第6天 写作专题(一)-【通成学典】2026-2027学年预备九年级英语暑期升级训练（8升9人教版）

复习·整合培优 第6天 写作专题（一) 典题在线 高分解码， [习作初稿] 机器人在日常生活中扮演着越来越重要的 Recently,there has been a heated 角色。机器人有可能承担教师的工作。你愿意 选择机器人当你的老师吗？请就此话题提出你 discussion on whether robots should be our 的观点以及理由。 teachers.I think making robots our teachers is 要求： not a wise decision. 1.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名； Firstly,robots don't have feelings.They 2.不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总 may cause the classes boring and students can't 词数。 communicate with them better.Meanwhile, Recently,there has been a heated discussion we can't judge things just according to "right" on whether robots should be our teachers. or“wrong”,but robots can only define your actions as right or wrong things,so it's difficult of robots to solve some problems. Thirdly,robots just teach students knowledge and don't teach them to learn how to be a real person.We go to school not only to study skills,but also to learn to be a kind, 审题谋篇 responsible and honest person. 这是一篇关于机器人能否担任教师的话题 Teaching is a long-time job and teachers' 写作，属于议论文范畴。本写作可分为三段：第 experience and skills are special and valuable. 段开篇点题，亮明观点；第二段阐述机器人能 Sometimes teachers will influence students 否担任教师的理由；最后一段进行总结并说明 positively by teaching them knowledge and 自己的看法。该类写作的时态多以一般现在时 good habits.So robots cannot do this or 为主，人称以第三人称为主。 become real teachers. 写作提纲 [名师点评]本文采用“三段论”结构：首先表达 From my point of view,making Beginning robots our teachers is not a 自己的观，点，接着分别列举三个论据来支撑自 wise decision. 己的观点，最后总结并阐述自己的看法。本文 Firstly,robots don't have 结构完整，条理清晰，整体上是一篇不错的 feelings… 作文。 Opinion Meanwhile,we can't judge Body 但本文在细节方面仍有一些语法错误需要 things… Last but not least,robots just 改正，如第①②③句均存在此问题。另外，本文 teach students knowledge .. 在句式、遣词造句方面仍有待提升。如：①句属 Ending ..Therefore,robots cannot do 于中式英语；②句可改为定语从句；④句表达不 this or become real teachers. 够简洁；⑤句的连接词不够高级。 期升级训练(R版)八年级英语 [升格专练] teachers.I don't think making robots our A.单句改错：请找出并改正下列句子中的错误。 teachers is a wise decision. 1.I think making robots our teachers is not a Firstly,robots don't have feelings,which wise decision. may cause the classes to be boring and students can't communicate with them better. 2.They may cause the classes boring and Meanwhile,we can't judge things just students can't communicate with them according to“right'”or“wrong”,but robots better. can only define your actions as right or wrong things,so it's difficult for robots to solve some problems.Last but not least,robots just teach 3.so it's difficult of robots to solve some students knowledge rather than ways of being problems a real person.We go to school not only to study skills,but also to learn to be a kind, responsible and honest person. B.句式升级：请根据要求完成下列句子。 Teaching is a long-time job and teachers' 1.Firstly,robots don't have feelings.They experience and skills are special and valuable. may cause the classes boring and students Sometimes teachers will influence students can't communicate with them better..(合并 positively by teaching them knowledge and 为一句话) good habits.Therefore,robots cannot do this or become real teachers. 【©自主训练 科技发展日新月异，机器人正在走进千家 2.Thirdly,robots just teach students knowledge 万户。假设你是李华，你家正在使用扫地机器 and don't teach them to learn how to be a 人和厨房机器人，但你一直担心机器人对家庭 real person.(用Last but not least及rather 的潜在威胁(potential danger)。请你以“My than改写) views on home robots”为题写一篇英语短文，谈 谈你对家庭机器人的看法。 要求：1.文中不能出现真实的人名和校 名；2.词数100左右。 3.So robots cannot do this or become real My views on home robots teachers..(更换连接词) [高分范文] Recently,there has been a heated discussion on whether robots should be our 12第6天写作专题（一） 【典题在线】 A.1.I don't think making robots our teachers is a wise decision. 2.They may cause the classes to be boring and students can't communicate with them better. 3.so it's difficult for robots to solve some problems B.1.Firstly,robots don't have feelings,which may cause the classes to be boring and students can't communicate with them better. 2.Last but not least,robots just teach students knowledge rather than ways of being a real person. 3.Therefore,robots cannot do this or become real teachers. 【自主训练】 One possible version: My views on home robots With the fast development of science and technology,home robots are becoming popular.In my home,a sweeping robot cleans the floor and a kitchen robot helps cook every day.They save us much time and make our life easier.But I always worry about their potential dangers.First,they may break down and cause small accidents at home. Meanwhile,if we rely on them too much,we will become lazy and lose the ability to do housework by ourselves. From my point of view,we should use home robots properly.They are good helpers,but we can never let them replace our own hands and minds. 第7天Unit5 Nature's Temper 一、[语篇解读]本文讲述了作者在一次突发地震中 的亲身经历。 1.shake 2.thick名词dust前面应用形容词作定语。由语 境及首字母t可知应填thick。 3.warned 4.hide地震来临时，房子里的人应立即躲在桌子 下面。由不定式符号to及首字母h可知，此处应填 动词原形hide。 5.neighbourhood 6.waves地震过程中会有余震和巨大的声波传 来。由形容词huge及首字母w可知，此处应填复数 名词waves。 7.relatives 8.interview 9.myself此处是指保护好自己。由首字母m可 知应填反身代词myself。 10.report此处是指记者打算写一篇报道。由首 字母r及冠词a可知，此处应填单数名词report。 二、[语篇解读]本文讲述了学校的一名志愿者在暴 风雨中营救一位老妇人的感人事迹。 1.knowledge由our geography可知，此处是指复 习地理知识」 2.sudden all of a sudden突然，是固定搭配。 3.heard此处指听到附近社区的呼救声。 4.unlucky不幸的是老妇人被困住了。由trapped 可知，此处应填形容词lucky的反义词unlucky。 5.volunteers由one of可知，此处用名词复数。 6.As soon as此处是时间状语从句。句子首字母 需大写。 7.worst由in recent years可知，此处是指最糟糕 的暴风雨天气。 8.After半小时后李明救出了老妇人。句子首字 母需大写。 9.our名词hearts前面应用形容词作定语。故填 we的形容词性物主代词our。 10.having have the courage to do sth.有勇气做某 事，是固定搭配。此处与动名词mastering是并列关 系，故填have的动名词形式having。 三、[语篇解读]本文讲述了洪水中那些勇于救人的 志愿者的英雄事迹」 1.usual as usual像往常一样，是固定搭配。 2.and本句是肯定句，hurried to get up与looked out之间是并列关系，故填连词and。 3.terribly此处应用副词修饰bad。故填terrible 的副词形式terribly。. 4.preparations make preparations作准备。 5.to listen refuse to do sth.拒绝做某事。 6.their名词houses前面应用形容词作定语。故 填they的形容词性物主代词their。