Unit 3 Our digital lives（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版八年级上册

本讲义聚焦“互联网对青少年生活影响”核心知识点，系统构建“提取论点-逻辑表达”学习支架，涵盖15个核心词汇（如convenient、addicted）、三类功能句式（开头/中间/结尾句）及连接词库（on the one hand等），通过范例解析（审题、谋篇布局）和8个实战写作任务，帮助学生从生活场景提炼利弊论点并转化为有理有据的文字。 该资料特色在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，采用“储素材-品范例-重实战”三阶设计。词汇句式积累夯实语言基础，佳句仿写提升表达灵活性，辩证分析训练批判性思维，如典例用“every coin has two sides”引导全面看待问题。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后实战练习覆盖演讲稿、议论文等题型，助力学生自主巩固与查漏补缺。

Unit 3 Our digital lives 单元同步写作讲义 本单元的话题属于“人与社会”及“科技与生活”范畴。它涉及如何客观描述互联网对青少年日常生活的影响（如社交方式、学习途径），以及如何辩证地分析科技带来的便利与挑战。这不仅仅是英语写作，更是批判性思维（Critical Thinking）与信息素养的训练。 该部分旨在培养学生“观点阐述”与“逻辑论证”的能力。学生需要学会从具体的生活场景（如刷短视频、在线查资料）中提取关键论点（利与弊），并将其转化为有理有据的文字表达。写作过程强调逻辑性与条理性，即利用给定的连接词库（如 on the one hand, however, in my opinion 等）来清晰描绘因果关系和转折关系，避免片面极端的看法。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. convenient 方便的 2. communicate 交流 3. information 信息 4. knowledge 知识 5. entertainment 娱乐 6. addicted 上瘾的/沉迷的 7. harmful 有害的 8. waste 浪费 9. privacy 隐私 10. cyberbullying 网络欺凌 11. wisely 明智地 12. limit 限制 13. focus on 专注于 14. stay in touch 保持联系 15. double-edged sword 双刃剑 句式积累 开头句： 1. Nowadays, the internet plays an important role in our daily lives. 如今，互联网在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要的角色。 2. As we know, the internet brings both convenience and problems to teenagers. 众所周知，互联网给青少年既带来了便利也带来了问题。 3. It is widely believed that the internet has changed the way we live and study. 人们普遍认为互联网改变了我们生活和学习的方式。 中间句： 1. On the one hand, it allows us to search for information quickly and easily. 一方面，它允许我们快速且容易地搜索信息。 2. However, spending too much time on social media is harmful to our eyes. 然而，花太多时间在社交媒体上对我们的眼睛有害。 Some students get addicted to online games, which affects their studies. 一些学生沉迷于网络游戏，这影响了他们的学业。 结尾句： 1. In my opinion, we should use the internet wisely. 在我看来，我们应该明智地使用互联网。 2. In conclusion, the internet is a useful tool if we use it correctly. 总之，如果我们正确使用互联网，它是一个有用的工具。 3. Only in this way can we enjoy the benefits of the internet safely. 只有这样，我们才能安全地享受互联网带来的好处。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：I love reading science fiction novels, and I post my book reviews online. 仿写：我喜欢看英语电影，并且我在网上分享我的学习笔记。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Every time I write a review, I get hundreds of comments. 仿写：每次我遇到难题，我都能在网上找到答案。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：The internet helps us develop our interests. 仿写：在线学习帮助我们拓宽视野。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】1. I love watching English movies, and I share my study notes online. 2. Every time I meet a difficult problem, I can find the answer online. 3. Learning online helps us broaden our horizons. 典例 如今，互联网已经彻底改变了我们的生活，请以“The Internet changes our lives”为题，写一篇短文，谈论使用网络的优缺点。 要求： 1. 文章应包含图中所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于70。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数。) The Internet changes our lives We all know that the Internet is changing our lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕“互联网改变生活”展开； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述互联网对生活的常规影响； ③提示：需涵盖互联网使用的优缺点，结合购物、娱乐、学业辅助等优点及浪费时间、伤害身体、信息误导等缺点展开。 谋篇布局 开头 点明互联网改变生活这一主题。 中间 分别阐述互联网带来的优点 (购物便捷、娱乐放松、辅助学业) 与缺点 (浪费时间、伤害身体、信息误导)。 结尾 提出应明智使用互联网，享受益处、规避问题。 佳作展示 We all know that the Internet is changing our lives. It has become an important part of our daily life. However, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, the Internet brings us many advantages. We can shop online, listen to music and watch TV to relax. Also, it helps with our schoolwork because we can search for useful information easily. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Some teenagers spend too much time on it, which is a waste of time. What’s more, using the computer for too long is bad for our eyes and backs. In my opinion, we should use the Internet wisely to make our lives better. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ① every coin has two sides 凡事都有两面性 ② on the one hand... on the other hand... 一方面……另一方面…… ③ be bad for 对……有害 高分句型： ① However, every coin has two sides. （“However”表示转折，引出下文的辩证分析） ② What’s more, sitting in front of the computer for a long time is bad for our eyes and backs. （“What’s more”表示递进，补充说明另一个缺点；“sitting...”动名词短语作主语，体现语法多样性） （一） （25-26八上·广州市白云区·期末） 你校英文报社正在开展主题为“Teenagers and the Internet: A Balanced View”的征文活动。请你根据以下三方面的内容提示，写一篇短文，谈谈你对互联网影响的看法，以及如何合理使用互联网。 注意：1. 短文需包含征稿要求的所有内容，可适当拓展； 2. 写作词数100左右，作文开头已给出，不纳入总词数； 3. 文中不得透露真实姓名、学校等个人信息，否则不予评分； 4. 内容积极向上，表达清晰连贯。 Teenagers and the Internet: A Balanced View As teenagers growing up in the digital age, we experience both the advantages and challenges of the Internet. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Teenagers and the Internet: A Balanced View As teenagers growing up in the digital age, we experience both the advantages and challenges of the Internet. On the positive side, we can take online courses to learn new skills and get study information easily. We also stay in touch with friends and make new ones who share our hobbies. However, it has negative effects. We may spend too much time on social media, which distracts us from schoolwork. We can also be exposed to false information. To use it wisely, we should set a daily time limit for screen time and learn to tell true information from false. In this way, we can enjoy the Internet’s benefits without its risks. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文； ②时态：以 “一般现在时” 为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，需覆盖积极影响、消极影响和合理做法三方面，注意内容完整，逻辑清晰，表达简洁连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给开头，点明互联网对青少年兼具利弊的核心观点； 第二步，分别阐述互联网的积极作用和消极影响； 第三步，提出合理使用互联网的具体做法。 [亮点词汇] ①on the positive side从积极方面来说 ②distract from使……分心 ③be exposed to接触到 ④tell…from…区分……与…… [高分句型] ①We also stay in touch with friends and make new ones who share our hobbies.（who引导的定语从句） ②We may spend too much time on social media, which distracts us from schoolwork.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） （二） 如今，几乎每家每户都有电脑、网络。越来越多的学生也喜欢上网。针对这一情况，你发表了一篇演讲。你认为上网既有优点又有缺点。同学们要想办法阻止自己花太多时间在上网这件事上。 主要内容： 1. 好处：帮助我们学生学习 (自行添加一个好处) ； 2. 弊端：长时间上网对学生健康有害 (自行添加一个弊端) ； 3. 建议：找到更多的兴趣爱好而不是沉迷于网游 (自行添加一到两个建议) 。 要求：用词恰当，内容连贯, 层次清晰, 书写规范。内容不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。文中不得出现姓名和学校等真实信息。 参考词汇：be addicted to (doing) sth. 沉迷于 Hello, my name is Li Hua. Thank you for listening to my speech. Nowadays, almost every family has computers and the Internet. And more and more middle school students are interested in surfing the Internet. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Hello, my name is Li Hua. Thank you for listening to my speech. Nowadays, almost every family has computers and the Internet. And more and more middle school students are interested in surfing the Internet. For one thing, people can search for a lot of useful information with the help of the computer. For another, people can read electronic books from the Internet. However, as every coin has two sides, computers also have some disadvantages. For example, many people spend too much time in playing computer games which affects their study and work. What’s more, spending too much time on computers is bad for people’s eyes. Weighing up pros and cons, I think that computers are very useful for people if they can be used properly. [写作步骤] [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿，用一般现在时为主 明确人称：第一人称(I/my)，第三人称(they) 注意事项：题干中没有给出明确的要点，考生要结合题干，分析电脑的利弊及谈论自己的看法；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明主题，介绍电脑使用的现状 主体段：谈谈电脑的优缺点 结尾段：谈谈自己对使用电脑的看法 [第三步：要点展开] 要点：电脑的使用情况 使用现状：almost every family has computers and the Internet/more and more middle school students are interested in surfing the Internet/has gained more and more popularity/nearly everyone can use computers等。 优点好处：search for a lot of useful information/read electronic books from the Internet/connect with others more easily/broad horizons等。 缺点弊端：spend too much time in playing computer games/affected their study and work/bad for people’s eyes/make our body weak等。 个人看法：are very useful for people if they can be used properly/should use the computers wisely/make good use of the advantages of computers等。 （三） 现在是高科技时代，智能手机的出现让我们的生活发生很大的变化，请根据下面的要点提示，以“Smartphones in My Eyes”为题，写一篇英语文章，谈谈智能手机对我们生活产生的利弊影响，并就如何正确使用手机表达自己的观点。 要点提示： 优点：look for information, watch short videos, order food, find places. . . 缺点：be bad for our eyes, get lost in games, . . . 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2. 文章内容需包括以上要点，可适当发挥； 3. 90-100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Smartphones in My Eyes The smartphone is one of the most important inventions in the world. It has changed people’s life greatly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Smartphones in My Eyes The smartphone is one of the most important inventions in the world. It has changed people’s lives greatly. Smartphones bring many benefits to our daily lives. For instance, we can use them to look for information, watch interesting short videos, order food online, and find places with maps. On the other hand, smartphones have some drawbacks. Using them for a long time is bad for our eyes. Also, some people get lost in games, which may lead to poor grades and health problems. Therefore, I think we should use smartphones properly. We can limit screen time and use them mainly for study. In this way, we can make the most of smartphones without being harmed. 写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，主要使用一般现在时 明确要点：谈智能手机的利弊 确定人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主（I/they） 注意事项：90-100词且不能出现真实人名、校名 [第二步：构思布局] 二段式结构: 开头段：点明智能手机是重要发明，改变了人们的生活（已给出） 主体段：谈智能手机的利弊，并给出正确使用手机的观点 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一：手机的利弊 优点：look for information/watch short videos/order food/find places/shopping online/order tickets等。 缺点：be bad for our eyes/get lost in games/ leak of personal information‌/poor grades and health problems/causing back pain and poor blood circulation等。 要点二：发表观点use smartphones properly/ limit screen time/ use them mainly for study/finish homework first before playing/ stay away from phones when studying等。 （四） （25-26八上·深圳市宝安区·期中） 人工智能正在悄然改变我们的学习方式。假定你是李华，你的学校计划做一期相关主题的演讲比赛，题为“How AI changes the way we study”。请你根据以下要点，并结合你的观点，完成一份演讲稿。 AI辅助学习带来的优点 ①免费家庭教师 ②…… 过度依赖AI可能产生的问题 ①…… ②…… 你的看法 ①…… 参考词汇：家庭教师tutor   工具tool 要求：1. 词数为80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 How AI changes the way we study AI has become one of the most important learning tools in our daily lives, ___________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 How AI changes the way we study AI has become one of the most important learning tools in our daily lives, and it brings us many changes. On the one hand, AI acts as a free tutor. It can help us solve problems anytime and find information quickly. It makes learning efficient. On the other hand, relying on AI too much may cause problems. We might become lazy and lose the ability to think independently. In my opinion, AI is just a tool. We should use it wisely to help us improve ourselves, instead of letting it do our homework for us. Let’s be the master of learning. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接开头，阐述AI带来的优点； 第二步：指出过度依赖AI的弊端； 第三步：表明个人观点。 [亮点词汇] ①efficient高效的 ②rely on依赖 ③independently独立地 ④wisely明智地 ⑤instead of代替，而不是 [高分句型] ①On the other hand, relying on AI too much may cause problems. (动名词作主语) ②It can help us solve problems anytime and find information quickly. (help sb. do sth结构) （五） 你所在的班级近期即将举行一场关于“如何正确使用智能手机”的讨论。你的英语老师请你围绕“我对智能手机的看法”这一主题写一篇短文，在班上分享你的观点。 注意： 1. 参考词汇：advantage优势； 2. 文章应包括所有要点，并可适当拓展信息； 3. 词数80词左右 （文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 4. 不能透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Nowadays, smartphones have played an important role in our daily life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Nowadays, smartphones have played an important role in our daily life. They are useful learning tools. We can look up new words and learn knowledge from online courses. We can also keep in touch with our friends and family easily. However, some students spend too much time on smartphones, playing games or watching videos. This not only affects their study but also does harm to their eyes. In my opinion, we can set a time limit for using them every day. And we should use them mainly for learning and communication. Let’s make good use of smartphones to make our life better. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别阐述智能手机的优势和问题，并提出自己的建议。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①look up new words查找生词 ②keep in touch with与……保持联系 ③do harm to对……造成伤害 ④make good use of 好好利用…… [高分句型] ①This not only affects their study but also does harm to their eyes. (not only...but also...句型) ②Let’s make good use of smartphones to make our life better. (Let’s开头的祈使句) （六） （25-26八上·广州市铁一中学·期中） 如今，科技发展日新月异，智能手机(smart phones)、智能家居(smart homes)、在线学习(online learning)等项目已广泛进入我们的生活。请以“How Technology Changes Our Lives”为题，根据所给提示完成一篇不少于80词的英语短文，描述科技给你的生活带来的变化，并谈谈你对科技发展的看法。 Changes technology brings us communication: talk to people far away faster payment: pay with phones transportation: travel a long distance more conveniently Your opinions on technology … … 要求：1.约80词，围绕所给提示展开，可适当发挥，但要注意语言通顺，流畅，准确。 2.不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 How Technology Changes Our Lives Technology has changed our lives in many ways. First, we can talk to people far away faster through smartphones. Second, paying with phones makes shopping more convenient. Third, transportation like high-speed trains helps us travel long distances easily. In my opinion, technology brings us a better life. It saves time and makes work easier. However, we should use it properly and not depend on it too much. I believe technology will continue to improve our lives in the future. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：需涵盖通信、支付、交通的变化及个人观点。 【写作步骤】第一步：引入主题，概括科技对生活的改变； 第二步：分点描述通信、支付、交通的具体变化； 第三步：表达个人看法，包括积极影响和注意事项，最后总结展望。 【亮点词汇】①convenient便利的 ②properly合理地 ③improve改善 【高分句型】I believe technology will continue to improve our lives in the future. (宾语从句) （七） （25-26八上·广州市华南师范大学附属中学·期中） 我们学校广播站将举办一期以电脑为主题的演讲比赛，号召全体同学积极参加。假如你是八年级学生李华，请你根据以下所给内容提示，写一篇80词左右的英语演讲稿。 电脑的地位 最伟大的发明之一；在我们的日常生活中越来越重要 电脑的用途 1）搜索信息，获得更多新知识，有助于我们学习； 2）听歌、看电影，有利于放松心情； 3）…… 使用建议 1）每天使用时间不宜过长，注意保护眼睛； 2）…… 你使用电脑的心得 …… 写作要求： 1. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，并作适当发挥； 2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名； 4. 字数要求80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Good afternoon, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Grade 8. Thank you for listening to my speech. Today, I am going to talk about computers here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Good afternoon, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Grade 8. Thank you for listening to my speech. Today I am going to talk about computers here. Computers are one of the greatest inventions and play an important role in our daily lives. We can search for information to get more knowledge for studies, listen to music and watch movies to relax, and communicate with friends easily. However, we shouldn’t use them for too long every day and must protect our eyes. Also, avoid bad online information. In my opinion, computers are useful if we use them properly, making our lives more convenient and colorful. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，围绕电脑展开。 ②时态：时态为一般现在时。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意包含所有内容，适当添加细节，使演讲稿内容连贯且符合词数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借已给出的开头开启演讲，引出电脑的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从电脑的地位、用途和使用建议等方面来介绍电脑； 第三步，书写结语。结束演讲。 [亮点词汇] ①one of the greatest inventions 最伟大的发明之一 ②play an important role 起重要作用 ③search for information 搜索信息 ④protect our eyes 保护眼睛 ⑤make lives more convenient and colorful 让生活更便利多彩 [高分句型] ①Also, avoid bad online information. (祈使句) ②In my opinion, computers are useful if we use them properly, making our lives more convenient and colorful. (if引导条件状语从句) （八） （24-25八上·广州市南武教育集团·期中） 假如你是Tom，你收到一份礼物叫我的学习小助手“ StudyMate”。请你根据以下表格的提示内容以“My StudyMate”为题写一篇作文，介绍你的学习小助手。 我的学习小助手 StudyMate 外观 一个手掌大小的设备，方便携带。 功能 1. 内有多种资源，如电子词典、在线课程等。 2. 时间管理，可以设置学习任务的提醒。 3. ……(补充一种功能) 影响 1. 学习上的影响。 2. 生活上的影响。 要求：80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数)，可适当发挥。 生词：device设备 My StudyMate I have just received a present called “StudyMate.” ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 My StudyMate I have just received a present called “StudyMate.” It’s as small as my hand, so I can carry it anywhere. StudyMate is helpful in many ways. It has an E-dictionary and online classes. It can help me plan my study time. With a schedule, it reminds me of the tasks so that I am able to do everything on time. In addition, StudyMate can record voices. When I want to record lectures or important discussions, it will help me. And I can listen to these recordings later to review them. StudyMate has made my school life easier. I can look up the words and watch lessons anytime. It’s a big help for my English and maths. Now, I study better and have more free time. In my daily life, StudyMate is also very useful. It helps me manage my time and stay on top of my tasks. Whether it’s remembering friends’ birthdays or doing housework, StudyMate is always there to help me. StudyMate is a great invention. Thanks to it, I’m doing great in and out of school and having fun too! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括外观、功能（已给出两种，需补充一种）以及影响（学习和生活两方面），考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。用一句话引出要介绍的学习小助手。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。描述其外观、功能和影响。 第三步：书写结语。表达对设备的感激和喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①in many ways在许多方面 ②in addition此外 ③look up查阅 [高分句型] ①With a schedule, it reminds me of the tasks so that I am able to do everything on time. (so that引导结果状语从句) ②When I want to record lectures or important discussions, it will help me. (when引导时间状语从句) $Unit 3 Our digital lives 单元同步写作讲义 本单元的话题属于“人与社会”及“科技与生活”范畴。它涉及如何客观描述互联网对青少年日常生活的影响（如社交方式、学习途径），以及如何辩证地分析科技带来的便利与挑战。这不仅仅是英语写作，更是批判性思维（Critical Thinking）与信息素养的训练。 该部分旨在培养学生“观点阐述”与“逻辑论证”的能力。学生需要学会从具体的生活场景（如刷短视频、在线查资料）中提取关键论点（利与弊），并将其转化为有理有据的文字表达。写作过程强调逻辑性与条理性，即利用给定的连接词库（如 on the one hand, however, in my opinion 等）来清晰描绘因果关系和转折关系，避免片面极端的看法。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. convenient 方便的 2. communicate 交流 3. information 信息 4. knowledge 知识 5. entertainment 娱乐 6. addicted 上瘾的/沉迷的 7. harmful 有害的 8. waste 浪费 9. privacy 隐私 10. cyberbullying 网络欺凌 11. wisely 明智地 12. limit 限制 13. focus on 专注于 14. stay in touch 保持联系 15. double-edged sword 双刃剑 句式积累 开头句： 1. Nowadays, the internet plays an important role in our daily lives. 如今，互联网在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要的角色。 2. As we know, the internet brings both convenience and problems to teenagers. 众所周知，互联网给青少年既带来了便利也带来了问题。 3. It is widely believed that the internet has changed the way we live and study. 人们普遍认为互联网改变了我们生活和学习的方式。 中间句： 1. On the one hand, it allows us to search for information quickly and easily. 一方面，它允许我们快速且容易地搜索信息。 2. However, spending too much time on social media is harmful to our eyes. 然而，花太多时间在社交媒体上对我们的眼睛有害。 Some students get addicted to online games, which affects their studies. 一些学生沉迷于网络游戏，这影响了他们的学业。 结尾句： 1. In my opinion, we should use the internet wisely. 在我看来，我们应该明智地使用互联网。 2. In conclusion, the internet is a useful tool if we use it correctly. 总之，如果我们正确使用互联网，它是一个有用的工具。 3. Only in this way can we enjoy the benefits of the internet safely. 只有这样，我们才能安全地享受互联网带来的好处。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：I love reading science fiction novels, and I post my book reviews online. 仿写：我喜欢看英语电影，并且我在网上分享我的学习笔记。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Every time I write a review, I get hundreds of comments. 仿写：每次我遇到难题，我都能在网上找到答案。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：The internet helps us develop our interests. 仿写：在线学习帮助我们拓宽视野。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 如今，互联网已经彻底改变了我们的生活，请以“The Internet changes our lives”为题，写一篇短文，谈论使用网络的优缺点。 要求： 1. 文章应包含图中所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于70。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数。) The Internet changes our lives We all know that the Internet is changing our lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕“互联网改变生活”展开； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述互联网对生活的常规影响； ③提示：需涵盖互联网使用的优缺点，结合购物、娱乐、学业辅助等优点及浪费时间、伤害身体、信息误导等缺点展开。 谋篇布局 开头 点明互联网改变生活这一主题。 中间 分别阐述互联网带来的优点 (购物便捷、娱乐放松、辅助学业) 与缺点 (浪费时间、伤害身体、信息误导)。 结尾 提出应明智使用互联网，享受益处、规避问题。 佳作展示 We all know that the Internet is changing our lives. It has become an important part of our daily life. However, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, the Internet brings us many advantages. We can shop online, listen to music and watch TV to relax. Also, it helps with our schoolwork because we can search for useful information easily. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Some teenagers spend too much time on it, which is a waste of time. What’s more, using the computer for too long is bad for our eyes and backs. In my opinion, we should use the Internet wisely to make our lives better. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ① every coin has two sides 凡事都有两面性 ② on the one hand... on the other hand... 一方面……另一方面…… ③ be bad for 对……有害 高分句型： ① However, every coin has two sides. （“However”表示转折，引出下文的辩证分析） ② What’s more, sitting in front of the computer for a long time is bad for our eyes and backs. （“What’s more”表示递进，补充说明另一个缺点；“sitting...”动名词短语作主语，体现语法多样性） （一） （25-26八上·广州市白云区·期末） 你校英文报社正在开展主题为“Teenagers and the Internet: A Balanced View”的征文活动。请你根据以下三方面的内容提示，写一篇短文，谈谈你对互联网影响的看法，以及如何合理使用互联网。 注意：1. 短文需包含征稿要求的所有内容，可适当拓展； 2. 写作词数100左右，作文开头已给出，不纳入总词数； 3. 文中不得透露真实姓名、学校等个人信息，否则不予评分； 4. 内容积极向上，表达清晰连贯。 Teenagers and the Internet: A Balanced View As teenagers growing up in the digital age, we experience both the advantages and challenges of the Internet. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 如今，几乎每家每户都有电脑、网络。越来越多的学生也喜欢上网。针对这一情况，你发表了一篇演讲。你认为上网既有优点又有缺点。同学们要想办法阻止自己花太多时间在上网这件事上。 主要内容： 1. 好处：帮助我们学生学习 (自行添加一个好处) ； 2. 弊端：长时间上网对学生健康有害 (自行添加一个弊端) ； 3. 建议：找到更多的兴趣爱好而不是沉迷于网游 (自行添加一到两个建议) 。 要求：用词恰当，内容连贯, 层次清晰, 书写规范。内容不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。文中不得出现姓名和学校等真实信息。 参考词汇：be addicted to (doing) sth. 沉迷于 Hello, my name is Li Hua. Thank you for listening to my speech. Nowadays, almost every family has computers and the Internet. And more and more middle school students are interested in surfing the Internet. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 现在是高科技时代，智能手机的出现让我们的生活发生很大的变化，请根据下面的要点提示，以“Smartphones in My Eyes”为题，写一篇英语文章，谈谈智能手机对我们生活产生的利弊影响，并就如何正确使用手机表达自己的观点。 要点提示： 优点：look for information, watch short videos, order food, find places. . . 缺点：be bad for our eyes, get lost in games, . . . 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2. 文章内容需包括以上要点，可适当发挥； 3. 90-100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Smartphones in My Eyes The smartphone is one of the most important inventions in the world. It has changed people’s life greatly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） （25-26八上·深圳市宝安区·期中） 人工智能正在悄然改变我们的学习方式。假定你是李华，你的学校计划做一期相关主题的演讲比赛，题为“How AI changes the way we study”。请你根据以下要点，并结合你的观点，完成一份演讲稿。 AI辅助学习带来的优点 ①免费家庭教师 ②…… 过度依赖AI可能产生的问题 ①…… ②…… 你的看法 ①…… 参考词汇：家庭教师tutor   工具tool 要求：1. 词数为80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 How AI changes the way we study AI has become one of the most important learning tools in our daily lives, ___________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 你所在的班级近期即将举行一场关于“如何正确使用智能手机”的讨论。你的英语老师请你围绕“我对智能手机的看法”这一主题写一篇短文，在班上分享你的观点。 注意： 1. 参考词汇：advantage优势； 2. 文章应包括所有要点，并可适当拓展信息； 3. 词数80词左右 （文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 4. 不能透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Nowadays, smartphones have played an important role in our daily life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） （25-26八上·广州市铁一中学·期中） 如今，科技发展日新月异，智能手机(smart phones)、智能家居(smart homes)、在线学习(online learning)等项目已广泛进入我们的生活。请以“How Technology Changes Our Lives”为题，根据所给提示完成一篇不少于80词的英语短文，描述科技给你的生活带来的变化，并谈谈你对科技发展的看法。 Changes technology brings us communication: talk to people far away faster payment: pay with phones transportation: travel a long distance more conveniently Your opinions on technology … … 要求：1.约80词，围绕所给提示展开，可适当发挥，但要注意语言通顺，流畅，准确。 2.不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） （25-26八上·广州市华南师范大学附属中学·期中） 我们学校广播站将举办一期以电脑为主题的演讲比赛，号召全体同学积极参加。假如你是八年级学生李华，请你根据以下所给内容提示，写一篇80词左右的英语演讲稿。 电脑的地位 最伟大的发明之一；在我们的日常生活中越来越重要 电脑的用途 1）搜索信息，获得更多新知识，有助于我们学习； 2）听歌、看电影，有利于放松心情； 3）…… 使用建议 1）每天使用时间不宜过长，注意保护眼睛； 2）…… 你使用电脑的心得 …… 写作要求： 1. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，并作适当发挥； 2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名； 4. 字数要求80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Good afternoon, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Grade 8. Thank you for listening to my speech. Today, I am going to talk about computers here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） （24-25八上·广州市南武教育集团·期中） 假如你是Tom，你收到一份礼物叫我的学习小助手“ StudyMate”。请你根据以下表格的提示内容以“My StudyMate”为题写一篇作文，介绍你的学习小助手。 我的学习小助手 StudyMate 外观 一个手掌大小的设备，方便携带。 功能 1. 内有多种资源，如电子词典、在线课程等。 2. 时间管理，可以设置学习任务的提醒。 3. ……(补充一种功能) 影响 1. 学习上的影响。 2. 生活上的影响。 要求：80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数)，可适当发挥。 生词：device设备 My StudyMate I have just received a present called “StudyMate.” ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $