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标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；递进句，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)!【】 浙江嘉兴2027届高二年级2026年6月期末教学质量检测英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The whole accident began with a simple question: Were we going to be boat people or RV (房车) people? Our family had moved to Alaska and wanted to spend as much time outside in this beautiful, wild land as possible. What we weren't sure of was whether to invest in a boat or an RV. We decided to try both options by renting first. We rented a drift(漂流) boat for the upcoming weekend at the local Air Force base where my husband Henry worked. Our two-day trip included tent camping on an island,and the family looked forward to our grand adventure. My husband is a brilliant man. The military trusted him with a multimillion-dollar aircraft, and only a few could do his job. However, he was not quite as experienced with boats【伏笔】. So, when he rented the boat, he wasn't as knowledgeable as he wanted to be. He noticed two small holes in the bottom of the boat as the young employee explained everything he needed to know.“Shouldn't there be plugs for those holes down there?” he asked.“Oh, no. Those are for allowing any water that gets in the boat to flow out. They sit above the water line,” said the man. Henry was doubtful but didn't question the answer.After all, he was a trained employee. Or at least, we believed so. Then the day came, and we set out with our two oldest children. Putting on life jackets【现在分词短语做伴随动作】,we pushed off into the current. Splendid mountains towered over us【无灵主语句】 while an eagle flew high in the clear blue sky. We knew we would make unforgettable memories. The first part of the river was calm and peaceful. Henry, after watching numerous YouTube videos, rowed (划船) the boat expertly while the rest of us oohed and aahed at the scenery. Pretty soon we came to the first section of rocks and faster water. No problem. We made it through and continued down the river. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:However, it wasn't long before the boat started filling with water.  Paragraph 2: We finally made it to the island without further incident. 浙江嘉兴2027届高二年级2026年6月期末教学质量检测英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The whole accident began with a simple question: Were we going to be boat people or RV (房车) people? Our family had moved to Alaska and wanted to spend as much time outside in this beautiful, wild land as possible. What we weren't sure of was whether to invest in a boat or an RV. We decided to try both options by renting first. We rented a drift(漂流) boat for the upcoming weekend at the local Air Force base where my husband Henry worked. Our two-day trip included tent camping on an island,and the family looked forward to our grand adventure. My husband is a brilliant man. The military trusted him with a multimillion-dollar aircraft, and only a few could do his job. However, he was not quite as experienced with boats. So, when he rented the boat, he wasn't as knowledgeable as he wanted to be. He noticed two small holes in the bottom of the boat as the young employee explained everything he needed to know.“Shouldn't there be plugs for those holes down there?” he asked.“Oh, no. Those are for allowing any water that gets in the boat to flow out. They sit above the water line,” said the man. Henry was doubtful but didn't question the answer.After all, he was a trained employee. Or at least, we believed so. Then the day came, and we set out with our two oldest children. Putting on life jackets,we pushed off into the current. Splendid mountains towered over us while an eagle flew high in the clear blue sky. We knew we would make unforgettable memories. The first part of the river was calm and peaceful. Henry, after watching numerous YouTube videos, rowed (划船) the boat expertly while the rest of us oohed and aahed at the scenery. Pretty soon we came to the first section of rocks and faster water. No problem. We made it through and continued down the river. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:However, it wasn't long before the boat started filling with water.  Paragraph 2: We finally made it to the island without further incident. 第二节：读后续写(满分25分)  One Possible Version:  However, it wasn't long before the boat started filling with water. Water poured steadily through the two holes under the boat【无灵主语句】, and the water level climbed rapidly, making our two kids scream out of fear【现在分词短语做结果状语】. Henry instantly realized the clerk had lied to us, consumed with regret【过去分词短语做主语补语】 for failing to question the strange holes earlier. Without delay, we split up to save ourselves. I held the kids steady in the middle of the boat while they passed empty bottles to me. Henry rowed hard with one hand and scooped water out with the other. Wind blew fiercely【无灵主语句】, yet we kept struggling forward, catching sight of the island faintly on the horizon【现在分词短语做伴随动作】.  We finally made it to the island without further incident. We dragged the leaking boat onto the shallow beach and helped our trembling children step onto dry land. After setting up our tent and changing into dry clothes, we sat together as dusk fell. Henry shared his reflection sincerely, admitting he had trusted the clerk’s words too easily【现在分词短语做伴随动作】. We all agreed that blind trust brought unnecessary danger. This scary adventure changed our original plan completely. We decided to buy an RV rather than a boat later, for nothing mattered more than our family’s safety during outdoor travels. Part 1 读后续写文本分析 一、文章分类及续写设计分析 分析项目 内容 读后续写主题类型 人与自然 + 家庭冒险 + 危机处理 + 人生成长感悟类 高考常考母题 户外探险（Outdoor Adventure）+ 危机救援（Emergency）+ 家庭合作（Family Cooperation）+ 经验教训（Life Lesson） 情节模式 美景铺垫——危机突发——齐心应对——安全脱险——人生感悟（典型四段式） 故事结构 平静（租船旅行）→伏笔（船底两个洞）→危险（水进入船）→合作脱险→总结成长 人物成长线 Henry由"轻信他人"→"主动承担责任"→"反思经验" 家庭情感线 家庭共同面对危险→彼此配合→更加珍惜家人与安全 续写核心冲突 漂流船不断进水，如何安全到达目的地 续写核心任务 第一段解决危机；第二段完成露营并升华主题 结尾类型 经验总结式（Learning from Experience） 高考命题特点分析 本篇贴合类2026届全国I卷的Emily的故事，属于 Adventure Story（冒险故事）。 其特点十分明显："前半段埋伏笔，后半段解决危机，最后升华主题。" 类似题目包括： · 漂流（Drift Boat） · 徒步（Hiking） · 登山（Mountain Climbing） · 暴风雪（Snowstorm） · 野营（Camping） · 迷路（Lost） · 野生动物（Wild Animals） 这一类文章续写并不需要制造新的冲突，而是解决已有冲突。 二、如何巧妙设计续写内容 第一段重点（解决危机） 建议按照"危机处理四步法"： 顺序 内容 ①发现问题 船开始快速进水 ②人物反应 孩子害怕；Henry意识到问题；作者保持冷静 ③共同合作 舀水、划船、保持平衡、鼓励孩子 ④看到希望 岛越来越近 注意：这一段一定不要出现新的危险。 例如： ❌ 鲨鱼来了 ❌ 船翻了 ❌ 暴风雨来了 高考续写强调围绕原有冲突发展。 第二段重点（情感升华） 可以采用： 第一层成功到岛上 →第二层一家人安顿下来 →第三层Henry反思 →第四层一家人讨论 →第五层升华主题 例如： · 不轻信别人 · 安全第一 · 家人最重要 · 每一次经历都是成长 三、故事核心脉络 阶段 内容 Beginning 一家搬到阿拉斯加，准备体验漂流 Development Henry租船，发现船底有两个洞 Foreshadowing 工作人员说不用塞子（重大伏笔） Rising Action 漂流开始，一切顺利 Climax（续写） 船开始漏水 Falling Action（续写） 全家合作脱险 Ending（续写） 总结经验，重新选择RV 四、关键线索梳理 （一）人物 人物 特点 后续作用 I（妈妈） 冷静、照顾孩子 稳定家庭情绪 Henry 聪明但缺乏经验 承担责任、完成成长 两个孩子 紧张害怕 烘托危机气氛 Air Force员工 给出错误信息 冲突导火索 （二）核心道具 道具 作用 Drift boat 全文最大的冲突来源 两个洞 最大伏笔 救生衣 安全保障 空瓶子/容器 舀水工具（续写可写） 船桨 求生工具 小岛 最终目标、安全象征 （三）情感基调变化 期待 →兴奋 →轻松 →紧张 →恐惧 →合作 →安心 →反思 （四）续写伏笔 原文伏笔 后文回应方式 boat还是RV 最终决定买RV 船底两个洞 漏水原因 Henry怀疑工作人员 后悔没有坚持 Henry看YouTube 虽会划船，但不会检查船 救生衣 保证安全 小岛露营 最终顺利到达 五、文本分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Henry聪明但经验不足；作者冷静；孩子天真 My husband is a brilliant man... However, he was not quite as experienced with boats. 情感层次 期待→兴奋→轻松→危险→紧张→合作→释然 The family looked forward to our grand adventure. 关键情节点 租船→发现洞→员工解释→开始漂流→船漏水→脱险 Shouldn't there be plugs...? 语言特色 先抑后扬，大量环境描写与伏笔结合 Splendid mountains towered over us... 关键词分析 drift boat、holes、plug、life jackets、current、island 全文多次出现 心理描写 Henry犹豫、怀疑；一家人期待 Henry was doubtful. 动作描写 push off、row、watch、flow、make it through 动作连续推进情节 环境描写 高山、蓝天、老鹰、河流 An eagle flew high in the clear blue sky. 隐含主题 安全意识；团队合作；经验比盲目自信更重要 全文伏笔 情感转折 平静突然变危险 Pretty soon...→续写第一句 空间转换 Air Force Base→River→Rapids→Island 空间变化推动故事 时间过渡 upcoming weekend→Then the day came→Pretty soon→续写 时间推进自然 六、苏格拉底式提问（课堂引导续写） （一）理解原文 Q1作者一家为什么租船？为了决定以后买Boat还是RV。 Q2Henry最大的优点是什么？非常聪明，靠谱，文章有伏笔。 Q3Henry最大的不足是什么？不懂船。 Q4全文最大的伏笔是什么？船底两个洞。 Q5Henry当时有没有怀疑？有。 Q6为什么没有继续追问？相信工作人员。 （二）分析冲突 Q7续写第一句话说明了什么？船已经开始漏水。 Q8最大的危险是什么？船沉。 Q9船上的人物最可能出现哪些反应？ 提示学生思考： · 谁最害怕？ · 谁负责划船？ · 谁负责安慰孩子？ · 谁负责舀水？ Q10哪些原文细节可以重新利用？ 例如： · life jackets · bottles · oars · island · mountains · current （三）设计第一段 Q11如果你是Henry，你第一件事做什么？ Q12一家人怎样分工最合理？ Q13孩子可以发挥什么作用？ Q14怎样表现一家人的合作？ 例如： · passing bottles · encouraging each other · rowing harder · staying calm Q15第一段最后最好停在哪里？看到小岛，希望出现。 （四）设计第二段 Q16到达小岛以后第一件事应该做什么？ Q17Henry应该说什么？ Q18这次经历改变了什么？ Q19文章开头提出Boat还是RV，最后是否应该回应？必须形成首尾呼应。 Q20全文最后一句最适合表达什么主题？ 可引导学生总结： · Safety comes first. · Experience matters. · Family is the greatest treasure. · Never ignore reasonable doubts. · Trust should always be accompanied by careful judgment. 七、本篇高分续写关键词（建议积累） 类别 推荐表达 危机描写 fill with water, leak badly, the water level rose rapidly, panic spread 合作描写 work together, pass buckets, scoop water out, row with all one's strength 心理描写 be seized by fear, regret deeply, stay calm, breathe a sigh of relief 环境描写 rough current, windy river, distant island, shallow beach 升华主题 safety comes first, learn from experience, blind trust may lead to danger, family means everything 一句话总结本篇续写思路 抓住"船底两个洞"这一核心伏笔，以"全家合作抗漏水→成功登岛→Henry反思轻信→回应Boat还是RV"为主线，做到"冲突解决—首尾呼应—主题升华"，即可形成符合高考评分标准的完整续写。 Part 2 高考英语读后续写语言积累 一、动作描写 适用场景：船只漏水、合作脱险、户外探险、危机救援 英文例句 中文翻译 1. Henry rowed with all his strength, refusing to give up. Henry拼尽全力划船，绝不放弃。 2. I bent down quickly and scooped water out of the boat with a bottle. 我迅速弯下腰，用瓶子把船里的水舀出去。 3. The children held tightly onto the sides of the boat. 孩子们紧紧抓住船沿。 4. We worked together without saying a word. 我们默契配合，一句话都没说。 5. My hands trembled as I reached for another empty bottle. 我颤抖着伸手去拿另一个空瓶子。 6. Henry adjusted the boat carefully to avoid the rocks ahead. Henry小心调整船的方向，避开前方的礁石。 7. We struggled against the current with every ounce of strength. 我们拼尽全力与急流搏斗。 8. I wrapped my arms around the children to comfort them. 我张开双臂抱住孩子们安慰他们。 9. We dragged the heavy boat onto the shore together. 我们一起把沉重的小船拖上岸。 10. Everyone let out a sigh of relief the moment we reached land. 一踏上岸，所有人都长舒了一口气。 二、心理描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. Panic swept over us as the water kept rising. 随着水不断上涨，恐慌席卷了我们。 2. My heart skipped a beat when I saw the water pouring in. 当看到河水不断涌进船里时，我心头一紧。 3. Henry was overwhelmed with regret. Henry内心充满了懊悔。 4. Fear gripped the children, leaving them speechless. 恐惧笼罩着孩子们，他们一句话也说不出来。 5. I forced myself to stay calm for the sake of my family. 为了家人，我强迫自己保持冷静。 6. Relief washed over us as the island came into sight. 当小岛映入眼帘时，我们顿时松了一口气。 7. Confidence gradually replaced our fear. 信心渐渐取代了恐惧。 8. My mind raced, searching desperately for a solution. 我的脑海飞速运转，拼命寻找解决办法。 9. Gratitude filled my heart after we reached safety. 到达安全地带后，我心中充满感激。 10. The frightening experience taught us an unforgettable lesson. 这次可怕的经历给我们上了难忘的一课。 三、环境描写 英文例句 中文翻译 1. The river rushed past with increasing force. 河水越来越湍急。 2. Dark clouds gathered silently overhead. 乌云悄悄聚集在头顶。 3. The chilly wind whipped across the river. 寒风掠过河面。 4. Waves slapped heavily against the boat. 浪花重重拍打着船身。 5. The island appeared like a ray of hope in the distance. 小岛像远方的一束希望。 6. The mountains stood quietly under the golden sunset. 群山静静伫立在夕阳下。 7. The river glittered under the afternoon sunshine. 河面在阳光下闪闪发光。 8. The forest echoed with birds singing. 森林里回荡着鸟鸣。 9. The cold water soaked our clothes within minutes. 冰冷的河水很快浸湿了我们的衣服。 10. Peace finally returned as night fell over the island. 夜幕降临，小岛重新恢复了宁静。 四、高级替换词（按场景分类） （一）害怕（Fear） 普通词 高级替换 afraid terrified scared frightened nervous anxious worried uneasy panic be seized by panic （二）高兴（Happiness） 普通词 高级替换 happy delighted glad overjoyed excited thrilled pleased satisfied smile beam with joy （三）努力（Effort） 普通词 高级替换 try strive work hard make every effort help lend a helping hand do carry out keep persist in （四）看（See） 普通词 高级替换 see catch sight of look gaze at watch observe notice spot find discover （五）说（Speak） 普通词 高级替换 say remark tell explain shout yell answer reply speak whisper 五、读后续写高频固定搭配（Collocations） 搭配 词义 场景 push off 驶离岸边 漂流、航行 row against the current 逆流划船 冒险 scoop water out 舀水 漏水救援 lose one's balance 失去平衡 船、滑倒 cling to 紧紧抓住 危险 keep one's balance 保持平衡 漂流 hold one's breath 屏住呼吸 紧张 breathe a sigh of relief 松了一口气 脱险 work hand in hand 齐心协力 合作 make it to 成功到达 高考万能 be soaked to the skin 全身湿透 暴雨、落水 struggle through 艰难度过 困境 gather one's courage 鼓起勇气 心理 be overwhelmed with regret 懊悔不已 反思 safety comes first 安全第一 升华主题 六、词法解析+固定搭配积累 单词/短语 词义 常见搭配 同义词 反义词 例句① 例句② current 水流；潮流 against the current; go with the current flow; stream still water We rowed against the current.（我们逆流划船。） The current became stronger.（水流变得更急了。） drift 漂流 drift downstream; drift away float stay The boat drifted slowly.（船缓缓漂流。） Leaves drifted on the river.（树叶漂浮在河面。） plug 塞子 remove a plug; put in a plug stopper opening The hole needed a plug.（那个洞需要塞子。） He forgot to replace the plug.（他忘记放回塞子。） leak 漏水 develop a leak; leak badly seep seal The boat began to leak.（船开始漏水。） Water leaked into the boat.（水漏进船里。） hesitate 犹豫 hesitate to do pause; delay decide Henry hesitated for a second.（Henry犹豫了一下。） Never hesitate to ask for help.（不要犹豫寻求帮助。） regret 后悔 regret doing; regret deeply remorse satisfaction He regretted trusting others blindly.（他后悔轻信他人。） She expressed great regret.（她表达了深深的遗憾。） struggle 奋力；挣扎 struggle through; struggle against fight; battle surrender We struggled to survive.（我们努力求生。） He struggled with the heavy boat.（他费力拖着船。） relieve 缓解 relieve pressure; relieve fear ease worsen The island relieved our anxiety.（小岛缓解了我们的焦虑。） His words relieved me greatly.（他的话让我轻松不少。） calm 冷静 stay calm; calm down composed panicked Stay calm in danger.（危险时保持冷静。） She calmed the children down.（她让孩子们冷静下来。） cooperate 合作 cooperate with; cooperate closely work together oppose We cooperated perfectly.（我们配合得很好。） Everyone cooperated to save the boat.（大家齐心救船。） 七、本篇可积累的高频短语 短语 中文意思 同义表达 fill with water 灌满水 take in water pour into 涌入 rush into keep rowing 持续划船 continue rowing with all one's strength 拼尽全力 with every ounce of strength catch sight of 看见 spot in the distance 在远处 far away step onto dry land 踏上陆地 reach the shore drag...onto the beach 把……拖上岸 pull...ashore change into dry clothes 换上干衣服 put on dry clothes reflect on 反思 think over learn one's lesson 吸取教训 gain experience trust blindly 盲目信任 place blind trust in safety comes first 安全第一 put safety above everything nothing matters more than... 没有什么比……更重要 ...comes above all else make unforgettable memories 留下难忘的回忆 create lifelong memories 八、本篇读后续写的万能语料 危机描写 · Water poured into the boat at an alarming speed. · Panic spread among us within seconds. · Every passing minute felt like an eternity. 合作描写 · We worked hand in hand without hesitation. · Everyone played a part in overcoming the crisis. · United as a family, we refused to give up. 心理描写 · Fear slowly gave way to determination. · A wave of relief swept over us. · Regret lingered in Henry's heart. 环境描写 · The roaring river showed no mercy. · The distant island became our only hope. · The golden sunset painted the sky with warmth. 主题升华 · The experience reminded us that safety always comes first. · True courage lies in staying calm during difficulties. · We learned that trust should be accompanied by careful judgment. · Family unity can overcome even the greatest challenges. · Every adventure leaves behind not only memories but also valuable lessons. Part 3 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: However, it wasn't long before the boat started filling with water. Water poured through the two mysterious holes much faster than we had expected, and within minutes our feet were soaked. Seeing the rising water【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, the children looked at us with frightened eyes, while Henry's face turned pale with regret. "Stay calm," he said firmly, forcing confidence into his voice【现在分词短语做伴随动作】 although anxiety was written all over his face. Without wasting another second, we divided the work naturally. Henry rowed with all his strength, steering carefully through the current,【现在分词短语做伴随动作】 while I used empty bottles to scoop water out as quickly as possible. The children, encouraged by our calmness【过去分词短语做原因状语】, handed the bottles back and forth instead of crying. United by the same determination【过去分词做原因状语】, we refused to give in to fear. Gradually, an island grew larger before our eyes【无灵主语句】, and our leaking boat still needed one final effort. Paragraph 2: We finally made it to the island without further incident. The moment our feet landed on the soft beach, all of us breathed a long sigh of relief. We pulled the dripping boat ashore together before setting up our tent and changing into dry clothes. Sitting around the campfire later that evening【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, Henry admitted that he should have trusted his own judgment instead of accepting the employee's explanation without questioning it. His honesty made the children understand that even adults could make mistakes, what mattered most being the courage to learn from them【独立主格】. Looking at the peaceful river【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, which had almost become a nightmare only hours before, we smiled at one another. The trip had indeed become unforgettable, though not for the reason we had imagined. When we returned home, the answer to our family's original question came naturally【无灵主语句】—we chose an RV, believing【现在分词短语做结果状语】that no adventure was worth risking the safety of those we loved. Version 2 Paragraph 1: However, it wasn't long before the boat started filling with water. The sound of water rushing into the boat immediately through the two holes【现在分词短语做后置定语】broke the peaceful silence of the river. Henry glanced at the two holes, and at that very moment he realized that his earlier doubt had been right all along. Instead of blaming himself, however, he quickly took control of the situation. "Everyone, keep your life jackets on and stay in the middle!" he called out calmly. Following his instructions【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, we worked together as one family. While Henry rowed steadily toward the island, I kept scooping water out, trying to slow the flooding【现在分词短语做伴随动作】. Although the current pushed us sideways from time to time, none of us lost hope. Spotting the island on the horizon【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, we finally relaxed, letting out a long-held breath【现在分词短语做伴随动作】. Paragraph 2: We finally made it to the island without further incident. Exhausted but grateful, we carefully lifted the boat onto the beach before sitting quietly to catch our breath. The setting sun painted the mountains golden【环境描写】, reminding us【现在分词短语做伴随动作】how beautiful nature could be and how quickly beauty could turn into danger. Looking at us sincerely【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, Henry apologized for ignoring his own instincts and promised that he would never hesitate to question something that seemed unsafe again. His words impressed the children deeply, teaching them a lesson【现在分词短语做伴随动作】 no textbook could offer. As darkness fell, laughter gradually replaced fear. Thinking back to the question【现在分词短语做伴随动作】 that had started everything—whether we should become boat people or RV people—we all reached the same conclusion without any discussion. Experience had already given us the best answer. Version 3 Paragraph 1: However, it wasn't long before the boat started filling with water. Cold river water streamed through the holes【无灵主语句】, rising around our shoes and sending a wave of panic through the boat. For a brief moment, none of us spoke. Then Henry took a deep breath and smiled at the children. "We've practiced staying calm before, haven't we?" he asked gently. His steady voice worked like magic, driving away much of their fear【现在分词短语做结果状语】. Inspired by him【过去分词做原因状语】, everyone immediately got busy. Henry kept rowing toward a nearby island, while I emptied bottle after bottle of water over the side. The children passed the bottles without stopping, determined to help in every way they could【adj.做主语补语】. With the water still leaking in, we all were trying our best to reach the shore before the boat became completely flooded. Paragraph 2: We finally made it to the island without further incident. Laughing with relief despite our wet clothes【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, we pulled the boat onto the sand and watched the remaining water flow harmlessly out. As the campfire crackled in the cool evening air, Henry looked at the two small holes and shook his head with a smile. "I guess airplanes and boats are two very different things," he joked, making us all laugh【现在分词短语做结果状语】. The frightening experience, which had tested both our courage and teamwork, unexpectedly brought us even closer as a family. Later that night, lying in the tent and listening to the quiet river outside【现在分词短语做伴随动作】, I realized that the greatest reward of every adventure was not excitement itself but the trust we built together. From then on, whenever we talked about buying a boat or an RV, that unforgettable weekend always gave us the answer. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $