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英 语
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Unit 2 Home Sweet Home
单元写作·以读促写(Writing & Project)
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主题解读
1.本单元的写作主题是分享对“家”的温暖感受与家庭生活的美好瞬间,
以及在生活场景中运用恰当的表达来沟通需求与协作。
2.在写作时,你可以遵循“引入场景—讲述家庭经历—表达需求/总结感受”
的思路,并有意识地运用本单元的核心语法——情态动词can/could。
例如:(1)在讲述家庭活动时,用“Can you…?”来自然提出需求;
(2)在请求他人协助时,用“Could you…?”来表达礼貌的请求。
这样既能清晰串联起关于“家”与生活协作的写作内容,又能自然融入
can/could的语法运用,让你的表达更流畅、更有温度。
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范文赏析
My Sweet Home
Home is my warm place, full
of sweet and unforgettable moments.
It's where my family love and care
for each other deeply. One
experience when I was ill really
made me feel the warmth of
home. __________开头段:点题家的温暖,
引出难忘经历
【范文结构分析】
1.请从开头段中找出并抄写描述
“家的特质和家的意义”的句
子。
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Home is my warm place, full
of sweet and unforgettable
moments. It's where my
family love and care for each
other deeply.
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Last week, I had a bad fever
and lay in bed all day. My mum
stayed with me and looked after me
carefully. I felt thirsty and said
softly, “Could you get me a glass of
warm water?” She hurried to do it
at once. My dad came back early
from work and cooked my favourite
porridge. They sat by my bed and
talked with me to make me
happy. __________主体段:讲述经历,体现
家人关爱 2.请在第二段中找出并抄写描述
“生病时家人照料的经历与细
节”的句子。
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My mum stayed with me and looked after me carefully.
My dad came back early
from work and cooked my
favourite porridge.
续表
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That experience let me know
how much my family love me.
Home's sweetness lies in such silent
care and company. I will always
value my sweet home. __________结尾段:
总结感受,升华家的甜蜜源于陪伴与
关怀的主旨 3.请在第三段中找出并抄写说明
“作者的感受/收获”的句子。
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That experience let me know how much my family love me.
Home's sweetness lies in such silent care and company.
续表
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【佳句仿写】
1.Home is my warm place, full of sweet and unforgettable moments.
家是我温暖的港湾,充满了甜蜜而难忘的瞬间。
仿写:学校是我的快乐之地,充满了有趣又美好的回忆。
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2.That experience let me know how much my family love me. 那次
经历让我懂得了家人有多爱我。
仿写:那次经历让我懂得了朋友有多关心我。
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School is my happy place, full of interesting and nice memories.
That experience let me know how much my friends care about
me.
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素材储备
【开头句】
1.It's where my family support and encourage each other through
hard times. 这是一个家人在困难时期彼此支持、互相鼓励的地方。
2.I think doing chores with my family is a great way to feel the
warmth of home. 我认为和家人一起做家务是感受家的温暖的好方式。
3.One unforgettable family dinner made me realize how precious
our time together is. 一次难忘的家庭晚餐让我意识到,我们在一起的
时光有多珍贵。
4.I believe that small acts of care at home can build a loving family.
我相信,家里的点滴关怀能构筑一个充满爱的家庭。
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【中间句——家务劳动】
1.Though cleaning my desk takes me a little time every day, it
keeps my study area tidy. 虽然每天清理书桌要花我一点时间,但能让
我的学习区域保持整洁。
2.I not only help my mum wash the dishes after dinner, but also
wipe the table and chairs carefully. 我晚饭后不仅帮妈妈洗碗,还会
仔细擦干净桌椅。
3.The more I share housework with my family, the more I
understand how hard my parents work every day. 我和家人分担的家
务越多,就越能明白爸妈每天有多辛苦。
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【中间句——家庭温暖瞬间】
4.On every important festival, our family will get together to cook
and eat dinner, and the house is always full of laughter. 每个重要的
节日,我们一家人都会聚在一起做饭、吃晚饭,屋子里总是充满欢声笑
语。
5.I find it warm that my dad always asks about my day at school
as soon as he comes back home from work. 我觉得很温暖,爸爸下
班一回家就会问我在学校的一天过得怎么样。
6.What makes me feel happy is that my family always cheer for me
and encourage me when I face difficulties. 让我感到幸福的是,当我
面对困难时,家人总会为我加油、鼓励我。
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【结尾句】
1.In a word, home is not just a place, but a feeling of love that I
will value forever. 总之,家不只是一个地方,更是一种爱与归属感,
我会永远珍惜。
2.By sharing housework and caring for each other, we can make
our home a warmer and happier place. 通过分担家务、彼此关怀,
我们能让家变得更温暖、更幸福。
3.No matter where I go, my home will always be my warmest
harbour that I can return to. 无论我走到哪里,家永远是我最温暖的
归港。
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【俗语谚语】
1.Labour is glorious. 劳动最光荣。
2.East or west, home is best. 金窝银窝,不如自己的草窝。
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写作练笔
感受爱,始于家人。Teens' English现面向全体学生发起“A
Moment of Love”英文征文活动。请从你的家人中选择一位,根据以下
相关信息,写一篇80词左右的英语短文描绘一个你们相处中让你感受到
爱的珍贵片段。
☆Moments of love
□ take care of me
□ play with me
□ help me with my study
□ … ☆Memory
(when/where; with whom…)
☆Feeling
(…)
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One possible version:
A Moment of Love
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I believe that small acts of care at home can build a loving
family. For me, the sweetest moment of love is with my dad, who
always helps me when I'm in trouble with my study.
What makes me feel warm is that my dad spares his time to
help me with maths whenever I meet hard problems. Last week, I
couldn't work out some maths exercises. He sat beside me and
explained them step by step. He even did extra practice with me
until I fully understood.
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That small moment let me feel my dad's deep love. I'll keep it
in my heart and work harder to make him proud.
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