摘要:
**基本信息**
以私人邮件结构与语言规范为核心,通过“输入-框架-输出”三步训练体系,实现从教材范文到高考真题的迁移应用,培养语言表达与思维组织能力。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|输入铺垫|范文阅读+提纲梳理|六部分结构拆解、非正式表达与格式规范、框架先行撰写步骤|从邮件结构要素到语言特点,构建“形式-内容”统一逻辑|
|真题迁移|1真题(2024新高考)|校园经历分享类邮件写作迁移|结合真实命题场景,强化结构与内容的适配性|
|单元强基|1原创(课后活动)|信息整合与收获表达技巧|聚焦单元核心主题,巩固基础写作能力|
|主题提升|1原创(喜欢课程)|课程介绍与感受表达策略|拓展主题维度,提升内容组织的思维品质|
|高考模拟|1原创(社团招新)|活动过程与感想的逻辑衔接|模拟高考情境,强化应试表达的语言能力|
内容正文:
北师大版必修第一册Unit 1 Life Choices
单元写作任务专项练习
参考范文
★真题写作迁移
(2024年新高考卷)
One possible version:
范文词数 102
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
To be honest, it was really enjoyable to paint surrounded by nature rather than staying in a classroom. I drew a picture of the lake with green trees standing by the water, their branches moving gently in the wind.
What impressed me most was how the peaceful atmosphere inspired my creativity! The whole experience was truly relaxing, helping me take a break from daily schoolwork and fully enjoy the beauty of art.
I’m curious about what you’ve been up to lately. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
★单元写作强基(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 95
Dear Henry,
How’s everything going? I’m writing to share my amazing experience at the nature club.
As a senior secondary student, I prefer practical tasks, so I joined the club. We meet regularly every Tuesday and Friday to participate in various activities, such as planting trees, tending the garden, and identifying different plant species. It’s challenging but inspiring!
Through these activities, I’ve applied what I’ve learned and made new friends. We cooperate as a team, which contributes to our community. Actually, I feel a sense of pride doing voluntary work for the environment.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
★写作主题提升(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 101
Dear Tom,
I’m now a senior secondary school student. I’m writing to tell you about my favourite subject English.
In class, we often have group discussions and share ideas. I enjoy reading English stories, and it’s a good way to learn new words. Actually, I prefer this subject because it gives me a sense of achievement to express my thoughts in English.
I feel excited in class, but sometimes it’s also challenging. I set goals and try my best. It’s important to have a positive attitude towards learning.
I’m eager to know what you’ve been up to lately. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
★高考模拟演练(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 90
Dear Toby,
I’m writing to share with you my experience of the book club’s sign-up activity in my first week of senior high.
Last Friday, I went to the club event. It was really inspiring to meet students who share the same passion for reading. We had discussions on our favourite novels. To be honest, I felt it was my aim to be part of this group because it’s a wonderful opportunity to learn from others.
I’ve set a new goal to read at least one book every two weeks. It’s a challenging task, but I’m eager to achieve it. Actually, I think joining the club is a wise choice for my personal growth.
Yours,
Li Hua
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北师大版必修第一册Unit 1 Life Choices
单元写作任务专项练习
本单元的写作任务是写一封私人电子邮件,向初中同学介绍自己的高中生活。要求文章包含以下部分:
主题(Subject line):概括邮件核心内容。
问候(Greeting):非正式、亲切的开头问候语。
正文(Body):分享自身高中新生活信息,并向对方提问,了解对方近况。
收尾缘由(Reasons to finish writing):说明邮件收尾的原因。
结尾与祝愿(Ending and wishes):友好收尾、表达期待回信。
签名(Signature):落款签名。
在正式写作前,教材有充分的输入和铺垫:
阅读输入:教材提供了Wang Ying写给老友Fang Lan的私人邮件作为范文,引导学生阅读范文,学习非正式邮件的结构和语言特点,同时学习非正式表达、缩写形式、破折号与感叹号的用法以及私人邮件格式。
写作输出:教材设置提纲梳理任务,引导学生先完成邮件框架,再撰写邮件,同伴互评修改,最后课堂分享。
本单元的写作任务旨在培养学生用英语叙述校园生活、传递个人近况的记叙文写作能力,掌握非正式私人邮件的基本格式,并在邮件交流中保持亲切自然、适合好友沟通的语气。
★真题写作迁移
(2024年新高考卷)假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
Yours,
Li Hua
★单元写作强基(原创)
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Henry来信询问你在新学校的课后活动情况。请你给他回信,内容包括:
(1)你参加的活动。
(2)你的收获。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
Yours,
Li Hua
★写作主题提升(原创)
假定你是高一新生李华。请你给英国笔友Tom写一封邮件,分享你喜欢的高中课程,内容包括:
(1)介绍课程。
(2)你的感受。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
Yours,
Li Hua
★高考模拟演练(原创)
假定你是李华,刚参加了校园读书社团的招新活动。请你给英国好友Toby写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)活动过程。
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Toby,
I’m writing to share with you my experience of the book club’s sign-up activity in my first week of senior high.
Yours,
Li Hua
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