Unit 4 课时4 Section 3 Writing（教学课件）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

该初中英语课件聚焦青少年常见问题分析及建议信写作，通过短语积累游戏和问题-建议语材导入，搭建从核心词汇到语篇表达的学习支架，衔接后续邮件写作任务，帮助学生掌握邮件格式与建议表达逻辑。 其亮点在于任务驱动式教学，结合“Teen to Teen”建议专栏情境，通过范文结构拆解（同情-理解-建议-祝愿）和写作框架（含连接词、时态）培养语言能力与思维品质，提供提建议万能句型及自查清单，实例化问题与建议对应，提升学生表达与解决问题能力，为教师提供系统教学资源，助力高效教学。

Unit 4 Section 3 Writing A better me 沪教版2024英语（九年级上） 1 学习目标 I can talk about common teenage problems. ask for help or advice from others to solve a problem. give advice on common teenage problems. understand why sudden mood changes are normal for teenagers. 2 新课导入 1 3 focus on get on well with hit it off with fall out with… drive….mad turn to… for help be worried about avoid staying up late 与某人相处投缘 对…感到焦虑 和…闹矛盾 向…求助 专注于 令某人恼火 避免熬夜 和……和睦相处 Play a game! (短语积累） 语材积累 What problems do we students often face? Many students usually worry about body image. 语材积累 What suggestions are helpful for you ? You should do more exercise and eat healthily, focus more attention on your study. 语材积累 What problems do we students often face? I always feel I don’t have enough time to finish my homework. 语材积累 What suggestions are helpful for you ? It's a good idea to make a daily time plan and arrange your time wisely. 语材积累 What problems do we students often face? I experience online or offline bullying 语材积累 What suggestions are helpful for you ? You'd better ask your parents and teachers for help at once. Don't keep it to yourself, and learn to protect yourself bravely when you meet bullying. 语材积累 What problems do we students often face? I feel pressure to do well in school 语材积累 What suggestions are helpful for you ? You should make a proper study plan and avoid being tired out. 学习理解 02 13 Writing an email of advice Writing Writers needed for advice column! The school magazine's advice column, Teen to Teen, needs more writers to respond to students’ emails. Are you good at giving advice? If so, please consider joining the Teen to Teen team now! 1. The Teen to Teen writer has replied to Troubled_55. What did he/she include in the email? Read the email and label the different parts. a Give your advice b Express sympathy c Show that you understand the problem d Wish them good luck To: Troubled_55 Subject: Advice from Teen to Teen Dear Troubled_55, I’m sorry to hear that your sister is driving you mad. It is not always easy to share a room with a younger brother or sister. When I was a teenager, I was in the same situation as you. I had to share a room with my younger brother, and he often made a lot of noise when I was studying. I always hated it when that happened. My advice is that you try to help your sister grow up. You need to teach her that rules are important. This takes time, so you have to be patient. Ask her to play the piano only When you're not studying, let her borrow your things only if she asks you first. Perhaps she just wants more attention from you. Try spending some time with her every day, and you'll both learn how to live happily with each other. I hope these suggestions will be helpful. Best wishes, Teen to Teen a Give your advice b Express sympathy d Wish them good luck c Show that you understand the problem To: Troubled_55 Subject: Advice from Teen to Teen Dear Troubled_55, I’m sorry to hear that your sister is driving you mad. It is not always easy to share a room with a younger brother or sister. When I was a teenager, I was in the same situation as you. I had to share a room with my younger brother, and he often made a lot of noise when I was studying. I always hated it when that happened. My advice is that you try to help your sister grow up. You need to teach her that rules are important. This takes time, so you have to be patient. Ask her to play the piano only When you're not studying, let her borrow your things only if she asks you first. Perhaps she just wants more attention from you. Try spending some time with her every day, and you'll both learn how to live happily with each other. I hope these suggestions will be helpful. Best wishes, Teen to Teen 一、开头 礼貌开篇，引出对方的问题。表达同理心与理解 二、中间 提供具体且可行的建议 三、结尾 表达祝愿 话题分析 问题及建议 本单元主要话题是青少年常见问题与解决方法 ，相关写作题目可延伸为“给朋友的一封建议信”“如何应对学习压力”“解决与父母的矛盾”等。命题内容以应用写作为主 ，要求先表达对对方问题的理解和同情 ，然后给出 2-3 条具体 、可行的建议 ，最后表达祝愿。写作时应该运用本单元学到的关于问题与建议的材料。注意语气礼貌 、真诚 ，建议要具有可操作性。 一、按照邮件格式，写好收件人、主题和称呼，开头表达对对方问题的理解和同情。 ◆ 二、正文分点给出 2-3 条具体、可行的建议，每条建议说明理由。 ◆ 三、结尾表达祝愿，希望建议能有所帮助，期待对方的回复。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： • What is the teenager's problem? 这位青少年的问题是什么？ • How do you feel about his/her problem? 你对他/她的问题有什么感受？ • What suggestions can you give to solve the problem? 你能给出什么建议来解决这个问题？ • What do you wish for him/her? 你对他/她有什么祝愿？ 写作框架 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开头 问候与理解 邮件格式（收件人、主题 、称呼，表达对对方问题的理解和同情 一般现在时 I'm sorry to hear that. It is not easy to deal with. I understand how you feel... 中间 给出建议 分点给出 2-3 条具体建议 ，说明每条建议的理由 一般现在时 First, I think you should. Second, why don't you. Finally, you could also… This will help you... 结尾 祝愿与期待 表达祝愿 ，希望建议能有所帮助 ，期待回复 一般现在时 I hope these suggestions will be helpful, Best wishes, I'm looking forward to your reply... 提建议万能句型 1.You should（are supposed to）… 你应该…… 2.It’s a good idea to… …… 是个好办法 3.You’d better… 你最好…… 4.Why not…? 为什么不……？ 5.It’s helpful to… …… 会很有帮助 6.You’d better…..你最好 应用实践 03 21 2. Now give your advice. Step1 Plan Choose one teenager from page 53 to reply to. Think about your advice, and note down your ideas. Step 2 Write Write an email to help the teenager with his or her problem. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I expressed my sympathy, showed that I understood the problem and provided helpful advice. I followed the format of an email. I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. Step 3 Check and revise Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. To: Dinosaur_boy Subject: Don't worry! You'll do great! Dear Dinosaur_boy, I am sorry to hear that you are feeling nervous about starting your new school. I completely understand your worries. Moving to a new place and starting a new school is never easy. However, there are some things you can do to feel better. First of all, be confident! Nobody knows you in the new school, so you have a great chance to make a fresh start. Why not try to be the first to say hello to your classmates? You might find that they are also waiting to make new friends. What's more, you can focus on things you love. Joining a school club, such as a basketball or cooking club, is a great way to hit it off with people who share the same interests. Don't worry. Being shy is not a problem. Just be yourself and give it some time. I hope you will make many new friends soon. Best wishes, Teen to Teen 回顾总结 06 26 一、复习和总结描述问题和建议的词汇和句型。 二、学习范文如何写问题和建议的文章。 三、用所学的知识完成一篇写作任务。 课堂小练 07 28 1.负责；掌管 2.使某人陷入麻烦 3.专注于 4.对…生气 5.感到十分尴尬 6.令某人恼火 7.养做某事的习惯 8.和……和睦相处 9.与某人相处投缘 10.对…感到焦虑 in charge of get sb. into trouble. focus on be angry with feel really embarrassed drive sb. mad! have a habit of get on well with hit it off with be worried about fall out with friends be in the same situation learn to relax yourself arrange time well avoid staying up late turn to ...for help never keep bad feelings to yourself balance study and rest 11.和朋友闹矛盾 12.处境相同 13.学会放松自己 14.合理安排时间 15.避免熬夜 16.向…求助 17.不要独自压抑负面情绪 18.平衡学习与休息 1.听说你和妹妹相处不好 ，我很遗憾。 I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting on with your sister. 2.在一所学校做新生不容易。 It is not easy to be a new student in a school. 3.很多学生感到压力大，难以处理成长中的烦恼。 Many students feel stressed in school and have trouble dealing with their growing problems. 一、开头 引出对方的问题。表达同理心与理解 4.我懂你的感受。我知道…… 这件事并不容易。 I understand how you feel. / I know it's not easy to... 5.我年少时，也和你有过一样的处境。 When I was a teenager, I was in the same situation as you. 6.青少年遇到这类问题很正常，不用太难过。 It is common for teenagers to meet such problems, so don’t be too upset. 二、中间 提供具体且可行的建议 1.为了解决这些问题，我给你一些有用的建议。【总起建议句】 To solve these problems, I have some useful suggestions for you. 2.首先，你应该尽力放松自己。 First of all, you should try your best to relax yourself. 3.此外，和父母老师交流是个好办法。 Besides, it’s a good idea to communicate with your parents or teachers. 4.而且，你可以培养爱好来减轻压力。 What’s more, you can take up hobbies to reduce your pressure. 5.最后，你最好制定计划合理安排时间。 Last but not least, you’d better make a plan to manage your time well. 三、结尾 表达祝愿 1.希望我的建议能帮你解决问题。 I hope my advice can help you solve your problems. 2.如果你采纳这些建议，一定会变得更好。 I believe you will become better if you follow these suggestions. 3.期待你的好消息(回复）。 Looking forward to your good news. /reply 假如你是Mandy，你的好友Alice在微信朋友圈发文说最近很烦恼，请你给她写一封email，鼓励她振作起来。提示： 1、分析Alice不开心的原因（是否和同学相处不好、父母是否要求过高） 2、给她一些建议减少压力（多和父母沟通、多参加学校文体活动、业余时间多放松自己） 3、给她美好的祝福 Dear Alice, I am writing to tell you some ways on how to release pressure. I read your Moments. And I just want to remind you pressure is a serious problem in our life, nobody is an exception. I know you are under too much pressure. Maybe you don’t get on well with your classmates. Maybe your parents expect too much which makes you feel stressed out. Maybe you worry about the mid-term exam because of the lack of confidence. Here are some suggestions for you to release pressure. I think you can communicate with your classmates and parents. Besides, I suggest taking part in more school activities. It's also helpful. Of course, you need to relax yourself on weekends by hanging out with friends, seeing a movie or having a meal outside and so on. All in all, less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you! Yours, Mandy 假如你是英语校报的编辑李华,校报收到了九年级学生Simon的来信征求建议,请根据以下提示给Simon写一封回信,回信需包含以下内容： 注意： 1）词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2）不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Simon, I am sorry to hear that you have some difficulties in your life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck with everything! Li Hua Dear Simon, I am sorry to hear that you have some difficulties in your life. I totally understand your feelings as lots of Grade 9 students face the same troubles. For your heavy study pressure, you can take regular exercise like jogging after class. It eases your nervous mood greatly. Besides, making a practical study plan stops you from staying up late and feeling worn out. As for the misunderstanding with your parents, sit down to share your true thoughts patiently. You may also talk about your daily stress with them. They will gradually learn about your situation and give you more support. Don’t stay anxious all the time. Small changes will bring nice results sooner or later. Good luck with everything! Li Hua 假如你是张阳，彼得是你的朋友，他现在是一名九年级学生。为了迎接中考，他整天忙于学 习，最近他感到压力很大，寝食不安，情绪低落，学习效率低下。请你写一封信给他提一些有益的建议，帮助他调整心态，提高学习效率，轻松应考。 要点如下 1.学会放松（每天适当锻炼、听音乐……）： 2.健康饮食； 3. 再补充2点建议 Dear Peter, Don't worry about your study too much. First, you should _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours. Zhang Yang Dear Peter, Don’t worry about your study too much. First, you should learn to relax. I think doing some sports is good for you. Listening to music is also a good way to relax. And I think it’s necessary to have a healthy eating habit. Remember to have breakfast every morning. It can provide you with enough energy to learn for the whole morning. What’s more, you’d better not stay up too late so as to have enough sleep. It will help you remain active during the day. Finally, you can talk with your friends, parents or teachers often. Tell them about your thoughts. Try to get help from them. I hope you will be full of energy and learn better. Yours, Zhang Yang Thank you！ 43 $