Unit 4 Feelings and emotions（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材北师大版八年级上册

本讲义聚焦初中英语写人叙事类作文（榜样主题），系统构建从基础积累到应用输出的学习支架，涵盖词汇（如role model、good qualities等15个核心词汇）、句式（开头/中间/结尾句模板）、佳句仿写（定语从句等4类语法结构练习）、范例分析（审题、谋篇布局、高分句型解析）及实战演练（书信、演讲稿、倡议书3类文体），形成完整写作能力培养链条。 该资料以核心素养为设计核心，语言能力方面通过词汇句式积累与仿写提升表达准确性，如“仿写although让步状语从句”强化语法应用；思维品质上借助具体事例分析（如佳作中同桌助“我”学英语的细节描写）培养逻辑与分析能力；学习能力上多文体实战演练助力掌握不同写作策略。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后帮助学生巩固提升，有效弥补写作短板。

Unit 4 Role Model单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与自我、人与社会”范畴，涉及榜样认知、优秀品质学习、正向成长引领。 该单元旨在培养学生向优秀看齐的成长理念，让学生明白榜样是成长路上的重要力量，不仅名人可以成为榜样，身边平凡人的闪光点、好习惯、好品质同样值得学习。通过引导学生观察身边人物、挖掘优秀品质、回顾榜样带来的积极改变，帮助学生掌握写人叙事类作文的写作方法。学习本单元知识，能够帮助学生学会发现美好、对标优秀、修正自我言行，树立积极向上的人生态度，深刻理解A good role‑model can shape our behaviour（优秀的榜样能够塑造我们的言行、助力我们成长）的核心内涵，养成谦逊好学、积极进取的良好品质。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. role model 榜样 2. set a good example 树立好榜样 3. good qualities 优秀品质 4. hard-working 勤奋刻苦的 5. kind-hearted 心地善良的 6. persistent 坚持不懈的 7. responsible 有责任心的 8. give a hand 伸出援手 9. stick to dreams 坚持梦想 10. face difficulties bravely 勇敢面对困难 11. make progress 取得进步 12. learn from others 向他人学习 13. shape one’s behaviour 塑造言行举止 14. encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 15. pass on kindness 传递善意 句式积累 开头句： 1. Everyone has a special role model who lights up our growth road. 翻译：每个人都有一位特别的榜样，照亮我们的成长之路。 2. There is always someone around us who is worth learning from. 翻译：我们身边总有值得我们学习的人。 3. My biggest role model is an ordinary person around me instead of a star. 翻译：我最大的榜样是身边的普通人，而非明星。 中间句： 1. Although he met lots of troubles, he never gave up easily. 翻译：尽管他遇到了很多麻烦，但他从不轻易放弃。 2. She always spares her free time to help people in need. 翻译：她总是利用空闲时间帮助有需要的人。 3. When I felt upset and hopeless, my role model gave me great courage. 翻译：当我沮丧绝望时，我的榜样给了我巨大的勇气。 结尾句： 1. A good role model can shape our behaviour and help us become better. 翻译：好的榜样能够塑造我们的言行，助力我们变得更加优秀。 2. I will keep learning from my role model and improve myself day by day. 翻译：我会坚持向榜样学习，日复一日提升自我。 3. The spirit of my role model will encourage me to move forward forever. 翻译：榜样的精神将永远激励我奋勇前行。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：Everyone has a role‑model who changes his life. 仿写要求：仿写who引导定语从句：我有一位总是乐于帮助同学的榜样。 仿写：________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Although she failed many times, she never lost hope. 仿写要求：仿写although让步状语从句：尽管他很忙，他依旧坚持读书。 仿写：________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：When others are in need, he will give them a hand. 仿写要求：仿写when时间状语从句：当朋友遇到麻烦，我的榜样会耐心给予建议。 仿写：________________________________________________________________ 4. 教材原句：Setting a good example is one of the most important things for a role‑model. 仿写要求：仿写最高级+动名词作主语：向榜样学习是我们成长中最宝贵的事情之一。 仿写：________________________________________________________________ 典例 榜样是成长路上的灯塔，优秀的榜样能塑造我们的言行、激励我们不断进步。请你以 A Role-model in My Heart 为题，结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文，介绍你心中的榜样。 参考词汇：set a good example, persistent, give a hand, make progress 要求： 1. 介绍榜样身份，讲述具体事例，写出榜样带给自己的启发与改变； 2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 （姓名、校名和地名等） ； 4. 词数：不少于80词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） A Role-model in My Heart Everyone has his own role‑model in heart. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：中考写人叙事类记叙文（榜样成长主题）； ② 人称、时态：全文以第一人称I为主；介绍人物常态品质用一般现在时，叙述具体事例用一般过去时，成长感悟与表态用一般现在时； ③ 写作提示：完整介绍榜样人物、具体事迹与成长感悟，突出榜样的优秀品质与正向影响，紧扣单元核心主旨；灵活运用参考词汇、定语从句、让步状语从句；词数≥80词，无真实个人信息，逻辑分层清晰。 谋篇布局 段落 写作内容 开头（第1段） 沿用题目给定开头，点明自己的榜样人物，简单介绍身份，概括人物核心优秀品质 中间（主体段） 选取一件典型事例，详细叙述事件经过，通过具体行为细节凸显榜样的美好品质，丰富文章内容 结尾（最后1段） 结合自身写出榜样带来的积极改变与成长感悟，表态今后主动向榜样学习，升华主题 佳作展示 A Role-model in My Heart Everyone has his own role‑model in heart. My role‑model is my deskmate. She is an ordinary student, but she has many shining qualities and sets a good example for me. Last term, I was weak in English and wanted to give up learning it. My deskmate noticed my trouble. Although she was busy with her own study, she spent her spare time helping me every day. She taught me useful learning skills and explained difficult knowledge patiently. With her continuous help, I gradually built up confidence and made great progress in English. I truly learn that persistence and kindness are precious from her. A good role‑model can shape our behaviour and encourage us to keep moving forward. I will keep learning from her and become a better person. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 1. shining qualities 闪光点、优良品质 2. spare time 空闲时间 3. build up confidence 建立自信 4. continuous help 持续的帮助 高分句型 1. Although she was busy with her own study, she spent her spare time helping me every day.（although让步状语从句，单元核心语法考点，对比凸显人物善良无私的品质） 2. With her continuous help, I gradually built up confidence and made great progress in English.（with伴随状语结构，句式简洁高级，丰富叙事层次） 3. A good role‑model can shape our behaviour and encourage us to keep moving forward.（并列不定式结构，紧扣单元核心主旨，升华主题） （一） 人物介绍书信【应用文】假如你是李华，你的外国笔 Peter 来信想了解你的榜样，请写一封回信，向他介绍你的榜样。 提示问题： 1. Who is your role model? 2. What moving story did he/she experience? 3. What good qualities have you learned from him or her? 要求： 包含全部提示问题，可适当补充； 词数 80-100 词，书信格式规范，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 不得出现真实校名、人名。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to tell you something about my rolemodel. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （二） 榜样力量演讲【演讲稿】 学校英语节举办主题演讲比赛，请你以 Li Hua 的身份，以 Learn From Our Rolemodels 为题写一篇演讲稿。 提示问题： 1. Why are role models important for teenagers? 2. What fine qualities do good role models have? 3. How should we learn from role models in daily life? 要求： 包含全部提示问题，可适当补充； 词数 90-110 词，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 不得出现真实校名、人名。 Learn From Our Rolemodels Dear teachers and friends, Good morning! Today my topic is Learn From Our Rolemodels. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, good rolemodels light our way in growth. Thank you! （三） 向榜样学习倡议【倡议书】 为引导同学们发现身边榜样、汲取榜样力量、主动自我提升，学校英语学生会面向全校学生发起倡议，请你以 Learn From Good Rolemodels 为题写一篇英文倡议书。 提示问题： 1. Why do students need role models? 2. What practical ways can we learn from role models? 3. What action should all students take? 要求： 包含全部提示问题，可适当补充； 词数 80-100 词，语句通顺、逻辑清晰； 不得出现真实校名、人名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 4 Role Model单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与自我、人与社会”范畴，涉及榜样认知、优秀品质学习、正向成长引领。 该单元旨在培养学生向优秀看齐的成长理念，让学生明白榜样是成长路上的重要力量，不仅名人可以成为榜样，身边平凡人的闪光点、好习惯、好品质同样值得学习。通过引导学生观察身边人物、挖掘优秀品质、回顾榜样带来的积极改变，帮助学生掌握写人叙事类作文的写作方法。学习本单元知识，能够帮助学生学会发现美好、对标优秀、修正自我言行，树立积极向上的人生态度，深刻理解A good role‑model can shape our behaviour（优秀的榜样能够塑造我们的言行、助力我们成长）的核心内涵，养成谦逊好学、积极进取的良好品质。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. role model 榜样 2. set a good example 树立好榜样 3. good qualities 优秀品质 4. hard-working 勤奋刻苦的 5. kind-hearted 心地善良的 6. persistent 坚持不懈的 7. responsible 有责任心的 8. give a hand 伸出援手 9. stick to dreams 坚持梦想 10. face difficulties bravely 勇敢面对困难 11. make progress 取得进步 12. learn from others 向他人学习 13. shape one’s behaviour 塑造言行举止 14. encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 15. pass on kindness 传递善意 句式积累 开头句： 1. Everyone has a special role model who lights up our growth road. 翻译：每个人都有一位特别的榜样，照亮我们的成长之路。 2. There is always someone around us who is worth learning from. 翻译：我们身边总有值得我们学习的人。 3. My biggest role model is an ordinary person around me instead of a star. 翻译：我最大的榜样是身边的普通人，而非明星。 中间句： 1. Although he met lots of troubles, he never gave up easily. 翻译：尽管他遇到了很多麻烦，但他从不轻易放弃。 2. She always spares her free time to help people in need. 翻译：她总是利用空闲时间帮助有需要的人。 3. When I felt upset and hopeless, my role model gave me great courage. 翻译：当我沮丧绝望时，我的榜样给了我巨大的勇气。 结尾句： 1. A good role model can shape our behaviour and help us become better. 翻译：好的榜样能够塑造我们的言行，助力我们变得更加优秀。 2. I will keep learning from my role model and improve myself day by day. 翻译：我会坚持向榜样学习，日复一日提升自我。 3. The spirit of my role model will encourage me to move forward forever. 翻译：榜样的精神将永远激励我奋勇前行。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：Everyone has a role‑model who changes his life. 仿写要求：仿写who引导定语从句：我有一位总是乐于帮助同学的榜样。 仿写：________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Although she failed many times, she never lost hope. 仿写要求：仿写although让步状语从句：尽管他很忙，他依旧坚持读书。 仿写：________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：When others are in need, he will give them a hand. 仿写要求：仿写when时间状语从句：当朋友遇到麻烦，我的榜样会耐心给予建议。 仿写：________________________________________________________________ 4. 教材原句：Setting a good example is one of the most important things for a role‑model. 仿写要求：仿写最高级+动名词作主语：向榜样学习是我们成长中最宝贵的事情之一。 仿写：________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. I have a role‑model who is always ready to help classmates. 2. Although he is very busy, he still keeps reading books. 3. When friends get into trouble, my role‑model will give them advice patiently. 4. Learning from role‑models is one of the most valuable things in our growth.【答案】 典例 榜样是成长路上的灯塔，优秀的榜样能塑造我们的言行、激励我们不断进步。请你以 A Role-model in My Heart 为题，结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文，介绍你心中的榜样。 参考词汇：set a good example, persistent, give a hand, make progress 要求： 1. 介绍榜样身份，讲述具体事例，写出榜样带给自己的启发与改变； 2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 （姓名、校名和地名等） ； 4. 词数：不少于80词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） A Role-model in My Heart Everyone has his own role‑model in heart. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：中考写人叙事类记叙文（榜样成长主题）； ② 人称、时态：全文以第一人称I为主；介绍人物常态品质用一般现在时，叙述具体事例用一般过去时，成长感悟与表态用一般现在时； ③ 写作提示：完整介绍榜样人物、具体事迹与成长感悟，突出榜样的优秀品质与正向影响，紧扣单元核心主旨；灵活运用参考词汇、定语从句、让步状语从句；词数≥80词，无真实个人信息，逻辑分层清晰。 谋篇布局 段落 写作内容 开头（第1段） 沿用题目给定开头，点明自己的榜样人物，简单介绍身份，概括人物核心优秀品质 中间（主体段） 选取一件典型事例，详细叙述事件经过，通过具体行为细节凸显榜样的美好品质，丰富文章内容 结尾（最后1段） 结合自身写出榜样带来的积极改变与成长感悟，表态今后主动向榜样学习，升华主题 佳作展示 A Role-model in My Heart Everyone has his own role‑model in heart. My role‑model is my deskmate. She is an ordinary student, but she has many shining qualities and sets a good example for me. Last term, I was weak in English and wanted to give up learning it. My deskmate noticed my trouble. Although she was busy with her own study, she spent her spare time helping me every day. She taught me useful learning skills and explained difficult knowledge patiently. With her continuous help, I gradually built up confidence and made great progress in English. I truly learn that persistence and kindness are precious from her. A good role‑model can shape our behaviour and encourage us to keep moving forward. I will keep learning from her and become a better person. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 1. shining qualities 闪光点、优良品质 2. spare time 空闲时间 3. build up confidence 建立自信 4. continuous help 持续的帮助 高分句型 1. Although she was busy with her own study, she spent her spare time helping me every day.（although让步状语从句，单元核心语法考点，对比凸显人物善良无私的品质） 2. With her continuous help, I gradually built up confidence and made great progress in English.（with伴随状语结构，句式简洁高级，丰富叙事层次） 3. A good role‑model can shape our behaviour and encourage us to keep moving forward.（并列不定式结构，紧扣单元核心主旨，升华主题） （一） 人物介绍书信【应用文】假如你是李华，你的外国笔 Peter 来信想了解你的榜样，请写一封回信，向他介绍你的榜样。 提示问题： 1. Who is your role model? 2. What moving story did he/she experience? 3. What good qualities have you learned from him or her? 要求： 包含全部提示问题，可适当补充； 词数 80-100 词，书信格式规范，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 不得出现真实校名、人名。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to tell you something about my rolemodel. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I’m glad to tell you something about my rolemodel. My role-model is my head teacher. She is strict but warm-hearted to every student. Last winter, I was ill and missed many lessons. I felt worried about my study. My teacher cared about my health first and helped me make up for lost lessons in her free time. Although she was tired every day, she never refused to help me. She teaches me to be responsible and helpful. She sets a good example for me. I will learn from her and try my best to help others in need. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：书信类交际应用文（中考高频题型）； ②时态：人物常态品质用一般现在时，叙事事例用一般过去时，感悟表态用一般现在时； ③提示：以三组特殊疑问句明确写作三层内容，精准覆盖榜样身份、典型事迹、成长感悟三大核心要点，全面考查 although 让步状语从句、固定短语搭配，贴合单元写人叙事写作考点，适配八年级同步训练。 [写作步骤] 第一步：沿用给定开头，引出自己的榜样，简单介绍人物性格与身份； 第二步：选取校园真实事例展开叙述，通过具体行为凸显榜样的责任与善意； 第三步：总结自身收获，表明向榜样学习的决心，礼貌收尾完成书信。 [亮点词汇] make up for lost lessons 补课 responsible 有责任心的 in need 有需要的 [高分句型] Although she was tired every day, she never refused to help me.（although 让步状语从句，单元核心语法考点，对比突出人物品质） She sets a good example for me.（单元核心固定句型，紧扣榜样主题） （二） 榜样力量演讲【演讲稿】 学校英语节举办主题演讲比赛，请你以 Li Hua 的身份，以 Learn From Our Rolemodels 为题写一篇演讲稿。 提示问题： 1. Why are role models important for teenagers? 2. What fine qualities do good role models have? 3. How should we learn from role models in daily life? 要求： 包含全部提示问题，可适当补充； 词数 90-110 词，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 不得出现真实校名、人名。 Learn From Our Rolemodels Dear teachers and friends, Good morning! Today my topic is Learn From Our Rolemodels. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, good rolemodels light our way in growth. Thank you! 【参考范文】 Learn From Our Rolemodels Dear teachers and friends, Good morning! Today my topic is Learn From Our Rolemodels. Role models are very important in our teenage growth. They are not just famous people, but also ordinary people around us. Good role models have fine qualities like hard-working, kind and responsible. They can shape our behaviour and encourage us to move forward when we meet difficulties. We should learn from them in daily life. We need to observe their good habits and keep improving ourselves. We are supposed to stick to our goals and help others actively just as our role models do. In short, good rolemodels light our way in growth. Thank you! [总体分析] ①题材：校园主题演讲应用文（中考高频题型）； ②时态：全文一般现在时； ③提示：采用 Why/What/How 三组特殊疑问句分层出题，精准覆盖榜样价值、榜样品质、学习方法三大单元核心要点，全面考查 when 时间状语从句、be supposed to 情态句型，适配单元综合拔高写作训练。 [写作步骤] 第一步：沿用给定开头，点明演讲主题，引出榜样对青少年成长的重要意义； 第二步：介绍优秀榜样的核心品质，阐述榜样的正向作用，分点说明日常学习榜样的方法； 第三步：沿用固定结尾总结升华，强调榜样力量，礼貌收尾。 [亮点词汇] teenage growth 青少年成长 observe good habits 学习好习惯 stick to goals 坚持目标 [高分句型] They can shape our behaviour and encourage us to move forward when we meet difficulties.（when 时间状语从句 + 并列结构，句式规整、表意饱满） We are supposed to stick to our goals and help others actively just as our role models do.（be supposed to 高级情态句型，替换普通 should，句式亮眼） （三） 向榜样学习倡议【倡议书】 为引导同学们发现身边榜样、汲取榜样力量、主动自我提升，学校英语学生会面向全校学生发起倡议，请你以 Learn From Good Rolemodels 为题写一篇英文倡议书。 提示问题： 1. Why do students need role models? 2. What practical ways can we learn from role models? 3. What action should all students take? 要求： 包含全部提示问题，可适当补充； 词数 80-100 词，语句通顺、逻辑清晰； 不得出现真实校名、人名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Learn From Good Rolemodels Good role models play a key role in our growth. They set wonderful examples for us and shape our behaviour. Learning from role models helps us correct our shortcomings and become better teenagers. Here are some suggestions for us. First, we should find shining qualities in people around us. Second, we must learn their persistent and kind spirits in study and life. Third, we need to put what we learn into practice and improve ourselves constantly. Let’s cherish every role model around us and keep moving forward with their power! [总体分析] ①题材：英文校园倡议书应用文（初中拓展高频题型）； ②时态：全文一般现在时； ③提示：Why/What/How 特殊疑问句分层设置写作任务，精准覆盖榜样重要性、学习建议、行动呼吁三大要点，全面考查 should/must 情态动词、倒装句式，贴合单元写作重难点，结构工整、倡议鲜明。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点明榜样对学生成长的重要价值，引出本次倡议主题； 第二步：分条列举贴合校园生活的学习方法，建议具体、可落地； 第三步：发出全校号召，升华榜样成长主题，收尾全文。 [亮点词汇] play a key role in 在…… 中发挥关键作用 correct shortcomings 改正缺点 put into practice 付诸实践 [高分句型] Good role models play a key role in our growth.（高频固定搭配，句式简洁规范） Here are some suggestions for us.（倒装经典句型，适配倡议书列举要点场景） $