Unit 1 Section Ⅳ Writing(Word教参)-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版)

本讲义核心聚焦高中英语人物描写应用文写作与读后续写微场景训练。应用文写作以“基本信息介绍-成长经历与成就-人物形象总结”为脉络，提供出彩佳句、写作框架及谋篇、遣词造句、句式升级等步骤指导，并附模拟演练与范文；读后续写从情感和动作词汇积累、佳句示例到微场景训练，构建完整学习支架，含多幅辅助图片。 该资料亮点在于融合语言能力与文化意识培养，精选屠呦呦、袁隆平等中国科学家案例，通过倒装、定语从句等句式升级和微场景训练提升表达与思维品质。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后范文与练习帮助学生巩固，有效提升写作能力与跨文化沟通素养。

Section Ⅳ　Writing 写作一　应用文写作——人物描写 　　本单元的写作任务是描写一个人物，通过文字对人物的外貌、个性、爱好以及主要事迹和贡献进行描述和说明。常与书信、电子邮件等结合起来，作为书信或者电子邮件中的一部分内容。 一、开门见山，介绍人物的一些基本信息 1.Known as a famous medical scientist in the Ming Dynasty， Li Shizhen was born in 1518. 李时珍生于1518年，是明代一位著名的医学家。 2.Having a gift for writing， he made up his mind to become a writer when he grew up． 他有写作的天赋，并下决心长大后成为一名作家。 3.Born on 30 December 1930， Tu Youyou is generally acknowledged to be a committed and patient scientist． 屠呦呦出生于1930年12月30日，是人们公认的一位尽职尽责、锲而不舍的科学家。 二、介绍人物的成长经历以及取得的成就 1.She devoted her whole life to scientific research and her scientific findings benefited the people all over the world． 她一生致力于科学研究，她的科学成果造福了全世界人民。 2.In order to finish the task， he visited mountains， called on ordinary people， tasted different kinds of herbs and even did experiments by himself． 为了完成这项任务，他遍游名山大川，走访老百姓，品尝各种药草，甚至亲自做试验。 3.He got an award in 1998 for having played an important part in scientific research． 由于在科学研究中发挥了重要作用，他于1998年获奖。 4.After graduating from Xi’an Jiaotong University， he received a doctor’s degree in computer science． 从西安交通大学毕业后，他获得了计算机科学博士学位。 三、总结概括人物形象 1.Such is Tu Youyou， an ordinary woman who has made great achievements in the field of medicine． 这就是屠呦呦，一位在医学领域取得巨大成就的普通女性。 2.His story tells us that we should value what we have and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life． 他的故事告诉我们，我们应该珍惜我们所拥有的，并尽我们最大的努力去克服生活中的任何困难。 3.She will live in the hearts of the people forever． 她将永远活在人们的心中。 　　你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以The Scientist in My Eyes为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括： 　　（1）人物介绍； 　　（2）值得尊敬和爱戴的原因； 　　（3）你的评价。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式作答。 The Scientist in My Eyes 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 一、合理布局，精心谋篇 二、遣词造句，规范得体 1.中国有很多伟大的科学家，其中我最喜欢的是赵九章。 There are numerous great scientists in China， among whom the one I like most is Zhao Jiuzhang． 2.赵九章，一位杰出的物理学家，也是中国第一颗人造卫星的设计者之一。 Zhao Jiuzhang is an extraordinary physicist， and also one of the designers of China’s first man－made satellite． 3.1933年，他从清华大学毕业。之后，他去了柏林大学学习气象学。 In 1933， he graduated from Tsinghua University．Following this， he went to study meteorology in Berlin University． 4.回到中国后，他把一生都奉献给物理和气候的研究，并因此收获了无数奖项。（commit） After returning to China， he committed his life to the study of physics and climate and consequently he received numerous awards． 5.1968 年见证了这位杰出科学家的巨大陨落。 1968 witnessed the great loss of the brilliant scientist． 6.他对科学和祖国的奉献精神一直激励着我。（inspire sb with sth） He has been inspiring me with the spirit of his devotion to science and our country． 三、句式升级，吸睛亮点 1.用not only ．．．but also ．．．倒装结构升级句2 Not only is Zhao Jiuzhang an extraordinary physicist， but also one of the designers of China’s first man－made satellite． 2.用定语从句（介词＋which）升级句4 After returning to China， he committed his life to the study of physics and climate， for which he received numerous awards． 3.用强调句升级句6 It is the spirit of his devotion to science and our country that he has been inspiring me with． 四、认真誊写，赏心悦目 The Scientist in My Eyes 　　There are numerous great scientists in China， among whom the one I like most is Zhao Jiuzhang． 　　Not only is Zhao Jiuzhang an extraordinary physicist， but also one of the designers of China’s first man－made satellite．In 1933， he graduated from Tsinghua University．Following this， he went to study meteorology in Berlin University．After returning to China， he committed his life to the study of physics and climate， for which he received numerous awards． 　　Undoubtedly， his contributions are of vital significance and he set a good example to me.1968 witnessed the great loss of the brilliant scientist， but it is the spirit of his devotion to science and our country that he has been inspiring me with． 　　假定你是李华。你的新西兰朋友Mark在信中提到对中国历史很感兴趣，想请你给他介绍一位你喜欢的历史人物。请你给Mark回信，内容包括： 　　（1）你喜欢的历史人物； 　　（2）该历史人物的主要贡献； 　　（3）该历史人物对你的影响。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式作答。 Dear Mark， 　　There are many famous people in Chinese history，　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours， Li Hua 参考范文： Dear Mark， 　　There are many famous people in Chinese history， among whom I like Lu Xun best． Lu Xun was a famous writer and fighter in the last century， who made a great contribution to Chinese people． First， he wrote a variety of passages to teach people． Then， he introduced advanced scientific and cultural ideas． Finally， he established a new form of the Chinese novel． 　　He showed us that we should learn and master knowledge to protect ourselves．I will remember him and take him as my light in my life． Yours， Li Hua 写作二　读后续写——微场景训练 词汇 情感描写 ①gentle adj．温柔的；文静的 ②passion n．酷爱；激情 ③mourn vt．& vi．哀悼；忧伤 ④committed adj．尽心尽力的；坚定的；坚信的 ⑤extraordinary adj．不一般的；非凡的；意想不到的 动作描写 ①commit vt．承诺；保证vi．忠于；全心全意投入（工作、活动等） ②acknowledge vt．承认（属实、权威等）；（公开）感谢 ③defeat n．失败；挫败 vt．击败；战胜 ④insist vi．& vt．坚持；坚决要求 ⑤flow n．流；流动；流畅；供应 vi．流；流动 ⑥encounter vt．偶然碰到；遇到n．邂逅；遭遇 佳句 ①Tu Youyou， a committed and patient scientist， was born in Ningbo， China， on 30 December 1930， and graduated from Peking University Medical School in 1955. 屠呦呦，这位尽职尽责、锲而不舍的科学家1930年12月30日出生于中国宁波，1955年毕业于北京大学医学部（原北京医学院）。 ②However， Tu Youyou would not acknowledge defeat． 然而，屠呦呦并不认输。 ③Tu Youyou and her team members even insisted on testing the medicine on themselves to make sure that it was safe． 屠呦呦与团队成员甚至坚持以身试药，以确保药物的安全性。 ④On 18 April 1955， it was reported that Einstein had passed away， and the whole world mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist． 1955年4月18日，噩耗传来，爱因斯坦与世长辞，全世界都哀悼一代科学巨星的陨落。 微场景一　遭遇挫折后，汤姆不气馁，坚持刻苦训练并汲取经验，以坚定的毅力朝着目标奋进。 　　1.Having suffered a defeat in an important match （遭受一次重要比赛失败）， Tom felt discouraged but refused to give up． 2.His coach acknowledged his hard work （教练认可他的努力） and reminded him that every setback was a lesson． 3.Tom insisted on doing extra practice （汤姆坚持多训练）after the regular training， determined to improve himself． One evening， he 4.encountered an experienced player （遇到了一位经验丰富的球员）， who shared valuable tips with him． Encouraged， Tom 5.became more committed to achieving his goal （更加坚定地致力于实现自己的目标）， knowing that with persistence， success would come． 微场景二　被誉为“杂交水稻之父”的农业泰斗袁隆平先生，深受海内外民众爱戴，他的离世令国人悲痛不已，天空下着毛毛细雨，好像在哀悼这位温和非凡的科学家的陨落。 　　1.Acknowledged as one of the greatest scientists （被认为是最伟大的科学家之一） in agriculture， Yuan Longping passed away in Changsha on 22 May 2021.It was misting 2.as if it were mourning the great loss of the gentle extraordinary scientist （好像在哀悼这位温和非凡的科学家的陨落）． Overcome with sorrow， many Chinese people cried their hearts out， 3.tears flowing down their cheeks uncontrollably （泪水不受控制地顺着脸颊流淌）． He 4.committed all his life to studying rice with passion （终生满怀热情地致力于研究水稻）． He always insisted on his dream and he wouldn’t acknowledge defeat whatever difficulties he encountered． Not only was Yuan Longping a genius but he was also a courageous and kind figure loved by people at home and abroad． 1 / 2 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