Unit4 Then and now 写作专项（导学案）2026-2027学年沪教版（五四学制）英语八年级上册

沪教英语五四学制八年级上册 Unit4 Then and now 写作专项：Changes in our lives 对比说明文（今昔生活变化） 一、写作题目 Your social studies teacher asks you to write a short comparison article titled Changes in our lives, describing how life has changed between the past and today. (80–120 words) 二、写作目标 1. 掌握对比说明文结构：开篇总起、两段今昔细节对比、结尾总结感悟 2. 学会使用对比衔接词（in the old days /nowadays, unlike, although）突出差异 3. 时态搭配：一般过去时（描述过去）+ 一般现在时（描述现在） 4. 熟练运用本单元语法：although/though 引导的让步状语从句 5. 完成 80-120 词逻辑清晰、对比鲜明的短文 三、写作分析 1. 人称与时态 · 人称：第一人称 my family / I /our life，客观叙述也可用第三人称 people · 时态： · 过去生活：一般过去时 · 现代生活：一般现在时 · 核心语法：although/though 让步状语从句、形容词比较级 2. 思路点拨（三段式结构） 开头段（总起）：总述几十年间生活发生了巨大变化，引出下文对比 正文段（对比细节）：选取 2 个维度（居住环境、校园生活、交通、通讯任选其二），分别写过去的不便与现在的便利，加入对比连接词 结尾段（总结感悟）：感叹时代进步，表达对美好生活的感慨 四、写作模板（表格版） 段落 板块 参考句型 开头 总起引入 Great changes have taken place in our life over the years. My grandparents often tell me how different life was in the past. 正文 今昔对比（2 组细节） In the old days, ... However, nowadays, ... Although people had simple tools long ago, we have much modern equipment today. 结尾 总结感受 It is amazing to see such big changes. I feel lucky to live in such a convenient modern world. 五、范文（英文 + 中文翻译） Changes in our lives Great changes have taken place in our life over the years. My grandma always tells me stories about her childhood. In the old days, people lived in small houses without electric machines. They cooked with firewood and walked for long trips. Although schools were simple one-room buildings back then, nowadays we have bright classrooms, libraries and labs. We also take high-speed trains and chat with friends online easily. It is amazing to see such great changes. I really feel lucky to enjoy the convenient life today. 中文翻译 生活中的变化 这些年来，我们的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。奶奶总会给我讲她童年的故事。 过去，人们住在狭小的房子里，没有电器设备，用柴火做饭，长途出行只能步行。虽然以前的学校只是简易的单间教室，但如今我们拥有明亮的教室、图书馆和实验室。我们还可以乘坐高铁，随时和朋友线上聊天。 目睹这些巨大的变化令人感慨万分，我十分幸运能够享受如今便捷美好的现代生活。 六、核心素材（好词 + 佳句 + 谚语） 1. 高分好词 change n. 变化；convenient adj. 便利的；in the old days 在过去；nowadays adv. 如今；electric machines 电器设备；high-speed train 高铁；comparison n. 对比 2. 高分佳句 Great changes have taken place in our daily life. Although life was hard in the past, people still lived happily. It is amazing how much life has changed over time. 3. 适配英文谚语 Time brings great changes. 岁月带来巨变。 七、填空练习版（学生随堂作业） Changes in our lives Great changes have taken place in our life over the years. My grandma always tells me stories about her childhood. _________(1. 在过去), people lived in small houses without electric machines. They cooked with firewood and walked for long trips. _________(2. 虽然) schools were simple one-room buildings back then, nowadays we have bright classrooms, libraries and labs. We also take high-speed trains and chat with friends online _________(3. 容易地). It is amazing to see such great _________(4. 变化). I really feel lucky to enjoy the _________(5. 便利的) life today. 参考答案 1. In the old days 2. Although / Though 3. easily 4. changes 5. convenient ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $