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Unit 2 Writing Training
教科版六年级上册 Unit 2 Talk It Out 写作训练
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一、单元写作目标
本单元围绕“把话说开”展开。写作时要能够描述与朋友发生矛盾的原因,表达双方的感受,并用礼貌、清楚的语言提出解决办法。
• 会用 be angry with ...、make fun of ...、call ... names 等短语说明矛盾起因。
• 会用 I feel ... when you ... 表达自己的感受,而不是只责怪对方。
• 会用 but、because、so 说明原因、转折和结果,让内容更加连贯。
• 会用 Let's talk it out.、Can we talk?、I'm sorry. 等礼貌表达推进沟通。
• 会按照“发生矛盾—冷静下来—互相表达—道歉和解决—继续友好相处”的顺序写作。
二、写作思路讲解
第一步,先交代人物和矛盾起因。可以写 One day, Sam and Lucas had a fight. 或 I was angry with my friend because ... 。原因要具体,例如对方取笑发型、给人起外号、把秘密告诉别人等。
第二步,分别写出感受。可以用 I felt hurt.、I was angry.、I felt bad when you ... 。表达感受时,尽量说明“什么时候感到什么”,句意会更准确。
第三步,写出冷静和沟通。发生争吵后不要只写“他们停止了争吵”,还要写他们怎样做:They calmed down. They sat down and talked. 可以用 First, Then, After that 连接过程。
第四步,使用 I feel ... when you ... 句型说明问题。这个句型把重点放在自己的感受上,语气比 You are bad. 更礼貌,也更有助于解决矛盾。
第五步,写倾听、道歉和结果。一方说明感受,另一方要听清楚并回应,可以写 I didn't mean to hurt you.、I'm sorry.、Let's put this behind us. 最后写 We solved the problem and stayed friends. 文章才真正完成。
三、重点句型
1. ... had a fight with ... .
Example: Sam had a fight with Lucas.
用法:说明谁和谁发生了争吵。
2. I am angry with ... because ... .
Example: I am angry with Nikki because she told my secret.
用法:说明生气的对象和原因。
3. I feel ... when you ... .
Example: I feel hurt when you make fun of me.
用法:礼貌地表达自己的感受。
4. I don't like it because ... .
Example: I don't like it because everyone laughed at me.
用法:进一步解释为什么难受。
5. Can we stop fighting and talk it out?
Example: Can we stop fighting and talk it out?
用法:提出停止争吵、好好沟通。
6. I didn't mean to ... . / I'm sorry I ... .
Example: I didn't mean to hurt you. I'm sorry I called you names.
用法:解释无心之失并道歉。
7. Let's ... . We can ... .
Example: Let's talk calmly. We can solve the problem together.
用法:提出解决方案。
8. In the end, ... . We are still friends.
Example: In the end, we solved the problem. We are still friends.
用法:写出结果和关系变化。
四、句型仿写
请根据例句和提示,写出完整句子。
例:I am angry with Lucas because he made fun of me.
1. I / angry with / my friend / he called me names
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例:I feel hurt when you talk about me.
2. I / feel bad / you tell others my secret
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例:Can we stop fighting and talk it out?
3. we / stop fighting / talk it out
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例:I didn't mean to hurt you.
4. I / mean to / make you feel bad
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例:I'm sorry I shouted at you.
5. I'm sorry / call you names
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例:Let's solve the problem together.
6. Let's / talk calmly / solve the problem
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五、连词成句
请将下列词语连成正确的句子,注意大小写和标点。
1. had / a fight / Sam / with / Lucas
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2. angry / I / am / because / made fun of / he / me
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3. feel / I / hurt / when / you / laugh at / me
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4. talk it out / Let's
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5. sorry / I'm / I / shouted at / you
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6. problem / solve / together / the / We
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六、写作练习
写矛盾解决类短文时,要注意:冲突要具体,感受要真实,表达要礼貌,结尾要写出解决办法或关系变化。
练习一:基础写作|A small problem with my friend
提示:写一次你和朋友之间的小矛盾,说明发生了什么、你有什么感受,以及你们最后怎样解决。建议写 6—7 句。
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练习二:进阶写作|Let's talk it out
提示:写一段朋友之间的争吵和沟通。使用 I feel ... when you ... 表达感受,再写出道歉、倾听和解决问题的过程。建议写 8—9 句。
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练习三:综合写作|How we solved a problem
提示:完整叙述一次矛盾:交代起因,写出双方感受,使用 First, Then, In the end 介绍沟通过程,并用 because、but 或 so 中至少两个连接句子。建议写 10—11 句。
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七、参考范文与讲解
范文一:A small problem with my friend
One day, I had a fight with my friend Tom. He made fun of my new haircut. I felt hurt and angry. I wanted to yell at him, but I stopped. We talked calmly after class. I told him how I felt. He said sorry, and we became friends again.
讲解:文章先交代人物和矛盾起因,再写感受和冲动。but 表示转折,说明作者没有继续争吵。后面用 talked、told、said 等动作写出沟通过程,结尾交代朋友关系恢复。
范文二:Let's talk it out
Yesterday, I was angry with my friend Lily because she told another classmate my secret. I felt sad and hurt. At first, I didn't want to talk to her. Then, I calmed down and asked, “Can we talk?” I said, “I feel bad when you tell others my secret.” Lily listened carefully and said, “I'm sorry. I didn't mean to hurt you.” We talked about the problem and found a way to solve it. I was happy that we talked it out.
讲解:这篇文章用 because 说明原因,用 At first 和 Then 写出情绪和行动的变化。引号中的 I feel ... when you ... 是本单元的核心表达。结尾用 talked it out 点题,说明沟通真正解决了问题。
范文三:How we solved a problem
Last Friday, Sam and I had a fight during a group activity. I thought he didn't listen to my idea, so I called him names. Sam got angry because my words hurt him. We both felt bad, but we did not want to lose our friendship. First, we stopped talking and took a few deep breaths. Then, we sat down and listened to each other. I said, “I feel upset when you do not listen to my ideas.” Sam said, “I understand. I am sorry I called you names.” We both said sorry and decided to take turns speaking next time. In the end, we solved the problem and stayed good friends.
讲解:这篇文章先写活动背景和矛盾原因,再写双方感受。so 表示结果,but 表示转折;First, Then, In the end 使沟通步骤清楚。文章还写出了双方各自的问题、道歉内容和今后的约定,体现了“倾听、表达、改进”的完整解决过程。
八、参考答案
句型仿写
1. I am angry with my friend because he called me names.
2. I feel bad when you tell others my secret.
3. Can we stop fighting and talk it out?
4. I didn't mean to make you feel bad.
5. I'm sorry I called you names.
6. Let's talk calmly and solve the problem.
连词成句
1. Sam had a fight with Lucas.
2. I am angry because he made fun of me.
3. I feel hurt when you laugh at me.
4. Let's talk it out.
5. I'm sorry I shouted at you.
6. We solve the problem together.
写作练习参考要点
练习一:人物、矛盾起因、个人感受、冷静方式、沟通结果。
练习二:具体秘密或误会、I feel ... when you ...、倾听、道歉、解决问题。
练习三:事件背景、双方原因和感受、冷静步骤、礼貌表达、互相道歉、今后约定。
九、写作小结
写矛盾解决类短文,可以记住这条路线:What happened? -> How did we feel? -> How did we calm down? -> What did we say? -> How did we solve it? 先把问题说清楚,再用礼貌语言表达感受,最后写出倾听、道歉和解决办法。
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