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英 语
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Unit 1 Happy Holiday
单元写作·以读促写(Writing & Project)
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主题解读
1.本单元的写作主题是分享一段难忘的假期经历,并说明它带给你的感
受与收获。
2.在写作时,你可以遵循“引入—经历—感受/收获”的思路,并有意识地
运用本单元的核心语法——不定代词。
例如:(1)在开头用 something special 引出活动;
(2)在描述集体活动时用 everyone 表达共同感受。
这样既能清晰组织内容,又能自然融入语法学习,使你的假期故事更生
动、更地道。
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范文赏析
An Unforgettable School Trip
Last Saturday, I did
something truly special—I
went on a school trip to the
Science Museum. I went
there with all of my teachers
and classmates. __________开头段:
引入主题
【范文结构分析】
1.请从开头段中找出并抄写描述“时
间、活动和同伴”的句子。
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Last Saturday, I did something truly special—I went on a school trip to the Science Museum. I went there with all of my teachers and classmates.
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We got together at 8:00 a.m. at
the school gate and left for the
museum by bus. We listened to a
lecture by the guide as soon as we
got there. 2.请在第二段中找出并抄写描
述“在科技馆活动”的句子。
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We listened to a lecture by
the guide as soon as we got
there.
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After that, we took a visit around the
different halls of the museum. There were
different kinds of advanced inventions on
show, from the industry to education and life.
Everyone felt excited. What impressed me
most was the experience of the usage of them,
which made me have a better understanding
of the knowledge of AI. __________________
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After that, we took a visit around the different halls of the museum.
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We also enjoyed the delicious food cooked by
an AI robot. How amazing! __________主体段:描述
活动与经历
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We also enjoyed the delicious food cooked by an AI robot.
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At the end of the visit, we said goodbye
to the AI guide. It was a meaningful trip
which not only broadened our horizons, but
also built up our national confidence. I have
made up my mind to study harder and hope
to make a contribution to my
motherland. __________结尾段:描述感受与收获,并表
达愿望 3.请在第三段中找出
并抄写说明“作者的
感受/收获”的句子。
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It was a meaningful trip which not only broadened our horizons, but also built up our national confidence.
续表
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【佳句仿写】
1.What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them,
which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of
AI. 给我印象最深的是使用它们的经历,这让我对人工智能的知识有了
更好的了解。
仿写:给我印象最深的是当地人与自然的深厚联系和对户外的热爱。
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What impressed me most was the locals' deep connection to
nature and their love for the outdoors.
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2.It was a meaningful trip which not only broadened our horizons,
but also built up our national confidence. 这是一次有意义的旅行,不
仅拓宽了我们的视野,也增强了我们的民族信心。
仿写:在游客中心,游客不仅可以试穿传统服装,还可以了解村庄的文化。
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At the visitor centre, visitors can not only try on the traditional
clothes, but also learn about the village's culture.
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素材储备
【开头句】
1.Last summer, I went to Mount Huangshan with my family. 去年夏
天,我和家人一起去了黄山。
2.One of my most unforgettable holidays was when I went back to
the US with my parents. 我最难忘的假期之一是和我父母回美国的那
次。
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3.I still remember clearly the holiday when I visited Moscow and
saw the beautiful metro stations. 我依然清楚地记得游览莫斯科并看到
那些美丽地铁站的那次假期。
4.Have you ever been to a strawberry festival? I did last holiday,
and it was amazing.你参加过草莓节吗?我上个假期去过,真的很棒。
【中间句——描述活动与经历】
1.The first thing we did was visit the Victory Museum. 我们做的第
一件事是参观胜利博物馆。
2.During the day, we saw the Sea of Clouds and many ancient
buildings. In the evening, we got together to sing and dance. 白天,
我们看到了云海和许多古建筑。晚上,我们聚在一起唱歌跳舞。
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【中间句——表达感受与收获】
3.It was the most fantastic trip I've ever had. 这是我经历过的最棒的
旅行。
4.This experience taught me the importance of history and peace.这
段经历教会了我历史与和平的重要性。
5.The most valuable part was not just the fun, but also making
new friends. 最珍贵的不仅是欢乐时光,更是结识了新朋友。
6.What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them,
which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of
AI. 给我印象最深的是使用它们的经历,这让我对人工智能的知识有了
更好的了解。
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【结尾句】
1.That holiday was truly special because I came back with
wonderful memories and new friends. 那个假期真的很特别,因为我
带回了美好的回忆和新朋友。
2.I will always remember this holiday and the beautiful landscape of
Mount Huangshan. 我会永远记住这个假期和黄山的美丽风景。
3.I hope I can go back to Lijiang again in the future. 我希望将来能
再次回到丽江。#3
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4.It was not just a trip; it was a good experience that taught me a
lot. 这不仅仅是一次旅行,更是一段教会我许多的美好经历。
5.It was a meaningful trip which not only broadened our horizons,
but also built up our national confidence. 这是一次有意义的旅行,不
仅拓宽了我们的视野,更增强了我们的民族自信。#5
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【俗语谚语】
1.He who travels far knows much. 远行者见识广。
2.Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles. 读万卷书,
行万里路。
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写作练笔
旅行是心灵的旅程,它不仅是见闻的积累,更是身心的愉悦。假设你
是李华,某英文网站正在开展题为“My Unforgettable Travel Experience”
的分享活动。请你用英文写一篇80词左右的短文投稿,谈谈你曾经去过的
一个地方,做过的事情,以及你在旅行中的收获。
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One possible version:
My Unforgettable Travel Experience
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Last summer, I went to Mount Huangshan with my family. It
was the most fantastic trip I've ever had.
We arrived early in the morning. The air was fresh. We
climbed the mountain and saw the famous Guest-Greeting Pine and
the Sea of Clouds. I also tried some local food for the first time.
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Yours,
Li Hua
This trip taught me the beauty of nature. I learned that being
in the mountains can make you feel peaceful. I will always
remember this holiday and the beautiful landscape of Mount
Huangshan.
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