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冀教版五年级上英语 Unit 1 School clubs 写作训练
主题:学校社团 | 目标:能介绍想加入或正在参加的社团、兴趣、活动和收获
一、写作目标
• 能用 I want to join ... 表达想加入的社团。
• 能用 I am interested in ... / I am good at ... 说明自己的兴趣和特长。
• 能用 In the club, I ... 描述社团活动。
• 能写一段 6-8 句话的小短文,介绍自己喜欢的学校社团和参加社团的收获。
二、课文仿写思路
本单元围绕 School clubs 展开,课文先介绍学校里有不同社团,再询问想加入哪个社团,然后说明自己的兴趣、特长和在社团里做什么。写作时可以沿用这个顺序:先点明社团主题,再写自己想加入或已经参加的社团,接着写兴趣或原因,最后写在社团里的活动和收获。
推荐写作顺序:学校有很多社团 → 我想加入/我在某个社团 → 我的兴趣或特长 → 我在社团里做什么 → 社团带给我的收获或感受。提高写作时,可以加入时间、老师、朋友和未来目标。
核心词汇
社团类:club, sports club, football club, drama club, music club, paper-cut club, reading club, basketball club, painting club, swimming club
兴趣与特长:interest, interested, be interested in, be good at, love, like, want to
活动类:join, practice, learn, sing songs, play the piano, act out a play, read books, share stories, play basketball, make paper-cuts
收获与感受:fun, interesting, useful, wonderful, amazing, make new friends, learn a lot, have a good time
三、重点句型精讲
句型 1: Which club do you want to join?
课文原句:Which club do you want to join?
怎么用:用来询问别人想加入哪个社团。写对话或调查报告时可以用这个问句引出话题。
可替换内容:the sports club, the music club, the drama club, the reading club, the football club
仿写例句:Which club do you want to join? I want to join the reading club.
易错提醒:Which 表示“哪一个”,后面接 club;不要写 What club do you want join?,want 后面要有 to。
句型 2: I want to join + 社团.
课文原句:I want to join the sports club. / I want to join the drama club.
怎么用:用来表达“我想加入……社团”,适合放在短文开头点明选择。
可替换内容:the kung fu club, the sports club, the drama club, the music club, the reading club, the basketball club
仿写例句:I want to join the music club. I want to join the reading club.
易错提醒:join 表示“加入”,want to 后面接动词原形 join,不写 I want join。
句型 3: I am interested in + 名词/动名词.
课文原句:I'm interested in paper-cuts. / I'm interested in acting.
怎么用:用来说明自己的兴趣。in 后面可以接名词,也可以接动名词。
可替换内容:paper-cuts, music, acting, reading, basketball, painting, swimming, playing football
仿写例句:I am interested in reading. I am interested in music.
易错提醒:interested 前面要有 am/is/are;不要写 I interested in music。
句型 4: I am good at + 名词/动名词.
课文原句:I'm good at running.
怎么用:用来说明自己的特长,能自然解释为什么想加入某个社团。
可替换内容:running, singing, dancing, acting, drawing, playing basketball, playing football
仿写例句:I am good at singing. I am good at playing basketball.
易错提醒:at 后面接动词时要用 -ing,如 running、singing、playing。
句型 5: What do you do in the club?
课文原句:What do you do in the drama club? / I learn how to act out a play.
怎么用:用来询问和回答社团活动。作文中可以用 In the club, I ... 直接描述。
可替换内容:learn singing skills, play the piano, act out a play, read storybooks, share stories, practice basketball
仿写例句:In the drama club, I learn how to act out a play. In the reading club, I share stories with my friends.
易错提醒:in the club 表示“在社团里”;写活动时要具体,不要只写 I play。
句型 6: The club is + 形容词. / I have fun in the club.
课文原句:The basketball club is fun. / I have fun in the club.
怎么用:用来写结尾感受,也可以写社团带来的好处。
可替换内容:fun, interesting, useful, wonderful, amazing, great for me
仿写例句:The music club is interesting. I have a good time in the club.
易错提醒:fun 可以作形容词或名词使用;great fun 前面通常不用 a。
四、句型仿写
请根据中文提示完成句子。
1. 你想加入哪个社团?→ Which club do you want to ________?
2. 我想加入阅读社团。→ I want to join the ________ club.
3. 我对剪纸感兴趣。→ I am interested ________ paper-cuts.
4. 我擅长跑步。→ I am good ________ running.
5. 在戏剧社团,我学习表演话剧。→ In the drama club, I learn how to ________ out a play.
6. 我在社团里玩得很开心。→ I have ________ in the club.
五、连词成句
注意句首大写和句末标点。
1. club / Which / do / want / join / you / to / ?
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2. want / I / join / to / music club / the / .
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3. interested / am / I / in / reading / .
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4. good / at / running / am / I / .
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5. learn / I / to / play / the piano / .
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6. club / is / The / fun / basketball / .
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六、写作练习
练习一:The club I want to join
题目:The club I want to join
要求:写 5-6 句话,说一说你想加入哪个社团,为什么想加入。可以使用 I want to join ... / I am interested in ... / I am good at ...。
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练习二:My favourite club
题目:My favourite club
要求:写 6-7 句话,介绍你最喜欢的社团。要写社团名称、兴趣、社团活动和感受。可以使用 In the club, I ... / The club is ...。
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练习三:School clubs are fun
题目:School clubs are fun
要求:写 7-8 句话,介绍学校社团,并重点介绍一个你参加或想参加的社团。句式要有变化,可以写朋友、老师、时间、活动和收获。
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七、参考范文与讲解
参考范文一:The club I want to join
There are many clubs in our school. I want to join the reading club. I am interested in storybooks. I like reading after school. In the club, I can read and share stories. The reading club is wonderful.
范文讲解:这篇范文适合基础写作。第一句先写学校有很多社团,第二句用 I want to join ... 点明选择。第三、四句说明兴趣,后面用 In the club, I can ... 写活动,最后一句评价社团。结构完整,句子容易仿写。
参考范文二:My favourite club
My favourite club is the music club. I love music, but I am not good at singing. Now I am in the music club. I learn singing skills and play the piano there. We practice together every week. I make new friends in the club. I have a good time there.
范文讲解:这篇范文借鉴课文 Clubs are fun! 的写法。开头点明 favourite club,接着写 love music 和 not good at singing,说明加入社团的原因。中间写 learn singing skills、play the piano、practice together,活动具体。最后写 make new friends 和 have a good time,体现社团收获。
参考范文三:School clubs are fun
In our school, there are many interesting clubs. I am interested in basketball, so I want to join the basketball club. I am good at running, but I want to learn more basketball skills. In the club, I can play basketball with my friends. We can learn the rules from the PE teacher. We can also learn to work as a team. The basketball club is useful and fun for me. I think school clubs are great.
范文讲解:这篇范文适合提高练习。第一句总写 school clubs,第二句用 so 连接兴趣和选择。第三句写已有特长和学习目标,中间用 play with friends、learn the rules、work as a team 写活动和收获。结尾用 useful and fun 和 school clubs are great 总结,内容更有层次。
八、参考答案
句型仿写参考答案
1. join
2. reading
3. in
4. at
5. act
6. fun
连词成句参考答案
1. Which club do you want to join?
2. I want to join the music club.
3. I am interested in reading.
4. I am good at running.
5. I learn to play the piano.
6. The basketball club is fun.
写作练习答案不唯一,能围绕 school clubs、兴趣、想加入或正在参加的社团、活动和收获展开,语句通顺即可。
九、写作小结
• 写社团主题时,先写学校有社团,再写自己想加入或正在参加的社团。
• 说明原因时,可以用 I am interested in ... 和 I am good at ...。
• 写活动时,要具体写 In the club, I learn/practice/share/play ...。
• 结尾可以写 The club is fun. / I make new friends. / I learn a lot.,突出社团收获。
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