Unit 3 A better me 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年冀教版（三起）英语五年级上册

冀教版五年级上英语 Unit 3 A better me 写作训练 主题：学习习惯、健康习惯与一周计划 一、单元写作目标 • 能用 always, often, sometimes, never 描写自己在学校和生活中的习惯。 • 能用 once a day, twice a day, three times a week 等短语说明做某事的频率。 • 能用 on time, need to, want to change, make a plan 表达“成为更好的自己”的做法。 • 能把“现在的习惯—需要改进的地方—计划或行动—结果”连成一篇小短文。 二、写作思路讲解 本单元写作不是简单罗列一天做了什么，而是要写出“我怎样让自己变得更好”。可以先写在学校的学习习惯，再写健康习惯，最后写自己的改进计划。这样文章有顺序，也有主题。 写学校生活时，可以从准时到校、认真听讲、按时完成作业、参加社团或运动来展开。频率副词一般放在行为动词前面，be 动词后面。例如：I always listen carefully in class. / I am never late. 写健康习惯时，要注意 “How often...?” 问的是频率，不是具体时间。回答时可以用 every day, once a week, twice a day, three times a week。句子要具体，比如 I exercise twice a day 比 I exercise 更清楚。 写计划时，可以把不足写出来，再写改进办法。例如：Sometimes I stay up late. I need to go to bed on time. I make a plan for my school day. 这样文章会有变化和成长感。 三、重点句型 1. I always / often / sometimes / never + 动词短语. 例句：I always get to school on time. / I never stay up late. 2. I am always / often / sometimes / never + 形容词. 例句：I am never late. / I am often busy after school. 3. I do my homework / go to bed / get up + on time. 例句：I do my homework on time. 4. How often do you + 动词短语? 例句：How often do you exercise? 5. I + 动词短语 + once / twice / three times a day / week. 例句：I play sports three times a week. 6. I need to + 动词原形. 例句：I need to eat more vegetables and do more exercise. 7. I want to change, so I make a plan. 例句：I want to change, so I make a plan for my school day. 四、句型仿写 1. 例：I always get to school on time. 仿写：我总是按时完成作业。 ______________________________________________________________ 2. 例：I am never late. 仿写：我上课从不困。 ______________________________________________________________ 3. 例：I exercise twice a day. 仿写：我每周运动三次。 ______________________________________________________________ 4. 例：I often eat apples and bananas. 仿写：我经常吃蔬菜和水果。 ______________________________________________________________ 5. 例：I need to do more exercise. 仿写：我需要每天吃早餐。 ______________________________________________________________ 6. 例：I want to change, so I make a plan. 仿写：我想早睡，所以我制订一个计划。 ______________________________________________________________ 五、连词成句 1. always / I / listen / carefully / in class / . ______________________________________________________________ 2. never / am / I / late / for school / . ______________________________________________________________ 3. do / you / How often / exercise / ? ______________________________________________________________ 4. twice a day / I / walk / to school / . ______________________________________________________________ 5. need to / more vegetables / eat / I / . ______________________________________________________________ 6. makes / Charlie / a plan / and / it works / . ______________________________________________________________ 六、写作练习 练习一：My school life 要求：写 5—6 句话，介绍你在学校的学习和活动。至少使用 always, often, sometimes, never 中的 3 个词。 写作横线： ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 练习二：Healthy and strong 要求：写 6—7 句话，介绍你的早餐、饮食和运动习惯。至少使用一个频率短语，如 every day, once a week, twice a day, three times a week。 写作横线： ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 练习三：A better me 要求：写 7—8 句话，先介绍自己的学习或生活习惯，再写一个需要改进的地方，最后写你的计划。句式要有变化。 写作横线： ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 参考范文与讲解 范文一：My school life I am a good student at school. I always get to school on time. I listen to my teachers carefully in class. I often do my homework on time. Sometimes I play sports with my friends. I am never late for school. 讲解：这篇范文难度较低，围绕学校生活展开。开头先总说 “I am a good student at school.”，后面用 always, often, sometimes, never 写出不同频率的行为。最后一句和开头呼应，说明“好学生”的具体表现不是空话。 范文二：Healthy and strong I want to be healthy and strong. I have breakfast every morning. I often eat apples and bananas. I eat vegetables every day, too. I exercise twice a day. I walk to school in the morning and walk home after school. I need to keep these good habits. 讲解：这篇范文从目标句 “I want to be healthy and strong.” 开始，主题很清楚。中间分别写 breakfast, fruit, vegetables 和 exercise，内容有层次。“twice a day” 让运动习惯更具体，最后用 “need to” 表示继续保持好习惯。 范文三：A better me I want to be a better me. At school, I always listen carefully and do my homework on time. After school, I often play basketball with my friends. But sometimes I stay up late and feel sleepy in class. I need to go to bed early. I make a plan for my school day. I will wash up at 8:40 and go to bed at 9:00. I think my plan will work. 讲解：这篇范文难度最高，因为它不仅写习惯，还写出了问题和计划。前两句写好的学习习惯，第三句写课后活动，第四句用 But 转到需要改进的地方。后面用 “I need to...” 和 “I make a plan...” 写行动，最后一句表达对计划的期待，文章有完整的发展。 参考答案 句型仿写参考答案 1. I always do my homework on time. 2. I am never sleepy in class. 3. I exercise three times a week. 4. I often eat vegetables and fruit. 5. I need to have breakfast every day. 6. I want to go to bed early, so I make a plan. 连词成句参考答案 1. I always listen carefully in class. 2. I am never late for school. 3. How often do you exercise? 4. I walk to school twice a day. 5. I need to eat more vegetables. 6. Charlie makes a plan and it works. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $