高考英语二轮之应用文精讲之体育话题

高考英语二轮之应用文精讲之体育话题 Writing 1　告知信之冬季阳光长跑 【试题创新】 假定你是李华，你校将于下周启动冬季阳光长跑活动，你的英国朋友Tom来信询问相关情况。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）活动时间与日常安排； （2）活动的意义； （3）你的个人感受。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：冬季阳光长跑 Winter Sunshine Long‑distance Run 【经典范文】 Dear Tom, I hope this email finds you well. Learning that you are curious about our school's Winter Sunshine Long‑distance Run starting next week, I am writing to share some details with you. Aimed at building up students' physical strength, the activity requires us to run 1,000 meters every weekday on the playground. What impresses me most is that all teachers will join us, which creates a warm and united atmosphere. Tired but inspired, we finish each run, our laziness and stress swept away. It not only strengthens our bodies but also tempers our willpower. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 一、本书面表达要求考生以李华的身份给外国朋友写一封告知信，介绍学校冬季长跑活动的安排及意义。 二、写作思路 1.书信开头：先写问候，再说明写信缘由——得知对方对活动感兴趣，写信分享相关情况。适用场景：告知信，对方想要了解某事，我方写信介绍情况。 仿写句式：Learning that you are curious about …, I am writing to share some details with you. 2.主体部分介绍活动目的与安排→活动亮点及现场氛围→参与者的状态变化。 仿写句式1：Aimed at+目标，the activity…引出活动目的，后接活动具体信息。 仿写句式2：What impresses me most is that……, which……描写活动亮点，同时说明带来的影响。 补充：可搭配形容词作状语＋独立主格结构，刻画参与者状态，替代平铺直叙的简单句。 3.结尾：用not only…but also…结构从身体、精神两个维度总结活动价值，最后使用书信标准结束语。 三、范文精讲 1.高级替换（直接以范文中的词汇为蓝本） 对......好奇：are curious about→have curiosity about 细节：details→specifics 要求：demands→calls for 营造：creates→fosters 被消除：swept away→removed（过去分词） 增强：strengthens→reinforces 2.拓展：同义句转换 原句：It not only strengthens our bodies but also tempers our willpower. 拓展句：Not only does it strengthen our bodies, but it also tempers our willpower.（not only 部分倒装，语义完全不变，仅句式升级） 3.高级句式讲解 （1）Aimed at building up students' physical strength, the activity requires us to run 1,000 meters every weekday on the playground.（运用了过去分词短语作状语） （2）What impresses me most is that all teachers will join us, which creates a warm and united atmosphere.（运用了what引导主语从句、that引导表语从句以及which引导非限制性定语从句） （3）Tired but inspired, we finish each run, our laziness and stress swept away.（运用了形容词作状语以及独立主格结构：名词+过去分词） 四、范文背诵模板 I hope this email finds you well. Learning that you are curious about our school's __________ starting __________, I am writing to share some details with you. Aimed at __________, the activity requires us to __________. What impresses me most is that __________, which creates __________.__________, we __________, __________. It not only __________ but also __________. Looking forward to your reply. Writing 2　新闻报道（班级足球联赛） 【试题创新】 你校最近举办了为期一周的高一班级足球联赛，请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： （1）联赛的基本概况； （2）比赛的核心亮点； （3）联赛的活动意义。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【经典范文】 A Wonderful Football League Last week witnessed our grade one class football league lasting for five days, which drew active participation from all classes. Apart from fierce regular matches, a striking highlight was the friendly show match between teachers and students, where players competed passionately while respecting each other. The audience cheered loudly throughout, their enthusiasm reaching its peak when the final winning goal was scored. The event not only improved our physical fitness but also developed our team spirit. More importantly, it added color to our campus life, leaving precious memories that we will value for a long time. 一、本书面表达要求考生根据所给提纲，为校英文报撰写一篇关于班级足球联赛的新闻报道。写作时需涵盖赛事概况、比赛亮点及活动意义三个核心要点。 二、写作思路 1.报道开头：拟定简洁标题，使用无灵主语句交代事件、时间、参与人员，概括活动基本概况。 仿写句式：________ witnessed our ________ lasting for ________, which drew active participation from ________. 2.主体部分：Apart from 过渡引出常规赛事，重点描写活动核心亮点；运用 where 定语从句、独立主格结构描绘现场场面，还原活动氛围。 仿写句式：Apart from ________, a ________ highlight was ________, where players ________ while ________. 补充：可搭配独立主格结构（名词+现在分词）刻画现场情景，增强画面感。 3.结尾：用 not only…but also… 点明活动两层意义，再用现在分词作结果状语，补充活动带来的长远影响。 三、范文精讲 1.高级替换 激烈的：fierce→intense 引人注目的：striking→remarkable 亮点：highlight→climax 热情：enthusiasm→passion 培养：developed→fostered 2.拓展：同义句转换 原句：Last week witnessed our grade one class football league lasting for five days, which drew active participation from all classes. 拓展句：The five‑day grade one class football league was held last week, which drew active participation from all classes. 3.高级句型讲解 （1）Apart from fierce regular matches, a striking highlight was the friendly show match between teachers and students, where players competed passionately while respecting each other.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句和while引导的省略句） （2）The audience cheered loudly throughout, their enthusiasm reaching its peak when the final winning goal was scored.（运用了独立主格结构：名词+现在分词以及when引导时间状语从句） （3）More importantly, it added color to our campus life, leaving precious memories that we will value for a long time.（运用了现在分词短语作结果状语以及that引导的定语从句） 四、背诵模板 __________ witnessed our __________ lasting for __________, which drew active participation from __________. Apart from __________, a __________ highlight was __________, where players __________ while __________. The audience __________ throughout, their __________ reaching its peak when __________. The event not only __________ but also __________. More importantly, it added color to our campus life, leaving precious memories that we will value for a long time. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $