专题10 申请信、咨询信、答复信(回信)（专项训练）（全国通用）2027年高考英语一轮复习讲练测

**基本信息** 聚焦申请信、咨询信、答复信三类文体，构建“基础规范-创新突破-真题实战”三阶训练体系，融合语言能力培养与跨文化交际思维，实现从格式到高阶表达的系统性突破。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |模拟·基础演练|申请信4题、咨询信4题|格式规范+核心句式+固定结构|从文体格式差异到语言得体性，构建基础能力框架| |重难·创新演练|每类信3个创新点|情境细节具象化+分层逻辑构建+语体精准适配|突破模板化表达，培养跨文化交际思维品质| |真题·实战演练|申请信3题、咨询信3题、答复信4题|高考评分标准适配+高频考点强化|通过真题验证方法迁移性，提升应试学习能力|

第10讲 申请信、咨询信、答复信(回信)（专项训练）（原卷版） 目 录 模拟·基础演练 1 重难·创新演练 7 真题·实战演练 13 模拟·基础演练 目标一：格式零失误，精准区分五类文体专属范式 熟练掌握申请信、咨询信、答复信(回信)三类文体的差异化标准格式，清晰区分公共公示类与私人交际类文体的格式差异。 目标二：表达得体地道，摒弃模板化生硬输出 熟记三类文体专属核心句式、话题搭配与交际用语，明确各类文体语体特征。 目标三：逻辑清晰饱满，补齐内容空洞核心短板 熟练掌握三类文体高分固定结构。 目标四：稳定高分输出，适配高考精细化评分 掌握三类文体句式升级技巧，摆脱句式堆砌问题，提升行文层次感与高级感。严格把控高考词数规范，规避词数不足、超标失分。兼顾格式规范、语言得体、逻辑清晰、内容充实四大评分维度，打磨细节短板，适配高考精细化评分标准，实现申请信、咨询信、答复信(回信)三类题型稳定高分输出。 申请信 假定你是李华，得知学校要举办英语周活动，其间要举办多场晚会，需要招聘晚会主持人。请你给英语周组委会的刘老师写一封申请信。 内容包括： 1. 信息来源，申请意愿； 2. 自我介绍，申请理由； 3. 表示谢意， 盼望回复。 注意：1.字数：100左右2.可适当补充细节 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____________________________________________________________________________________________ 假定你是李华，2022年杭州将举办亚运会，你从网上得知杭州亚运会组委会（Hangzhou Asian Games Organ zing Committee）正在招募志愿者，请你给组委会写一封信，申请成为志愿者。内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 申请理由； 3. 希望获批。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 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假设你是李华，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor) 的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。 请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1.自我介绍（包括中英文能力）； 2.参加意图（帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化）； 3.希望获准。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 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假定你是李华。2022北京冬奥组委会正在招募志愿者，其职责为接待各国运动员及宣传中国文化，组委会要求志愿者能够熟练运用英语，请你用英文写一封申请信。 内容包括： 1. 申请原因。 2. 你的优势。 3. 相关经历。 注意：词数100左右。 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咨询信 假定你是李华，作为交换生在国外某学校学习，得知该校即将举办国际服装文化节(International Costume Day),你有意向参加服装展示环节，请你写一封邮件咨询相关信息，内容包括: 1.写信目的:2.咨询信息(如服饰要求，展示形式等)3.表达期待 注意:1. 词数100左右:2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯. 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假定你是李华，打算报名参加2022年北京冬奥会全球志愿者。你的新西兰笔友Tim有相关经验，请你写一封信向他咨询。 内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 咨询内容； 3.期待回复。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tim, 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Yours Sincerely Li Hua 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Jenny 正在做一份关于中国移动支付（mobile payment ）的问卷调查 （survey） ，你是她的重点采访对象． 内容包括： 1． 你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况； 2． 移动支付带来的好处； 3． 你的看法． 参考词汇：微信： Wechat 支付宝：Alipay 二维码： QR code 注意： 1． 词数 100 左右； 2． 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯． 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假定你是李华，正在英国伦敦参加短期语言培训，计划课余时间去兼职。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。请给该公司发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。 注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 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重难·创新演练 申请信 创新一：情境细节创新（拒绝空泛套话，具象专属场景） 创新核心：摒弃 I am hard-working and outgoing 等万能空话，用具体经历+岗位适配能力举证，贴合高考真实申请场景（社团、志愿者、研学、交换生等），内容专属有细节。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I am good at communication and have rich experience in voluntary work. I am qualified for this activity. 创新升级满分例句（适配国际展会志愿者申请）： Having hosted multiple school English salons and assisted teachers in receiving foreign student visitors, I have mastered basic oral English communication skills and know how to offer patient and accurate service to overseas guests. 中文解析：我曾多次主持校园英语沙龙，并协助老师接待外籍来访学生，熟练掌握基础英语口语沟通技巧，能够为外籍宾客提供耐心、精准的服务。 考场优势：有具体经历、有对应能力、有岗位适配性，无空泛夸赞，完全贴合高考应用文“内容具体、逻辑真实”的评分要求。 创新二：写作视角创新（分层递进，双向适配） 创新核心：打破单向自我夸赞，构建岗位需求—个人能力—团队价值闭环，不只写“我能收获什么”，更突出“我能贡献什么”，体现思辨性，拉高作文层级。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I hope to take part in this program to improve my English ability and broaden my horizons. 创新升级满分例句（适配海外研学/交换生项目申请）： This exchange program requires students with good teamwork awareness and cross-cultural communication competence. Apart from solid English foundations, I am also an active team player who can cooperate well with international peers and contribute unique perspectives during group discussions. 中文解析：本次交换项目要求学生具备良好的团队协作意识与跨文化沟通能力。我除了扎实的英语基础外，还具备优秀的团队协作能力，能够与国际同伴高效配合，并在小组研讨中输出独特观点。 考场优势：先对标项目核心要求，再匹配自身能力，最后点明个人价值，逻辑分层清晰，区别于普通学生的浅层自荐，契合高考高阶写作标准。 创新三：交际功能创新（自荐+举证+履职承诺） 创新核心：摒弃结尾万能套话，用具体、可落地的履职规划替代空泛请求，融合诚意表态、工作承诺，完成多重交际目的，提升说服力。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I sincerely hope you can give me this chance. I will try my best if I am chosen. 创新升级满分例句（适配校园文创社团/专项岗位申请）： If I am lucky enough to be admitted, I will properly balance my schoolwork and club tasks, strictly follow all activity rules, and take the initiative to complete every assigned job. I will also make full preparations for temporary tasks to ensure smooth progress of club activities. 中文解析：若有幸入选，我将合理平衡学业与社团工作，严格遵守活动规章制度，主动完成各项分配任务。同时提前做好准备，灵活应对临时工作安排，保障社团活动顺利开展。 考场优势：承诺具体、落地可行，不是空洞表态，兼具诚意与责任感，完善申请信交际功能，大幅提升作文完整度与质感。 咨询信 创新一：场景创新——跳出校园局限，落实跨文化真实情境 创新核心：摒弃传统咨询校内选课、社团、考试等老旧模板场景，紧扣新课标跨文化交际、人与社会主题语境，选用海外涉外高阶场景，凸显国际化视野，摆脱千篇一律的考场作文。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I am a high school student and I am writing to ask you some questions about your school’s courses and club activities. 创新升级满分例句（适配海外夏校课程咨询场景）： As a senior high student eager to broaden my international horizons, I’m writing to inquire about the detailed course arrangements of your summer school program for overseas teenagers. 中文解析：作为一名渴望拓宽国际视野的高中生，我特此致信咨询面向海外青少年的夏校项目详细课程安排。 考场优势：跳出常规校园咨询场景，贴合高考涉外交际命题趋势，场景新颖真实，精准契合新课标跨文化素养要求，瞬间区别于模板化作文。 创新二：提问逻辑创新——分层精准提问，拒绝杂乱堆砌 创新核心：打破随意罗列问题、句式单一、逻辑混乱的通病，采用基础信息→核心内容→配套保障分层提问结构，层层递进、逻辑严谨，贴合正式书面咨询的专业质感。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I have some questions. When can I sign up? What courses do you have? How much is the program? 创新升级满分例句（适配国际公益项目报名咨询场景）： To begin with, I wonder the specific registration time and basic admission requirements for this international public welfare project. Besides, could you introduce the specific activity procedures and service contents of the project? Finally, I would like to know whether participants can get relevant certificates after completing the volunteer work. 中文解析：首先，我想了解该国际公益项目的具体报名时间和基础准入要求。此外，能否为我介绍项目的具体活动流程和服务内容？最后，我想知晓参与者完成志愿工作后是否可以获得相关证书。 考场优势：严格遵循分层提问逻辑，从报名基础信息到活动核心内容，再到后续福利保障，条理清晰、句式多样，规避杂乱堆砌，尽显书面写作的严谨性。 创新三：语体创新——礼貌得体，区分正式/非正式交际场景 创新核心：摒弃万能客套套话，精准区分交际对象、匹配对应语体，官方机构用正式书面语、私人友人用温和非正式语体；前置咨询缘由，结尾个性化致谢，贴合真实涉外交际礼仪，落实文化素养考点。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I am writing to ask for your help. Please reply to me soon. Thank you very much. 创新升级满分例句（适配官方机构正式语体·外文期刊投稿咨询）： Having read your academic journal for a long time and benefited greatly from it, I’m writing to politely consult the basic requirements and submission procedures for student contributors. I would highly appreciate it if you could offer me detailed guidance at your convenience. 中文解析：我长期拜读贵刊并获益良多，特此致信礼貌咨询学生投稿者的基础要求与投稿流程。若您方便时能为我提供详细指导，我将不胜感激。 考场优势：前置咨询背景与缘由，语体正式得体、贴合官方交际场景，结尾致谢个性化且真诚，无模板痕迹，完美体现高考要求的跨文化交际礼仪与语言素养。 答复信 创新一：文体与场景双创新——覆盖高考高频适配场景，规避同质化 创新核心：摒弃传统单一普通书信格式、老旧校园回复场景，统一规范正式邮件标准文体，补齐格式失分漏洞；跳出答复校内求助、普通邀约的模板场景，主打涉外高阶回信场景，贴合高考跨文化交际命题趋势，提升阅卷辨识度。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I’m glad to receive your letter. I will answer your questions about my school life for you. 创新升级满分例句（适配答复外籍友人海外生活咨询场景）： I’m delighted to receive your letter asking about living and studying in China. I’m writing to give you a detailed and formal reply to all your questions related to your upcoming exchange life. 中文解析：我很高兴收到你咨询在华学习与生活的来信，特此致信，为你即将开启的交换生活相关问题作出详细、正式的答复。 考场优势：采用标准邮件回信开篇，文体规范严谨，规避格式错误；聚焦涉外交流的新颖场景，区别于千篇一律的校园回信，贴合新课标跨文化交际核心考点。 创新二：内容逻辑创新——拒绝流水账，做到“回应全覆盖+细节补充分” 创新核心：打破学生“问啥答啥、内容单薄”的机械回复通病，构建精准应答核心问题+补充延伸细节+贴心温馨提示三层高分逻辑，答题完整无遗漏，内容丰富有亮点，体现周全的交际思维。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： You want to know the activity time. It will start at 9 a.m. You need to come on time. 创新升级满分例句（适配回复国际项目报名咨询场景）： Regarding your questions about the international youth program, the registration will officially open on September 1st and last for one week. In addition to the basic online application, you need to submit a personal English introduction within 200 words. To help you avoid missing the deadline, I suggest you prepare relevant materials in advance. 中文解析：针对你关于国际青年项目的咨询，报名通道将于9月1日正式开启，为期一周。除线上基础报名外，你还需要提交一篇200词以内的英文个人简介。为避免错过报名时限，我建议你提前准备好相关材料。 考场优势：完整回应报名时间的核心问题，补充报名材料关键细节，新增考前准备的贴心提示，层层递进、内容饱满，彻底摆脱流水账式机械回复，逻辑质感远超普通模板作文。 创新三：交际目的创新——兼具答疑、安抚、邀约、衔接多重功能 创新核心：突破答复信单一“答疑回复”的功能局限，融合答疑解惑、消除顾虑、主动帮扶、友好衔接多重交际价值。贴合涉外礼仪，语言正式温和不生硬，兼顾书面规范性与交际实用性，凸显成熟的高阶写作思维。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I have answered all your questions. If you have other questions, you can write to me again. 创新升级满分例句（适配回应外籍友人交流顾虑、答疑收尾场景）： I hope the above detailed information can clear up your doubts about the cross-cultural exchange activity. If you still feel confused about the activity process or daily communication, feel free to contact me anytime. I’m also looking forward to our upcoming cooperation and cultural communication. 中文解析：希望以上详细信息能够解答你关于跨文化交流活动的所有疑惑。若你对活动流程或日常交流仍有疑问，可随时与我联系。同时，我也十分期待我们即将到来的合作与文化交流。 考场优势：不止完成基础答疑，还主动安抚对方顾虑、提供后续对接渠道，同时发出友好交际邀约，多重交际功能拉满，语言得体贴合涉外礼仪，无口语化短板，完全适配高考高分写作要求。 真题·实战演练 申请信 （2019全国I） 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 写信目的： 个人优势： 3．能做的事情。 注意： 词数100左右； 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 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（2018·浙江卷） 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括： 口语能力： 相关经验； 3. 应聘目的。 注意： 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 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（2012·全国新课标卷） 假定你是李华，从互联网（the Internet）上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1.自我介绍(包括英语能力); 2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；3.希望获准。 注意： 1.词数100左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。 Dear Sir or Madam, 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____________________________________________________________________________________________ Regards, Li Hua 咨询信 （2021年高考全国甲卷） 假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括： 1.阐明写信事由； 2.征求建议； 3.表示感谢。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 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（2020·浙江卷） 假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括: 1. 询问近况； 2. 分享班级最新消息； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意: 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 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（2014·全国卷1） 假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容） 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．参考词汇：住宿—accommodation 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答复信（回信） 假定你是伦敦当地美术馆工作人员，此前收到了中国交换生李华的中国画展志愿者申请。请你给李华写一封回信，内容包括： 告知申请结果； 肯定其个人优势； 说明对应的志愿工作内容。 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____________________________________________________________________________________________ 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom发来邮件，询问你校近期开展的“校园读书月”(School Reading Month)活动相关情况，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 活动开展时间及参与形式； 2. 两项核心特色活动； 3. 你的个人收获。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 邮件格式规范，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, 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Yours, Li Hua 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你校近期开展的校园劳动实践活动的相关情况，请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 活动主要内容； 2. 你的个人收获； 3. 简单评价活动意义。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, 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___________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Mike计划暑假来中国研学，来信向你咨询中国传统节日体验的相关建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1. 推荐体验的节日（端午/中秋任选其一）； 2. 节日特色活动； 3. 给他的出行小建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 内容完整，行文连贯； 3. 书信格式规范。 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第 52 页 共 71 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 第10讲 申请信、咨询信、答复信(回信)（专项训练）（解析版） 目 录 模拟·基础演练 1 重难·创新演练 7 真题·实战演练 13 模拟·基础演练 目标一：格式零失误，精准区分五类文体专属范式 熟练掌握申请信、咨询信、答复信(回信)三类文体的差异化标准格式，清晰区分公共公示类与私人交际类文体的格式差异。 目标二：表达得体地道，摒弃模板化生硬输出 熟记三类文体专属核心句式、话题搭配与交际用语，明确各类文体语体特征。 目标三：逻辑清晰饱满，补齐内容空洞核心短板 熟练掌握三类文体高分固定结构。 目标四：稳定高分输出，适配高考精细化评分 掌握三类文体句式升级技巧，摆脱句式堆砌问题，提升行文层次感与高级感。严格把控高考词数规范，规避词数不足、超标失分。兼顾格式规范、语言得体、逻辑清晰、内容充实四大评分维度，打磨细节短板，适配高考精细化评分标准，实现申请信、咨询信、答复信(回信)三类题型稳定高分输出。 申请信 假定你是李华，得知学校要举办英语周活动，其间要举办多场晚会，需要招聘晚会主持人。请你给英语周组委会的刘老师写一封申请信。 内容包括： 1. 信息来源，申请意愿； 2. 自我介绍，申请理由； 3. 表示谢意， 盼望回复。 注意：1.字数：100左右2.可适当补充细节 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Dear Mr. Liu, I’m LiHua, a student from Class 6，Senior II. I learned from the school website that during the School English Week, several hosts for parties are wanted. I am writing to apply for the position. I’m sure I am well qualified for the job. To begin with, I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have once hosted different parties in our school. Therefore, I am experienced, which will contribute to my hosting the party well. Last but not least,organizing activities and have a strong team spirit. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply！ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 假定你是李华，2022年杭州将举办亚运会，你从网上得知杭州亚运会组委会（Hangzhou Asian Games Organ zing Committee）正在招募志愿者，请你给组委会写一封信，申请成为志愿者。内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 申请理由； 3. 希望获批。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Dear Sir or Madam, Knowing that you're recruiting volunteers for the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games, I'm writing to apply for a position for the following reasons. As a Hangzhou native, I am familiar with the local conditions. I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the Games. Outgoing and warm-hearted personalities combined with a good command of English will contribute to smooth communication with foreigners. Most importantly, having worked as a volunteer for Olympics, I've gained abundant experience, which gives me the edge over others. With the purpose of promoting friendship among people from different backgrounds, I'm looking forward to your favorable consideration of my application. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 假设你是李华，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor) 的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。 请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1.自我介绍（包括中英文能力）； 2.参加意图（帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化）； 3.希望获准。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Dear sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language. I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and I’d like to get this job. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it. Besides, I’ve been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English. I’m willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours.Looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 假定你是李华。2022北京冬奥组委会正在招募志愿者，其职责为接待各国运动员及宣传中国文化，组委会要求志愿者能够熟练运用英语，请你用英文写一封申请信。 内容包括： 1. 申请原因。 2. 你的优势。 3. 相关经历。 注意：词数100左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Dear Sir/Madame, I have learned that volunteers for Beijing Winter Olympic Games are needed. I’m writing to apply for this position. As a Beijinger, I think it is a privilege and duty for me to offer the best voluntary service to our foreign guests and meanwhile promote Chinese culture.I believe I’m qualified for the job. I have a good command of English and I’m confident in giving players guidance and help as required. What’s more, I have an extensive knowledge of winter sports, which will prove helpful in communicating with players. In addition, I have been involved in several international exchange programs, and enjoyed spreading our culture to foreigners. I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 咨询信 假定你是李华，作为交换生在国外某学校学习，得知该校即将举办国际服装文化节(International Costume Day),你有意向参加服装展示环节，请你写一封邮件咨询相关信息，内容包括: 1.写信目的:2.咨询信息(如服饰要求，展示形式等)3.表达期待 注意:1. 词数100左右:2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Dear ladies or gentlemen, I am Li Hua, an exchange student in this foreign school. I heard that an International Costume Day will be held in the school. Because I am interested in it and want to participate in it , I want to know more information about it. First of all, I want to know what are the requirements for clothing, student clothing or fashion clothing. Secondly, please tell me how to display the clothing. Is it to do model display or window display? At last, I want to know where and when it is held. Please tell me the information, thanks a lot! I am looking forward to receiving your reply. Yours, Li Hua 假定你是李华，打算报名参加2022年北京冬奥会全球志愿者。你的新西兰笔友Tim有相关经验，请你写一封信向他咨询。 内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 咨询内容； 3.期待回复。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Sincerely Li Hua 参考范文 Dear Tim, I am eagerly planning to apply to be a volunteer for Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games. Knowing that you have relevant experience, I' m writing to ask a favor from you. To begin with, please tell me what I should prepare in advance and since a convincing application is of vital importance, could you give me some direction on how to write it? What's more, I would appreciate it if you could share your volunteer experience with me in detail, which I think will help me become somewhat familiar with this kind of work. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours truly, Li Hua 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Jenny 正在做一份关于中国移动支付（mobile payment ）的问卷调查 （survey） ，你是她的重点采访对象． 内容包括： 1． 你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况； 2． 移动支付带来的好处； 3． 你的看法． 参考词汇：微信： Wechat 支付宝：Alipay 二维码： QR code 注意： 1． 词数 100 左右； 2． 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯． ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Dear Jenny, How is your survey on mobile payment going? I’m glad I can help with it. It is generally believed that China is the largest mobile payment market. Nowhere else is the cashless trend more obvious than in China. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes whatever we buy—books, clothes, and electronic devices, to name a few, which is a glimpse into the life of most Chinese like me and my family.With the widespread use of mobile payment, Wechat or Alipay is the most convenient and safest way to pay. We rarely need to carry a wallet or cash at all. Besides, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change. In short, mobile payment has greatly changed people's life in China. Personally, I think mobile payment should be encouraged. First, it has won over consumers with its convenience. Another advantage is that there are often discounts if you make mobile payment, as major online payment platforms are competing to have more consumers use their service. I hope my explanation can be of some help to you. Wish you good luck. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 假定你是李华，正在英国伦敦参加短期语言培训，计划课余时间去兼职。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。请给该公司发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。 注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Dear Sir/Madame， I am a student who is participating in the language training in London for a short time and plan to find a part-time job. I’ve seen your ad， and I’m writing for more information about detailed information for the job in your company. Firstly， could you tell me how I can get to your company？ As for the salary， I wonder whether I am given it monthly or weekly. Besides， I would like to inquire the types of jobs. Also I would greatly appreciate it if you could tell me when I should go to work. Moreover， I’d like to know if I have some time to rest during work. I would be grateful to receive a prompt reply. Yours sincerely， 　 　 Li Hua 重难·创新演练 申请信 创新一：情境细节创新（拒绝空泛套话，具象专属场景） 创新核心：摒弃 I am hard-working and outgoing 等万能空话，用具体经历+岗位适配能力举证，贴合高考真实申请场景（社团、志愿者、研学、交换生等），内容专属有细节。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I am good at communication and have rich experience in voluntary work. I am qualified for this activity. 创新升级满分例句（适配国际展会志愿者申请）： Having hosted multiple school English salons and assisted teachers in receiving foreign student visitors, I have mastered basic oral English communication skills and know how to offer patient and accurate service to overseas guests. 中文解析：我曾多次主持校园英语沙龙，并协助老师接待外籍来访学生，熟练掌握基础英语口语沟通技巧，能够为外籍宾客提供耐心、精准的服务。 考场优势：有具体经历、有对应能力、有岗位适配性，无空泛夸赞，完全贴合高考应用文“内容具体、逻辑真实”的评分要求。 创新二：写作视角创新（分层递进，双向适配） 创新核心：打破单向自我夸赞，构建岗位需求—个人能力—团队价值闭环，不只写“我能收获什么”，更突出“我能贡献什么”，体现思辨性，拉高作文层级。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I hope to take part in this program to improve my English ability and broaden my horizons. 创新升级满分例句（适配海外研学/交换生项目申请）： This exchange program requires students with good teamwork awareness and cross-cultural communication competence. Apart from solid English foundations, I am also an active team player who can cooperate well with international peers and contribute unique perspectives during group discussions. 中文解析：本次交换项目要求学生具备良好的团队协作意识与跨文化沟通能力。我除了扎实的英语基础外，还具备优秀的团队协作能力，能够与国际同伴高效配合，并在小组研讨中输出独特观点。 考场优势：先对标项目核心要求，再匹配自身能力，最后点明个人价值，逻辑分层清晰，区别于普通学生的浅层自荐，契合高考高阶写作标准。 创新三：交际功能创新（自荐+举证+履职承诺） 创新核心：摒弃结尾万能套话，用具体、可落地的履职规划替代空泛请求，融合诚意表态、工作承诺，完成多重交际目的，提升说服力。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I sincerely hope you can give me this chance. I will try my best if I am chosen. 创新升级满分例句（适配校园文创社团/专项岗位申请）： If I am lucky enough to be admitted, I will properly balance my schoolwork and club tasks, strictly follow all activity rules, and take the initiative to complete every assigned job. I will also make full preparations for temporary tasks to ensure smooth progress of club activities. 中文解析：若有幸入选，我将合理平衡学业与社团工作，严格遵守活动规章制度，主动完成各项分配任务。同时提前做好准备，灵活应对临时工作安排，保障社团活动顺利开展。 考场优势：承诺具体、落地可行，不是空洞表态，兼具诚意与责任感，完善申请信交际功能，大幅提升作文完整度与质感。 咨询信 创新一：场景创新——跳出校园局限，落实跨文化真实情境 创新核心：摒弃传统咨询校内选课、社团、考试等老旧模板场景，紧扣新课标跨文化交际、人与社会主题语境，选用海外涉外高阶场景，凸显国际化视野，摆脱千篇一律的考场作文。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I am a high school student and I am writing to ask you some questions about your school’s courses and club activities. 创新升级满分例句（适配海外夏校课程咨询场景）： As a senior high student eager to broaden my international horizons, I’m writing to inquire about the detailed course arrangements of your summer school program for overseas teenagers. 中文解析：作为一名渴望拓宽国际视野的高中生，我特此致信咨询面向海外青少年的夏校项目详细课程安排。 考场优势：跳出常规校园咨询场景，贴合高考涉外交际命题趋势，场景新颖真实，精准契合新课标跨文化素养要求，瞬间区别于模板化作文。 创新二：提问逻辑创新——分层精准提问，拒绝杂乱堆砌 创新核心：打破随意罗列问题、句式单一、逻辑混乱的通病，采用基础信息→核心内容→配套保障分层提问结构，层层递进、逻辑严谨，贴合正式书面咨询的专业质感。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I have some questions. When can I sign up? What courses do you have? How much is the program? 创新升级满分例句（适配国际公益项目报名咨询场景）： To begin with, I wonder the specific registration time and basic admission requirements for this international public welfare project. Besides, could you introduce the specific activity procedures and service contents of the project? Finally, I would like to know whether participants can get relevant certificates after completing the volunteer work. 中文解析：首先，我想了解该国际公益项目的具体报名时间和基础准入要求。此外，能否为我介绍项目的具体活动流程和服务内容？最后，我想知晓参与者完成志愿工作后是否可以获得相关证书。 考场优势：严格遵循分层提问逻辑，从报名基础信息到活动核心内容，再到后续福利保障，条理清晰、句式多样，规避杂乱堆砌，尽显书面写作的严谨性。 创新三：语体创新——礼貌得体，区分正式/非正式交际场景 创新核心：摒弃万能客套套话，精准区分交际对象、匹配对应语体，官方机构用正式书面语、私人友人用温和非正式语体；前置咨询缘由，结尾个性化致谢，贴合真实涉外交际礼仪，落实文化素养考点。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I am writing to ask for your help. Please reply to me soon. Thank you very much. 创新升级满分例句（适配官方机构正式语体·外文期刊投稿咨询）： Having read your academic journal for a long time and benefited greatly from it, I’m writing to politely consult the basic requirements and submission procedures for student contributors. I would highly appreciate it if you could offer me detailed guidance at your convenience. 中文解析：我长期拜读贵刊并获益良多，特此致信礼貌咨询学生投稿者的基础要求与投稿流程。若您方便时能为我提供详细指导，我将不胜感激。 考场优势：前置咨询背景与缘由，语体正式得体、贴合官方交际场景，结尾致谢个性化且真诚，无模板痕迹，完美体现高考要求的跨文化交际礼仪与语言素养。 答复信 创新一：文体与场景双创新——覆盖高考高频适配场景，规避同质化 创新核心：摒弃传统单一普通书信格式、老旧校园回复场景，统一规范正式邮件标准文体，补齐格式失分漏洞；跳出答复校内求助、普通邀约的模板场景，主打涉外高阶回信场景，贴合高考跨文化交际命题趋势，提升阅卷辨识度。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I’m glad to receive your letter. I will answer your questions about my school life for you. 创新升级满分例句（适配答复外籍友人海外生活咨询场景）： I’m delighted to receive your letter asking about living and studying in China. I’m writing to give you a detailed and formal reply to all your questions related to your upcoming exchange life. 中文解析：我很高兴收到你咨询在华学习与生活的来信，特此致信，为你即将开启的交换生活相关问题作出详细、正式的答复。 考场优势：采用标准邮件回信开篇，文体规范严谨，规避格式错误；聚焦涉外交流的新颖场景，区别于千篇一律的校园回信，贴合新课标跨文化交际核心考点。 创新二：内容逻辑创新——拒绝流水账，做到“回应全覆盖+细节补充分” 创新核心：打破学生“问啥答啥、内容单薄”的机械回复通病，构建精准应答核心问题+补充延伸细节+贴心温馨提示三层高分逻辑，答题完整无遗漏，内容丰富有亮点，体现周全的交际思维。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： You want to know the activity time. It will start at 9 a.m. You need to come on time. 创新升级满分例句（适配回复国际项目报名咨询场景）： Regarding your questions about the international youth program, the registration will officially open on September 1st and last for one week. In addition to the basic online application, you need to submit a personal English introduction within 200 words. To help you avoid missing the deadline, I suggest you prepare relevant materials in advance. 中文解析：针对你关于国际青年项目的咨询，报名通道将于9月1日正式开启，为期一周。除线上基础报名外，你还需要提交一篇200词以内的英文个人简介。为避免错过报名时限，我建议你提前准备好相关材料。 考场优势：完整回应报名时间的核心问题，补充报名材料关键细节，新增考前准备的贴心提示，层层递进、内容饱满，彻底摆脱流水账式机械回复，逻辑质感远超普通模板作文。 创新三：交际目的创新——兼具答疑、安抚、邀约、衔接多重功能 创新核心：突破答复信单一“答疑回复”的功能局限，融合答疑解惑、消除顾虑、主动帮扶、友好衔接多重交际价值。贴合涉外礼仪，语言正式温和不生硬，兼顾书面规范性与交际实用性，凸显成熟的高阶写作思维。 高考标准模版烂句（扣分）： I have answered all your questions. If you have other questions, you can write to me again. 创新升级满分例句（适配回应外籍友人交流顾虑、答疑收尾场景）： I hope the above detailed information can clear up your doubts about the cross-cultural exchange activity. If you still feel confused about the activity process or daily communication, feel free to contact me anytime. I’m also looking forward to our upcoming cooperation and cultural communication. 中文解析：希望以上详细信息能够解答你关于跨文化交流活动的所有疑惑。若你对活动流程或日常交流仍有疑问，可随时与我联系。同时，我也十分期待我们即将到来的合作与文化交流。 考场优势：不止完成基础答疑，还主动安抚对方顾虑、提供后续对接渠道，同时发出友好交际邀约，多重交际功能拉满，语言得体贴合涉外礼仪，无口语化短板，完全适配高考高分写作要求。 真题·实战演练 申请信 （2019全国I） 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 写信目的： 个人优势： 3．能做的事情。 注意： 词数100左右； 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position. The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form. All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 范文亮点深度解析 篇章结构亮点（高考应用文满分框架） 全文三段式标准申请信结构，逻辑清晰，层次分明，完全贴合书信类写作评分标准： 第一段：开门见山，点明来意 自我介绍→获知活动信息→写信目的（申请志愿者岗位），开篇无冗余废话，交际目的一步到位。 第二段：分层列举申请优势（主体段） 用 First of all→What’s more→The most important factor 三层递进，从语言能力→组织管理能力→专业知识优势，由浅入深论证自己胜任岗位，理由充分、说服力强。 第三段：总结表态 + 礼貌恳请 重申个人品质胜任工作，发出请求，结尾礼貌得体，闭环完整。 高级词汇亮点（替换基础词，提升档次） delighted 替换 happy volunteer students are wanted （招聘志愿者）地道被动表达，比 you need volunteers 高级 exhibition 展览会 apply for the position 申请该职位（求职 / 志愿申请高频高分短语） communicate freely 流畅交流，替换 communicate well undoubtedly adv. 毫无疑问地，替换 surely/certainly unique adj. 独特的 sense of responsibility 责任感（书信万能加分名词短语） qualified adj. 合格的，胜任的 take my application into consideration 考虑我的申请，申请信经典礼貌结尾套句 高分句型 & 长难句亮点（提分核心） 1. 现在分词完成式作状语（高分非谓语） having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. 译文：从小就接触外教，我可以用英语和别人流畅交流。 亮点：having been done 被动完成式状语，属于高级语法结构，避开简单句 I have met foreign teachers…，句式高级。 固定搭配：be exposed to 接触；暴露于 2. 非限制性定语从句 years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. 译文：多年担任班长使我拥有优秀的组织能力，这将极大有助于维持展览秩序。 亮点：which 指代前面整件事，引导非限制性定语从句，实现两句合并，句式紧凑高级。 短语：keep…in order 使…… 井然有序 3. 表语从句 The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form. 译文：最重要的一点是，我的相关知识无疑能够帮助观众更多地了解这一独特的中国艺术形式。 亮点：The most important factor is that… 万能高分引出理由句型，替代简单句 And most importantly… 4. 高分虚拟语气句型（书信万能结尾） I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. 译文：如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。 亮点：高考书信经典万能高分句，I’d appreciate it if… 礼貌委婉，是申请信、求助信的标杆结尾。 衔接词亮点（逻辑粘合剂，提升流畅度） First of all → What’s more → The most important factor → All in all 四层过渡词层层递进，理由排布有条理，阅卷老师一眼看清行文逻辑，有效提升逻辑表达得分。 交际语气亮点 1　 全文语气诚恳、正式礼貌，符合写给画廊负责人（Sir/Madam）的正式书信语境； 2　 身份定位清晰（中国交换生），优势紧扣 “中国画展览志愿者” 岗位，理由和岗位高度匹配，不写无关优点，这是申请类作文拿高分的关键技巧。 （2018·浙江卷） 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括： 口语能力： 相关经验； 3. 应聘目的。 注意： 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association. I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students. I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. Hopefully I can receive your acceptance. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 范文亮点深度解析 篇章结构亮点（高考应用文满分框架） 全文三段式标准申请信结构，逻辑清晰，层次分明，完全贴合书信类写作评分标准： 第一段：开门见山，点明来意。自我介绍 + 写信目的（申请学校英语协会志愿者岗位），删掉冗余小词 And，开篇简洁正式，交际目的一目了然。 第二段：分层列举申请优势（主体段）。使用 First of all→What’s more→The most important factor 三层递进，从语言能力→性格交际优势→求职动机，由外到内论证自己胜任岗位，理由充分，说服力强。 第三段：总结表态 + 礼貌恳请。重申自身适配岗位，使用申请信经典礼貌收尾句式，闭环完整，语气得体。 高级词汇亮点（替换基础词，提升档次） 1　 position 职位，岗位，简单版 job 升级替换词 2　 have a good command of 精通（英语高分万能短语，替换 be good at） 3　 enables sb. to do 使某人能够做，替换简单的 can 4　 warmhearted 热心的，替换基础形容词 kind 5　 without difficulty 毫不费力地，替换 easily 6　 capabilities n. 能力，替换普通单词 abilities 7　 interpersonal communication skills 人际交往能力（高分固定短语） 8　 wellqualified adj. 完全胜任的，合格的 高分句型 & 长难句亮点（提分核心） 1.非限制性定语从句 I have a good command of English and have visited the USA twice, which enables me to communicate freely with nativeEnglish speakers. 译文：我精通英语并且曾两次到访美国，这使我能够与英语母语者流畅交流。 亮点：which 指代前面整件事，把两个简单句合并成长难句，句式紧凑高级，告别短句堆砌。 2.现在分词作原因状语 being warmhearted and friendly, I can get along well with foreign students without difficulty. 译文：因为待人热忱友善，我可以毫不费力地和外国学生友好相处。 亮点：现在分词短语前置作状语，高级语法结构，替代基础句 Because I am kind and friendly。 3.高分虚拟语气句型（书信万能结尾） I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. 译文：如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。 亮点：高考书信标杆高分结尾句，语气委婉正式，替换原句平淡简单的 Hopefully I can receive your acceptance。 衔接词亮点（逻辑粘合剂，提升流畅度） First of all → What’s more → The most important factor → All in all，过渡词层层递进，段落逻辑一目了然，方便阅卷老师抓取要点，拿下逻辑表达分数。 交际语气亮点 1 书信面向协会负责人，语气正式诚恳，符合正式申请书信语境； ② 个人优势全部紧扣英语协会志愿者岗位，语言、性格、提升自我的动机都和岗位高度匹配，没有无关信息，是申请作文高分核心技巧。 （2012·全国新课标卷） 假定你是李华，从互联网（the Internet）上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1.自我介绍(包括英语能力); 2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；3.希望获准。 注意： 1.词数100左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。 Dear Sir or Madam, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Regards, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Regards, Li Hua 咨询信 （2021年高考全国甲卷） 假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括： 1.阐明写信事由； 2.征求建议； 3.表示感谢。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Chris, Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice. As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help. Yours, Li Hua 范文亮点深度解析 篇章结构亮点（高考应用文满分框架） 全文三段式标准求助信结构，逻辑清晰，层次分明，完全贴合书信类写作评分标准： 第一段：开门见山，点明来意。告知对方班会活动信息→说明班会将发布于英文网站→写信目的：寻求建议，开篇直奔主题，交际目的一步到位。 第二段：分层列出求助问题（主体段）。使用 First of all→What’s more 分层递进，从文化受众偏好→网页装饰元素两个角度提出疑问，理由充分，诉求清晰。 第三段：总结表态 + 礼貌恳请。点明对方建议的重要性，使用高分委婉句型请求回复，闭环完整，语气得体。 高级词汇亮点（替换基础词，提升档次） 1　 post v. 发布，替换普通单词 present 2　 practical advice 实用建议，替换简单的 some advice 3　 consult v. 咨询，请教 4　 exist v. 存在，替换 there is 5　 attract one’s attention 吸引某人目光，替换 get more clicks 6　 appeal to 对…… 有吸引力，替换 prefer 7　 typical adj. 典型的，有代表性的 8　 intend to do 打算做，替换 want to do 9　 webpage n. 网页，替换 website 10　 guidance n. 指导，建议，替换 help 11　 be of great value 很有价值，替换 be very important 12　 at your earliest convenience 在你方便时尽早（求助信高分礼貌短语，替换 as soon as possible） 13　 take … into full consideration 充分考虑 高分句型 & 长难句亮点（提分核心） 定语从句 Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. 译文：有消息传来，我校将要举办一场主题与中国传统习俗相关的班会。 亮点：whose引导定语从句修饰先行词 a class meeting；Word came that… 是高级同位语从句句型，意为 “有消息传来”，摆脱普通句式 I hear that… 非限制性疑问句式（委婉请求） could you tell me which aspects of Chinese culture appeal most to Western people? 译文：你能否告诉我，西方人最喜欢中国文化的哪些方面？ 亮点：用 could 引导委婉问句，语气礼貌；which引导宾语从句，句式高级，比直白的 you’d better tell me 语气得体很多。 现在分词作状语 + 宾语从句 Knowing you have a deep interest in Chinese culture, I firmly believe you can help me work out these puzzles. 译文：深知你对中国文化有着浓厚的兴趣，我坚信你能够帮我解决这些困惑。 亮点：Knowing…现在分词作原因状语，高级语法结构，替代基础句 Because I know…。 高分虚拟语气句型（求助信万能结尾） I would appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. 译文：如果你能在方便时尽早回复，我将不胜感激。 亮点：I would appreciate it if…高考书信标杆高分结尾句，委婉礼貌，替换原句平淡简单的 you can reply to me as soon as possible。 衔接词亮点（逻辑粘合剂，提升流畅度） First of all → What’s more → All in all，过渡词层层递进，问题排布有条理，行文流畅，阅卷老师可快速抓取写作要点。 交际语气亮点 ① 收信人是朋友 Chris，语气礼貌恳切，介于非正式与正式之间，分寸恰当； ② 求助的两个问题完全围绕英文网站班会展示展开，诉求紧扣写作背景，无无关内容，符合求助信高分写作技巧。 （2020·浙江卷） 假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括: 1. 询问近况； 2. 分享班级最新消息； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意: 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now? I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery. Yours, Li Hua 篇章结构亮点（高考应用文满分框架） 全文三段式慰问信标准结构，逻辑清晰，层次分明，完全贴合书信类写作评分标准： 第一段：开门见山，表达关切。得知对方因病休假，送上问候，快速切入慰问主题，情感真挚自然。 第二段：主体叙事，分享喜讯。讲述校园英语节班级演唱他所教歌曲、收获热烈掌声的经历，用喜讯宽慰对方，If only 虚拟句式抒发遗憾之情，情感饱满动人。 第三段：结尾祝福，再次挂念。表达思念并送上康复祝愿，收束全文，闭环完整。 高级词汇亮点（替换基础词，提升档次） 1　 at present 目前，现在，替换简单的 now 2　 bring you good news 给你带来好消息 3　 illness n. 疾病，替换基础词 disease 4　 once adv. 曾经 5　 the moment 一…… 就……，替换 as soon as 6　 burst into warm applause 爆发出热烈掌声，替换 gave us warm applause 7　 witness v. 见证，亲眼看见 8　 terribly adv. 非常，十分，替换 very much 9　 sincerely adv. 真诚地 10　 full recovery 完全康复，替换 complete recovery 高分句型 & 长难句亮点（提分核心） where 引导非限制性定语从句 Last month, our school held an English festival, where our class performed the song that you once taught us. 译文：上个月，我校举办了英语节，在活动上我们班演唱了你曾经教给我们的那首歌。 亮点：where 引导定语从句修饰先行词 English festival，把两个简单句合并成长难句，句式紧凑高级，告别短句堆砌。 The moment 引导时间状语从句 The moment we finished singing, the whole audience burst into warm applause. 译文：我们刚一唱完，全场观众就爆发出热烈的掌声。 亮点：The moment 属于名词性连词，表示 “一…… 就”，属于高分替换结构，优于基础连词as soon as。 If only 引导虚拟语气（情感高分句型） If only you had been there to witness it! 译文：要是你当时能在场亲眼看到该多好啊！ 亮点：If only + had done 对过去事情的虚拟，表示 “要是过去…… 就好了”，是慰问信、回忆类书信里渲染情绪的经典高分句型，语法含金量高。 衔接词亮点（逻辑粘合剂，提升流畅度） 段落按照「问候近况→分享喜讯→送上祝福」自然推进，叙事逻辑顺畅，情感层层递进，无需生硬过渡词，符合朋友之间慰问信的语境特点。 交际语气亮点 ① 收信人为朋友 Peter，语气温暖关切、真诚柔和，属于半非正式文体，分寸恰到好处； ② 分享的故事与 Peter 直接相关，内容能够真正起到宽慰对方的作用，情感贴合慰问信写作目的，无多余无关信息。 （2014·全国卷1） 假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容） 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．参考词汇：住宿—accommodation ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Sir / Madam, I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 答复信（回信） 假定你是伦敦当地美术馆工作人员，此前收到了中国交换生李华的中国画展志愿者申请。请你给李华写一封回信，内容包括： 告知申请结果； 肯定其个人优势； 说明对应的志愿工作内容。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Li Hua, I’m delighted to inform you that your application to be a volunteer for the Chinesepainting exhibition at our local gallery has been accepted. Your fluent Chinese and deep knowledge of traditional Chinese paintings are great advantages. Besides, your previous volunteer experience also impresses us a lot. Your main tasks will include guiding visitors around the exhibition hall, introducing basic information of the paintings and helping keep order during the event. If you have any questions, feel free to contact me. Looking forward to your participation. Yours sincerely, Staff of the London Gallery 范文亮点深度解析 篇章结构亮点（高考应用文满分框架） 全文三段式标准告知类回信结构，逻辑清晰，层次分明，完全贴合书信类写作评分标准： 第一段：开门见山，点明核心消息。直接告知李华志愿者申请成功，开篇直奔主题，交际目的一步到位。 第二段：分层阐述录用理由、交代志愿工作内容以及答疑渠道。使用 First of all→Besides 递进过渡，先说明被录取的两大优势，再逐条列出岗位任务，最后告知有问题可以联系负责人，信息完整详实。 第三段：简短收尾，表达期待。礼貌收尾，全文闭环完整。 高级词汇亮点（替换基础词，提升档次） 1　 serve as 担任，充当，替换 to be 2　 opportunity n. 机会 3　 profound adj. 渊博的，深厚的，替换 deep 4　 tremendous adj. 极大的，显著的，替换 great 5　 previous adj. 先前的 6　 leave a deep impression on sb. 给某人留下深刻印象，替换 impresses us a lot 7　 consist of 包括，替换 include 8　 maintain order 维持秩序，替换 keep order 9　 get in touch with 联系，替换 contact 10　 active participation 积极参与 高分句型 & 长难句亮点（提分核心） why 引导定语从句 The reasons why we decide to offer you this opportunity are as follows. 译文：我们决定给你提供这次机会的理由如下。 亮点：why引导定语从句修饰先行词 reasons，属于引出理由的万能高分句型，避免平铺直叙。 省略 if‑should 提前倒装条件状语从句（高分语法） Should you have any questions, feel free to get in touch with me. 译文：如果你有任何疑问，欢迎随时和我取得联系。 亮点：Should you have… = If you should have…，if 省略，should 提前的倒装句式，正式书信亮眼高级句型。 三个动名词并列作宾语 Your main tasks will consist of guiding visitors around the exhibition hall, introducing basic information of the paintings and helping maintain order during the event. 译文：你的主要工作包括带领游客参观展厅、介绍画作基础信息以及活动期间协助维持秩序。 亮点：guiding, introducing, helping三个动名词并列，句式整齐紧凑，摆脱零散短句。 衔接词亮点（逻辑粘合剂，提升流畅度） First of all → Besides，过渡词清晰划分录用优势的两个层面，阅卷老师一眼就能抓住要点，逻辑得分更高。 交际语气亮点 ① 写信人为伦敦画廊工作人员，属于官方正式身份，全文语气礼貌、专业得体，契合正式通知回信语境； ② 文章信息要素齐全：录取结果、录用原因、工作任务、答疑途径、结尾期待，要点无遗漏，没有多余无关内容，完美达成告知的写作任务。 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom发来邮件，询问你校近期开展的“校园读书月”(School Reading Month)活动相关情况，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 活动开展时间及参与形式； 2. 两项核心特色活动； 3. 你的个人收获。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 邮件格式规范，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 高分参考范文 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive your email asking about our school Reading Month activity. Now I’m writing to give you a detailed introduction. The activity lasts for one month in April, and all students in our school take an active part in it. We have two wonderful featured activities. First, we hold weekly book-sharing meetings, where students exchange reading experiences and recommend excellent books to each other. Besides, a classic reading competition is held to encourage us to appreciate the beauty of Chinese and foreign classic works. Personally, I have benefited a lot from the activity. It not only broadens my horizons but also helps me develop a good habit of persistent reading. Yours, Li Hua 范文亮点深度解析 篇章结构亮点（高考应用文满分框架） 全文经典三段式介绍信结构，逻辑严谨、层次清晰，完全契合高考书信评分标准： 第一段：开篇点题，回应来信。收到对方咨询邮件，直接表明写信目的，介绍校园读书月活动，简洁无冗余，快速完成交际切入。 第二段：主体详述活动。采用 First of all → In addition 递进逻辑，依次介绍活动时间、参与范围、两大核心特色活动，内容具体详实，条理清晰。 第三段：个人感悟总结。结合自身收获，阐述活动带来的成长与意义，升华文章主旨，收尾完整闭环。 高级词汇亮点（替换基础词，提升档次） 1　 - inquire about 咨询、了解，替换基础短语 ask about 2　 - give a detailed account of 详细介绍，替换 give a detailed introduction 3　 - widespread participation 广泛参与，替换 take an active part in 4　 - well-designed adj. 精心策划的，丰富活动描述 5　 - reading insights 阅读感悟，替换普通的 reading experiences 6　 - high-quality adj. 优质的，替换 excellent 7　 - motivate v. 激励、促进，替换简单的 encourage 8　 - explore v. 探寻、领略，丰富动词表达 9　 - tremendous benefits 巨大收获，替换 a lot 10　 - cultivate v. 培养（习惯、品德），替换 develop 11　 - be of great significance 意义重大，替换 be very important 高分句型 & 长难句亮点（提分核心） 1. 定语从句升级句式 I’m glad to receive your email in which you inquire about our school Reading Month activity. 译文：我很高兴收到你的邮件，你在信中向我咨询我校读书月活动的相关信息。 亮点：用 in which 引导定语从句修饰email，替代简单后置分词结构，句式更正式高级，贴合书信书面语要求。 2. 过去分词作状语（高分非谓语） Scheduled in April and lasting for a whole month, the activity enjoys widespread participation among all school students. 译文：本次活动定于四月举办、为期一月，全校学生都积极参与其中。 亮点：非谓语动词并列作状语，整合活动时间、时长、参与情况，句式紧凑简洁，规避基础简单句堆砌。 3. where引导非限制性定语从句 we hold weekly book-sharing meetings, where students can exchange their unique reading insights and recommend high-quality books to one another. 译文：我们每周举办读书分享会，同学们可以在会上交流独特的阅读感悟、互相推荐优质书籍。 亮点：where指代活动场景，衔接主句补充活动内容，句式连贯，逻辑紧密。 4. Not only...but also... 部分倒装（高考核心高分句型） Not only does it broaden my horizons greatly, but it also cultivates my persistent reading habit. 译文：它不仅极大地开阔了我的眼界，还培养了我坚持阅读的好习惯。 亮点：not only置于句首，主句部分倒装，是高考书面表达核心提分句型，彻底甩开平铺直叙的基础句式。 衔接词亮点（逻辑粘合剂，提升流畅度） First of all → In addition 层层递进，清晰区分两项特色活动，段落逻辑清晰、层次分明，方便阅卷老师快速抓取核心信息，稳定拿下逻辑表达满分。 交际语气亮点 ① 收信人为好友Tom，语气真诚自然、礼貌得体，兼顾书面正式度与日常交友书信的亲切感； ② 全文紧扣“介绍读书月活动”核心任务，从活动概况、具体内容到个人收获层层展开，内容贴合主题、无冗余无关信息，完全符合高考介绍类书信写作要求。 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你校近期开展的校园劳动实践活动的相关情况，请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 活动主要内容； 2. 你的个人收获； 3. 简单评价活动意义。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 满分范文 Dear Jack, I’m more than delighted to receive your letter, in which you ask about the labor practice activities held in our school. The activities cover a variety of practical tasks. We take turns to clean the campus, grow vegetables in our school farm and do simple community voluntary work. The activities are held every Friday afternoon, lasting one hour each time. For me, I have gained a lot from the experience. Not only do I learn basic labor skills, but I also realize the value of hard work. Such activities help us balance busy study life and shape a responsible attitude towards life. I hope my introduction is helpful to you. Yours, Li Hua 假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Mike计划暑假来中国研学，来信向你咨询中国传统节日体验的相关建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1. 推荐体验的节日（端午/中秋任选其一）； 2. 节日特色活动； 3. 给他的出行小建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 内容完整，行文连贯； 3. 书信格式规范。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Letter to Mike Dear Mike, I’m glad to hear that you will come to China for your summer study tour. I strongly recommend you to experience the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is a traditional festival for family reunion. On that day, people will enjoy the full moon, eat delicious mooncakes and share warm stories with family members. It fully shows Chinese traditional culture. Besides, you’d better book your accommodation in advance as many tourists will travel then. I’m looking forward to your arrival. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 第 52 页 共 71 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $