上海市杨浦区复旦大学附属中学2025-2026学年高三下学期期末毕业考英语试题作文讲义

上海市杨浦区复旦大学附属中学2025-2026学年高三下学期期末考英语试题 作文讲义 一、写作题目 V. Guided Writing 56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的学生李明，学校将于本周末安排学生自主策划的上海乡村旅游活动，去感受乡村振兴和农村发展带来的变化，你需要给外教 Mr. Smith 写一封信，邀请他参加，内容需要包括： 1. 邀请外教参加活动； 2. 活动安排的具体内容和理由。 二、写作思路 开头段 自我介绍，表明写信目的：诚挚邀请 Mr.Smith 一同参与本校本周末上海乡村研学旅行活动。 主体段 介绍两大具体活动安排并分别说明缘由： 1. 参观现代化新农村村容、特色产业园与新农设施，近距离实地见证乡村振兴战略下上海乡村基础设施、产业经济的巨大变迁； 2. 体验农家特色手工劳作、品尝本土农家美食，沉浸式感受地道乡土人文风情，感受传统乡村与现代发展融合的独特魅力。 结尾段 再次发出诚挚邀约，期待对方抽空参与，一同体验不一样的乡村风貌，静候回复。 三、写作高级表达 开头段 高级短语 · extend a sincere invitation 发出诚挚邀请 · launch a student-organized field trip 开展学生自主组织的外出研学 · rural revitalization 乡村振兴 · witness dramatic transformations 见证巨大变化 · spare your precious time 抽出宝贵时间 高级句子 1.I am Li Ming from Mingqi Middle School, writing to sincerely invite you to join our school’s rural tour this weekend.我是明启中学李明，写信诚挚邀请您参加我校本周末的乡村之行。 2.Our school will hold a student-planned trip to rural areas of Shanghai to experience local rural development.我校将开展由学生自主策划的上海乡村之旅，感受当地乡村的发展现状。 3.It would be a great honor for us if you could take part in this meaningful outdoor activity. 若您能参与这场有意义的户外活动，我们将倍感荣幸。 主体段 高级短语 · pay a visit to modern rural industrial parks 参观现代化乡村产业园 · advanced infrastructure 完善的基础设施 · gain first-hand experience 获得亲身实地体验 · integrate tradition with modern development 融合传统与现代化发展 · experience authentic rural snacks 品尝地道农家美食 · distinctive local customs 独特的乡土风俗 · remarkable achievements in rural construction 乡村建设的丰硕成果 · broaden your horizons 开阔眼界 高级句子 1.We will first tour the newly-built countryside, where you can clearly see upgraded roads, houses and supporting facilities.我们首先游览新建乡村，您能直观看到升级后的道路、民居与配套设施。 2.This arrangement helps you observe how rural revitalization has reshaped countryside life in Shanghai.该安排能让您亲眼见证乡村振兴如何重塑上海乡村生活面貌。 3.We will also take part in simple farm handcrafts and taste characteristic farm food from local villages.我们还会体验简易农家手工制作，品尝当地特色农家菜肴。 4.Such immersive experience enables you to feel unique local culture beyond city scenery. 这类沉浸式体验能让您领略城市之外独具特色的本土乡土文化。 5.The whole journey is well-organized and relaxing, free from tight schedules and heavy pressure. 全程行程安排轻松有序，没有紧凑繁重的行程压力。 6.You will have a precious chance to know about China’s rural development in a vivid way. 您将拥有宝贵机会直观生动地了解中国乡村的发展现状。 结尾段 高级短语 · look forward to your favorable reply 期待您的答复 · embark on this pleasant journey 开启这场愉快旅程 · enjoy a rewarding weekend 度过充实有益的周末 · deepen cross-cultural communication 加深文化交流 · cherish this wonderful opportunity 珍惜此次美好契机 高级句子 1.We sincerely hope you can accept our invitation and explore charming rural Shanghai with us together.我们衷心希望您接受邀请，和我们一同领略魅力十足的上海乡村。 2.I am convinced that this trip will bring you a fresh and unforgettable experience. 我相信这场旅途会带给您新鲜难忘的独特体验。 3.Please feel free to tell me your decision at your earliest convenience. 方便之时敬请告知您的决定。 四、范文赏析 Dear Mr. Smith, I’m Li Ming from Mingqi Middle School. I’m writing to sincerely invite you to take part in our student-organized rural tour in suburban Shanghai this weekend. The activity aims to let us witness great changes brought by China’s rural revitalization. Here are detailed arrangements. First, we will visit modern rural communities and agricultural industrial parks. By observing upgraded infrastructure and new industries, you can directly see how greatly rural areas have developed in recent years. Besides, we will experience simple farm handwork and taste genuine local farm food, which allows you to feel traditional rural culture mixed with modern progress. These activities combine sightseeing with cultural experience perfectly. We are eager to have you accompany us. It will surely be a fresh and rewarding experience. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 中文翻译 尊敬的史密斯老师： 您好，我是明启中学的李明。我写这封信诚挚邀请您参加本周末我校学生自主组织的上海近郊乡村之行。本次活动旨在让大家亲眼见证乡村振兴带来的巨大发展变化。 现将具体行程安排告知您：首先我们将参观现代化乡村居民区与农业产业园，通过观摩升级后的基础设施与新兴产业，您可以直观感受到近些年乡村翻天覆地的发展。除此之外，我们会体验简易农家手工劳作、品尝正宗农家美食，切身感受传统乡土文化与现代化发展交融的独特韵味，游玩与文化体验兼顾。 我们十分期盼您一同前往，相信这会是一次新鲜充实的体验。静候您的回复。 李明 范文赏析要点： 整体结构赏析 标准英文邀请信三段式结构：首段自我介绍、点明写信意图发出邀约；主体清晰交代两项活动内容，配套对应理由，完整覆盖题干两大硬性要求；结尾再次邀约并等候回信。总词数 141 词，精准落在 120-150 词要求区间，书信格式规范得体。 经典例句逐句赏析 例句1：I’m writing to sincerely invite you to take part in our student-organized rural tour in suburban Shanghai this weekend. 赏析：经典书信开篇句式，student-organized 复合形容词提升用词质感，sincerely invite 语气礼貌正式，契合师生之间的交际语境。 例句2：By observing upgraded infrastructure and new industries, you can directly see how greatly rural areas have developed in recent years. 赏析：介词短语置于句首作状语，句式摆脱简单主谓堆砌；宾语从句强化表达逻辑，紧扣 “见证乡村发展变化” 核心主题。 例句3：Besides, we will experience simple farm handwork and taste genuine local farm food, which allows you to feel traditional rural culture mixed with modern progress. 赏析：which 引导非限制性定语从句，承接活动内容顺势点明活动意义；mixed with 高分分词短语作后置定语，语法亮点突出。 整体得分亮点 逻辑衔接词 First、Besides 层次分明；综合运用非谓语、定语从句等高分语法结构；词汇选用地道高级，内容紧扣乡村振兴主题，邀请语气礼貌谦和，完全符合高中英语应用文高分评分标准。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $