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Unit 3 Writing Training
教科版六年级上册 Unit 3 Work It Out Together 写作训练
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一、单元写作目标
本单元围绕“共同解决问题”展开。写作时要能够说明自己遇到的困难或想法,写出与父母、朋友沟通的过程,并用倾听、轮流表达、提出方案和共同约定等方式解决问题。
• 会用 I want to ..., but ... won't let me. 说明自己的愿望和困难。
• 会用 I understand your worries, but ... 表示理解对方后再表达自己的想法。
• 会用 first, and then ... 说明解决问题的先后步骤。
• 会用 Maybe we can ...、How about ...? 提出双方都能接受的建议。
• 会用 We worked it out together. / I'm glad we could ... 表达共同解决后的结果。
二、写作思路讲解
第一步,先写清楚问题是什么。可以写 I want to join the football club, but my dad is worried. 或 I want to watch a TV show, but I need to finish my homework. 具体问题是后文提出理由和方案的基础。
第二步,写出双方的想法。写自己的愿望时用 I want to ...;写父母或朋友的顾虑时,可以用 They worry that ...、They think ... 。不要把对方写成“故意不理解自己”,要写出对方担心的原因。
第三步,安排合适的沟通时间和方式。可以写 I waited until after dinner.、I asked, “Do you have a minute?” 选择合适的时间,先礼貌地开启对话,能让沟通更顺利。
第四步,先倾听,再提出方案。可以用 I understand your worries, but ... 表示理解;再用 Maybe we can ... 或 How about ...? 提出办法。好的方案通常包含时间、次数、安全措施或任务安排等具体内容。
第五步,写出共同决定和结果。用 first, and then 介绍约定的执行顺序,最后写 All right.、Sounds good to me.、We worked it out together. 这样文章才有完整的结局。
三、重点句型
1. I want to ..., but ... won't let me.
Example: I want to join the club, but my parents won't let me.
用法:说明愿望和遇到的限制。
2. They may worry about ... .
Example: They may worry about me getting hurt.
用法:说明父母或他人的担心。
3. Do you have a minute? / Can we talk?
Example: Dad, do you have a minute? I want to talk about something.
用法:礼貌地开启对话。
4. I understand your worries, but ... .
Example: I understand your worries, but we have coaches to keep us safe.
用法:先表示理解,再表达自己的理由。
5. Maybe we can ... . / How about ...?
Example: Maybe we can try for a month first. How about going twice a week?
用法:提出具体的解决方案。
6. First, ... and then ... .
Example: First, I will finish my homework, and then I will watch the show.
用法:说明先后顺序和执行计划。
7. What do you think? - That makes sense.
Example: I can practise on Sundays. What do you think? - That makes sense.
用法:询问并回应对方意见。
8. We worked it out together.
Example: We listened to each other and worked it out together.
用法:写出共同解决问题的结果。
四、句型仿写
请根据例句和提示,写出完整句子。
例:I want to join the club, but my parents won't let me.
1. I / want to play outside / my mum won't let me
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例:They may worry about me getting hurt.
2. My parents / worry about / I fall behind in school
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例:Dad, do you have a minute?
3. Mum / have a minute / I want to talk about something
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例:I understand your worries, but I can be careful.
4. I / understand / but / I can follow the rules
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例:Maybe we can try for a month first.
5. Maybe we / practise / twice a week
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例:First, I will finish my homework, and then I will play.
6. First / do chores / then / watch a film
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五、连词成句
请将下列词语连成正确的句子,注意大小写和标点。
1. want / I / join / to / the club
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2. my parents / worry about / me / may
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3. do / you / have / a minute
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4. understand / I / your worries
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5. Maybe / can / we / try / for a month
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6. worked it out / We / together
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六、写作练习
写共同解决问题类短文时,要说明问题双方的想法,写出有先后顺序的沟通,并让解决方案具体、可执行。
练习一:基础写作|A problem with my parents
提示:写一写你想做但父母有顾虑的一件事,说明你想做什么、父母担心什么,以及你提出的一种办法。建议写 6—7 句。
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练习二:进阶写作|How we worked it out
提示:写一次你和父母或朋友解决问题的对话。使用 I understand your worries, but ... 和 Maybe we can ...,写出双方如何达成约定。建议写 8—9 句。
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练习三:综合写作|A problem we solved together
提示:完整叙述一次共同解决问题的经历:问题起因、双方想法、合适的沟通时间、至少两步解决方案、最后结果和你的收获。至少使用 first, then, but, so 中的三个。建议写 10—11 句。
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七、参考范文与讲解
范文一:A problem with my parents
I want to play football after school, but my mum won't let me. She may worry about my homework. I understand her worries. I said I could finish my homework first. Then, I could play for thirty minutes. Mum thought it was a good idea. We worked it out together.
讲解:文章先写自己的愿望和父母的担心,再用 I understand her worries 表示理解。接着用 first 的意思写出“先完成作业,再踢球”的安排,方案具体,最后写出双方达成一致。
范文二:How we worked it out
I wanted to join the rock-climbing club, but my parents were worried. They thought I might get hurt. After dinner, I asked, “Do you have a minute?” I said, “I understand your worries, but we have coaches to keep us safe.” Then I suggested going twice a week first. My dad asked me to wear safety gear and follow the coach. I agreed. That made sense to both of us, so my parents let me try for a month.
讲解:这篇文章加入了沟通时间和直接引语,内容更真实。because 类似的原因表达由 They thought ... 完成;but 连接理解和理由;so 连接“双方认可”与“父母同意”。最后的 try for a month 是一个具体、可检查的约定。
范文三:A problem we solved together
Last Saturday, I wanted to watch a TV show about space at 7:30. However, I usually did my homework at that time, so I was worried that my mum would say no. I waited until after dinner and asked, “Can we talk?” Mum said I should finish my homework before doing anything else. I understood her worry because I sometimes work slowly. I suggested finishing the easy homework before 7:30 and doing the rest after the show. Mum said I could watch it if I promised to finish all my homework that night. First, I finished the easy part. Then, I watched the show with Mum. After that, I finished the rest of my homework. We both felt happy because we found a fair way to solve the problem.
讲解:这篇文章结构完整,先交代时间、愿望和困难,再写母亲的担心。so 说明前因后果,because 解释理解对方的理由。First, Then, After that 把共同约定变成清楚的行动步骤,结尾用 a fair way to solve the problem 点明“共同解决”的主题。注意过去的事情使用 wanted、did、waited、asked、said、understood、suggested、watched 和 finished 等过去式。
八、参考答案
句型仿写
1. I want to play outside, but my mum won't let me.
2. My parents may worry about me falling behind in school.
3. Mum, do you have a minute? I want to talk about something.
4. I understand your worries, but I can follow the rules.
5. Maybe we can practise twice a week.
6. First, I will do chores, and then I will watch a film.
连词成句
1. I want to join the club.
2. My parents may worry about me.
3. Do you have a minute?
4. I understand your worries.
5. Maybe we can try for a month.
6. We worked it out together.
写作练习参考要点
练习一:自己的愿望、父母顾虑、理解对方、一个具体方案、达成结果。
练习二:问题起因、沟通时间、双方表达、具体约定、共同结果。
练习三:时间和背景、双方想法、沟通顺序、至少两步行动、最终结果和个人收获。
九、写作小结
写共同解决问题类短文,可以记住这条路线:What is the problem? -> What does each person think? -> When can we talk? -> What ideas can we come up with? -> What do we agree to do? 先听懂对方的顾虑,再提出具体方案,最后写出共同执行和解决的结果。
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