光) into a memory worth cherishing forever. 填：With a firm handshake we promised to keep in touch, and I realised a stranger's trust could turn a disastrous night into a memory worth cherishing forever. 词：disastrous / terrible / awful；trust / kindness / love 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $