Unit 4 School days（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材译林版七年级上册

本初中英语Unit 4“学校生活”单元同步写作讲义，聚焦“人与自我”主题下的“生活与学习”子主题，通过分类词汇（日常活动、课程安排等）、功能句式（开头、中间、结尾句）、佳句仿写及写作步骤（审题、谋篇布局）构建学习支架，帮助学生从素材积累过渡到完整写作。 该资料以核心素养为导向，分类词汇与功能句式系统提升语言能力，范例赏析中的亮点词汇和高分句型培养思维品质，多个实战任务（如介绍校园生活、给笔友写邮件）强化学习能力。课中辅助教师高效授课，课后助力学生自主练习，查漏补缺，全面提升写作水平。

Unit 4 School days单元同步写作讲义 Unit 4的主题是“学校生活”，属于“人与自我”主题范畴下的“生活与学习”主题群中“多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活”子主题。本单元的写作任务是用所学语言介绍学校课程安排和个人作息安排，阐述校内有趣的课堂，分享个人喜爱的学校实践活动，参与实践活动，理解“做中学”，在实践中成长，说明实践活动的重要意义并养成勤于动手、乐于实践的良好习惯；热爱学校生活，树立规划意识和劳动意识，培养个人责任担当。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.日常活动 get up起床 have breakfast吃早餐 go to school去学校 have dinner吃晚餐 help with housework帮忙做家务 do homework做作业 go to bed上床睡觉 2.课程安排 ... lessons begin at ...…… 课程从……开始 have ... classes on ... 在……有……课 study ... and learn about ... 研究……并了解…… get to know ... around us 了解我们周围的…… 3.课外活动 leave for ... to pick ... 动身去……摘...... have a tour of the fields对田野进行游览 have lots of fun 玩得开心 like being outside 喜欢在外面 enjoy the peace and quiet there享受那里的宁静与和平 4.态度感受 relaxed/relaxing 令人放松的 fun有趣的 happy/enjoyable 愉快的 interesting 有趣的 lucky幸运的 句式积累 开头句： 1. My school life is busy but colourful. 我的校园生活忙碌但丰富多彩。 2. I go to school from Monday to Friday. 我周一到周五上学。 3. I have many interesting subjects at school. 我在学校有很多有趣的科目。 4. My teachers are kind and helpful. 我的老师们善良又乐于助人。 5. I enjoy my school life very much. 我非常喜欢我的校园生活。 中间句： 1. Among all the subjects, I like English best because it is interesting. 所有科目中我最喜欢英语，因为它很有趣。 2. I listen carefully in class and learn a lot every day. 我上课认真听讲，每天学到很多知识。 3. We have many kinds of after-school activities after class. 课后我们有各种各样的课外活动。 4. I join the sports club and often practise with my friends. 我加入运动社团，经常和朋友一起练习。 5. I always have a good time with my classmates at school. 结尾句： 1. I think my school life is wonderful. 我认为我的校园生活很美好。 2. I feel happy and relaxed at school. 我在学校开心又轻松。 3. I plan to study harder in the new term. 我计划新学期更加努力学习。 4. I will take part in more activities to improve myself. 我会参加更多活动提升自己。 5. I believe my school life will be better and better. 我相信我的校园生活会越来越好。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：In our class, we all work in groups and take turns to do different chores. 仿写：我和弟弟每天轮流扫地。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：This helps me learn how to take care of plants. 仿写：这本书告诉我们如何照顾宠物猫。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：We learn about teamwork through chores. 仿写：我们通过努力能够变得更好。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. My brother and I take turns to sweep the floor every day. 2. The book tells us how to take care of e-dogs . 3. We can be better through hard work. 典例 （原创）假设你是七年级学生，请以 My School Life 为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的校园生活。 内容要点包含： 1.上学时间、所学科目； 2.最喜欢的学科及原因； 3.课后活动、社团生活； 4.你的感受与未来计划。 注意： 1.词数 80左右； 2.可适当发挥，增加细节； 3.文中请勿出现真实个人信息。 My School Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①文体：介绍类记叙文 ②人称：第一人称 I；时态为一般现在时（介绍现状；plan/hope 表达愿望计划） ③ 要点覆盖：上学时间、开设科目、老师情况（基础概况）；最喜欢的学科、课堂表现（课堂生活）；课后活动、社团经历（课后生活）；个人感受、未来打算（感受与计划） 谋篇布局 第一段：总起，介绍上学时间、科目、老师; 第二段：课堂部分，重点写最喜欢的学科以及课堂行为; 第三段：课后社团与活动，写校园课余生活; 第四段：抒发感受，写出学习与活动的计划，收尾升华。 佳作展示 My School Life My school life is busy but colourful. I go to school from Monday to Friday. We have many subjects at school, such as English, Maths, Art and PE. My teachers are kind and patient. They always help me when I meet problems. Among all the subjects, I like English best. It is really interesting and useful. I listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class every day. I can learn a lot. After school, there are many kinds of wonderful activities for us. I join the sports club and often do sports with my classmates. We always have great fun together. I love my colourful school life very much. In the future, I plan to study harder and take part in more school activities. I hope my school life will be more meaningful and wonderful. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 busy but colourful 忙碌却丰富多彩 kind and patient 善良且有耐心 meet problems 遇到难题 among all the subjects 在所有学科之中 interesting and useful 有趣而且实用 take notes 记笔记 many kinds of 各种各样的 take part in 参加 meaningful adj. 有意义的 高分句型： 1. They always help me when I meet problems. 当我遇到难题时，他们总是帮助我。(when引导时间状语从句，七年级高频写作句型) 2. Among all the subjects, I like English best. 在所有学科当中，我最喜欢英语。(among用于三者及以上，书面表达万能句型，用于表达最喜欢的人 / 物) 3. I plan to study harder and take part in more school activities. 我打算更加努力学习，多参加校园活动。(plan to do sth计划做某事；and并列两个动作，丰富结尾) 4. hope my school life will be more meaningful and wonderful. 我希望我的校园生活会更加充实而美好。(hope + (that)宾语从句，用来表达愿望，作文结尾加分句式) （一） （25-26七年级上·江苏盐城·期末）亲爱的同学们，一转眼你们进入初中快半年了。在新的学校里，你们一定认识了新的同学、新的老师，学习了新的科目，参加了新的活动，对于学校生活有了新的感受。假如你是张伟，请以“My Wonderful School Life”为题，根据以下提示，分享你的初中校园生活。 My Wonderful School Life New friend (Li Hua) Appearance（外貌） Personal quality（性格） …（自拟） New teacher (Mr Wang) Favourite subject What is it? Why? …（自拟） Favourite after-school activity 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 2. 要点齐全，紧扣主题，语言通顺，条理清晰，可适当发挥。 3. 书写规范，标点正确。正文80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi, everyone! I’m Zhang Wei, and I’m happy to share my wonderful school life with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________My Wonderful School Life Hi, everyone! I’m Zhang Wei, and I’m happy to share my wonderful school life with you. Here I have a friend called Li Hua. He is tall and helpful. Mr Wang is my English teacher. He wears glasses. He is very kind to us. Both of them often help me with my homework. I like Chinese best! I read the works of many famous writers. The Chinese language is really amazing. My favourite after-school activity is playing basketball. I often play basketball with my friends after school. I think doing sports can help me keep healthy. I enjoy my wonderful school life very much. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时为主。 明确要点：介绍我初中的新生活，包括新朋友，新老师，最喜欢的科目，最喜欢的课后活动。 确定人称：第一人称和第三人称。 注意事项：不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；80词左右；内容要包括所有要点；语句通顺，语法正确。 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 第一段：引出话题，分享精彩的校园生活； 第二段：介绍乐于助人的好友李华和善良的王老师； 第三段：介绍最喜欢的学科和课后活动； 第四段：表达内心感受。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：校园里的良师益友 I have a friend called/my best friend is/tall and helpful/thin and kind/outgoing/English teacher/Math teacher/wears glasses/short hair/ready to help等 要点二：兴趣爱好 like Chinese best/favourite subject/read the works of many famous writers/learn wonderful poems/play basketball/play football/help me keep healthy/keep me strong等 要点三：内心感受 I enjoy my wonderful school life very much./My school life is great and I love it so much.等 （二） （25-26七年级上·江苏盐城·期中）假设你是七年级一班学生李华，你的英国笔友Eric将在下学期来你校做交换生，请根据以下提示给他写一封英文邮件，介绍你的学校和学校活动，并分享自己的感受。 要求：1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、班级等信息； 2. 词数70左右，已给出的部分不计入总词数； 3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 Dear Eric, I’m glad to know you will study here with me next term. Let me share our school and school life with you.   ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All the best, Li Hua 例文 Dear Eric, I’m glad to know you will study here with me next term. Let me share our school and school life with you. Our school is beautiful. It has a big library, a modern lab and a large sports field. We have many interesting lessons, like Chinese and Biology. My classmates, tall and strong, are all friendly and helpful. After school, we have colorful activities. We can join different clubs like the music club and the sports club. I feel happy to study here because my school life is not only interesting but also meaningful. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon. All the best, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性电子邮件，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍学校设施（如图书馆、实验室等）、课程和同学、课外活动（如社团），分享个人感受   确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不能出现真实姓名和班级信息；70词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出固定开头，直接引出写信目的——介绍学校和学校活动 主体段：按照“设施→课程与同学→课外活动”的逻辑顺序依次展开，最后以个人感受收束主体内容   结尾段：使用常见的电子邮件结尾，表达对Eric到来的期待 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍学校设施 形容词：beautiful/big/modern/large/clean/bright等 设施名词：library/lab/sports field/classroom building/computer room/art room/dining hall等 要点二：介绍课程和同学 课程名词：Chinese/Biology/Maths/English/History/Geography/Art/PE等 描述同学：tall/strong/friendly/helpful/kind/hard-working/smart/outgoing/ready to help others等 要点三：介绍课外活动和个人感受   社团/活动名词：music club/sports club/art club/chess club/reading club/basketball team/volunteer activities/school trip/sports meeting等 感受/描述形容词：happy/excited/proud/relaxed/interesting/meaningful/wonderful/rich and colorful等 （三） （25-26七年级上·江苏扬州·期中）假设学校正在举行题为“My school life”的征文活动。请你根据下面的提示信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 My school life School 1.What is your school like? 2.What is your favourite place at school?Why? Subjects 1.What is your favourite subject?Why? 2.Which subject are you good at? 3....(可以补充一到两点) Classmates/Teachers 1.What are your classmates/teachers like? 2....(可以补充一到两点) Activities 1What sport do you like? 2.What club are you in? 3....(可以补充一到两点) 注意： 1. 短文须包含以上信息，可适当发挥。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 3. 100词左右，开头和已给出，不计入总词数。 My School Life How time flies! I’m a junior high school student now. And I’d like to share my school life with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  My school is big and beautiful. The library is my favourite place because I can read many interesting books there quietly. My favourite subject is English because it is useful and interesting. I am also good at math. My teachers are kind and helpful. My classmates are friendly too. We often help each other with our studies. After class, I like playing basketball best. I am in the school basketball club. It makes me strong and happy.     I really enjoy my colorful school life very much. 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主，介绍校园生活的常态 明确要点：涵盖学校环境、喜爱的学科、师生特点、课后活动这四类提示信息，还要补充1到2点细节让内容更丰富 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：100词左右，开头已给出的句子不计入总词数，不能出现真实校名和人名    【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：承接给定开头，总起分享校园生活的意愿，先介绍学校的整体印象和最喜欢的校园地点 主体段：分述喜欢的学科及原因，再描述同学和老师的特点，介绍喜欢的运动、参加的社团，补充一两个相处的细节 结尾段：收尾表达对校园生活的喜爱    【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：介绍学校相关信息 具体内容：look beautiful/have bright classrooms/plant many trees 要点二：阐述喜欢的学科及原因，再描述同学和老师的特点，介绍喜欢的运动、参加的社团 喜欢的学科：listen carefully/take notes/learn useful knowledge 同学和老师的特点：help each other/make friends with each other/share happiness 喜欢的运动、参加的社团：play basketball/take part in matches/practise every week 要点三：收尾表达对校园生活的喜爱 具体内容：enjoy my school life/cherish every day/keep wonderful memories （四） （25-26七年级上·江苏盐城·期末）某英文网站开展“少年校园说”的征文活动，向大家介绍多彩的青少年校园生活。请根据下列提示，以“My school life”为题，写一篇文章投稿。 What is your school like? ★buildings ★favourite place What about your new friend(s) at school? ★character… What activities do you often do at school? … 注意：1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 2.词数 80 词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文章须包含全部要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 My school life Hi, there! I am a new middle school student. Let me__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I enjoy my school life so much! 例文 My school life Hi, there! I am a new middle school student. Let me tell you about my colourful school life. My school is big and beautiful. There are many tall buildings and a nice playground. My favourite place is the library, because I like reading books there. I have a new friend here. She is kind and friendly. She always helps me with my study, and we get on well with each other. At school, we also have many interesting activities. We often play ball games and take part in clubs. I feel happy every day. I enjoy my school life so much! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：学校建筑及整体印象、最喜爱的地方、新朋友情况、学校活动 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：引出话题，表明要介绍多彩校园生活 主体段：描述学校建筑及整体印象，引出最喜爱的地方；介绍新朋友情况；讲述学校活动 结尾段：总结感受，表达对校园生活的喜爱 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：学校建筑及整体印象 学校描述：big and beautiful/modern and clean/quiet and comfortable等 建筑列举：many tall buildings/a nice playground/a big classroom building/a beautiful garden等 整体印象句型：My school is... There are... 要点二：最喜爱的地方 地点选择：library/playground/garden/art room等 喜欢原因：because I like... there/because it is... 具体活动：reading books/playing sports/drawing pictures/having a rest等 例句：My favourite place is the library, because I like reading books there. 拓展词汇：quiet（安静的）、peaceful（宁静的）、full of knowledge（充满知识） 拓展句型：The... is my favourite place because it provides me with a... environment.（……是我最喜欢的地方，因为它给我提供了一个……的环境。） 要点三：新朋友情况 朋友性格：kind and friendly/outgoing and active/helpful and hard-working等 朋友帮助：always helps me with.../gives me some advice on.../encourages me to...等 相处情况：get on well with each other/have a good time together/share happiness and sadness等 （五） （25-26七年级上·江苏南通·期末）学期最后一节社团课上，老师组织大家就“My colourful life”为题自由分享。请根据图示及文字提示完成对话。 注意： 1. 对话必须包含图中所示的三个方面；提示词可供参考； 2. 词数：80左右。所给的文字不计入总词数； 3. 对话中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。 Ms Wang: Class, let’s share our colourful life. You can talk about your school, family or after-school life. Feel free to say something. Tom: I’ll go first. My school life is wonderful. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Lily: I often stay with my family on weekends. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Amy: I usually ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ms Wang: So this term is colourful. I’m glad you all have fun. Wish you a happy new year! 例文 Ms Wang: Class, let’s share our colourful life. You can talk about school, family or after-school life. Feel free to say something. Tom: I’ll go first. My school life is wonderful. I’m so glad to make a new friend. Whenever I have difficulties, she is always the first to help me. At school, I try my best to learn all the subjects well, and my favourite lesson is Geograph. After class, I enjoy playing chess with my classmates. Lily: I often stay with my family on weekends. It’s usual for me to wear sports clothes and shoes. I often buy comfortable but cheap clothes. Because I want to save my pocket money for a rainy day. Amy: I usually play sports after school. For example, I almost run every day. I like the Spring Festival best. For me, the best part is to let off fireworks at night. Ms Wang: So this term is colourful. I’m glad you all have fun. Wish you a happy new year! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文应该主要用第一人称来写；必须包含图中所示的三个方面，要条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从朋友、学科和活动三方面内容来谈论学校生活； 第二步，从穿着打扮和预算方面谈论家庭生活方面； 第三步，从爱好和节日方面谈论课后生活。 [亮点词汇] ①make a new friend交一个新朋友 ②try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力去做某事 ③let off fireworks放烟花 [高分句型] ①Whenever I have difficulties, she is always the first to help me.（Whenever引导的时间状语从句） ②It’s usual for me to wear sports clothes and shoes.（It is+形容词+for sb. to do sth.结构） （六） （25-26七年级上·江苏·期末）转眼间，初中生活的第一个学期就要结束了，你是否已经适应了初中的学习和生活呢？请以“My School Life”为题，写一篇短文，介绍你的校园生活的一天，包括你的学习科目、社团活动等，并谈谈你的真实感受。 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于60词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 My School Life My school life is colorful and interesting. Now let me tell you something about it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文 My School Life My school life is colorful and interesting. Now let me tell you something about it. I usually get to school at 7:30 a.m. and have four classes in the morning. My favourite subject is English because it’s fun and my English teacher always makes her lessons lively. I also like math, though it’s difficult, I enjoy working out problems. After school, I join the music club. I learn to play the guitar there, and it’s a great way to relax. I have made many good friends at school. We study together and help each other with our lessons. We also play basketball on the playground after class, which makes us happy and healthy. I love my school life. It not only helps me learn new things but also lets me make wonderful memories. I feel lucky to study in such a great school! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：话题作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作提示已明确要求介绍校园生活的一天、学习科目、社团活动及真实感受，考生需紧扣要点，适度补充细节，确保上下文连贯流畅。 [写作步骤]   第一步，开篇总述校园生活特点，引出主题； 第二步，按时间线介绍课程安排与喜爱科目； 第三步，描述课后活动，抒发对校园生活的感受。 [亮点词汇]   ①colorful多彩的   ②work out解决 ③each other互相 [高分句型]   ①My favourite subject is English because it’s fun and my English teacher always makes her lessons lively. (运用because引导原因状语从句)   ②We also play basketball on the playground after class, which makes us happy and healthy. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)   ③It not only helps me learn new things but also lets me make wonderful memories. (运用了not only...but also...并列结构) （七） （25-26七年级上·安徽安庆·期末）亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生新的旅程，这个学期，大家一定有一个精彩的校园生活。假如你是李华，请结合图片和要点提示，以“My wonderful School Life”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。 注意：1.包含所给信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文规范； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3.词数80左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 My Wonderful School Life I’m Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文： My Wonderful School Life I’m Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here. Our school is beautiful. Behind the teaching building is a large playground. I often play sports there. The library is next to my classroom. I read books there after class. My favourite subject is English. It’s interesting and useful. Ms Wang makes the class lively with games. After school, I join the science club. We do fun experiments. We also have a sports meet and an art festival every year. I love my school life because I learn and grow with my friends. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：美丽校园、精彩活动与快乐社团、学科学习与老师 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，概括校园生活整体感受（题目已给出开头句） 主体段：美丽校园、快乐社团／精彩活动、学科学习 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：美丽校园 地点选择：library/playground/garden/classroom/teaching building等 位置描述：next to the teaching building/behind the classroom/in front of the library/near the sports center等 活动内容：read books/do morning exercises/play sports/enjoy the flowers/study with classmates等 作用效果：It helps me relax./It makes me feel happy./It improves my knowledge./It keeps me healthy. 要点二：快乐社团与精彩活动 社团选择：science club/art club/music club/sports club等 活动内容：do experiments/draw pictures/sing songs/play basketball/learn new skills等 学校活动：sports meet/art festival/English party/school trip等 参与感受：have great fun/learn teamwork/make new friends/feel excited等 要点三：学科学习及老师 学科选择：English/Math/Chinese/Science/History等 喜欢原因：interesting/helpful/useful/fun/easy to learn/practical等 具体说明：teacher is kind and patient/teacher makes the class lively/learn useful knowledge/practice speaking/writing/do experiments in class等 学习收获：improve my skills/get good grades/become more confident/find learning enjoyable等 （八） （25-26七年级上·安徽滁州·期末）中学生活如诗如画。假设你是阳光中学的七年级学生张明，请围绕以下要点，给你的朋友Peter用英文写封邮件，介绍你的学校生活。 要点： 1. 校园美丽，教学楼图书馆等； 2. 师生友善，互帮互助； 3. 课程丰富，最爱科目； 4. 社团俱乐部活动，多姿多彩。 注意： 1. 短文须包含以上要点，勿逐句翻译，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名，校名； 3. 不少于70词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I’m a middle school student now, Let me tell you something about my middle school life at Sunshine Middle School. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Zhang Ming 例文 Dear Peter, I’m a middle school student now, Let me tell you something about my middle school life at Sunshine Middle School. Our school is very beautiful and has many tall buildings. There is a big library, a modern playground and bright classrooms. All the teachers are kind and the students are friendly. We help each other in study and life. We have many interesting subjects. I like English best because it is fun and useful. After class, I often join in the school club activities. I am in the art club and we draw pictures together. Sometimes I also play basketball with my friends. School life here is colorful and happy. I enjoy every day at school. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Zhang Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中学校生活的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“I’d like to tell you something about my life at Sunshine Middle School.”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“校园环境、师生氛围、课程情况、社团活动”几个方面重点介绍学校生活的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“期待对方回信”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①help each other互相帮助 ②join in参加 ③be in the art club参加艺术俱乐部 ④draw pictures画画 [高分句型] I like English best because it is fun and useful.（because引导的原因状语从句） （九） （25-26七年级上·浙江杭州·期中）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike给你发来电子邮件，请你阅读后回复。 要求： 1. 回复内容必须包含Mike询问的信息，并进行适当的发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名等信息； 3. 不少于60词，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Li Hua, How’s it going? I know you are a middle school student now. Can you tell me something about your school life? What’s your school like? Do you have any favorite places in your school? What subjects do you have? And What’s your favorite subject? Why? Please write to me soon. Yours, Mike Dear Mike, Glad to hear from you. I’d like to tell you something about my school life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 例文 Dear Mike, Glad to hear from you. I’d like to tell you something about my school life. My school life is really nice and wonderful. Our school is beautiful with green trees and colorful flowers. Do you know what my favorite place is? Well, it’s the library because there are many kinds of books. I enjoy reading quietly there. We have Chinese, English, math, and science every day. What I like most is English because it’s interesting and useful. I like my school very much. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤   [第一步：审题立意]           确定文体：应用文，一般现在时                    明确要点：围绕中学校园生活这一个要点展开      确定人称：第一人称   注意事项：词数不少于60词。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等真实信息。   [第二步：构思布局]                三段式结构：                    开头段：邮件固定开头Dear XXX，问候朋友，开门见山提出分享校园生活的一些事，为下文具体叙述铺垫；           主体段：详细描述自己的校园生活的一些情况；      结尾段：表达自己非常喜欢校园生活，固定结尾署名。      [第三步：要点展开]                    要点一：中学校园生活 校园生活总体概况：My school life is really nice and wonderful./My school life is really nice and wonderful, full of fun and new knowledge./What a nice and wonderful school life I have!等 学校环境：Our school is beautiful with green trees and colorful flowers./Our school is filled with green trees and colourful flowers, making it very attractive./What a beautiful school we have with green trees and colourful flowers!等 最喜欢的地方：Well, it’s the library because there are many kinds of books. I enjoy reading quietly there./Well, since there are various books here, this is the library, and I prefer reading quietly inside it./Well, it’s the library because there are many kinds of books covering history, science and novels. I enjoy reading quietly there to relax myself after busy classes.等 每日课程：We have Chinese, English, math, and science every day./We have four main subjects every day, which are Chinese, English, maths and science./We have Chinese, English, math, and science every day. These basic subjects help us learn different useful knowledge.等 最喜欢的课程和原因：What I like most is English because it’s interesting and useful./English is what I like most because it is interesting and useful./What attracts me most is English on account of its fun and practical value.等 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $Unit 4 School days单元同步写作讲义 Unit 4的主题是“学校生活”，属于“人与自我”主题范畴下的“生活与学习”主题群中“多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活”子主题。本单元的写作任务是用所学语言介绍学校课程安排和个人作息安排，阐述校内有趣的课堂，分享个人喜爱的学校实践活动，参与实践活动，理解“做中学”，在实践中成长，说明实践活动的重要意义并养成勤于动手、乐于实践的良好习惯；热爱学校生活，树立规划意识和劳动意识，培养个人责任担当。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.日常活动 get up起床 have breakfast吃早餐 go to school去学校 have dinner吃晚餐 help with housework帮忙做家务 do homework做作业 go to bed上床睡觉 2.课程安排 ... lessons begin at ...…… 课程从……开始 have ... classes on ... 在……有……课 study ... and learn about ... 研究……并了解…… get to know ... around us 了解我们周围的…… 3.课外活动 leave for ... to pick ... 动身去……摘...... have a tour of the fields对田野进行游览 have lots of fun 玩得开心 like being outside 喜欢在外面 enjoy the peace and quiet there享受那里的宁静与和平 4.态度感受 relaxed/relaxing 令人放松的 fun有趣的 happy/enjoyable 愉快的 interesting 有趣的 lucky幸运的 句式积累 开头句： 1. My school life is busy but colourful. 我的校园生活忙碌但丰富多彩。 2. I go to school from Monday to Friday. 我周一到周五上学。 3. I have many interesting subjects at school. 我在学校有很多有趣的科目。 4. My teachers are kind and helpful. 我的老师们善良又乐于助人。 5. I enjoy my school life very much. 我非常喜欢我的校园生活。 中间句： 1. Among all the subjects, I like English best because it is interesting. 所有科目中我最喜欢英语，因为它很有趣。 2. I listen carefully in class and learn a lot every day. 我上课认真听讲，每天学到很多知识。 3. We have many kinds of after-school activities after class. 课后我们有各种各样的课外活动。 4. I join the sports club and often practise with my friends. 我加入运动社团，经常和朋友一起练习。 5. I always have a good time with my classmates at school. 结尾句： 1. I think my school life is wonderful. 我认为我的校园生活很美好。 2. I feel happy and relaxed at school. 我在学校开心又轻松。 3. I plan to study harder in the new term. 我计划新学期更加努力学习。 4. I will take part in more activities to improve myself. 我会参加更多活动提升自己。 5. I believe my school life will be better and better. 我相信我的校园生活会越来越好。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：In our class, we all work in groups and take turns to do different chores. 仿写：我和弟弟每天轮流扫地。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：This helps me learn how to take care of plants. 仿写：这本书告诉我们如何照顾宠物猫。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：We learn about teamwork through chores. 仿写：我们通过努力能够变得更好。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 （原创）假设你是七年级学生，请以 My School Life 为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的校园生活。 内容要点包含： 1.上学时间、所学科目； 2.最喜欢的学科及原因； 3.课后活动、社团生活； 4.你的感受与未来计划。 注意： 1.词数 80左右； 2.可适当发挥，增加细节； 3.文中请勿出现真实个人信息。 My School Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①文体：介绍类记叙文 ②人称：第一人称 I；时态为一般现在时（介绍现状；plan/hope 表达愿望计划） ③ 要点覆盖：上学时间、开设科目、老师情况（基础概况）；最喜欢的学科、课堂表现（课堂生活）；课后活动、社团经历（课后生活）；个人感受、未来打算（感受与计划） 谋篇布局 第一段：总起，介绍上学时间、科目、老师; 第二段：课堂部分，重点写最喜欢的学科以及课堂行为; 第三段：课后社团与活动，写校园课余生活; 第四段：抒发感受，写出学习与活动的计划，收尾升华。 佳作展示 My School Life My school life is busy but colourful. I go to school from Monday to Friday. We have many subjects at school, such as English, Maths, Art and PE. My teachers are kind and patient. They always help me when I meet problems. Among all the subjects, I like English best. It is really interesting and useful. I listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class every day. I can learn a lot. After school, there are many kinds of wonderful activities for us. I join the sports club and often do sports with my classmates. We always have great fun together. I love my colourful school life very much. In the future, I plan to study harder and take part in more school activities. I hope my school life will be more meaningful and wonderful. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 busy but colourful 忙碌却丰富多彩 kind and patient 善良且有耐心 meet problems 遇到难题 among all the subjects 在所有学科之中 interesting and useful 有趣而且实用 take notes 记笔记 many kinds of 各种各样的 take part in 参加 meaningful adj. 有意义的 高分句型： 1. They always help me when I meet problems. 当我遇到难题时，他们总是帮助我。(when引导时间状语从句，七年级高频写作句型) 2. Among all the subjects, I like English best. 在所有学科当中，我最喜欢英语。(among用于三者及以上，书面表达万能句型，用于表达最喜欢的人 / 物) 3. I plan to study harder and take part in more school activities. 我打算更加努力学习，多参加校园活动。(plan to do sth计划做某事；and并列两个动作，丰富结尾) 4. hope my school life will be more meaningful and wonderful. 我希望我的校园生活会更加充实而美好。(hope + (that)宾语从句，用来表达愿望，作文结尾加分句式) （一） （25-26七年级上·江苏盐城·期末）亲爱的同学们，一转眼你们进入初中快半年了。在新的学校里，你们一定认识了新的同学、新的老师，学习了新的科目，参加了新的活动，对于学校生活有了新的感受。假如你是张伟，请以“My Wonderful School Life”为题，根据以下提示，分享你的初中校园生活。 My Wonderful School Life New friend (Li Hua) Appearance（外貌） Personal quality（性格） …（自拟） New teacher (Mr Wang) Favourite subject What is it? Why? …（自拟） Favourite after-school activity 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 2. 要点齐全，紧扣主题，语言通顺，条理清晰，可适当发挥。 3. 书写规范，标点正确。正文80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi, everyone! I’m Zhang Wei, and I’m happy to share my wonderful school life with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （25-26七年级上·江苏盐城·期中）假设你是七年级一班学生李华，你的英国笔友Eric将在下学期来你校做交换生，请根据以下提示给他写一封英文邮件，介绍你的学校和学校活动，并分享自己的感受。 要求：1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、班级等信息； 2. 词数70左右，已给出的部分不计入总词数； 3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 Dear Eric, I’m glad to know you will study here with me next term. Let me share our school and school life with you.   ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All the best, Li Hua （三） （25-26七年级上·江苏扬州·期中）假设学校正在举行题为“My school life”的征文活动。请你根据下面的提示信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 My school life School 1.What is your school like? 2.What is your favourite place at school?Why? Subjects 1.What is your favourite subject?Why? 2.Which subject are you good at? 3....(可以补充一到两点) Classmates/Teachers 1.What are your classmates/teachers like? 2....(可以补充一到两点) Activities 1What sport do you like? 2.What club are you in? 3....(可以补充一到两点) 注意： 1. 短文须包含以上信息，可适当发挥。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 3. 100词左右，开头和已给出，不计入总词数。 My School Life How time flies! I’m a junior high school student now. And I’d like to share my school life with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） （25-26七年级上·江苏盐城·期末）某英文网站开展“少年校园说”的征文活动，向大家介绍多彩的青少年校园生活。请根据下列提示，以“My school life”为题，写一篇文章投稿。 What is your school like? ★buildings ★favourite place What about your new friend(s) at school? ★character… What activities do you often do at school? … 注意：1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 2.词数 80 词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文章须包含全部要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 My school life Hi, there! I am a new middle school student. Let me__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I enjoy my school life so much! （五） （25-26七年级上·江苏南通·期末）学期最后一节社团课上，老师组织大家就“My colourful life”为题自由分享。请根据图示及文字提示完成对话。 注意： 1. 对话必须包含图中所示的三个方面；提示词可供参考； 2. 词数：80左右。所给的文字不计入总词数； 3. 对话中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。 Ms Wang: Class, let’s share our colourful life. You can talk about your school, family or after-school life. Feel free to say something. Tom: I’ll go first. My school life is wonderful. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Lily: I often stay with my family on weekends. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Amy: I usually ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ms Wang: So this term is colourful. I’m glad you all have fun. Wish you a happy new year! （六） （25-26七年级上·江苏·期末）转眼间，初中生活的第一个学期就要结束了，你是否已经适应了初中的学习和生活呢？请以“My School Life”为题，写一篇短文，介绍你的校园生活的一天，包括你的学习科目、社团活动等，并谈谈你的真实感受。 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于60词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 My School Life My school life is colorful and interesting. Now let me tell you something about it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） （25-26七年级上·安徽安庆·期末）亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生新的旅程，这个学期，大家一定有一个精彩的校园生活。假如你是李华，请结合图片和要点提示，以“My wonderful School Life”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。 注意：1.包含所给信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文规范； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3.词数80左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 My Wonderful School Life I’m Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） （25-26七年级上·安徽滁州·期末）中学生活如诗如画。假设你是阳光中学的七年级学生张明，请围绕以下要点，给你的朋友Peter用英文写封邮件，介绍你的学校生活。 要点： 1. 校园美丽，教学楼图书馆等； 2. 师生友善，互帮互助； 3. 课程丰富，最爱科目； 4. 社团俱乐部活动，多姿多彩。 注意： 1. 短文须包含以上要点，勿逐句翻译，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名，校名； 3. 不少于70词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I’m a middle school student now, Let me tell you something about my middle school life at Sunshine Middle School. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Zhang Ming （九） （25-26七年级上·浙江杭州·期中）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike给你发来电子邮件，请你阅读后回复。 要求： 1. 回复内容必须包含Mike询问的信息，并进行适当的发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名等信息； 3. 不少于60词，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Li Hua, How’s it going? I know you are a middle school student now. Can you tell me something about your school life? What’s your school like? Do you have any favorite places in your school? What subjects do you have? And What’s your favorite subject? Why? Please write to me soon. Yours, Mike Dear Mike, Glad to hear from you. I’d like to tell you something about my school life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $