Unit 1 Amazing places 单元主题写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年人教PEP版英语六年级上册

**基本信息** 以四步写作结构为核心，整合单元专属词汇句型与避坑指南，分层设计练习的系统性写作专项，提升语言表达与逻辑组织能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |高分写作指导|1套四步结构、7个万能句型|四步模板（开篇-信息-特色-结尾）、核心词汇分类、句型直接套用|从主题要求到结构框架，再到词汇句型支撑，形成“框架-要素”逻辑链| |避坑总结|4类易错点|时态统一、There be句型规范等|针对写作常见问题，强化表达准确性| |分层练习|4题（基础到拓展）|场景化写作任务设计|由易到难覆盖不同写作情境，适配同步教学需求| |参考范文|4篇对应练习|结构完整、词汇丰富的示范文本|提供直观模仿范例，巩固方法应用|

人教版六年级上册Unit 1 Amazing places 单元主题写作专项练习 一、单元写作核心主题 本单元主题为Amazing places（奇妙/神奇的地方），写作核心围绕：介绍国内外神奇景点、家乡美景、心仪的旅行地点，描述地点位置、景色特点、特色活动、个人感受，是小学六年级高频写景、写地点类作文考点。 写作核心要求：语句通顺、逻辑清晰，会使用方位介词、形容词、there be句型、一般现在时，简单表达个人喜好与感受。 二、高分写作指导（万能思路） 1. 写作四步结构（万能模板） 第一步：开篇点题：直接介绍这是哪里、它是一个什么样的地方（美丽/神奇/有趣）。 第二步：基本信息：介绍位置、天气、环境、景色特点。 第三步：特色内容：这里有什么、可以做什么、有哪些特色。 第四步：结尾抒情：表达喜爱之情、想去这里/推荐大家来。 2. 必用核心词汇（单元专属） amazing 神奇的；绝妙的，beautiful 美丽的， wonderful 极好的，quiet 安静的，clean 干净的 forest 森林，mountain 高山，lake 湖泊，river 河流， beach 沙滩，city 城市，village 乡村 in the east/west/south/north of… 在……东/西/南/北部， near 在……附近，beside 在……旁边 3. 万能高分句型（直接背诵套用） 1. I know an amazing place. It is ________. 我知道一个神奇的地方，它是________。 2. It is in the ________ of ________. 它在……的（东/西/南/北）部。 3. There are many tall trees and beautiful flowers here. 这里有许多高大的树木和漂亮的花。 4. The air is fresh and the water is clean. 空气清新，水质清澈。 5. We can ________ here. It’s very interesting. 我们可以在这里……非常有趣。 6. This is my favourite amazing place. I love it very much. 这是我最喜欢的神奇之地，我非常爱它。 7. It is one of the most beautiful places in my heart. 它是我心中最美的地方之一。 三、写作避坑易错总结 1.时态统一：介绍地点用一般现在时，写旅行经历可用一般过去时； 2.句型规范：多用 There be 句型介绍景物，避免中式英语； 3.细节加分：适当加入颜色、环境、活动、感受，作文更饱满； 4.字数达标：六上作文优先保证语句通顺，再丰富词汇句式。 单元写作专项练习题 覆盖基础、提升、考场真题、拓展写作，适配课堂练习、作业、单元检测 题目一（基础入门） 请以 An Amazing Place 为题，写一篇短文，介绍一处你认为神奇、美丽的地方。要求：不少于40词，语句通顺，书写规范。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 题目二（能力提升） 你的外国笔友想了解你的家乡，请以 My Hometown 为题，介绍家乡的景色、环境和可以做的活动，表达对家乡的喜爱，不少于50词。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 题目三（考场真题） 假如你去过海南、北京等著名景点，请以 A Wonderful Trip 为题，介绍一处神奇的景点，写写它的景色和你的感受，不少于50词。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 题目四（拓展拔高） 请以 I Want to Visit This Amazing Place 为题，写一篇短文，介绍一个你最想去的神奇地方，说明原因，不少于60词。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 范文一：An Amazing Place（基础版） An Amazing Place I know an amazing place. It is a small village near my city. It is very beautiful and quiet. There are many green mountains and clean lakes here. The air is very fresh. We can walk in the forest and watch beautiful birds. Sometimes we can pick wild flowers. This place is so wonderful. I love it very much. 词数：48 | 适配基础写作，句式简单、无语法错误 范文二：My Hometown（提升版） My Hometown My hometown is an amazing small town. It lies in the south of our city. It is clean, quiet and beautiful all year round. There are many trees and flowers everywhere. There is a big river beside my hometown. In spring and summer, the scenery is very wonderful. We can go fishing and take a walk by the river. People here are very kind and friendly. I love my hometown. It is the most amazing place in my heart. 词数：56 | 适配提升训练，结构完整、词汇丰富 范文三：A Wonderful Trip（考场真题版） A Wonderful Trip Last holiday, I went to Sanya. It is an amazing place in Hainan. Sanya has beautiful blue sea and clean beaches. The weather is warm all the time. We can swim in the sea and play on the beach. We also eat delicious sea food there. The scenery is so fantastic. I had a great trip there. This amazing place left a deep impression on me. I want to go there again. 词数：58 | 标准考场作文，时态正确、逻辑清晰 范文四：I Want to Visit This Amazing Place（拔高拓展版） I Want to Visit This Amazing Place There are many amazing places in the world. My favourite place is Beijing, and I really want to visit it. Beijing is the capital of China. It is in the north of our country. It has many famous and wonderful places, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. I want to visit the Great Wall most. It is very long and great. I also want to taste delicious local food there. I think Beijing is an amazing place. I hope I can visit it soon. 词数：68 | 拔高满分范文，句式多样、贴合单元主题 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $