专题23 书面表达（课件）-【2027年新考纲】江苏省（职教高考）《英语二轮讲练测》

专题23 书面表达 【2027年新考纲】江苏省（职教高考） 《英语二轮讲练测》复习课件 01 考情总结 02 真题动向 03 必备知识 04 命题预测 2 01 考情总结 3 02 【2021年 书面表达真题】 5 【真题动向】 63. 王华即将进入大学，以下是他给学弟学妹们的临别赠言： （1）作为一名学生，毫无疑问，学习是首要任务，会占去大部分时间和精力，但你们仍需适当参加课外活动，要在学习和活动之间取得平衡。 （2）确立一个目标。一旦有了明确的目标，你就会为此而奋斗。即使遇到困难也不放弃。最终，你一定会达成目标。 （3）在不久的将来，有的同学将进入大学，有的将步入社会。与人相处很重要。要学会分享你的观点，倾听他人的意见，还要互爱互助。这些有助于你适应新的环境，开启新的生活。 【真题动向】 写作要求：（1）词数不少于80。（2）鼓励紧扣主题的适当发挥。 （3）开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（4）本题在答题卡上对应处作答。 Dear fellow schoolmates, Before I leave school for university, I’d like to drop a few lines for you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely, Wang Hua 【真题动向】 Dear fellow schoolmates, Before I leave school for university, I’d like to drop a few lines for you. As a student, there is no doubt that learning is the primary task, which will take up most of the  time and energy. But you still need to participate in extracurricular activities properly to achieve a balance between  learning and activities. Besides, you need to set a goal. Once you have a clear goal, you will fight for it. Don’t give up even if you have difficulties.In the end, you will definitely achieve your goal.  What’s more, in the near future，some students will enter the University, some will enter the society.It’s important to get along with people.Learn to share your views，listen to others and love and help each other.These will help you adapt to the new environment and open up a new life. Best wishes to you all!  Yours sincerely, Wang Hua 【真题动向】 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学弟学妹写一封信，表示对他们的建议和鼓励。1.词汇积累：主要的：primary→ main 占用，花费：take up→ cost参加：participate→ take part in 课外的：extracurricular→ outside the school 2.句式拓展：简单句变复合句 原句： But you still need to participate in extracurricular activities properly to achieve a balance between learning and activities. 拓展句：But you still need to participate in extracurricular activities so that you will properly achieve a balance between learning and activities. 【真题动向】 【高分句型1】 As a student, there is no doubt that learning is the primary task, which will take up most of the time and energy.（运用了there is no doubt that引导的同位语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】 Once you have a clear goal, you will fight for it.（运用了once引导的条件状语从句） 03 【2022年 书面表达真题】 11 【真题动向】 63. 随着世界读书日的确立，阅读越来越受到人们的重视。请以Reading is Fun为题，表达你对阅读的感受。内容包括： （1）阅读能拓宽我们的视野（vision）。它帮助我们了解世界各国的历史文化；同时我们从阅读中熟悉地球上不同肤色、不同语言的人们。在某种意义上，阅读是我们通向世界的一座桥梁。 （2）阅读是学生获取知识的重要途径。从阅读中我们掌握科学知识，获得问题的答案；在阅读中我们提高写作能力，因为阅读越多，越能表达我们的内心世界。我们在阅读中不断成长。 （3）书是我们的良师益友。让我们从阅读中寻找乐趣，做一个快乐的读书人。 【真题动向】 写作要求： （1）词数不少于80。 （2）鼓励紧扣主题的适当发挥。 （3）本题在答题卡上对应处作答。 Reading is Fun ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【真题动向】 【答案】 Reading, which has become more and more important with the establishment of World Book Day, can bring us lots of fun. First of all, reading broadens our vision. It helps us understand the history and culture of countries around the world. At the same time, we get acquainted with people of different colors and languages from reading. In a sense, reading is a bridge to the world. Besides, reading is an important way for students to acquire knowledge. From reading, we grasp scientific knowledge and get answers to questions. In reading we improve our writing skills because the more we read, the more we express our inner world. We grow through reading. Last but not least, books are our mentors and friends. Let’s find pleasure in reading and be a happy reader.。 【真题动向】 【解析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。随着世界读书日的确立，阅读越来越受到人们的重视，要求以Reading is Fun为题写一篇短文表达对阅读的感受。 1.词汇积累：重要的：important→ significant 拓宽：broaden→ widen 获得：acquire→ get 提高：improve→ enhance 2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句 原句：At the same time, we get acquainted with people of different colors and languages from reading. 拓展句：At the same time, we get acquainted with people who have different colors and languages from reading. 【真题动向】 【高分句型1】 Reading, which has become more and more important with the establishment of World Book Day, can bring us lots of fun. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】 In reading we improve our writing skills because the more we read, the more we express our inner world. (运用了because引导原因状语从句) 04 【2023年 书面表达真题】 17 【真题动向】 63. 现在许多年轻人将使用过的物品放在网上交易，请谈谈你对此现象的看法。 内容包括： （1）你所知道的网上二手物品交易现象： （提示：相关网站：学习用品如书籍、纸笔；生活用品如衣服、鞋包；电子设备如手机、电脑等） （2）列举你或同学、亲友的相关经历； （3）你对网上二手物品交易的看法。 （提示：省钱、环保、便捷等；注意避免不当交易及上当受骗） 【真题动向】 写作要求： （1）词数不少于80。 （2）鼓励紧扣主题的适当发挥。 （3）本题在答题卡上对应处作答。 My Views on Buying and Selling Second-hand Items Online ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【真题动向】 【答案】 My Views on Buying and Selling Second-hand Items Online In recent years, second-hand transactions have become quite common. Nowadays there are more and more secondhand goods in the Internet, such as secondhand books, furniture, appliances, cars, and so on. I believe that buying and selling second-hand items online can be a great way to save money, reduce waste, and find unique treasures. With the convenience of online platforms, it can easily connect with others who are looking forward to selling items they no longer need. However, it is important to be cautious when buying second-hand items online. You need to avoid scams or purchasing low-quality items. 【真题动向】 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生谈谈网上二手物品交易现象。 1.词汇积累：例如：such as → for example 独特的：unique → distinctive 与...联系：connect with → keep in touch with 不再：no longer → no more 2. 句式拓展 原句：You need to avoid scams or purchasing low-quality items. 拓展句： In order to avoid scams and purchasing low-quality items, you need to be more vigilant. 【真题动向】 【高分句型1】 I believe that buying and selling second-hand items online can be a great way to save money, reduce waste, and find unique treasures.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】 it is important to be cautious when buying second-hand items online.（运用了it作形式主语和when引导的时间状语从句） 05 【2024年 书面表达真题】 23 【真题动向】 63. 在校园里、在大街上、在公园里、在旅游景点，你会看到越来越多的人穿着汉服。请谈谈你对此现象的看法。 （1）你所了解的汉服热现象。 （提示：穿汉服的群体如青少年、大学生、中老年人；穿汉服的场所如校园、公园、旅游景点；穿汉服的时间如节假日、日常生活中） （2）你自己是否愿意尝试穿汉服？为什么？ （3）你对汉服受到大众喜爱的看法。 （提示：传统文化、文化自信、时尚、美丽、舒适等） 【真题动向】 写作要求： （1）词数不少于80。 （2）鼓励紧扣主题的适当发挥。 （3）本题在答题卡上对应处作答。 My Views on the Craze for Hanfu _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【真题动向】 【答案】 My Views on the Craze for Hanfu In recent years, more and more people are wearing Hanfu, the traditional Chinese clothing. I see students wearing it at school, people walking in the streets, and even grandparents at the park. It’s really cool! I want to try Hanfu too, because it looks beautiful and traditional, with pretty designs and flowing shapes that show our culture. I think wearing Hanfu makes us proud of our culture, as it’s a part of our history and identity. I’m happy to see so many people like Hanfu. It shows that we value our traditional culture and want to keep it alive. I hope more people will wear Hanfu in the future. 【真题动向】 【解析】本文属于议论文。要求考生描述汉服热现象，表达自己是否愿意尝试汉服的意愿，以及分析汉服受大众喜爱的原因。 1. 词汇积累：近年来：In recent years→ Over the past few years 穿汉服：wearing Hanfu→ dressing in Hanfu 传统中国服饰：the traditional Chinese clothing→ traditional Chinese garments 传承：keep it alive→ pass down 2. 句式拓展：简单句变复合句 原句：I’m happy to see so many people like Hanfu. It shows that we value our traditional culture and want to keep it alive. 拓展句：I’m happy to see so many people like Hanfu, because it shows that we value our traditional culture and want to keep it alive. 【真题动向】 【高分句型1】 I want to try Hanfu too, because it looks beautiful and traditional, with pretty designs and flowing shapes that show our culture. (运用了that引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】  It shows that we value our traditional culture and want to keep it alive.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 06 【2025年 书面表达真题】 29 【真题动向】 63. 现在很多学校重视班级文化建设，有的班级在教室里培植绿色植物，请谈谈你对此现象的看法。内容包括： (1)你所了解的在教室里培植绿色植物的现象； (提示：植物如绿萝pothos、肉质植物succulent plants、富贵竹lucky bamboo；摆放位置如讲台、窗台windowsill、角落) (2)在教室里培植绿色植物的利与弊； (提示：清新空气、有益于视力、令人放松；使得学生分散注意力、费时、费力) (3)你对在教室里培植绿色植物的看法。 【真题动向】 写作要求： (1)词数不少于80。 (2)鼓励紧扣主题的适当发挥。 (3)本题在答题卡上对应处作答。 My Views on Keeping Plants in the Classroom ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【真题动向】 My Views on Keeping Plants in the Classroom Now many schools attach importance to class culture construction. Some classes cultivate green plants in the classroom. Green plants such as pothos, succulent plants, lucky bamboo can be often seen on the platforms, windowsills and corners. As far as I’m concerned, planting green plants in classrooms is an effective way to build class culture, with multiple benefits and significance. Firstly, green plants can improve the classroom environment. After intense study, students can take a moment to gaze at the greenery, effectively relaxing their minds and bodies, thus enhancing learning efficiency. Secondly, cultivating green plants also helps foster students’ sense of responsibility and environmental awareness. Last but not least, for the class culture building, green plants can promote students’ emotional development and social skills. 【真题动向】 The process of caring for green plants involves collective participation and division of labor among students, strengthening teamwork and a sense of collective honor. However, just as a saying goes that every coin has two sides. Planting green plants in classrooms may make students distracted, time consuming and laborious. I think they are of great help. I strongly recommend that more green plants be planted in classrooms. 【真题动向】 【解析】本篇书面表达属于议论文。现在很多学校重视班级文化建设，有的班级在教室里培植绿色植物，文中介绍了在教室里培植绿色植物的现象，分析了利弊，并表明了个人的看法。 1.词汇积累例如：such as→ for example 凝视：gaze at→ stare at 照料：care for→ look after就我而言：as far as I’m concerned→ personally speaking 2.句式拓展：简单句变复合句 原句：The process of caring for green plants involves collective participation and division of labor among students, strengthening teamwork and a sense of collective honor.拓展句：The process of caring for green plants involves collective participation and division of labor among students, which can strengthen teamwork and a sense of collective honor. 【真题动向】 【高分句型1】 As far as I’m concerned, planting green plants in classrooms is an effective way to build class culture, with multiple benefits and significance. (运用了动名词短语作主语和to do不定式作目的状语) 【高分句型2】 I strongly recommend that more green plants be planted in classrooms. (运用了虚拟语气以及被动语态) 07 【2026年 书面表达真题】 36 【真题动向】 63. 健康技能如同阅读技能、体育技能一样对青少年的一生产生重要的影响。请谈谈你对健康技能的看法。内容包括： （1）你所了解的健康技能； （提示：实施健康的生活习惯；沟通技能；获取健康信息等） （2）生活中，你打算采用哪些健康技能； （提示：健康饮食、充足睡眠、加强沟通、学会倾听、放松身心、减轻压力） （3）你对上述健康技能的看法。 【真题动向】 写作要求： （1）词数不少于80； （2）鼓励紧扣主题的适当发挥； （3）本题在答题卡上对应处作答。 My Views on Health Skills _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【真题动向】 My Views on Health Skills Health skills are as important as reading or sports skills for teenagers. They include forming healthy habits, communicating well, and getting reliable health information. In daily life, I plan to eat balanced meals, sleep 8 hours a day, and talk with friends when stressed. I will also learn to relax to reduce pressure. I believe these skills help both my body and mind. Keeping healthy habits and good communication will make me grow into a better person. I will stick to them. 【解析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，主题为“健康技能”，文章围绕健康技能的重要性、个人计划及看法展开论述。 1. 词汇积累：重要的：important→ vital 形成：form→ develop 可靠的：reliable→ trustworthy 减轻压力：reduce pressure→ relieve stress 【真题动向】 2. 句式拓展：简单句变复合句 原句：Health skills are as important as reading or sports skills for teenagers. They include forming healthy habits, communicating well, and getting reliable health information. 拓展句：Health skills are as important as reading or sports skills for teenagers, which include forming healthy habits, communicating well, and getting reliable health information. 【高分句型1】I believe these skills help both my body and mind. (运用了宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Keeping healthy habits and good communication will make me grow into a better person. (运用了动名词作主语) 【必备知识】 江苏职教高考英语 2021-2026书面表达真题分析 一、话题涉及统计 纵观 2021‑2026 六年书面表达，以书信、议论文为主 高频话题 ① 校园学习生活：社团报名、活动邀请、求助老师、学习建议、考试复习。 ② 个人事务：自我介绍、介绍家乡、介绍爱好、求职应聘、志愿者申请。 ③ 对外交际：邀请朋友、活动安排、提建议、感谢信。 ④ 社会事件：安全、健康、生活习惯、社会热点。 【必备知识】 二、出题规律与考试重点 体裁规律：倾向于书信、通知、议论文。邮件格式是必考基础：称呼、开头问候、正文、结束语、署名。格式分很重要。 命题形式：题目给出 3‑4 条中文要点提示，必须全部覆盖要点，不能漏点，漏要点直接降分，依据提示翻译 + 适当拓展即可。 词数要求：80 词左右，一般要求 70‑100 词。词数太少、过多都会扣分。 时态考查重点：写信邀请、介绍现状：一般现在时为主；讲活动安排、将来计划：一般将来时；回忆活动、经历：一般过去时。 人称：多以第一人称 I/we 写作，写给对方用第二人称 you。 评分核心：① 格式完整；②要点齐全；③时态、人称基本正确；④句子通顺，少量语法错误不影响理解可得高分；⑤不追求高级复杂长句，优先保证正确。 【必备知识】 三、做题思路 步骤 1：审题（30 秒） 1）看清体裁：邮件 / 书信 / 通知 /议论文，确定格式。 2）圈画全部中文要点，数清楚一共几条，写作时逐条标记，防止漏写。 3）确定主要时态、人称。 步骤 2：列简单提纲 先把每条要点对应的简单英语短语、句型草稿写下来。 优先选用自己有把握的句型，不要强行写复杂从句。 【必备知识】 步骤 3：成文写作 写好格式：邮件称呼、结尾客套语、署名。 要点逐条翻译，要点之间用简单连接词过渡：and, besides, what’s more, also, so。 控制词数，80 词上下，不要太短，不要堆砌超长句子。 步骤 4：检查修改 ①要点有没有全部写完； ②时态、人称是否统一； ③名词单复数、主谓一致； ④格式是否完整。 【命题预测】 1.随着人工智能（AI）越来越普及，很多同学开始使用 AI 辅助学习。请你根据提示，以 “My opinions on AI study” 为题写一篇短文。 内容要点： AI 学习的好处（方便、帮助查缺补漏） 存在的问题（过度依赖、不愿独立思考） 你的个人态度（合理使用） 要求：80 词左右，语句通顺，条理清晰。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【命题预测】 【参考范文】 My opinions on AI study Nowadays, AI is widely used in our study. It brings us many advantages. It is convenient for us to check our mistakes and improve our study quickly. However, every coin has two sides. Some students depend on AI too much and lose the ability of independent thinking. In my opinion, we should use AI in a proper way. It can be a good helper instead of a substitute for our hard work. 【命题预测】 【详细解析 & 得分要点】 考点：职教高考高频利弊议论类写作，考查现象描述 + 正反观点 + 个人态度 得分点: 结构满分：好处→弊端→个人观点，完全贴合阅卷标准三段式 高分万能句型：every coin has two sides（凡事有利有弊）、in my opinion 覆盖全部 3 个要点，无遗漏 易错警示：不要极端表达，统一用 “合理使用” 的中立态度 【命题预测】 2.现在很多学生在校使用手机，学校和学生对此有不同看法。请你根据提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的观点。 要点： 手机可以帮助我们查资料、放松身心 玩手机浪费时间、影响学习 建议上课不使用手机 80 词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【命题预测】 【参考范文】 My ideas about mobile phones Mobile phones are popular among students. They can help us search for useful information and relax ourselves in our free time. But using phones too much brings many problems. It wastes lots of time and influences our study. Some students even play phones in class. I think we should make good use of mobile phones. We must not use them during class to keep focused on our study. 【命题预测】 【详细解析 & 得分要点】 考点：现象议论、利弊分析，为历年真题超高频议论题型 得分点：正反对比结构清晰，动词短语 search for information、make good use of 为阅卷加分词汇 易错警示：区分 influence（动词影响）不要写成 effect 误用 【命题预测】 3.假定你是李华，你的同学最近学习压力大、状态不好。请你写一封邮件给他提建议： 合理安排时间 坚持运动放松自己 保持乐观心态 80 词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【命题预测】 【参考范文】 Dear friend, I’m sorry to hear that you are under great study pressure recently. Here are some suggestions for you. First, you should plan your time well and balance your study and rest. Second, you can do some sports to relax yourself in your free time. Finally, keep a positive attitude towards life. I hope my advice can help you. Wish you better soon. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】邮件应用文，考查建议句型、条理连接词（first/second/finally） 【命题预测】 4.请你以学生会名义，写一则英语通知，号召大家参加学校英语读书活动。 要点： 活动时间：5 月 20 日下午 3 点 活动地点：学校报告厅 活动内容：读书分享、英语交流 欢迎全体同学参加 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【命题预测】 【参考范文】 Notice To enrich our after-school life, our school will hold an English reading activity. The activity will be held in the school lecture hall at 3 p.m. on May 20th. During the activity, students can share their favorite books and communicate in English. It is a good chance to improve our English skills. All students are welcome to take part in the activity. The Student Union 【解析】 标准真题通知格式，考查将来时、活动类固定表达。 Thank you for listening $