摘要:
**基本信息**
练习围绕人物介绍写作,通过基础词汇语法巩固、语篇组织训练到实战应用的分层设计,构建词汇-句型-语篇的知识巩固路径,适配新授课语言能力与思维品质培养需求。
**分层设计**
|层次|知识覆盖|设计特色|
|----|----------|----------|
|基础层|本单元核心词汇(interaction等)与基础句型(It is well-known that等)|单词填空+语法运用题夯实语言基础,直接关联单元知识点|
|进阶层|句子衔接与语篇结构|连句成篇训练逻辑组织,引导从单句到段落的思维进阶|
|应用层|真实情境写作(征文)|真题式写作任务提升综合应用能力,体现学习能力的迁移|
内容正文:
Unit 1 Laugh out loud!
Part 4 Writing
人物介绍
写作题目
根据所提供的信息写一篇关于喜剧演员Billy Crystal的文章。
1.众所周知,Billy Crystal是一位很受欢迎的喜剧演员。
2.在20世纪70年代,他先是在纽约开始表演,后来又去了加利福尼亚。
3.有一天,他正在表演台上表演,这时灯突然坏了。他说:“这似乎是个烛光晚餐的好机会。”这使观众笑了起来。
4.Billy Crystal深受各个年龄群体的欢迎,他有能力让全世界的人开心。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.互动,交流 2. v.使钦佩,使留下深刻印象
3. v.使快乐 4. n.表演台
5. 笑了起来
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
Ⅰ.interaction 2.impress 3.entertain 4.podium 5.crack a smile
Ⅱ.1.It is well-known that 2.in the 1970s 3.sincere and interesting interactions 4.are deeply impressed with/by his performance 5.was performing on the podium 6.seems to be a good chance 7.crack a smile 8.to entertain people all over the world 9.He said, “It seems to be a good chance for a candlelight dinner.”, which made the audience crack a smile. 10.The reason why Billy Crystal is popular with all age groups is that he has the ability to entertain people all over the world.
连句成篇
写作积累
与人物介绍相关的表达
人物
重要性
1. ...is a figure who has left an indelible mark in the field of...……是一位在……领域留下不可磨灭印记的人物。
2.The significance of...in his/her field can never be emphasized too much.……在其领域的重要性怎么强调都不为过。
3.There is no denying that...is a trailblazer in the...field, paving the way for future generations.不可否认,……是……领域的开拓者,为后代铺平了道路。
人物
事迹
1.What makes...truly extraordinary is that he/she has been helping the poor selflessly for years.让……真正与众不同的是他/她多年来一直无私地帮助穷人。
2.It was...who/that came up with the innovative idea that revolutionized the industry.正是……提出了那个彻底改变行业的创新想法。
人物
评价
1. ...is highly respected not only for his/her professional achievements but also for his/her noble character.
……不仅因其职业成就,还因其高尚品格而备受尊敬。
2.What...did for the community will be remembered by people for generations.……为社区所做的一切将被人们世代铭记。
实战演练
(2026广东佛山三中第一次阶段考试)
你校英语报正在举办征文活动,主题是“日常生活中值得敬佩的人”。请以此为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Person I Admire
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
The Person I Admire
The person I admire is my neighbor Uncle Wang, a retired community volunteer.
What impresses me most is his unwavering commitment to public welfare. He has devoted years to helping others in our community without expecting anything in return.Whenever there is a need—whether cleaning the community, helping the elderly with daily chores or organizing cultural activities—he is the first to step forward. His selfless dedication and sense of responsibility set a shining example for everyone around him.
Uncle Wang's actions teach me that true kindness lies in small daily efforts. He is an ordinary person but does extraordinary things, and his spirit inspires me to care more about others. He truly deserves our deep respect and admiration.
1.重点词汇
①unwavering commitment to public welfare对公益的坚定投入
②without expecting anything in return不图任何回报
③step forward挺身而出,主动站出来
④selfless dedication无私奉献
⑤set a shining example for sb.为某人树立光辉的榜样
2.亮点句型
①What impresses me most is his unwavering commitment to public welfare. (What引导主语从句)最让我印象深刻的是他对公益的坚定投入。
②Whenever there is a need—whether cleaning the community, helping the elderly with daily chores or organizing cultural activities—he is the first to step forward.(Whenever引导时间状语从句;不定式短语作后置定语)每当有需要——无论是打扫社区卫生、帮老人处理日常琐事,还是组织文化活动——他总是第一个挺身而出。
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