2027年高考英语应用文人物描写 任务单

该高中英语高考复习任务单聚焦应用文人物描写核心考点，构建“四维语料库+句式工具箱”体系。语料库按身份、外貌、动作、品质维度分基础-进阶-高级三级递进，句式按引出人物、描述事迹等功能分类，通过微写作训练、对比升格任务引导学生自主整合语言知识，形成层次分明的表达体系。 亮点在于个性化学习支持与核心素养培养，如“一句话写活一个人”微写作训练（用with复合结构等语法手段）、对比升格训练（升级词汇句式），助力学生自主诊断表达短板。通过实战演练（历史人物与身边普通人写作）提升语言能力与思维品质，教师可依据学生语料选择、句式运用情况实施精准指导，促进因材施教。

2027高考英语应用文二轮复习　人物描写（创新版） 一、人物描写四维语料库 按"写什么"分类，每个表达配真实语境。基础→进阶→高级三级递进，考场根据水平自选。 描写维度 基础表达 进阶表达 高级表达 语境示例 身份·引出 many famous people a host of well-known figures a multitude of distinguished figures Among the multitude of distinguished figures, Yuan Longping stands out. I admire him I have great respect for him I hold him in the highest esteem He is the figure I hold in the highest esteem. a famous scientist a well-known researcher an eminent / distinguished scientist an eminent pioneer in agricultural science 外貌·神态 smile smile warmly beam / grin from ear to ear She beamed with delight when she heard the news. bright eyes eyes full of energy sparkling eyes / eyes lit up His eyes lit up the moment he saw the results. look tired look very tired look worn out / haggard After three sleepless nights, she looked worn out. walk slowly walk with difficulty trudge / stagger He trudged through the snow to deliver the medicine. 动作·事迹 work hard devote oneself to dedicate oneself to / commit oneself to She dedicated herself to medical research for 40 years. face difficulties meet with difficulties be confronted with / be faced with Confronted with countless failures, he never gave up. try one’s best make great efforts spare no effort / leave no stone unturned The team spared no effort to find a cure. finally find succeed in finding manage to isolate / succeed in isolating She succeeded in isolating artemisinin in 1972. help people benefit a great many people serve as a lifeline to / rescue millions His discovery has rescued millions from hunger. 品质·评价 brave very brave courageous / fearless / intrepid a courageous pioneer who dared to challenge the unknown determined strong-willed unwavering / resolute / steadfast Her unwavering perseverance inspired us all. selfless generous and kind selfless / altruistic His selfless dedication to the poor touched everyone. encourage me set a good example for me serve as a perpetual source of inspiration Her spirit serves as a perpetual source of inspiration. never forget be deeply impressed by be etched in my memory / leave an indelible mark His words are etched in my memory. 二、句式工具箱（按功能分类，考场自由组合） 不再给"填空模板"，而是按写作功能给你多种句式选择。每个功能选一句，组合起来就是一篇好文章。 功能1　引出人物（三选一） ① Among the multitude of + 范围, + 人物 + is the figure I hold in the highest esteem, whose + 成就 + has + 影响. ② Of all the + 人物类别 + I have known / read about, + 人物 + is the one who impresses me most. ③ When it comes to + 领域, few can rival + 人物, who + 事迹. 功能2　描述事迹（三选一） ① Born in + 年份/地点, + 人物 + dedicated himself/herself to + 事业 + from an early age. ② Having devoted decades to + 事业, + 人物 + finally succeeded in + 成就. ③ It was not until + 时间 + that + 人物 + managed to + 成就, after years of + 努力. 功能3　表达评价（三选一） ① His/Her + 品质 + serves as a perpetual source of inspiration, motivating me to + 行动. ② What I admire most about him/her is that + 品质从句, which sets him/her apart from others. ③ Were it not for his/her + 贡献, + 结果 would not have been possible. 功能4　加分细节（任选一插入文中） ① with + 名词 + 分词：She sat at the desk, with her eyes fixed on the microscope. ② 独立主格：His hands trembling slightly, he presented the award to the audience. ③ 倒装：Never before had a woman scientist won such widespread recognition. 三、一句话写活一个人（微写作训练） 不用写整篇，每道题只用一句话描写指定人物，必须使用括号内的语法手段。练的是"句子质量"而非"字数"。 1. 用 with 复合结构描写一位正在讲台上讲课的老师。 ________________________________________________________________ 2. 用过去分词作状语描写一位经历过战争的老兵。 ________________________________________________________________ 3. 用独立主格描写一位刚跑完马拉松的运动员的神态。 ________________________________________________________________ 4. 用否定词置于句首的倒装句强调一位医生的奉献精神。 ________________________________________________________________ 5. 用 what 引导主语从句表达你对一位普通人的敬佩。 ________________________________________________________________ 四、对比升格训练 下面是一篇"及格线"水平的人物描写段落。请至少升级其中5处表达（词汇或句式），再对照参考升格版找差距。 【待升格段落】 Yuan Longping is a great scientist. He worked hard on rice research for many years. He faced many difficulties but he never gave up. He found hybrid rice and helped many hungry people. I admire him very much because he is very determined. 【升格要求】 1. 至少使用2个高级词汇替换；2. 至少使用1种高级句式（分词/倒装/独立主格/定语从句）；3. 字数不变或略增。 五、实战演练（两类人物，各写一篇） 题目一　历史人物 你校英文报"Historical Figures Worth Knowing"栏目征稿。请介绍中国明代医药学家李时珍（Li Shizhen）。内容包括：1. 身份与时代；2. 主要事迹（走遍山野采药、历时27年编写《本草纲目》）；3. 你的评价。词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 题目二　身边普通人 你校英语社团正在征集"An Unsung Hero Around Me"主题短文。请介绍你身边一位平凡但值得敬佩的人（如社区医生、公交司机、门卫等）。内容包括：1. 人物身份；2. 一件令你印象深刻的事；3. 你的感悟。词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 答案与解析 一、四维语料库（略，见上表） 二、句式工具箱（略，见上） 三、一句话写活一个人（参考示例） 1. With a piece of chalk in her hand and a warm smile on her face, the teacher explained the poem with great passion. 2. Wounded in the battle, the old soldier still marched forward with unwavering determination. 3. His face covered in sweat and his chest heaving, the marathon runner crossed the finish line with a broad smile. 4. Never had I seen a doctor so devoted to her patients that she would skip meals to answer their questions. 5. What touches me most about the street cleaner is that he treats his humble job with genuine pride. 四、对比升格训练（参考升格版） Among the multitude of Chinese scientists, Yuan Longping is the figure I hold in the highest esteem, whose groundbreaking research on hybrid rice has rescued millions from hunger. Having dedicated himself to agricultural science for decades, he was confronted with countless setbacks yet never lost heart. His unwavering perseverance serves as a perpetual source of inspiration, motivating me to pursue my goals with equal determination. 升格要点：① "great scientist"→"the figure I hold in the highest esteem"；② "worked hard"→"dedicated himself to"；③ "faced many difficulties"→"confronted with countless setbacks"；④ 加入 Having dedicated 分词作状语；⑤ "I admire him"→"serves as a perpetual source of inspiration"。 五、实战演练（参考范文） 题目一　历史人物 Among the multitude of historical figures in Chinese medicine, Li Shizhen is the one I admire most. Born in the Ming Dynasty, he dedicated himself to studying herbs and medicines from an early age. Confronted with the inaccuracies in old medical books, he traveled across the country, collecting specimens and interviewing locals for 27 years. His monumental work, Compendium of Materia Medica, remains a treasure of world medicine. What impresses me most is his meticulous spirit and courage to challenge authority — qualities that continue to inspire seekers of truth. 题目二　身边普通人 Of all the people I encounter daily, Mr. Zhang, our community doctor, is the unsung hero I respect most. Last winter, when a flu outbreak swept through our neighborhood, he worked around the clock, visiting elderly patients at home even during snowstorms. With a stethoscope around his neck and a reassuring smile, he always made his patients feel at ease. Were it not for his dedication, many families would have suffered far more. His selfless service reminds me that heroism lies not in fame, but in quiet, consistent kindness. 范文共性：两篇均从"句式工具箱"中各选一句组合而成——引出用功能1，事迹用功能2，评价用功能3，并各插入一个加分细节（with复合结构 / 倒装虚拟）。这就是"选句子"而非"背模板"的好处：结构灵活，不会千人一面。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $