Unit 1 Period 4 Writing-【优学精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修一同步教参（人教版）

本讲义聚焦高中英语人物介绍类应用文写作与场景微续写核心知识点，构建审题谋篇、单元词汇句式运用（如obtain、commit oneself to及定语从句、分词作状语）、句子合并技巧、段落模板（生平、成就、评价三段式）及范文示例的学习支架，帮助学生从基础表达过渡到逻辑连贯的靓化写作。 该资料亮点在于融合语言能力与文化意识培养，通过中国科学家（邓稼先、袁隆平）及国际妇女节人物介绍，强化家国情怀与跨文化理解，借助句式合并、段落衔接训练提升思维品质。课中教师可依托模板与范文引导写作，课后学生通过词汇积累、金句背诵巩固知识，有效查漏补缺。

Period 4　Writing 写作一　应用文写作(人物介绍类) 请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍一位你最钦佩的中国科学家，内容包括： 1.生平简介； 2.主要成就。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 　审题谋篇 　遣词造句 巧妙对接单元词汇 1．obtain vt. 获得；赢得 2．acknowledge vt. 承认 3．scientific adj. 科学(上)的 4．commit oneself to 致力于 5．found vt. 创建；建立 6．theory n. 理论；学说 7．passion n. 酷爱；激情 8．institute n. 机构 9．take up a position 担任；任职 10．remarkable adj. 非凡的；显著的 巧用单元句式、语法 [第一段]　简要介绍人物的生平 1．邓稼先被誉为“中国核弹之父”。 Deng Jiaxian is acknowledged as “the father of China's nuclear bomb”． 2．邓稼先是我最钦佩的科学家。(who引导定语从句) Deng Jiaxian is the scientist who I admire most. [第二段]　介绍人物的经历、事迹以及取得的成就 3．他于1924年出生于安徽省。 He was born in 1924 in Anhui Province. 4．他热爱学习，并于1950年在美国普渡大学获得博士学位。 He had a passion for study and obtained his doctor's degree from Purdue University in America in 1950. 5．一回到国内，他就在一所科研机构任职，致力于中国核弹和氢弹的研发。(Upon/On doing...；非限制性定语从句) Upon/On returning to China, he took up a position at a scientific research institute，where he committed himself to the development of China's nuclear and hydrogen bombs. 6．他在物理学领域创立了许多开创性的理论。 He founded many groundbreaking theories in the field of physics. [第三段]　简要评价人物 7．邓稼先为我国的发展作出了卓越的贡献，作为杰出的科学家，他将永远被铭记。 Deng Jiaxian made remarkable contributions to the development of our country and will always be remembered as an outstanding scientist. 靓化表达促提升 8．用分词短语作状语合并句1和句2 Acknowledged as “the father of China's nuclear bomb”， Deng Jiaxian is the scientist who I admire most. 9．用分词短语作状语合并句3和句4 Born in 1924 in Anhui Province, he had a passion for study and obtained his doctor's degree from the Purdue University in America in 1950. 　衔接成篇 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： Acknowledged as “the father of China's nuclear bomb”， Deng Jiaxian is the scientist who I admire most. Born in 1924 in Anhui Province, he had a passion for study and obtained his doctor's degree from Purdue University in America in 1950. Upon/On returning to China, he took up a position at a scientific research institute, where he committed himself to the development of China's nuclear and hydrogen bombs. He founded many groundbreaking theories in the field of physics. He died in Beijing in 1986. Deng Jiaxian made remarkable contributions to the development of our country and will always be remembered as an outstanding scientist. 假如今天是国际妇女节，英语课上老师要求你用英文介绍一名对你有深远影响的女性。要点如下： 1.她对你的影响； 2.你想对她说的话。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Today is International Women's Day. I'd like to introduce to you ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! One possible version： Today is International Women's Day. I'd like to introduce to you a woman who has a positive effect on me. The great woman is my mother. Not only does my mother work hard at work, but she also takes good care of my father and me in life. Faced with difficulties or setbacks, she still carries on. Here, I really want to say something to my dear mother. I've grown up and I'm able to deal with difficulties in life and study no matter how tough they are. As a student, I've made up my mind to study harder than before. Best wishes to my beloved mother and all of you on this special day! Thank you! 第一段 开门见山，简要介绍人物的个人信息 1.Li Ming, who was born in a small town in 1998, is now a college student majoring in English literature. 李明1998年出生于一个小镇，如今是一名主修英国文学的大学生。 2.Born in 1518, Li Shizhen was known as a famous medical scientist in the Ming Dynasty. 李时珍生于1518年，是明代著名的医学家。 3.Having a gift for writing, he made up his mind to become a writer when he grew up. 他有写作的天赋，下定决心长大后要成为一名作家。 4.Being the eldest child in her family, Mary has developed a responsible and caring personality since she was young. 作为家里的长女，玛丽从小就养成了负责任且体贴的性格。 5.Having a passion for environmental protection, Linda often takes part in volunteer activities on weekends.　琳达热衷于环保事业，经常在周末参加志愿者活动。 第二段 介绍人物的经历、事迹以及取得的成就 1.After graduating from university, he worked as a volunteer teacher in a remote mountain village for two years.　大学毕业后，他在偏远山村当了两年支教老师。 2.As a renowned writer, she has published 12 novels, three of which have been translated into 15 languages. 作为著名作家，她已经出版 12 部小说，其中 3 部已经被翻译成 15 种语言。 3.He dropped out of school at 16 but never gave up learning, teaching himself advanced math and physics.　他16岁辍学，但从未放弃学习，自学了高等数学和物理。 4.She devoted 30 years to medical research and finally developed a new drug that cures the rare disease.　她投身医学研究 30 年，最终研发出治疗这种罕见病的新药。 5.This musician composed over 100 pieces of music, many of which have become classic works in the music world. 这位音乐家创作了 100 多首乐曲，其中许多都成了音乐界的经典之作。 第三段 简要评 价人物 1.She is such a warm-hearted and responsible person that everyone around her likes to make friends with her. 她是一个如此热心又负责任的人，以至于身边的每个人都喜欢和她交朋友。 2.She devoted her whole life to scientific research and her scientific findings benefited people all over the world. 她毕生致力于科学研究，她的科学成果造福了全世界人民。 3.Her optimistic attitude towards life has inspired many people who are going through hard times. 她乐观的生活态度鼓舞了许多正处于困境中的人。 4.As a great educator, her lifelong efforts to promote rural education have given thousands of underprivileged children the chance to change their lives through knowledge. 作为一名伟大的教育家，她毕生致力于推动农村教育，让成千上万名贫困儿童获得了通过知识改变命运的机会。 5.He is a humble and modest man who never shows off his achievements, even though he has made great contributions to the project. 他是一个谦逊低调的人，尽管为项目作出了巨大贡献，却从不炫耀自己的成就。 写作二　场景微续写(袁隆平：以稻济世，以心报国) ——有效强化教考衔接 词汇 积累 [动作描写]　commit oneself to, acknowledge, defeat, analyse, insist on, flee, found, come to power, encounter, mourn [人物描写]　committed, academic, property, novelist, politician, genius, gentle, passion→passionate, extraordinary, moustache, peculiarity, professor, remarkable 佳句 积累 [人物描写]　1.Tu Youyou, a committed and patient scientist, was born in Ningbo, China, on 30 December 1930, and graduated from Peking University Medical School in 1955. 2.Einstein was not only a genius；he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people. 3.To the public, he was seen as a slightly odd-looking but kind and funny man. [比喻]　He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock. [主旨升华]　It is indeed an honour for China's scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world. ——积累内化应用提升 [场景呈现]　袁隆平教授是农业领域一位非凡的天才。他致力于解决粮食短缺问题，全身心投入杂交水稻研究中。他是一个心地善良、性格温和的人，且对工作充满热情。在他漫长的研究历程中，尽管他遇到了无数困难，但他坚持继续前进。他的辛勤工作最终使许多地区的饥饿问题得到解决。他的巨大贡献得到了世界的广泛认可。他不追求名利，而是将自己的一生都奉献给了人类的福祉。当他去世时，全世界的人们都为他哀悼。他的精神将始终激励我们勇敢面对挑战，为更美好的未来努力奋斗。 Professor Yuan Longping was an extraordinary genius in the field of agriculture. 1.Committed to solving the problem of food shortage (分词短语作状语), he devoted himself to hybrid-rice research. 2.He was a gentle man with a kind heart, and passionate about his work. In his long research journey, 3.though he encountered numerous difficulties (让步状语从句), 4.he insisted on moving forward. His hard work finally defeated hunger in many areas. 5.His great contributions were widely acknowledged by the world. He didn't seek fame or fortune but dedicated his whole life to the well-being of humanity. When he passed away, people all over the world mourned for him. His spirit will always inspire us to face challenges bravely and work hard for a better future. 短语 必记 1.dedicate oneself to 致力于 2.give one's all 倾尽全力 3.go above and beyond 全力以赴 4.put one's heart and soul into 全心全意投入 5.devote time and energy to 投入时间和精力于 6.selfless dedication 无私奉献 7.work tirelessly for... 不辞辛劳地为……工作 8.sacrifice personal interests for... 牺牲个人利益以换取…… 必背 金句 1.Despite facing countless failures, she never gave up and finally achieved her goal with her extraordinary perseverance. 尽管遭遇了无数次失败，她却从未放弃，凭借非凡的毅力最终实现了目标。 2.His selfless dedication to the education of rural children has changed the fate of hundreds of kids over the past 30 years. 过去 30 年来，他对乡村儿童教育事业的无私奉献，改变了数百名孩子的命运。 3.His dedication to the community service is truly inspiring; he volunteers every weekend to help the elderly and the disabled. 他对社区服务的奉献精神着实令人鼓舞，他每个周末都会志愿帮助老人和残疾人。 4.The teacher gave her all to ensure that every student received a quality education, which in turn helped students achieve their full potential. 这位老师倾尽全力确保每个学生都能获得优质教育，这反过来帮助学生充分发挥他们的潜力。 5.Because she dedicated her life to improving the lives of poor children, she has become a role model for many. 因为她致力于改善贫困儿童的生活，她已经成为许多人的榜样。 6.Her translation works have built a vital cultural bridge between China and Western countries, helping foreign readers understand the depth of traditional Chinese culture. 她的翻译作品为中西方搭建了重要的文化桥梁，助力外国读者领略中国传统文化的深厚底蕴。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $