四川成都市2026届高三第三次诊断性考试 读后续写 讲义

该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写专题，覆盖情节构思、语言表达、情感升华等核心考点，按“文本类型判定-续写框架设计-语料分层积累”逻辑组织知识点，通过考点梳理（题材主题分析、情节结构拆解）、方法指导（四步走结构、情感递进策略）、真题训练（成都三诊真题详解）等环节，帮助学生构建从理解到表达的完整解题链条。 资料创新采用苏格拉底式问题引导思维品质提升，如设计“小女孩哭声出现时的环境与心理”等探究问题，结合动作、心理、环境分层语料库和高级替换词表强化语言能力，通过多版本范文对比和独立主格、分词短语等语法结构训练，确保学生在有限时间内掌握情节推进与情感升华技巧，为教师精准把控复习节奏、提升学生应考能力提供系统支撑。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 成都市 2026 届高三第三次诊断性考试 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My best friend, Helen, and I were on our way to Blackburn to catch up with an old university friend who had recently moved there for work. Thrilled to see each other(adj做主语补语), and basking in the prospect of the party weekend ahead(现在分词短语做伴随动作), we chatted nonstop as we made our way by train from York. We placed our bags - full of essentials(adj做后置定语)such as bottles of wine and my new pair of black clogs - above our heads and settled down in a cosy two-seater. About 50 minutes into our journey, I was faintly aware of a bang. Then came another, this time impossible to ignore(独立主格). A woman screamed as our carriage was thrown up into the air in what felt like slow motion. Suddenly, Helen and I were somehow on our feet in the middle of the passage, hugging each other(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Head down(独立主格), eyes tightly shut,(独立主格) I waited for the carriage to roll over and burst into flames, as I'd seen in films. I remember thinking about our families and friends getting the news. After what seemed like ages, I opened my eyes. The carriage was in a mess. Helen and I escaped with injuries and aches from the impact of being thrown forward in the carriage. A fellow passenger sat down heavily on Helen's case, causing it to burst open(现在分词短语做结果状语). "Don't look round," Helen shouted suddenly. But it was too late. I saw a man with his face bleeding. A metal object had crashed through the window behind us. Soon, we learned a runaway digger had rolled down the hill and into the side of the train, causing us to derail.(现在分词短语做结果状语) Our carriage was stuck with its front end in the air. Seeing the chaos and terrified faces all around,(现在分词短语做伴随动作) I was shocked and couldn't help shaking. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Then I heard a little girl crying. Paragraph 2: When I finally handed the girl over to her mother,I let out a long sigh of relief. 成都市 2026 届高三第三次诊断性考试 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My best friend, Helen, and I were on our way to Blackburn to catch up with an old university friend who had recently moved there for work. Thrilled to see each other, and basking in the prospect of the party weekend ahead, we chatted nonstop as we made our way by train from York. We placed our bags - full of essentials such as bottles of wine and my new pair of black clogs - above our heads and settled down in a cosy two-seater. About 50 minutes into our journey, I was faintly aware of a bang. Then came another, this time impossible to ignore. A woman screamed as our carriage was thrown up into the air in what felt like slow motion. Suddenly, Helen and I were somehow on our feet in the middle of the passage, hugging each other. Head down, eyes tightly shut, I waited for the carriage to roll over and burst into flames, as I'd seen in films. I remember thinking about our families and friends getting the news. After what seemed like ages, I opened my eyes. The carriage was in a mess. Helen and I escaped with injuries and aches from the impact of being thrown forward in the carriage. A fellow passenger sat down heavily on Helen's case, causing it to burst open. "Don't look round," Helen shouted suddenly. But it was too late. I saw a man with his face bleeding. A metal object had crashed through the window behind us. Soon, we learned a runaway digger had rolled down the hill and into the side of the train, causing us to derail. Our carriage was stuck with its front end in the air. Seeing the chaos and terrified faces all around, I was shocked and couldn't help shaking. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Then I heard a little girl crying. Paragraph 2: When I finally handed the girl over to her mother,I let out a long sigh of relief. Part 1-1 读后续写类型+构思 一、文本类型判定 维度 类型 题材 突发事件类（事故/灾难） 主题 危机中的人性（勇气 + 互助 + 责任） 情节结构 平静 → 突发 → 混乱 → 自救/他救 → 情感升华 叙事人称 第一人称（沉浸式体验） “突发事故类 + 人物成长/人性光辉” 二、续写总体思路 ⭐标准四步走结构 1. 承接混乱（接上原文） 2. 发现新问题（小女孩哭） 3. 采取行动（帮助/救助） 4. 情感升华（交还母亲 + 反思成长） 三、两段续写布局设计 Paragraph 1（情节推进段） 功能：“从恐惧 → 行动” 建议结构： · 听到哭声（引出任务） · 发现小女孩（视觉+环境） · 内心挣扎（恐惧 vs 责任） · 采取行动（安慰+带离危险） Paragraph 2（收束升华段） 功能：“从行动 → 情感升华” 建议结构： · 找到母亲/寻找过程 · 交还孩子（高潮） · 情绪释放（relief） · 主题升华（成长/勇气/人性） 四、框架提炼 事故 → 恐惧 → 呼救 → 选择 → 行动 → 成功 → 释然 → 升华 或简化版：发现问题 → 内心斗争 → 解决问题 → 情感升华 五、续写实施技巧 1 承接原文的技巧 · 情绪承接：shock → fear → trembling · 场景承接：chaos / injured passengers / tilted carriage · 动作承接：shaking / unable to move → forcing oneself to act 2 细节设计建议 维度 建议 小女孩状态 crying, trapped, calling “Mum” 环境 broken glass, tilted floor, smoke/dust 主人公动作 crawl, reach out, hold, whisper 情感 fear → determination → relief 3 情感递进 恐惧 → 犹豫 → 决心 → 勇气 → 温暖 → 释然 4 高级设计 · 对比：自己很害怕，但仍行动 · 呼应开头：从“期待周末” → “经历生死” · 主题升华句： 3. courage in crisis 3. kindness among strangers 3. ordinary people, extraordinary moments Part 1-2 核心脉络 + 线索分析表 一、故事核心脉络 旅途期待 → 突发事故 → 混乱恐惧 → 幸存 → 发现更严重情况 →（续写）救助他人 → 情感升华 二、关键线索分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 narrator（敏感、真实）、Helen（理性、提醒） "Don't look round," Helen shouted 情感层次 兴奋 → 惊恐 → 绝望 → 震惊 "I waited for the carriage to roll over" 关键情节点 爆炸声 → 列车脱轨 → 受伤 → 看到伤者 "a runaway digger had rolled..." 语言特色 细节具体 + 心理描写突出 "Head down, eyes tightly shut" 关键词分析 bang, scream, chaos, shaking "a woman screamed" 心理描写 对死亡的恐惧 "thinking about our families" 动作描写 抱住、站立、闭眼 "hugging each other" 环境描写 混乱、倾斜、破损 "The carriage was in a mess" 隐含主题 灾难中的人性与脆弱 全文贯穿 情感转折 从期待 → 恐惧 开头 vs 事故 空间转换 座位 → 过道 → 事故现场 "in the middle of the passage" 时间过渡 正常行驶 → 突发瞬间 → 事后 "After what seemed like ages" Part 1-3 苏格拉底式引导问题 引导学生构思 Paragraph 1 1. 小女孩的哭声在什么环境中出现？（安静还是混乱？） 2. 她可能处于什么位置？（被困？找不到妈妈？） 3. 你此时的心理状态是什么？还能行动吗？ 4. 你为什么决定去帮助她？ 5. 你采取了哪些具体动作？ 引导 Paragraph 2 1. 你是如何找到她母亲的？ 2. 母亲见到孩子时的反应是什么？ 3. 你当时的身体和心理状态如何？ 4. 这一经历让你意识到了什么？ 5. 这件事与你开头的“期待旅行”形成什么对比？ 高阶思维引导 · 如果你不去帮助，会怎样？ · 在极度恐惧中，人为什么还能做出善举？ · 这个故事真正想表达的是什么？ Part 2-1 读后续写语料（动作 / 心理 / 环境） 一、动作描写 1. I forced my trembling legs to move forward. 我强迫自己颤抖的双腿向前移动。 2. I bent down and gently reached out to her. 我弯下腰，轻轻伸手去够她。 3. I pulled her into my arms and held her tightly. 我把她拉进怀里，紧紧抱住。 4. I struggled to keep my balance as the carriage tilted. 车厢倾斜，我努力保持平衡。 5. I carefully stepped over the broken glass. 我小心翼翼地跨过碎玻璃。 6. I wrapped my arm around her shoulders protectively. 我用手臂护住她的肩膀。 7. I guided her slowly through the crowded passage. 我带着她慢慢穿过拥挤的过道。 8. I wiped the dust off her face. 我擦去她脸上的灰尘。 9. I lifted her up to avoid the debris on the floor. 我把她抱起来，避开地上的碎片。 10. I waved desperately for help. 我拼命挥手求助。 二、心理描写 1. My heart was pounding wildly in my chest. 我的心在胸腔里狂跳。 2. Fear gripped me, freezing me in place. 恐惧攫住了我，让我动弹不得。 3. I hesitated for a moment, torn between fear and responsibility. 我犹豫了一下，在恐惧与责任之间挣扎。 4. A sudden wave of courage rose within me. 一股勇气突然涌上心头。 5. I kept telling myself to stay calm. 我不断告诉自己要冷静。 6. Panic threatened to overwhelm me. 恐慌几乎将我吞没。 7. I felt a surge of determination. 我感到一股坚定的决心。 8. Relief washed over me when I saw her mother. 当我看到她母亲时，我如释重负。 9. My mind went blank for a second. 我的大脑一片空白。 10. I was shaking, but I knew I had to act. 我在发抖，但我知道必须行动。 三、环境描写 1. The carriage was filled with smoke and dust. 车厢里弥漫着烟尘。 2. Broken glass was scattered across the floor. 地板上散落着碎玻璃。 3. The air was thick with fear and confusion. 空气中弥漫着恐惧与混乱。 4. The carriage leaned at a dangerous angle. 车厢以危险的角度倾斜着。 5. Cries and shouts echoed around me. 哭喊声在四周回荡。 6. The lights flickered weakly. 灯光微弱地闪烁着。 7. Blood stained the seats and floor. 血迹染在座椅和地板上。 8. The narrow passage was crowded with injured passengers. 狭窄的过道挤满了受伤的乘客。 9. Pieces of metal lay twisted and broken. 金属碎片扭曲破裂地散落着。 10. Everything seemed unreal, like a nightmare. 一切都像噩梦般不真实。 Part 2-1高级替换词 一、恐惧类 普通词 高级替换 afraid terrified / horrified scared panic-stricken nervous uneasy / on edge shocked stunned worried anxious 二、动作类 普通词 高级替换 walk stagger / stumble look glance / stare hold clutch / grip help assist / aid move crawl / drag oneself 三、情绪转折类 普通词 高级替换 suddenly all of a sudden then moments later finally eventually very extremely / incredibly feel sense / experience 四、环境类 普通词 高级替换 messy chaotic loud deafening broken shattered dark dim dangerous hazardous Part 2-2 地道搭配 + 词法解析 ⭐核心表达积累表 短语 含义 近义词 反义词 例句1 例句2 be frozen in place 吓得动不了 be paralyzed move freely I was frozen in place with fear. She stood frozen as the noise grew louder. a wave of… 一阵（情绪） a surge of calmness A wave of fear swept over me. A wave of relief flooded her. fight back (fear) 抑制 hold back give in to I tried to fight back my fear. He fought back tears. gather one’s courage 鼓起勇气 summon courage lose courage I gathered my courage to speak. She gathered her courage and stepped forward. reach out to sb 伸手/帮助 extend a hand ignore I reached out to the girl. He reached out to help me up. hold sb tightly 紧紧抱住 embrace let go She held the child tightly. He held me tightly in fear. guide sb through 带领穿过 lead abandon I guided her through the crowd. He guided me through the darkness. burst into tears 突然哭 break down hold back tears She burst into tears suddenly. The girl burst into tears when she saw her mother. let out a sigh of relief 松一口气 breathe a sigh of relief remain tense I let out a sigh of relief. He sighed with relief after success. be overwhelmed by 被压倒 be consumed by remain calm I was overwhelmed by fear. She was overwhelmed by joy. ⭐词法&搭配解析 1. “a wave/surge of + 情绪” · 固定结构：a wave/surge/flood of + emotion · 常见搭配： 2. a wave of fear 2. a surge of courage 2. a flood of relief 作文加分点：抽象情绪具象化 2. “-ed / -ing”形容词区别 形式 用法 示例 frightened 人感到害怕 I was frightened frightening 令人害怕的 a frightening scene 3. 动词+副词增强画面 基础 升级 walk walk slowly → stagger unsteadily look look → stare blankly ⭐高频短语补充 短语 含义 in the blink of an eye 转瞬之间 out of instinct 出于本能 at the sight of 一看到 with trembling hands 用颤抖的手 in a low voice 低声地 against all odds 尽管困难重重 side by side 并肩 lose one’s balance 失去平衡 come to one’s senses 恢复意识 risk one’s life 冒着生命危险 Part 3 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: Then I heard a little girl crying. Her thin voice cut through the chaos like a knife(无灵主语句), which instantly pulled me back from my numbness. Following the sound, I saw her crouching beside a twisted seat, her small hands covering her ears(独立主格) as if to shut out the horror around her. For a second, I froze, fear gripping me again(独立主格); yet, remembering(现在分词短语做伴随动作) how Helen had warned me not to look around, I realized that avoiding the scene would not make it disappear. Gathering my courage(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I stumbled toward her, stepping over broken glass and scattered luggage(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “It’s okay,” I whispered, though my own voice trembled. Reaching out(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I pulled her into my arms and held her tightly as she sobbed against me. With the carriage still tilted dangerously, I knew I had to get her out and find her mother. Paragraph 2: When I finally handed the girl over to her mother, I let out a long sigh of relief. I let out a long sigh of relief, feeling the tension(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that had built up inside me slowly melt away. Moments earlier, guided by the girl’s broken words(过去分词做方式状语), I had made my way through the messy passage, calling out(现在分词短语做伴随动作) until a desperate voice answered. The instant the woman rushed forward and took the child from my arms, tears streaming down her face(独立主格), I felt a warmth spread through me that replaced the lingering fear. Helen, who had been following closely behind, gave me a reassuring nod, and for the first time since the accident, I managed a faint smile. Though the journey we had looked forward to had turned into a nightmare, I realized that in the face of danger, even ordinary people like us could find unexpected courage and bring light to others. 表达积累表 表达 含义 替换 cut through the chaos 划破混乱 pierce the silence froze in fear 吓住 was paralyzed gather courage 鼓起勇气 summon courage hold sb tightly 紧抱 clutch / embrace tension melt away 紧张消散 fade away 亮点语料表 类型 表达 同义替换 例句 情绪 fear gripped me terror seized me Fear gripped me suddenly. 情绪 warmth spread through me relief flooded me Relief flooded me at the sight. 动作 stumble toward move unsteadily He stumbled toward the door. 动作 pull into arms gather into arms She pulled the child into her arms. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Then I heard a little girl crying. Her voice that rose above the cries and shouts cut through the carriage and chaos to me, making my heart tighten painfully(现在分词短语做结果状语). I turned my head and spotted her trapped between two seats, her face pale and streaked with tears(独立主格). For a moment, panic threatened to overwhelm me(无灵主语句), and I almost stepped back, wishing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)someone else would help her instead. But the thought of leaving her there, helpless and alone(adj做补语), filled me with guilt. Taking a deep breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I forced my trembling legs forward and carefully freed her from the narrow space. “I’m here,” I murmured, trying to sound calm(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Clinging to me(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she whispered for her mother, and I realized that getting her out safely was only the first step. Paragraph 2: When I finally handed the girl over to her mother, I let out a long sigh of relief. As if a heavy weight had been lifted from my chest. Guided by her repeated cries of “Mum”(过去分词短语做伴随动作), I had moved slowly through the chaotic carriage, calling out(现在分词短语做伴随动作) until a woman’s trembling reply reached us. The reunion was immediate and overwhelming—the mother knelt down, wrapping her arms around the girl(现在分词短语做伴随动作), tears of fear and gratitude streaming down her face(独立主格刻画人物). Watching them(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I suddenly became aware of how much my hands were still shaking. Helen stepped beside me, squeezing my shoulder gently(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and I knew she understood everything I had just been through. In that moment, I learned that courage was not the absence of fear, but the decision to act despite it. 表达积累表 表达 含义 替换 heart tighten 心一紧 feel a pang overwhelmed by panic 被恐慌淹没 consumed by fear force oneself to 强迫自己 push oneself to cling to 紧抓 hold onto a heavy weight lifted 如释重负 burden removed 亮点语料表 类型 表达 同义替换 例句 情绪 guilt filled me I felt guilty Guilt filled me instantly. 情绪 relief washed over me calm came over me Relief washed over me slowly. 动作 free sb from rescue sb from He freed her from danger. 动作 squeeze one’s shoulder pat / grip She squeezed my shoulder. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Then I heard a little girl crying. Her voice trembled in the dim, dust-filled carriage, which seemed to grow quieter for a brief moment as I focused on her. Turning around,(现在分词短语做伴随动作) I noticed her sitting on the floor, surrounded by broken glass and twisted metal(过去分词做后置定语), her eyes wide with fear and cheeks full of tear-stains(独立主格). My instinct was to look away, just as Helen had warned, but something deep inside pushed me forward. Carefully making my way across the unstable floor(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I knelt beside her and spoke softly, hoping to comfort her(现在). She reached out to me immediately, as if I were her only hope. Holding her close(现在), I felt her small body shaking, and I knew I could not leave her until she was safe with her mother. Paragraph 2: When I finally handed the girl over to her mother, I let out a long sigh of relief. My body suddenly felt weak after the tension of the past few minutes. Following her faint calls(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I had led her through the wreckage until a familiar voice answered from the other end of the carriage. The moment they reunited, the girl burst into tears again, while her mother held her as if she would never let go. Standing there(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I realized that the chaos around us had not taken away our ability to care for one another. Helen came up to me quietly, and together we looked at the scene, both shaken yet strangely comforted(独立主格). Even in disaster, kindness could still shine through. 表达积累表 表达 含义 替换 instinct to 本能想 natural urge make one’s way 前进 move forward kneel beside 跪在旁边 crouch next to burst into tears 突然大哭 break down never let go 紧紧不放 hold firmly 亮点语料表 类型 表达 同义替换 例句 情绪 eyes wide with fear frightened expression Her eyes were wide with fear. 情绪 feel weak exhausted I suddenly felt weak. 动作 kneel beside crouch beside He knelt beside her. 动作 lead sb through guide She led him through the crowd. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $