Unit 6 Touring the World Period 5 Section B 2a-2c-课件2026-2027学年鲁教版（五四学制）英语六年级上册

该初中英语课件围绕“邮件写作”核心知识点，通过复习旧地点（如Daming Lake、Mount Taishan）导入，以Waikiki Beach邮件示例为支架，用思维导图梳理“location、things to see、things to do、feeling”结构，引导学生迁移至烟台金沙滩写作，构建从输入到输出的学习脉络。 其亮点在于借助思维导图培养思维品质，通过自我检查清单提升学习能力，结合生动表达（如“soft sand, fresh air”）强化语言能力。采用示例分析与合作修改方法，学生能掌握写作策略，教师可依托结构化资源高效开展教学，助力提升学生英语写作与跨文化表达能力。

年 级：六年级 学 科：英语（鲁教版） 主讲人： 学 校： Unit 6 Touring the World Period 5 Section B 2a-2c Practise improving your first draft by working with the teacher to make it better. Learn how to organise your ideas by looking at the example passage. Find the lively expressions and try to use them in your own writing. Learning objectives 2 3 1 Revision Daming Lake Mount Taishan New Zealand Chengdu 假设你参加了学校“ 探索美丽海岸线” 课外活动，游览 了烟台金沙滩景区。请你以李华的身份给外教Ms. White写一封电子邮件，向她介绍烟台金沙滩景区。 写作要求：格式正确，条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范，60词左右。 Writing task 2a Look at the passage and find the text type. It’s an e-mail from Lily to Teng Fei . Yours, Best wishes, Bye for now, Dear , / Hi , From what aspects (方面) does Lily talk about Waikiki Beach? Skim and answer. things to see things to see things to do feeling location Read again and finish the thinking map. Brainstorm and draw a thinking map of Yantai Golden Beach. Scan the passage and write down the useful expressions. Words • Linking words: and, or, also, such as • Descriptive words: amazing, interesting, wonderful • Colour words: blue, green, pink, orange, purple Sentences • It’s in ... • The beach has ... • There are ... • People can ... there. (location) (things to see) (things to do) beautiful logical vivid A sample writing How are you? I want to tell you about Yantai Golden Beach. It is in Yantai, Shandong, and near the Bohai Sea. It is a popular tourist spot and famous for it's white sand, clear blue water, and sculptures of sea animal. The beach has wonderful views, especially at sunrise and sunset. Things to see People can pick seashells, play beach volleyball, and also have picnics here. There are many interesting things to do, such as watch sea birds and take photos. Would you like visit this beautiful place? Things to do No personal feeling or opinion Proper email opening and closing Location Dear Ms. White, Best wishes, Li Hua There are many interesting things to do, such as watch sea birds and take photos. It is amazing because the sand feels soft and the air smells fresh. What can we do? Dear Ms. White, Linking words Descriptive words How are you? I want to tell you about Yantai Golden Beach. It is in Yantai, Shandong, and near the Bohai Sea. It is a popular tourist spot and famous for it's white sand, clear blue water, and sculptures of sea animal. The beach has wonderful views, especially at sunrise and sunset. People can pick seashells, play beach volleyball, and also have picnics here. There are many interesting things to do, such as watch sea birds and take photos. Would you like visit this beautiful place? Grammar and spelling mistakes Colour words Best wishes, Li Hua 1. It is a popular tourist spot and famous for its white sand, clear blue water, and sculptures of sea animals. 2. There are many interesting things to do, such as watching sea birds and taking photos. Would you like to visit this How to correct them? beautiful place? Dear Ms. White, How are you? I want to tell you about Yantai Golden Beach. It is in Yantai , Shandong , and near the Bohai Sea . It is a popular tourist spot and famous for its white sand, clear blue water, and sculptures of sea animals . The beach has wonderful views, especially at sunrise and sunset. People can pick seashells, play beach volleyball, and also have picnics here . There are many interesting things to do, such as watching sea birds and taking photos. It is amazing because the sand feels soft and the air smells fresh. Would you like to visit this beautiful place? Best wishes, A better version Li Hua Writing self-checklist Self-assessment and self-editing Required task (必做) Polish your second draft into the final perfect version. Optional task (选做) Choose a tourist spot by yourself and write a short introduction of it. Homework Unit 6 Touring the World Period 5 Section B 2a-2c $