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Unit 1 Sports
Writing Workshop
A Survey Report on Sports (Period I)
北师大版 英语 八年级上册
You are going to write a survey report on your classmates’ daily sports activities.
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1. What information can you find from the pie charts below?
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Which sport is the most popular among students?
How many times did most students play sports last week?
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2. How would you report the results?
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What’s this survey about?
What other information can you get from this graph?
Students’ favourite ball games and how often they played them last week.
Focus on Content
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Focus on Content — Read and answer the following questions.
1. Which ball games do most students like?
2. How often did they play them last week?
3. How do they feel about ball games?
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1. Which ball games do most students like?
Most students like football games.
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2. How often did they play them last week?
Most (80%) of them played once or twice. Five played four times and one didn’t play any ball games.
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3. How do they feel about ball games?
They feel that ball games give them energy and help build team spirit.
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I asked thirty students in my class about their favourite ball games, how often they played them last week and the reasons. Here are the results of my survey.
Most of my classmates prefer playing ball games. A few prefer watching them. Half (50%) of my classmates favour football. Twenty per cent like basketball best and thirty per cent prefer other ball games.
Last week, almost all played at least one ball game. Most (80%) of them played once or twice. Five played four times and one didn't play any ball games.
The results show that nearly everyone likes ball games.They feel that ball games give them energy and help build team spirit.
How many parts does the survey report have?
introduce the survey
report the survey results
conclude the survey report
Focus on Structure
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I asked thirty students in my class about their favourite ball games, how often they played them last week and the reasons. Here are the results of my survey.
Most of my classmates prefer playing ball games. A few prefer watching them. Half (50%) of my classmates favour football. Twenty per cent like basketball best and thirty per cent prefer other ball games.
Last week, almost all played at least one ball game. Most (80%) of them played once or twice. Five played four times and one didn't play any ball games.
The results show that nearly everyone likes ball games.They feel that ball games give them energy and help build team spirit.
What does each part include?
introduce the survey
report the survey results
conclude the survey report
Focus on Structure
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What does the first part include?
how the writer carried out the survey
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What does the first part include?
who are included in the survey
Focus on Structure
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What does the first part include?
what the survey is about
Focus on Structure
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What does the second part include?
how they enjoy ball games
Focus on Structure
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What does the second part include?
what ball games they like best
Focus on Structure
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What does the second part include?
how often they played them last week
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What does the third part include?
a summary of the results
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What does the third part include?
how they feel
Focus on Structure
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A survey report on...
conclude the survey report
introduce the survey
report the survey results
how the writer carried out the survey
who are included in the survey
what the survey is about
how they enjoy ball games
what ball games they like best
how often they played them last week
how they feel
a summary of the results
Work out your own outline.
Focus on Structure
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Read the report again. Underline the sentences for reporting survey results.
To write a survey report, you can:
introduce the survey
I asked... about...
Focus on Language
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To write a survey report, you can:
report the survey results with
quantifiers and statistics
everyone (100%)
the majority / most (of) (≥80%)
half (of) (50%)
a few (of) (5%–10%)
no one (0)
twenty per cent
...
Focus on Language
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To write a survey report, you can:
conclude the survey report
The results show that...
They feel that...
Focus on Language
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More language support:
To show what people like
prefer (doing) sth
favour sth
like sth best
Focus on Language
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Why does the writer include a graph in the survey report?
A graph can help readers know about the data of the survey directly and clearly.
It is also easier for readers to compare different quantities.
Write 2–3 sentences about the results of the survey. Use the Sentence Builder to help you.
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Homework
1. 听录音,跟读范文;
2. 完善课堂上仿写的2~3句介绍班级学生运动情况的句子,并从不同方面再写2~3句话进行描述。
Unit 1 Sports
Writing Workshop
A Survey Report on Sports (Period II)
北师大版 英语 八年级上册
A survey report on classmates’ daily sports activities
conclude the survey report
introduce the survey
report the survey results
how the writer carried out the survey
who are included in the survey
what the survey is about
how they enjoy ball games
what ball games they like best
how often they played them last week
how they feel
a summary of the results
Review
Review the survey report we learnt before.
Review
Review the survey report we learnt before.
More language support:
To show what people like
prefer (doing) sth
favour sth
like sth best
You are going to write a survey report on your classmates’ daily sports activities.
Review the writing task.
Review
Compose your writing
Drafting
Use your outline and the Writing Help to write your first draft.
How could you edit your own survey report?
Self Editing Sheet Yes No How to improve?
Content Do you introduce what your survey is about and how you carried out the survey?
Do you describe the results of your survey?
Do you conclude your report with a summary of the results?
Structure Do you have a clear structure?
Do you put the contents in the right order?
Language Do you introduce the survey with proper language?
Do you report the survey results with quantifiers and statistics?
Do you conclude the survey with proper language?
Do you show what people like with different expressions?
Handwriting Do you write clearly and neatly?
Editing and Revising
Use the Peer Editing Sheet as a guide to edit with a partner.
After that, revise your survey report and share it with the class.
Does the writer
introduce what the survey is about and how it was carried out?
describe the results of the survey with data and proper language?
conclude the report with a summary of the results?
You are supposed to circle any spelling, punctuation or grammar errors.
mark any unclear expressions. Give suggestions if you can.
underline the expressions you like.
give more comments:
Sharing and Editing Together
What can you learn from his/her writing?
What suggestions do you want to give him/her?
Homework
根据课堂上的自评、互评及班级共评结果,进一步修改、完善班级运动情况调查报告。
谢谢
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