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第四课时 Developing ideas(Writing) 话题概述 Heroes 课标主题：对世界、国家、人民和社会有突出贡献的人物 ①介绍不同时代的英 ②讲述英雄人物的成 ③介绍英雄人物的 ④结合自身，介绍向 雄人物及其主要成就 长经历与奋斗故事 优秀品质与精神 英雄人物学习的做法 典例探究 战争年代流血牺牲的是英雄，危难时刻挺身而出的是英雄，平常日子里无私奉献的也是英雄。 钱学森是享誉海内外的杰出科学家，他的爱国情怀与科学成就激励着一代又一代中国人。请你以 “Qian Xuesen-一the Pride of China”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍他。内容包括： 1.简要介绍钱学森的主要经历； 2.阐述他被你视为英雄的原因； 3.谈谈他对你的学习或生活的启发。 参考词汇：scientist(n.科学家)，love(u.热爱)，spirit(n.精神) Qian Xuesen-the Pride of China Qian Xuesen is one of the greatest scientists in China ②四步法写作 ◆第一步：思路剖析 (一)仔细审题 1.文体：介绍钱学森的生平事迹及对自己的影响，是一篇 2.人称：介绍钱学森的生平事迹时，为 ；介绍钱学森对自己的影响时，为 3.时态：介绍钱学森的生平事迹时，时态主要为 ;介绍钱学森对自己的影响时，时态主 要为 (二)篇章布局 Beginning:引入主题一简要介绍钱学森的身份及重要经历； Body:具体介绍 分点介绍将钱学森视为英雄的原因； Ending:表达感悟—联系自身，说明钱学森对自己的学习/生活的启发与影响。 ◆第二步：推敲词汇 1 很久以前/以后 3 放弃 2 认识到科学的重要性 4 花时间努力研究 41 5. 成功使我们国家更强大 7. 继续存在着 6 过世；逝世 8. 鼓励我们努力学习 ◆第三步：连词成句 1.钱学森是一位伟大的科学家，曾在美国学习。[九（上）Unit4P52:who引导的定语从句] 2. 他认识到了科学对我们国家的重要性。 3.早在钱学森回来之前，他就梦想着为我们的国家工作。 4.回国后，他花了很多时间努力研究我国的科学技术。 5.最后，他成功地使我们的国家更加强大。 6.钱学森鼓励我们努力学习，报效祖国。 ◆第四步：连句成篇 Qian Xuesen-the Pride of China Qian Xuesen is one of the greatest scientists in China. 实战演练 每个人的生活中，总会有一个值得敬佩的人成为我们心中的榜样。你校五四青年节将要组织一 次英语演讲比赛，请你以“A Good Example for Me'”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括： 1.谁是你心目中的英雄？ 2.他/她都做了什么？ 3.你从他（她）身上学到了什么？ 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称： 4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 A Good Example for Me Hello,everyone.I'm glad to be here to give a speech. 425.Reading historical stories plays an important role in 3.For the country,he left his peaceful life behind,and this 4.They cut off communication with the outside world,even with understanding history better. spirit will be remembered forever. their families. 6.Let's read more historical stories and grow together! 二阶衔接中考练题型 5.We should follow his example,face difficulties bravely,and 第四步 -、1~5 CBEDF work hard to make our country stronger../..(开放性试题，言 Hello,everyone.I'm happy to share my experience of reading 二、1~5 ABBCA6~10 CACBA 之有理即可。) historical stories with you.Reading historical stories allows us to 三、1~5 BCABB 第四课时 increase our knowledge.It is one of my favourite hobbies,and I have 第二课时 四步法写作 learned a lot from it. 第一步 语法检测 My favourite historical story is about Kong Rong.He was such a 1.说明文2.第三人称；第一人称 -1.who 2.whose 3.who 4.whom/who 5.whose kind boy that he always thought of others first.Although he was very 3.一般过去时：一般现在时 6.who 7.whom/who young,he set a good example for me.This story teaches me to be 第二步 1.You need to call Ann whose telephone number is 5536-7685. kind to others in daily life. 1.long before/after 2.get to know the importance of science 2.I have lots of friends who/that always help me out when I'm in Reading historical stories is very helpful.It plays an important 3.give up 4.spend time working hard trouble. role in learning about the past and understanding our own culture 5.succeed in making our country stronger 3.Laozi was a famous Chinese thinker who/that lived around better.It also helps pass on good spirits to more people.I truly 6.pass away 7.live on 8.encourage us to study hard 2,500 years ago. believe history is our best teacher.Let's read more historical stories 第三步 4.The child who/that is playing with the dog in this picture is and grow together！Thank you！ 1.Qian Xuesen was a great scientist who studied in the US my brother. 实战演练 2.He got to know the importance of science for our country. 5.They are the role models in this new age who/whom we should My Favourite Historical Person 3.Long before he came back,he dreamed of working for our learn from. own country. In the long history of China,there are many famous historical 6.Some people who do a lot for our nation are called heroes 4.After returning,he spent much time working hard on our people. 三、1.who2.who3.who4.whose5.who/whom country's science and technology. As for me,my favourite historical person is Zhuge Liang,a 6.whose 7.who 5.At last,he succeeded in making our nation much famous man with great achievements in the Three Kingdoms Period. stronger. He was very smart and famous in China.He helped Liu Bei go 第三课时 一阶深挖教材练基础 6.Qian Xuesen encourages us to study hard and serve our through many difficulties and set up the Shu Kingdom.What's country. more,many of his articles have been passed down until now.I am 1.with 2.countless 3.discover 4.deeply 5.easier 6.and 第四步 deeply moved by his hard work and wide knowledge.Therefore,I 7.realise 8.types 9.him 10.remembered Qian Xuesen-the Pride of China regard his spirit as the most valuable quality and always keep on 11.His greater dream was to develop a rice plant that would feed the Qian Xuesen is one of the greatest scientists in China.He is learning from him whole world. truly the pride of our country.He was a great scientist who studied in There are many great people in history.We should learn good 12.We should never give up when facing difficulties./We should the US and later returned to China in 1955.He developed a strong qualities from them. love our country and try our best to help people./..（开放性试 love for the motherland from an early age.And he got to know the Unit 4 Heroes 题，言之有理即可。) importance of science for our country. 第一课时 二阶衔接中考练题型 Long before he came back,he dreamed of working for our own 一阶主题情境练基础 -、1~5 ACABA6~10 BCBAC country.After returning,he spent much time working hard on our -1.fighter 2.bravely 3.dying 4.heroic 二、l.He was99 years old, country's science and technology.At last,he succeeded in making 1.temperature 2.unchanged 3.gentle 4.pity 5.footsteps 2.Because he saw that China was going through a very hard our nation much stronger. 1.I got to know Deng Jiaxian better by reading some articles. time,and he wanted to use his knowledge to make China Though he has passed away,his spirit lives on.He encourages 2.I truly understood his love for the motherland by reading stronger. us to study hard and serve our country.I will follow his example and between the lines. 3.毫不犹豫/不假思索 never give up my dreams. 参考答案 参考 实战演练 5.My father shows interest in everything that is about 5.provide us with fresh air A Good Example for Me technology 6.benefit from the beautiful nature Hello,everyone.I'm glad to be here to give a speech.As the 6.I prefer the stories that/which describe the life of people in 7.get along on well with nature saying goes,"Heroes are the light of the times.For me,the hero Guangxi. 8.care for the Earth in my heart is Yang Jingyu. 7.One of the people who/that inspire me the most is my dance 第三步 teacher. He was a great soldier.Born in 1905,he tried his best to fight 1.Detian Waterfall is a beautiful place that is full of clean 8.My sister and her little dog that are playing in the garden against the enemies.He led his army to fight bravely in the northeast water and green mountains make me very happy./My sister,who is playing in the garden of China.Even when they had no food or water in the cold winter, 2.It is no surprise that this place provides us with fresh air with her little dog,makes me very happy. and wonderful views. they never gave up.Finally,he died for our country at the age of 35. 9.Mr Green has just given us a speech that/which was about 3.It plays an important role in making the whole area like a Yang Jingyu was brave.He showed us what love for one's developing life skills. lively painting. country means.I want to learn from him.I will value our peaceful 10.He values the photo that/which reminds him of the good 4.I want to visit Detian Waterfall because I can benefit from life today.He is a true hero who inspires me to protect our country. memories. the beautiful nature. Unit 5 A fine balance .1.that/which 2.who/that 3.that 4.that/which 5.And I hope to get along/on well with the nature. 第一课时 5.that/who 6.that/which 第四步 一阶主题情境练基础 第三课时 A Natural Wonder I Want to Visit -1.tourists 2.admiring 3.rapidly 4.overfishing 一阶深挖教材练基础 There are many amazing natural wonders in the world.Among 5.dropped 1.foreigners 2.for 3.chosen 4.fantastic 5.protect them,I want to visit Detian Waterfall in Guangxi most.It is a 1.balance 2.control 3.canceled/cancelled 6.education 7.their 8.provide 9.As 10.undoubtedly beautiful place that is full of clean water and green mountains. 4.organisations 11.A The waterfall runs down from high mountains,and many small 1.More and more students are worried about the future of 二阶衔接中考练题型 rivers run around it.It is no surprise that this place provides us with wetlands. -、1~5 CBCBB fresh air and wonderful views.In fact,it is not big enough to be the 2.It's our duty to care for wetlands and all living things there. -1.To encourage people to protect real forests. largest waterfall in the world,but it plays an important role in making 2.By completing/finishing different kinds of online tasks. 3.We should learn to get along with nature in a better way. the whole area like a lively painting.It is home to many animals and 3.The project will plant a real tree in a forest in western China plants 4.We hope wetlands will always be full of life and beauty. 4.Because young people feel proud that they can easily help with I want to visit Detian Waterfall because I can benefit from the 二阶衔接中考练题型 environmental protection. beautiful nature.I hope to get along well with nature,take wonderful -、1~5 FCBAD 5.Yes,I will.Because it's fun and helps protect the photos and learn to care for the Earth.I'm looking forward to 二、1~5 BACAB6~10 BCACA environment./No,I won't.Because I don't know the project enjoying this great wonder one day. 三、1~5 ABCCC is real or not../..（开放性试题，言之有理即可。) 实战演练 第二课时 第四课时 Protecting the Animals 语法检测 四步法写作 Good morning!Today I'd like to talk about protecting animals. -1.that/which 2.that 3.that/which 4.that 5.that/which 第一步 My favourite animals are tigers.They are strong and cool.They live 6.that 7.that/which 8.that 9.that 10.that/which 1.说明文2.第一人称3.一般现在时 in forests and feed on small animals. 1.Those pencils which/that are in the box are new. 第二步 But now,it is a pity that tigers are in great danger.People 2.It is the most beautiful park that I have visited. 1.be full of 2.in fact cut down forests,so tigers lose their homes.Some people even hunt 3.Jim likes the music (that/which)he can sing along with. 3.not big enough to be the largest waterfall them for money.As a result,there are fewer and fewer tigers in the 4.There is no other food that is as special as nang in Xinjiang. 4.play an important role in doing sth world. 答案 参考答案