Unit 1 The Changing World（单元写作任务单）2026-2027学年九年级英语上册（新教材人教版）

该初中英语单元写作任务单围绕“描述身边的变化”主题，涵盖个人成长与家乡社会变化的核心词汇、对比描述的功能短语及句型，搭建从基础语言要素到主题升华的递进式学习支架。 清单通过主题分类（如个人成长与家乡社会词汇）、功能模块（如开头总起、结尾升华句型）呈现知识体系，设计“句型升级对比”（如基础句扩展为含原因细节的升级句）和“结尾升华句型”（如强调不变的爱与初心），培养学生语言能力和文化意识。教师可依托任务示例设计分层教学，学生能自主运用对比连接词与时态区分提升写作，高效达成学习目标。

Unit 1 The Changing World单元写作写作任务单 写作主题：描述身边的变化 本单元围绕“变化的世界（The Changing World）”这一主题展开，该主题与课标要求的“人与社会”主题范畴中的子话题“社会进步与家乡发展”以及“人与自我”主题范畴中的“个人成长与生活变迁”密切相关。九年级学生正处于从少年向青年过渡的关键时期，自身在成长，周围的世界也在飞速变化——家乡面貌日新月异、生活方式不断升级、科技发展深刻影响着日常点滴。引导学生观察、记录并反思这些变化，既是语言学习的需要，也是培养社会观察力与家国情怀的重要途径。 本单元的大问题 “How have things changed?” 启发学生从多维度观察和思考变化——家乡的环境、交通、建筑，个人的学习、性格、生活，社会的发展与进步。Section A 聚焦“家乡与社会的变化”，通过采访对话和语篇阅读，让学生掌握描述环境、交通、农业、住房等方面变化的词汇与句型（如 used to 描述过去、现在完成时描述已然发生的变化）；Section B 聚焦“个人生活的变化”，通过阅读同龄人描述自身成长的短文，让学生学会从学校生活、家庭居住、学习方式、个人性格等多个方面梳理自己的成长轨迹。 本单元的写作任务通常要求学生写一篇描述变化的短文，可选择 “家乡的变化”（Changes in My Hometown） 或 “我生活中的变化”（Changes in My Life） 两个方向。前者侧重描述客观环境与社会发展，运用所学词汇描绘家乡交通、建筑、环境等方面的今昔对比；后者侧重记录个人成长，运用 used to 与现在完成时描述自己在性格、学习、生活等方面的蜕变。无论选择哪个方向，写作中均应重点关注：准确区分时态——描述过去用 used to 或一般过去时，描述现在用一般现在时或现在完成时；巧妙运用对比连接词——but, however, while, in the past, now 等让过去与现在的对比更加鲜明；结尾升华主题——点明在万千变化中“不变”的情感与初心，如家人之间的爱、对家乡的热爱、成长的坚持等，这是文章“有温度”的关键 一、重点词汇 （一）个人成长变化类词汇 性格与能力 1 shy 害羞的 2 quiet 安静的 3 outgoing 外向的 4 active 积极的；活跃的 5 confident 自信的 6 brave 勇敢的 7 independent 独立的 8 positive 积极的 9 proud 自豪的 10 satisfied 满意的 学习与学校 1 primary school 小学 2 junior high school 初中 3 classroom 教室 4 subject 学科 5 teacher 老师 6 classmate 同学 7 homework 家庭作业 8 exam 考试 9 grade 年级；成绩 10 group discussion 小组讨论 11 speech 演讲 12 progress 进步 家庭与生活 1 flat 公寓 2 house 房子 3 neighbourhood 社区 4 transport / transportation 交通 5 bus 公共汽车 6 bike / bicycle 自行车 7 road 道路 8 bridge 桥 （二）家乡社会变化类词汇 环境与设施 1 environment 环境 2 facility 设施 3 building 建筑物 4 park 公园 5 garden 花园 6 library 图书馆 7 hospital 医院 8 supermarket 超市 9 square 广场 10 tower 塔楼 交通与科技 1 railway 铁路 2 highway 公路 3 metro 地铁 4 high-tech 高科技的 5 electronic 电子的 6 e-payment 电子支付 7 greenhouse 温室 （三）进阶高分词汇 1 overcome 克服 2 challenge 挑战 3 courage 勇气 4 goal 目标 5 personality 性格 6 support 支持 7 thankful 感激的 8 comfort zone 舒适区 二、重点短语 1. （一）开头总起类 1 Great changes have taken place in...……发生了巨大变化 2 ...has changed a lot in the past few years……在过去几年变化很大 3 over the past few years 在过去的几年里 4 over the last 20 years 在过去20年里 5 over the years 多年来 6 since I became a junior high school student 自从我成为一名初中生 7 Time goes by 时光流逝 8 Let me share with you how... 让我和你分享…… （二）描述过去类 1 used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 2 There used to be... 过去有…… 3 in the past 在过去 4 at that time 在那时 5 When I was in primary school,... 当我上小学时…… 6 be afraid of doing 害怕做某事 7 be afraid to do 害怕做某事 8 live in a small old house 住在一个又小又旧的房子里 9 walk to school / go to school on foot 步行去上学 10 be short and quiet 又矮又安静 11 not dare to do 不敢做某事 12 study alone 独自学习 （三）描述现在类 1 at present / nowadays 目前；如今 2 become more confident and outgoing 变得更自信和外向 3 make great progress in 在……方面取得很大进步 4 take an active part in 积极参与 5 join group discussions 参加小组讨论 6 build up courage 建立勇气 7 develop a habit of 养成……的习惯 8 gradually become independent 逐渐变得独立 9 take on new challenges 迎接新挑战 10 step out of my comfort zone 走出舒适区 11 overcome my shyness 克服我的害羞 12 reach my goal 达成目标 13 speak up 大胆发言 14 challenge myself 挑战自我 15 move into a big and bright flat 搬进又大又亮的公寓 16 take the bus / school bus 乘坐公交车/校车 17 enjoy a rich and colorful life 享受丰富多彩的生活 18 live a happy and comfortable life 过幸福舒适的生活 19 have / has been built 已被建造 20 turn into 变成 21 People’s living conditions have improved a lot. 人们的生活条件改善了很多。 （四）原因与结果类 1 thanks to 多亏了；由于 2 because of 因为 3 as a result 结果 4 with the help of在……的帮助下 5 with the government‘s support在政府的支持下 6 bring about带来 （五）结尾升华类 1 One thing stays the same. 有一件事没有变。 2 ...remains unchanged. ……保持不变。 3 I still... 我仍然…… 4 feel proud of 对……感到自豪 5 be satisfied with 对……感到满意 6 be happy with 对……感到高兴 7 truly love 真心热爱 8 be thankful for 对……心怀感激 9 expecting more improvements期待更多进步 10 I will keep working hard and welcome more nice changes.我会继续努力，迎接更多好的变化。 三、重点句型 （一）开头总起句型 1. Great changes have taken place in my life / my hometown over the past few years.（在过去的几年里，我的生活/家乡发生了巨大的变化。） 2. Now that I am older, my life is different from what it used to be.（现在我已经长大了，我的生活和过去不同了。） 3. My life has changed a lot since I became a junior high school student.（自从我成为一名初中生，我的生活改变了很多。） 4. Let me share with you how my life has changed.（让我和你分享我的生活是如何变化的。） 5. The world is changing rapidly, and so is my hometown.（世界在快速变化，我的家乡也是如此。） （二）描述过去的主体句型 1. In the past, I used to be a shy boy. I was afraid to talk with my classmates and always studied alone.（在过去，我曾经是一个害羞的男孩。我不敢和同学说话，总是一个人学习。） 2. I used to walk to my primary school every day, and it took me about twenty minutes.（我过去每天步行去小学，大约需要20分钟。） 3. My family used to live in a small old house at that time.（那时我的家人住在一个又小又旧的房子里。） 4. There used to be no bridges to cross over mountains and rivers.（过去常常没有桥来穿越山川和河流。） 5. In the past, the streets were narrow. People used to live in old houses. There were few parks or green spaces.（在过去，街道很狭窄。人们住在旧房子里。几乎没有公园或绿地。） 6. I used to be shy in class and I was afraid of speaking in front of others.（我过去在班上很害羞，害怕在别人面前发言。） 7. We didn’t have many books at home, so I usually read only textbooks in my free time.（我们家里没有很多书，所以我空闲时间通常只读课本。） （三）描述现在的主体句型 1. But now, I have become more confident and outgoing. I like to take part in group discussions and make new friends at school.（但是现在，我变得更加自信和外向了。我喜欢参加小组讨论，在学校交新朋友。） 2. Now I take the school bus to junior high school with my friends every morning.（现在我每天早上和朋友一起坐校车去初中。） 3. We have moved into a big and bright flat, and my grandma lives with us happily.（我们已经搬进了一个又大又亮的公寓，奶奶和我们幸福地住在一起。） 4. Now, the city has built many new roads and modern buildings. People‘s living conditions have improved a lot.（现在，这座城市修建了许多新道路和现代化建筑。人们的生活条件改善了很多。） 5. With the government’s support, more parks and gardens have been built.（在政府的支持下，更多的公园和花园被建起来了。） 6. I have gradually become independent and I can take care of myself.（我已经逐渐变得独立，能照顾自己了。） 7. I am brave enough to put up my hand and answer teachers‘ questions.（我足够勇敢，能举手回答老师的问题了。） 8. My parents bought me many interesting books, so I often read different kinds of books to relax myself.（我的父母给我买了许多有趣的书，所以我经常阅读不同种类的书来放松自己。） （四）感受与评价句型 1. I am really happy with the changes in my life.（我对生活中的变化感到非常高兴。） 2. These changes have made my life better and more colorful.（这些变化让我的生活变得更好、更多彩。） 3. I feel proud of the changes in my hometown.（我为家乡的变化感到自豪。） 4. I feel satisfied with all these great changes.（我对所有这些巨大的变化感到满意。） 5. I enjoy these great changes. They make my life more wonderful and meaningful.（我喜欢这些巨大的变化。它们让我的生活更加精彩和有意义。） 6. I am thankful for all the changes in my life.（我对生活中的所有变化心怀感激。） （五）结尾升华句型（高分亮点） 1. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing stays the same: the love from my family.（我的生活在很多方面都发生了变化，但有一件事始终不变：家人的爱。） 2. Although many things have changed, one thing stays the same: my love for my hometown.（尽管很多事情都变了，但有一件事始终不变：我对家乡的热爱。） 3. One thing that stays the same is the love and support from my family.（有一件事始终不变，那就是家人的爱和支持。） 4. Thanks to these changes, I have a better life now. I will keep working hard and welcome more nice changes.（多亏了这些变化，我现在有了更好的生活。我会继续努力，迎接更多好的变化。） 5. I believe more great changes will come in the future.（我相信未来会有更多好的变化。） （六）句型升级对比（写作提分） 基础句 升级句 1. I used to walk to school. →→→I used to walk to my primary school with my parents because it was near my home. 2. My life is better now. →→→Thanks to these changes, I have a better life now and I feel proud of myself. 3. Many things have changed. →→→Although many things have changed, one thing stays the same: the love from my family. 4. The city is beautiful now. →→→Now the city has built many new roads and modern buildings, and people‘s living conditions have improved a lot. 5. I’m not shy now. →→→I am brave enough to put up my hand and answer teachers‘ questions. Passage A 改革开放以来，中国从开启新时期到跨入新世纪，从站上新起点到进入新时代，人民生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。请你以“Changes in People’s Lives”为题，用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈新时代人们的生活变化。内容包括： 1. 饮食习惯； 2. 休闲活动； 3. 对阅读和旅游的看法。 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：entertainment (n. 娱乐), gain (v. 获得), reform and opening-up (改革开放) Changes in People’s Lives Hello, everybody! Today I’d like to say something about people’s lives in the new era. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes in People’s Lives Hello, everybody! Today I’d like to say something about people’s lives in the new era. Since the reform and opening-up, great changes have taken place in our daily life. Firstly, people’s eating habits have become healthier. They pay more attention to a balanced diet with fresh vegetables and fruits. Secondly, people can spend more time and money on sports, education and entertainment. People’s lives become more colorful. Lastly, reading and traveling are now considered to be important ways to relax and gain knowledge. Many people enjoy reading e-books and taking trips during holidays. These changes show that people’s lives are becoming more colorful. Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：发言稿，议论文，以一般现在时、现在完成时为主 明确要点：①饮食习惯；②休闲活动；③对阅读和旅游的看法 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：词数约80词，不得透露真实姓名及学校名称    [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：使用题目给出的开头句，引出话题，点明新时代生活发生巨大变化 主体段：分别介绍饮食习惯、休闲活动，阐述对阅读和旅游的看法 结尾段：总结感受，收尾致谢    [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：饮食习惯 eating habits/balanced diet/fresh vegetables and fruitshealthy/nutritious/keep fit/take in等 要点二：休闲活动 sports/education/entertainment/colorful/spare time/relax oneself/develop hobbies/take exercise等    要点三：对阅读和旅游的看法 relax/gain knowledge/read e‑books/take trips/holidays/open up one’s eyes/learn about the world/enrich one’s life等 Passage B 春假是放松身心，亲近自然的美好时光。在刚刚过去的春假中，很多同学选择旅行去看不一样的风景，开阔眼界，收获成长。学校英语社团正举办主题为“Changes About Travelling”的英语征文活动，请你根据以下流程写一篇短文投稿。 ·Changes in transport. ·Changes in people’s opinions about travelling. ·Reasons for the changes. 写作要求：1. 短文内容须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 Changes About Travelling Travelling has changed a lot over the years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes About Travelling Travelling has changed a lot over the years. In the past, people usually travelled by bus or bike. It took them a long time to get to far‑away places. Now more and more people choose high‑speed trains or planes. Transport is faster and more comfortable. Besides, people’s ideas about travelling are different. Years ago, most people travelled just for fun. Today, they hope to learn new things and open their eyes to the world. These changes come from two main reasons. First, our life is getting much richer. Second, better transport makes long‑distance trips much easier. Travelling brings us more growth and happiness. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般过去时、一般现在时对比为主 明确要点：出行交通的变化、人们旅行观念的变化、变化产生的原因 确定人称：第三人称(people/they)为主 注意事项：词数100词左右；无真实姓名校名；语句连贯、对比清晰 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：给定开头，总述旅行发生了巨大变化 主体段：分别介绍交通方式变化、人们旅行观念变化 结尾段：分析变化原因，总结旅行带来的意义 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：交通方式变化 过去交通：by bus/by bike/took them a long time/slow/spend much time等 现在交通：by high-speed train/by plane/faster/more comfortable/save time等 要点二：旅行观念变化 过去观念：travel just for fun/relax oneself等 现在观念：learn new things/open eyes/widen horizons/gain growth等 要点三：变化原因 原因词汇：life is richer/transport develops rapidly/society develops fast等 要点四：结尾升华 意义总结：bring happiness/bring personal growth/enrich our life等 Passage C 时光荏苒，岁月如梭。假如你是来自随州某初级中学的王涛，你和你的美国笔友Jack已经通信很久。最近，Jack来信询问这几年你本人、你的生活和你的家乡的变化，请根据思维导图，给他回信介绍一下这些变化并描述你的感受。 要求: 1. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 80词以上 (信件格式已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Jack, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Tao 【答案】One possible version: Dear Jack, How time flies! I’m happy to share some changes with you. Personally, I have changed a lot. I used to be short and shy, but now I am tall and outgoing. Besides, I study harder and my schoolwork is much better. In daily life, I used to stay at home during holidays, but now I often travel. We used to write letters, but now we chat on phones and shop online. As for my hometown Suizhou, it has become cleaner and more beautiful. Traffic is better now, and people are friendlier. These changes make me feel proud and happy. I truly love my hometown. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Wang Tao 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，时态以一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：给笔友Jack回信，介绍自身外貌、性格、学业的变化；介绍生活上假期活动、沟通、购物方式的改变；描述家乡环境、交通、人文方面的变化；写出自己的内心感受；词数80以上，信件格式已给出不计入总词数 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my)为主 注意事项：行文条理清晰，语句连贯，可适度拓展；不出现真实校名隐私信息，要点全部覆盖 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接书信开头，引出分享各类变化的写作话题 主体段：依次介绍个人自身变化、日常生活变化、家乡多方面的发展改变 结尾段：抒发面对这些变化的内心感受，加上书信常规期待回复的结束语 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：讲述个人成长转变 外貌性格转变：used to be short and shy, now tall and outgoing/used to be quiet but become confident等 学业状态更新：schoolwork is much better/make great progress in subjects等 要点二：说明日常生活变迁 假期休闲更迭：used to stay at home during holidays, now often travel/ used to do simple housework, now go for various field trips in spare time等 社交购物转变：used to write letters, now chat on phones and shop online / used to meet face‑to‑face, now keep in touch through video‑calls and order goods online等 要点三：介绍家乡发展面貌 环境交通改观：it has become cleaner and more beautiful/Traffic is better now/take on a new look/roads become wider 等 人文风貌变化：people are friendlier/local residents are more warm‑hearted等 要点四：抒发内心真实感触 主观情绪表达：These changes make me feel proud and happy/I feel satisfied with all these great changes等 情感立场表态：truly love my hometown/expecting more improvements in the future等 Passage D 为了响应“绿水青山就是金山银山”的号召，你校英文报特举办以家乡变化为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下图示，以”The Changes in My Hometown”为题写一篇短文进行投稿。 要求：1.须包含图示中所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现个人姓名、学校名称等真实信息； 3.词数80-100左右(标题已给出，不计入总词数)。 The Changes in My Hometown ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has changed a lot. First, the streets there used to be narrow and dirty, but now they are wide and clean. Second, most people there used to live a hard life, but now, they live more comfortably. People there used to watch TV, but now they are more willing to exercise. I feel very happy and proud of these changes, as they show people in my hometown have an easier life. In the future, I hope to see more green public transport. I also hope everyone can get free medical services there. 【详解】写作步骤 第一步：审题立意 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，对比家乡过去与现在的变化 明确要点：街道面貌变化、人们生活水平变化、业余活动变化、对家乡未来的期盼 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数80‑100左右 第二步：构思布局 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，总述近些年家乡发生巨大变化 主体段：分别从街道、生活、业余活动三个方面对比介绍家乡过去和现在的不同 结尾段：表达对家乡变化的感受，抒发对家乡未来的美好期盼 第三步：要点展开 要点一：街道面貌变化 面貌变化：narrow and dirty/wide and clean 对比描述：used to be narrow and dirty/but now they are wide and clean 要点二：人们生活水平变化 水平变化：live a hard life/live more comfortably 要点三：业余活动变化 活动变化：watch TV/go to exercise 对比描述：used to watch TV/more willing to go to exercise 要点四：对家乡的感受与未来期盼 感受表达：feel very happy and proud 未来展望：more green public transport/free medical services Passage E 随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。你校英语角本周以“Changes Around Us”为题征集英文作文。请你根据下图中的提示，从以下四个角度中任选三个角度对比过去和现在的变化，并谈一谈自己对这些变化的看法。 要求： 1.词数不少于80； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes Around Us In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes Around Us In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. First, let’s talk about travel. In the past, people could only travel to nearby places. But now, we can not only go abroad easily but also enjoy travelling online to visit faraway tourist attractions from home. Then, traffic has become more convenient. Before, people mainly took buses or green trains for long trips. Now, we can drive cars, take high-speed trains or take the plane, which save lots of time. Finally, our ways to study are different. In the past, we just read textbooks alone. But now, we do more reading to learn widely and do more group work to share ideas. These changes make our life better. I believe we’ll have a more wonderful future with more progress! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 文体：对比类说明文（英语角征文） 时态：一般过去时（描述过去生活状况）；一般现在时（现如今生活现状）；现在完成时（总述变化） 要点：任选三个角度进行今昔对比；抒发个人对这些变化的看法 人称：第一人称we 要求：词数不少于80词，不得出现真实校名与人名，开头已给出无需改写 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 第一段：结合已给出的开头，引出话题，并阐述旅行方面的变化 第二段：阐述交通方面的变化 第三段：阐述学习方式的变化 第四段：个人看法及展望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：旅行的变化 过去：could only travel to nearby places/could only visit places not far away等 现在：not only go abroad easily but also enjoy travelling online/visit foreign countries and take virtual tours等 要点二：交通的变化 过去：mainly took buses or green trains for long trips/relied on slow public transport for long journeys等 现在：drive cars, take high-speed trains or take the plane/choose faster and more comfortable ways to travel等 好处：save lots of time/make trips much quicker and easier等 要点三：学习方式的变化 过去：read textbooks alone/studied only from books by ourselves等 现在：do more reading to learn widely and do more group work to share ideas/read broadly and learn from each other through teamwork等 要点四：个人看法 总结：make our life better/improve our daily life greatly等 展望：have a more wonderful future with more progress/look forward to even greater changes ahead等 Passage F 请你根据以下提示，以“The Change That Shaped Me”为题，写一篇英文短文，描述一次对你产生了深远影响的改变。 提示： 这个改变是什么（可以是一个决定、一次经历、一次失败或一次成功）； 2. 这个改变是如何发生的（具体过程）； 为什么这个改变对你产生了深远影响； 你从这次改变中学到了什么，以及它如何塑造了今天的你。 要求： 包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 词数：不少于100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Change That Shaped Me Throughout my life, I have experienced many changes, but none has shaped me as profoundly as the decision to study abroad. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： The Change That Shaped Me Throughout my life, I have experienced many changes, but none has shaped me as profoundly as the decision to study abroad. It pushed me out of my comfort zone and forced me to grow up quickly. The process was challenging. At first, I struggled with language barriers and loneliness in a new environment. Simple tasks like ordering food or asking for directions were hard. However, instead of giving up, I faced difficulties head-on by joining local clubs to practice English and making friends from diverse backgrounds. Gradually, my confidence grew. This experience taught me independence and resilience. I learned I could overcome seemingly impossible obstacles. Today, I am more open-minded and confident. This journey has truly defined who I am. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：夹叙夹议文（记叙经历 + 议论感悟），时态以一般过去时（叙述经历）和一般现在时（阐述影响）为主。 明确要点： 改变的内容：出国留学的决定（题目已给出）。 发生的过程：遇到的困难（语言障碍、孤独）及克服方法（参加社团、交朋友）。 深远影响的原因：学会了独立和坚韧，克服了看似不可能的障碍。 学到的内容及塑造：变得更加开放和自信，定义了现在的自己。 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）。 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和校名；词数不少于100词；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段（引入）：承接给出的开头，点明这个决定让自己走出舒适区，快速成长。 第二段（主体—过程）：详细描述遇到的挑战（如语言不通、想家）以及如何积极应对（加入俱乐部、交友），最终建立自信。 第三段（结尾—升华）：总结这次经历带来的核心品质（独立、坚韧），以及对现在的积极影响（开放、自信）。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：改变的发生（具体过程） 困难描述：leaving my comfort zone / language barriers / loneliness / new environment… 具体行动：face difficulties head-on / join local clubs / make friends from diverse backgrounds… 结果：confidence grew… 要点二：改变的影响与所学（塑造今天的你） 学到的品质：independence / resilience… 自我认知：capable of overcoming obstacles… 现在的状态：open-minded / confident / shaped who I am… Passage G 请你根据以下提示，以“The Biggest Change in My Life”为题，写一篇英文短文，描述你生活中最大的变化。 提示： 这个变化是什么（可以是习惯、性格、环境或技能方面的改变）； 这个变化是什么时候发生的； 是什么原因或什么人促使了这个变化； 这个变化给你带来了什么影响或收获。 要求： 包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 词数：不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Biggest Change in My Life Looking back at my life, I realize that the biggest change I have experienced is learning to manage my time better. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Biggest Change in My Life Looking back at my life, I realize that the biggest change I have experienced is learning to manage my time better. It happened last year when I entered junior high school. At that time, I had too much homework and often stayed up late. I felt stressed and tired every day. My English teacher noticed this and advised me to make a daily plan. I followed her advice carefully. Now, I can finish tasks on time and have more time for hobbies like reading and sports. This change makes me feel more confident and organized. I learn that planning is the key to success. I will keep this good habit forever. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主，结尾段用一般现在时和一般将来时 明确要点：变化是什么（学习时间管理），何时发生（去年进入初中），原因（之前的状态），谁促使（英语老师建议），影响或收获（更自信、有条理、有计划并保持好习惯） 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名和校名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明最大变化是学会时间管理 主体段：按时间顺序展开——变化发生的时间背景（去年上初一），原因（作业多、熬夜、疲惫），谁促使发生变化（老师建议、自己采纳），现在的积极结果（按时完成、有空闲爱好） 结尾段：总结变化带来的深层影响（自信、有序、理解“计划”的重要性），并表达坚持决心 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：变化是什么 the biggest change/manage my time better/change my study habits/organize my schedule/set priorities/break down big tasks/use a timer等 要点二：何时发生及原因 时间：last year/entered junior high school/in Grade 7等 原因：too much homework/stayed up late/stressed/tired/felt overwhelmed/fell asleep in class/missed deadlines/worried about exams等 要点三：促使者及结果 促使者：English teacher/advised me to make a daily plan/my parents encouraged me/my best friend shared his method等 结果：followed her advice carefully/finish tasks on time/have more time for hobbies/reading/sports/decided to change myself/set a reminder on my phone/jogging/do more exercise等 要点四：影响与收获 confident/organized/planning is the key to success/keep this good habit/improve grades/enjoy weekends more/become more independent/learn self-discipline/gain a sense of achievement/feel proud of myself等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 The Changing World单元写作写作任务单 写作主题：描述身边的变化 本单元围绕“变化的世界（The Changing World）”这一主题展开，该主题与课标要求的“人与社会”主题范畴中的子话题“社会进步与家乡发展”以及“人与自我”主题范畴中的“个人成长与生活变迁”密切相关。九年级学生正处于从少年向青年过渡的关键时期，自身在成长，周围的世界也在飞速变化——家乡面貌日新月异、生活方式不断升级、科技发展深刻影响着日常点滴。引导学生观察、记录并反思这些变化，既是语言学习的需要，也是培养社会观察力与家国情怀的重要途径。 本单元的大问题 “How have things changed?” 启发学生从多维度观察和思考变化——家乡的环境、交通、建筑，个人的学习、性格、生活，社会的发展与进步。Section A 聚焦“家乡与社会的变化”，通过采访对话和语篇阅读，让学生掌握描述环境、交通、农业、住房等方面变化的词汇与句型（如 used to 描述过去、现在完成时描述已然发生的变化）；Section B 聚焦“个人生活的变化”，通过阅读同龄人描述自身成长的短文，让学生学会从学校生活、家庭居住、学习方式、个人性格等多个方面梳理自己的成长轨迹。 本单元的写作任务通常要求学生写一篇描述变化的短文，可选择 “家乡的变化”（Changes in My Hometown） 或 “我生活中的变化”（Changes in My Life） 两个方向。前者侧重描述客观环境与社会发展，运用所学词汇描绘家乡交通、建筑、环境等方面的今昔对比；后者侧重记录个人成长，运用 used to 与现在完成时描述自己在性格、学习、生活等方面的蜕变。无论选择哪个方向，写作中均应重点关注：准确区分时态——描述过去用 used to 或一般过去时，描述现在用一般现在时或现在完成时；巧妙运用对比连接词——but, however, while, in the past, now 等让过去与现在的对比更加鲜明；结尾升华主题——点明在万千变化中“不变”的情感与初心，如家人之间的爱、对家乡的热爱、成长的坚持等，这是文章“有温度”的关键 一、重点词汇 （一）个人成长变化类词汇 性格与能力 1 shy 害羞的 2 quiet 安静的 3 outgoing 外向的 4 active 积极的；活跃的 5 confident 自信的 6 brave 勇敢的 7 independent 独立的 8 positive 积极的 9 proud 自豪的 10 satisfied 满意的 学习与学校 1 primary school 小学 2 junior high school 初中 3 classroom 教室 4 subject 学科 5 teacher 老师 6 classmate 同学 7 homework 家庭作业 8 exam 考试 9 grade 年级；成绩 10 group discussion 小组讨论 11 speech 演讲 12 progress 进步 家庭与生活 1 flat 公寓 2 house 房子 3 neighbourhood 社区 4 transport / transportation 交通 5 bus 公共汽车 6 bike / bicycle 自行车 7 road 道路 8 bridge 桥 （二）家乡社会变化类词汇 环境与设施 1 environment 环境 2 facility 设施 3 building 建筑物 4 park 公园 5 garden 花园 6 library 图书馆 7 hospital 医院 8 supermarket 超市 9 square 广场 10 tower 塔楼 交通与科技 1 railway 铁路 2 highway 公路 3 metro 地铁 4 high-tech 高科技的 5 electronic 电子的 6 e-payment 电子支付 7 greenhouse 温室 （三）进阶高分词汇 1 overcome 克服 2 challenge 挑战 3 courage 勇气 4 goal 目标 5 personality 性格 6 support 支持 7 thankful 感激的 8 comfort zone 舒适区 二、重点短语 1. （一）开头总起类 1 Great changes have taken place in...……发生了巨大变化 2 ...has changed a lot in the past few years……在过去几年变化很大 3 over the past few years 在过去的几年里 4 over the last 20 years 在过去20年里 5 over the years 多年来 6 since I became a junior high school student 自从我成为一名初中生 7 Time goes by 时光流逝 8 Let me share with you how... 让我和你分享…… （二）描述过去类 1 used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 2 There used to be... 过去有…… 3 in the past 在过去 4 at that time 在那时 5 When I was in primary school,... 当我上小学时…… 6 be afraid of doing 害怕做某事 7 be afraid to do 害怕做某事 8 live in a small old house 住在一个又小又旧的房子里 9 walk to school / go to school on foot 步行去上学 10 be short and quiet 又矮又安静 11 not dare to do 不敢做某事 12 study alone 独自学习 （三）描述现在类 1 at present / nowadays 目前；如今 2 become more confident and outgoing 变得更自信和外向 3 make great progress in 在……方面取得很大进步 4 take an active part in 积极参与 5 join group discussions 参加小组讨论 6 build up courage 建立勇气 7 develop a habit of 养成……的习惯 8 gradually become independent 逐渐变得独立 9 take on new challenges 迎接新挑战 10 step out of my comfort zone 走出舒适区 11 overcome my shyness 克服我的害羞 12 reach my goal 达成目标 13 speak up 大胆发言 14 challenge myself 挑战自我 15 move into a big and bright flat 搬进又大又亮的公寓 16 take the bus / school bus 乘坐公交车/校车 17 enjoy a rich and colorful life 享受丰富多彩的生活 18 live a happy and comfortable life 过幸福舒适的生活 19 have / has been built 已被建造 20 turn into 变成 21 People’s living conditions have improved a lot. 人们的生活条件改善了很多。 （四）原因与结果类 1 thanks to 多亏了；由于 2 because of 因为 3 as a result 结果 4 with the help of在……的帮助下 5 with the government‘s support在政府的支持下 6 bring about带来 （五）结尾升华类 1 One thing stays the same. 有一件事没有变。 2 ...remains unchanged. ……保持不变。 3 I still... 我仍然…… 4 feel proud of 对……感到自豪 5 be satisfied with 对……感到满意 6 be happy with 对……感到高兴 7 truly love 真心热爱 8 be thankful for 对……心怀感激 9 expecting more improvements期待更多进步 10 I will keep working hard and welcome more nice changes.我会继续努力，迎接更多好的变化。 三、重点句型 （一）开头总起句型 1. Great changes have taken place in my life / my hometown over the past few years.（在过去的几年里，我的生活/家乡发生了巨大的变化。） 2. Now that I am older, my life is different from what it used to be.（现在我已经长大了，我的生活和过去不同了。） 3. My life has changed a lot since I became a junior high school student.（自从我成为一名初中生，我的生活改变了很多。） 4. Let me share with you how my life has changed.（让我和你分享我的生活是如何变化的。） 5. The world is changing rapidly, and so is my hometown.（世界在快速变化，我的家乡也是如此。） （二）描述过去的主体句型 1. In the past, I used to be a shy boy. I was afraid to talk with my classmates and always studied alone.（在过去，我曾经是一个害羞的男孩。我不敢和同学说话，总是一个人学习。） 2. I used to walk to my primary school every day, and it took me about twenty minutes.（我过去每天步行去小学，大约需要20分钟。） 3. My family used to live in a small old house at that time.（那时我的家人住在一个又小又旧的房子里。） 4. There used to be no bridges to cross over mountains and rivers.（过去常常没有桥来穿越山川和河流。） 5. In the past, the streets were narrow. People used to live in old houses. There were few parks or green spaces.（在过去，街道很狭窄。人们住在旧房子里。几乎没有公园或绿地。） 6. I used to be shy in class and I was afraid of speaking in front of others.（我过去在班上很害羞，害怕在别人面前发言。） 7. We didn’t have many books at home, so I usually read only textbooks in my free time.（我们家里没有很多书，所以我空闲时间通常只读课本。） （三）描述现在的主体句型 1. But now, I have become more confident and outgoing. I like to take part in group discussions and make new friends at school.（但是现在，我变得更加自信和外向了。我喜欢参加小组讨论，在学校交新朋友。） 2. Now I take the school bus to junior high school with my friends every morning.（现在我每天早上和朋友一起坐校车去初中。） 3. We have moved into a big and bright flat, and my grandma lives with us happily.（我们已经搬进了一个又大又亮的公寓，奶奶和我们幸福地住在一起。） 4. Now, the city has built many new roads and modern buildings. People‘s living conditions have improved a lot.（现在，这座城市修建了许多新道路和现代化建筑。人们的生活条件改善了很多。） 5. With the government’s support, more parks and gardens have been built.（在政府的支持下，更多的公园和花园被建起来了。） 6. I have gradually become independent and I can take care of myself.（我已经逐渐变得独立，能照顾自己了。） 7. I am brave enough to put up my hand and answer teachers‘ questions.（我足够勇敢，能举手回答老师的问题了。） 8. My parents bought me many interesting books, so I often read different kinds of books to relax myself.（我的父母给我买了许多有趣的书，所以我经常阅读不同种类的书来放松自己。） （四）感受与评价句型 1. I am really happy with the changes in my life.（我对生活中的变化感到非常高兴。） 2. These changes have made my life better and more colorful.（这些变化让我的生活变得更好、更多彩。） 3. I feel proud of the changes in my hometown.（我为家乡的变化感到自豪。） 4. I feel satisfied with all these great changes.（我对所有这些巨大的变化感到满意。） 5. I enjoy these great changes. They make my life more wonderful and meaningful.（我喜欢这些巨大的变化。它们让我的生活更加精彩和有意义。） 6. I am thankful for all the changes in my life.（我对生活中的所有变化心怀感激。） （五）结尾升华句型（高分亮点） 1. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing stays the same: the love from my family.（我的生活在很多方面都发生了变化，但有一件事始终不变：家人的爱。） 2. Although many things have changed, one thing stays the same: my love for my hometown.（尽管很多事情都变了，但有一件事始终不变：我对家乡的热爱。） 3. One thing that stays the same is the love and support from my family.（有一件事始终不变，那就是家人的爱和支持。） 4. Thanks to these changes, I have a better life now. I will keep working hard and welcome more nice changes.（多亏了这些变化，我现在有了更好的生活。我会继续努力，迎接更多好的变化。） 5. I believe more great changes will come in the future.（我相信未来会有更多好的变化。） （六）句型升级对比（写作提分） 基础句 升级句 1. I used to walk to school. →→→I used to walk to my primary school with my parents because it was near my home. 2. My life is better now. →→→Thanks to these changes, I have a better life now and I feel proud of myself. 3. Many things have changed. →→→Although many things have changed, one thing stays the same: the love from my family. 4. The city is beautiful now. →→→Now the city has built many new roads and modern buildings, and people‘s living conditions have improved a lot. 5. I’m not shy now. →→→I am brave enough to put up my hand and answer teachers‘ questions. Passage A 改革开放以来，中国从开启新时期到跨入新世纪，从站上新起点到进入新时代，人民生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。请你以“Changes in People’s Lives”为题，用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈新时代人们的生活变化。内容包括： 1. 饮食习惯； 2. 休闲活动； 3. 对阅读和旅游的看法。 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：entertainment (n. 娱乐), gain (v. 获得), reform and opening-up (改革开放) Changes in People’s Lives Hello, everybody! Today I’d like to say something about people’s lives in the new era. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage B 春假是放松身心，亲近自然的美好时光。在刚刚过去的春假中，很多同学选择旅行去看不一样的风景，开阔眼界，收获成长。学校英语社团正举办主题为“Changes About Travelling”的英语征文活动，请你根据以下流程写一篇短文投稿。 ·Changes in transport. ·Changes in people’s opinions about travelling. ·Reasons for the changes. 写作要求：1. 短文内容须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 Changes About Travelling Travelling has changed a lot over the years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage C 时光荏苒，岁月如梭。假如你是来自随州某初级中学的王涛，你和你的美国笔友Jack已经通信很久。最近，Jack来信询问这几年你本人、你的生活和你的家乡的变化，请根据思维导图，给他回信介绍一下这些变化并描述你的感受。 要求: 1. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 80词以上 (信件格式已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Jack, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Tao Passage D 为了响应“绿水青山就是金山银山”的号召，你校英文报特举办以家乡变化为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下图示，以”The Changes in My Hometown”为题写一篇短文进行投稿。 要求：1.须包含图示中所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现个人姓名、学校名称等真实信息； 3.词数80-100左右(标题已给出，不计入总词数)。 The Changes in My Hometown ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage E 随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。你校英语角本周以“Changes Around Us”为题征集英文作文。请你根据下图中的提示，从以下四个角度中任选三个角度对比过去和现在的变化，并谈一谈自己对这些变化的看法。 要求： 1.词数不少于80； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes Around Us In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage F 请你根据以下提示，以“The Change That Shaped Me”为题，写一篇英文短文，描述一次对你产生了深远影响的改变。 提示： 这个改变是什么（可以是一个决定、一次经历、一次失败或一次成功）； 2. 这个改变是如何发生的（具体过程）； 为什么这个改变对你产生了深远影响； 你从这次改变中学到了什么，以及它如何塑造了今天的你。 要求： 包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 词数：不少于100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Change That Shaped Me Throughout my life, I have experienced many changes, but none has shaped me as profoundly as the decision to study abroad. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage G 请你根据以下提示，以“The Biggest Change in My Life”为题，写一篇英文短文，描述你生活中最大的变化。 提示： 这个变化是什么（可以是习惯、性格、环境或技能方面的改变）； 这个变化是什么时候发生的； 是什么原因或什么人促使了这个变化； 这个变化给你带来了什么影响或收获。 要求： 包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 词数：不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Biggest Change in My Life Looking back at my life, I realize that the biggest change I have experienced is learning to manage my time better. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $