Unit 3 Using language（以读促写课课件）英语人教版选择性必修第一册

该高中英语课件围绕“公园介绍写作”核心知识点，通过导入问题引导学生思考公园特色与游客收获，衔接语言积累（位置定位、游玩项目等句式及自然景区词块）和分步骤写作练习（基础介绍、-ing体验描写、宣传结尾），搭建完整学习支架。 其亮点在于以“以读促写”为主线，通过思维导图框架和自评清单提升思维品质，结合Chimelong范文及-ing句型示范强化语言能力，小组互改任务培养学习能力。学生能系统掌握写作技巧，教师可高效开展教学，助力核心素养落地。

Unit 3 Fascinating Park 高中英语人教版选择性必修第一册 Using language 以读促写 Contents 1. Lead in 2. Language Building 3. Mini-writing 4. Writing Task 5. Self-assessment 6. Homework 01. Lead in Lead in 01 What makes each theme park different and attractive? 02 Besides fun rides and delicious food, what else can visitors gain from theme parks? 02. Language Building Language Building 一、文本核心公园句式积累 1. 介绍公园位置 & 定位（开篇万能句） 1. Dollywood, in the beautiful Smoky Mountains in the southeastern USA, is unique because it shows and celebrates America's traditional southeastern culture. 2. Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China, is one of the leading ocean-themed parks in the world. 3. The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Disneyland, which can be found in several parts of the world. Language Building 一、文本核心公园句式积累 2. 园内游玩项目描写 • Travel through space, visit a pirate ship, or meet cartoon characters. • Ride on steam engines and wooden roller coasters. • Join water fights, watch dolphin shows and splendid fireworks displays. 3. 景观、表演、美食描写 • Famous music groups put on performances indoors and outdoors all year round. • Walk under the world’s largest Whale Shark Aquarium and watch thousands of fish. • Plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite. Language Building 一、文本核心公园句式积累 4. 结尾吸引游客（祈使句 + if 条件句） If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland! If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom! Language Building 二、自然类景区拓展（贝加尔湖、丹霞、张家界等）核心词块 vast territory 广阔地域； remote location 偏远之地； unique wildlife 独特野生动植物； breathtaking beauty 令人惊叹的美景； colourful rocky landscape 彩色丹霞地貌； magnificent peaks 奇峰； rushing water 奔腾溪流； glacier 冰川； karst landscape 喀斯特地貌 Language Building 三、-ing 形式问答示范 1. What impressed you most when visiting Zhangye Danxia Geopark? Seeing the colourful mountains and rocky landscape impressed me most. 2. What tops the list of tourists' favourite activities in Zhangjiajie? Admiring the magnificent peaks and landscape, taking a raft ride and experiencing the local customs of the Tujia people and the Miao people top the list. 3. What do tourists like to do at Guilin's Li River? Taking a boat tour and admiring the karst landscape are tourists’ favourite activities. Language Building 三、-ing 形式问答示范 4. What activities would appeal to adventurous tourists in Lijiang, Yunnan Province? Viewing glaciers at Yulong Snow Mountain and listening to the sound of rushing water at Tiger Leaping Gorge attract adventurous tourists. 03. Mini-writing Mini-writing 练习 1：公园基础介绍（地点 + 特色 + 游玩项目） 步骤 内容 示例 ① 选定公园 确定公园 + 所在地 Chimelong Ocean Kingdom, Zhuhai ② 提炼核心特色 1 个核心亮点 the world’s largest Whale Shark Aquarium ③ 罗列游玩项目 2-3 项活动 watch dolphin shows, ride water roller coasters, enjoy night fireworks ④ 组句模板 (Park) in (place), a (theme) park famous for (core feature), offers visitors chances to (activities) Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, a world-famous ocean-themed park famous for the giant Whale Shark Aquarium, offers visitors chances to watch dolphin shows, ride water roller coasters and enjoy splendid night fireworks. Mini-writing 练习 2：-ing 形式描写游玩体验（重点语法） 步骤 内容 示例 ① 以动名词开头描写感受 (Doing sth.) is the most amazing part of the park. Walking under the huge aquarium is the most amazing part of the park. ② 补充配套体验 Besides, you can spend hours doing sth. Besides, you can spend hours watching cartoon parades and tasting local snacks. ③ 收尾总结收获 Visiting here brings you both fun and knowledge. Visiting this park brings you both joy and marine knowledge. Mini-writing 练习 3：宣传结尾（if 条件句 + 祈使句） 模板 1：If you are fond of …, come to …! If you love marine animals and water rides, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom! 模板 2：Come to … to have fun learning about … Come to Dollywood to have fun learning all about America's southeastern traditional culture! 04. Writing Task Writing Task Choose one theme park or natural geopark you like, write an introductory passage for it. 写作步骤： 1. Choose the park 2. Draw a mind map (Attractions / Food / Shows / Rides / Other features) 3. Finish your draft 4. Peer review with checklist 5. Share your writing in class Writing Task 二、写作思维导图框架 (Name of park) in (place) Basic intro location, theme, overall feature Rides & fun activities roller coasters, water games, steam train etc. Special sights & shows parades, animal performances, landscape, fireworks Food service special local snacks, various restaurants Unique value culture knowledge / natural science beyond fun Ending appeal (if-clause & imperative sentence) Writing Task _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ Writing Task Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China, is one of the world’s top ocean-themed parks, well-known for its fantastic marine facilities and wonderful performances. Walking under the Whale Shark Aquarium, visitors can admire thousands of colourful fish and a huge whale shark, which leaves everyone speechless. Apart from amazing sea creatures, the park provides all kinds of thrilling rides. You can join exciting pirate water fights or take upside-down roller coasters to feel strong excitement. Watching dolphin and sea lion shows is both fun and educational, while the splendid Journey of Lights Parade and night fireworks always draw huge crowds. When you feel hungry, many restaurants serve tasty food of different styles. You can even enjoy meals beside glass walls with fish swimming around you. If you are eager to explore the ocean world and look for all-day entertainment, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom. It offers not only great fun but also rich marine knowledge for visitors of all ages. 05. Self-assessment Self-assessment Total: ____ / 15 评价维度 评价标准 达标 待改进 未达标 内容 完整覆盖公园地点、游乐、表演景观、餐饮、特色价值五大要点       结构 总分清晰，开篇引入 + 中间分述游玩项目 + 结尾号召宣传       语言 大量使用本课主题形容词，正确运用 - ing 动名词、if 从句、祈使句       衔接 使用 apart from, besides, when 等连接词，段落过渡自然       主题升华 体现 “fun and more than fun”，写出公园文化 / 科普价值       课文迁移 借鉴课文原版句式、描写模板，贴合单元语言风格     单元反思 REFLECTING 1. What did you learn about parks that you did not know before? I learned theme parks have different themes such as cartoon, culture and ocean. They are not only for fun but also carry culture and science knowledge. 2. What else would you like to learn about parks? I want to know more local Chinese theme parks and their special traditional performances. 3. Of the parks in this unit, which would you like to visit most? why? I want to visit Chimelong Ocean Kingdom most because I love sea animals and water rides, and I can learn much marine knowledge there. 单元反思 REFLECTING 4. What problems did you or your friends have in studying this unit? How did you solve them? What advice did you give each other? We had trouble using -ing forms correctly. We summed up sentence templates and practiced mini-writing every day. We advised each other to mark all -ing sentences in the text for reference. 06. Homework Homework 1. 整理本单元主题公园、自然景区全套写作语料（形容词、核心词块、万能句式、if 从句、祈使句、-ing 句型），背诵积累； 2. 梳理三篇课文（Disneyland / Dollywood / Chimelong）写作框架，思考如何将框架迁移到国内公园、自然地质景区写作，丰富细节描写； 3. 完成写作任务：自选一座公园（国内主题公园 / 自然景区均可），按照课堂思维导图结构完成公园介绍短文，灵活运用本节课积累的全部句型与词汇； 4. 小组互改作文，对照自评清单修改完善，下节课课堂朗读展示。 Homework ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sample A Wonderful Theme Park—Chimelong Ocean Kingdom Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai is a world-famous theme park full of fun and surprises. It has wonderful roller coasters, exciting water games and a lovely steam train that takes you around the park. You can also enjoy amazing animal shows, eye-catching parades and brilliant fireworks in the evening. The park provides great food service. There are many restaurants offering delicious seafood and local snacks. Whether you want a quick bite or a nice meal, you can always find something tasty to enjoy during your visit. More than just an amusement place, it helps you learn about ocean life and environmental protection. If you are looking for excitement and knowledge, don’t miss this fantastic park. Come and experience its unforgettable charm! Thank you for your listening. $