Unit 3 Assessing Your Progress（以读促写课讲义）英语人教版选择性必修第一册

本讲义聚焦高中英语景区介绍说明文写作，系统梳理主题词汇激活（如描述公园特色的形容词、分类及游客体验词块）、三大主题公园文本精读、写作任务四维拆解（体裁、话题、内容、语域）及支架搭建（提纲模板、衔接词清单、高分句式），构建从词汇积累到文本分析再到写作输出的完整学习脉络。 该资料以语言能力培养为核心，通过主题词汇与高级句式（-ing形式、if条件句等）提升表达准确性；以思维品质发展为导向，借助公园差异对比思考题和四维拆解培养分析能力；以学习能力提升为目标，设计自评量表助力学生自查内容要点与语言运用。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后帮助学生通过范文解构与巩固练习查漏补缺，强化写作技能。

Unit 3 Assessing Your Progress （以读促写课讲义） 目录 1. Lead in 2. Pre-writing 3. While-writing 4. Post-writing（Self-assessment） 5. Homework 1. Lead in 一、主题词汇激活（主题公园 & 自然景区品质 / 特色） 描述公园特色形容词 incredible 绝妙的；magical 充满魔力的；fantasy 梦幻的；unique 独一无二的；superb 顶级的；splendid 华丽壮观的；vast 广阔的；fascinating 极具吸引力的；remote 偏远静谧的 公园分类词块 cartoon theme park 卡通主题公园；culture-themed park 文化主题公园；ocean-themed park 海洋主题公园；natural geopark 地质自然公园 游客体验词块 come true 实现；appeal to 吸引；put on performances 上演演出；try special snacks 品尝特色小吃；ride roller coasters 乘坐过山车；watch parades & fireworks 观看巡游与烟花；admire natural landscape 欣赏自然风光 二、三大主题公园导入文本精读 原文核心：THEME PARKS FUN AND MORE THAN FUN Which theme park would you like to visit? There are various kinds of theme parks, with different parks for almost everything: food, culture，science, cartoons, movies, history, and so on. Some parks are famous for having the biggest or longest roller coasters, other for showing famous sights and sounds. Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible theme park that will appeal to you! The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Disneyland, which can be found in several parts of the world. Disneyland will bring you into a magical world and make your childhood dreams come true, Travelling through space, visiting a pirate ship, or meeting an adorable fairytale or cartoon character are all possible at Disneyland. As you wander around the fantasy amusement park, you may see Snow White or Mickey Mouse in a parade or even on the street, Of course, Disneyland also has many exciting rides to amuse you, from enormous swinging ships to scary free­fall drops. If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland! Dollywood, in the beautiful Smoky Mountains in the southeastern USA, is unique because it shows and celebrates America's traditional southeastern culture. Famous country music groups put on performances there all year round, indoors and outdoors. People come from all over America to see skilled workers make wood, glass, and iron objects in the old­fashioned way. Visiting the candy shop and trying some of the same kind of candy that American southerners made 150 years ago is a rare experience. Riding on the only steam engine still working in the southeastern United States is a special treat. And for those who like rides, Dollywood has a superb old wooden roller coaster, Thunderhead. It is world­famous for having the longest track in the smallest space. Come to Dollywood to have fun learning all about America's historical southeastern culture! Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China, is one of the leading ocean­themed parks in the world. Here you can walk under the Whale Shark Aquarium—the world's largest—and see up to 20,000 fish, in addition to a whale shark 68 metres in length. Watching the dolphin and sea lion shows is both educational and fun. Of course, you can also see all kinds of interesting animals, including polar bears. The park has more rides than you can imagine: join a water fight against pirates, get turned upside down by an exciting roller coaster, or get wet in one of the water rides! Then at night, see the splendid Journey of Lights Parade and fireworks display. Hungry? The park has plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite—you can even eat while watching the fish swim by. If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom! 三、导入思考题 提问1：What makes the three theme parks different from each other? 参考答案： Disneyland focuses on magical cartoon and childhood dreams. Dollywood features American southeastern traditional culture. Chimelong Ocean Kingdom is famous for ocean-themed scenery, animal shows and water entertainment. 提问2：What does "fun and more than fun" mean according to the text? 参考答案： It means theme parks not only provide entertaining rides and amazing shows for fun, but also offer visitors chances to learn about cartoons, local culture, marine knowledge and traditional crafts. 2. Pre-writing 一、课本习题梳理（P32-P34） 1. P32 表格填空（标准答案） A Name and location B Rides & activities C Shows & special sights/animals D Food service Disneyland (various locations) Travel through space; visit a pirate ship; meet cartoon characters; exciting rides A parade of cartoon characters Plenty of restaurants with tasty food Dollywood in the Smoky Mountains (southeastern USA) Ride steam engines; ride wooden roller coaster Thunderhead Famous country music groups put on performances; traditional craft shows Tasty traditional southern candy Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China Water fight against pirates; exciting roller coaster; water rides Whale Shark Aquarium; dolphin & sea lion shows; polar bears; lights parade & fireworks Plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite 2. P33 语言特征总结 1. 表格栏目表头补充 A Name and location 名称与位置 B Rides & Activities 游乐项目 C Special Sights, Shows & Animals 特色景观、表演与动物 D Food Service 餐饮服务 2. 语言要素用法及作用 A. 形容词：magical, incredible, superb, splendid, fantastic 等，修饰公园景观与体验，增强文字画面感与感染力，突出公园独特魅力。 B. if-clauses 条件状语从句：精准定位游客需求，针对性推荐对应公园，逻辑清晰，强化宣传效果。 C. imperatives（祈使句）：以 "Come to..." 开头，语气亲切有力，直接号召游客，适配景区宣传文体。 3. P34 短文填空（标准答案） My name is Svetlana and I have worked as a guide at Lake Baikal (贝加尔湖 ) for more than 10 years. Lying in a pretty location in Siberia, the deep and lake with more than 300 rivers flowing into it is one of the world's greatest natural wonders. Every season, I and guide tourists. Baikal is a with unique wildlife, breathtaking beauty, and local culture. Ancient, inspiring, mysterious, and beautiful, Lake Baikal visitors like no other place on the earth. I feel to have been born here, and I am looking forward to many more years of welcoming visitors to an unforgettable experience at Baikal. 标准答案：remote，vast，accompany，territory，fascinating，appeals to，blessed 4. P34 -ing 形式问答示范（标准答案） 1. What impressed you most when visiting Zhangye Danxia Geopark? Seeing the colourful mountains and rocky landscape impressed me most. 2. What tops the list of tourists' favourite activities in Zhangjiajie? Admiring the magnificent peaks and landscape, taking a raft ride and experiencing the local customs of the Tujia people and the Miao people top the list. 3. What do tourists like to do at Guilin's Li River? Taking a boat tour and admiring the karst landscape are tourists’ favourite activities. 4. What activities would appeal to adventurous tourists in Lijiang, Yunnan Province? Viewing glaciers at Yulong Snow Mountain and listening to the sound of rushing water at Tiger Leaping Gorge attract adventurous tourists. 二、写作任务呈现 Choose one theme park or natural geopark you like, write an introductory passage for it. Introduce its location, theme, attractions, shows, food and unique features. 写作要求： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 内容完整，包含位置、特色、游乐项目、景观表演、餐饮等核心要点； 3. 灵活使用-ing形式、if条件句、祈使句等课本高级句式； 4. 行文连贯，逻辑清晰。 三、四维拆解 维度 分析 关键要点 体裁 景区介绍说明文 客观介绍、条理清晰、语言优美，适配宣传介绍场景 话题 My Favourite Theme Park / A Fascinating Park 位置→核心特色→游乐项目→景观表演→餐饮→结尾号召 内容 紧扣课本原文素材 迁移课本三个公园的描写句式与词块，灵活复用 语域 formal and vivid 多用形容词、非谓语、条件句，句式丰富不单调 四、范文呈现 Chimelong Ocean Kingdom Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai is one of the most fascinating ocean-themed parks in the world, famous for its unique marine scenery and various entertaining activities. Walking under the world’s largest Whale Shark Aquarium, visitors can admire thousands of colourful fish and a huge whale shark. Besides wonderful marine sights, the park offers countless thrilling rides. You can join water fights or experience exciting roller coasters. Watching professional dolphin and sea lion shows is both fun and educational. At night, the splendid light parade and fantastic fireworks always leave visitors a deep impression. In addition, plenty of restaurants here provide tasty food for all tastes. If you are looking for wonderful ocean entertainment and marine knowledge, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom. It brings you fun and more than fun. 五、范文解构 段落 功能 语言标注 开头 介绍位置与核心主题 形容词修饰、famous for 核心句式 主体段 描写景观、游乐项目、特色表演 动名词作主语、besides 衔接、并列短句 结尾段 补充餐饮、号召收尾、回扣主题 if条件句、祈使句、点题句 六、支架搭建 1. 提纲模板 段落 功能 内容要点 开头 总体介绍 (Park) in (place) is a famous (theme) park known for... 主体1 景观与表演 Introduce special sights, animal shows and parades 主体2 游乐与体验 List thrilling rides and interactive activities 结尾 总结+号召 Food service + if-clause + imperative ending 2. 衔接词清单 功能 词块 递进补充 Besides / In addition / Apart from this 总结收尾 In short / All in all 条件引入 If you are looking for... / If you want to... 3. 高分万能句式 1. 开篇定位句：(Park) located in (place) is one of the most popular theme parks featuring... 2. 动名词描写句：Doing sth. is the most impressive part of the park. 3. 亮点突出句：What makes it unique is its special theme and amazing experiences. 4. 结尾号召句：If you want to enjoy fun and learn more knowledge, come to this fantastic park! 3. While-writing 一、写作任务 Please choose one theme park mentioned in the text or a local park you know, write a 100-word introduction passage. Cover the key points: location, theme, attractions, activities and features. 二、写作空白区 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. Post Reading（Self-assessment） 一、写作1评价量表 审题项目 具体内容 自检问题 体裁格式 短文 □ 是短文不是演讲稿？□ 没有称呼和致谢结尾？ 题目与首句 给定题目和首句 □ 题目写对了吗？□ 首句原样抄写了吗？ 内容要点① 公园基本简介 □ 选定具体公园了吗？□ 有位置、主题基本信息吗？ 内容要点② 公园特色与游玩价值 □ 特色介绍具体吗？□ 有景观、项目、表演细节支撑吗？ 逻辑结构 简介→特色价值 □ 有过渡词吗？□ 段落逻辑连贯吗？ 语言表达 准确、流畅 □ 时态正确吗？□ 正确使用-ing/if从句/祈使句等高级句式吗？ 字数 80词左右 □ 字数在70-90词之间吗？ 常见雷区 学生易犯错误 □ 避免堆砌零散词块无逻辑 □ 避免只写游乐无特色升华 二、写作2评价量表 审题项目 具体内容 自检问题 体裁格式 短文 □ 是短文不是演讲稿？ 题目 给定自拟主题 □ 题目贴合公园主题吗？ 内容要点① 公园基础介绍 □ 公园定位明确吗？□ 位置、主题信息完整吗？ 内容要点② 核心景点与游玩体验 □ 特色项目具体吗？□ 有景观、表演、美食细节支撑吗？ 内容要点③ 游玩价值与总结 □ 体现fun and more than fun吗？□ 有价值升华吗？ 逻辑结构 简介→特色体验→价值总结，三层递进 □ 有过渡词吗？□ 三层内容有逻辑推进吗？ 语言表达 准确、流畅 □ 时态正确吗？□ 单元核心句式运用熟练吗？□ 描写词汇丰富吗？ 字数 100词左右 □ 字数在90-110词之间吗？ 常见雷区 学生易犯错误 □ 避免只罗列项目无描写 □ 避免体验与价值升华脱节 三、高分范文1（80词标准版） The Fascinating Theme Park I Like There are countless amazing theme parks around the world. The one that appeals to me most is Disneyland, a world-famous cartoon theme park located in many countries. It creates a magical world for visitors. We can travel through space, visit pirate ships and meet lovely cartoon characters. There are also thrilling rides and wonderful parades. This park brings us not only great fun but also sweet childhood memories. It is indeed an incredible place worth visiting. 四、高分范文2（100词提升版） The Park I Admire Most The park I admire most is Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, one of the top ocean-themed parks worldwide. What makes it unique is its splendid marine scenery. Walking under the world’s largest whale shark aquarium, visitors can view thousands of fish. Besides, exciting water rides, wonderful dolphin shows and gorgeous night fireworks provide visitors with unforgettable experiences. Tasty food of different styles is also available in various restaurants. This park offers us fun as well as rich marine knowledge. If you love ocean scenery, do come and explore it yourself. 5. Homework 同类巩固 学校英文报社正在举办主题为 Wonderful Parks Around Us 的征文活动，请你结合本单元所学，写一篇英文短文介绍一处你最喜欢的主题公园或自然景区。内容包括： 1. 景区基本简介； 2. 主要特色与游玩项目； 3. 游玩意义与感受。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Wonderful Parks Around Us Of all kinds of fascinating parks, Dollywood in the Smoky Mountains of America is the one I want to introduce most. As a unique culture-themed park, it is famous for showing American southeastern traditional culture. Visitors can enjoy country music performances all year round and watch workers make traditional handicrafts. They can also ride old steam engines and the world-famous wooden roller coaster. Trying traditional local candy is also a special experience. The park brings us more than fun. It helps us learn about local history and culture. It is really a wonderful place worthy of a visit. 14 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 Assessing Your Progress （以读促写课讲义） 目录 1. Lead in 2. Pre-writing 3. While-writing 4. Post-writing（Self-assessment） 5. Homework 1. Lead in 一、主题词汇激活（主题公园 & 自然景区品质 / 特色） 描述公园特色形容词 incredible 绝妙的；magical 充满魔力的；fantasy 梦幻的；unique 独一无二的；superb 顶级的；splendid 华丽壮观的；vast 广阔的；fascinating 极具吸引力的；remote 偏远静谧的 公园分类词块 cartoon theme park 卡通主题公园；culture-themed park 文化主题公园；ocean-themed park 海洋主题公园；natural geopark 地质自然公园 游客体验词块 come true 实现；appeal to 吸引；put on performances 上演演出；try special snacks 品尝特色小吃；ride roller coasters 乘坐过山车；watch parades & fireworks 观看巡游与烟花；admire natural landscape 欣赏自然风光 二、三大主题公园导入文本精读 原文核心：THEME PARKS FUN AND MORE THAN FUN Which theme park would you like to visit? There are various kinds of theme parks, with different parks for almost everything: food, culture，science, cartoons, movies, history, and so on. Some parks are famous for having the biggest or longest roller coasters, other for showing famous sights and sounds. Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible theme park that will appeal to you! The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Disneyland, which can be found in several parts of the world. Disneyland will bring you into a magical world and make your childhood dreams come true, Travelling through space, visiting a pirate ship, or meeting an adorable fairytale or cartoon character are all possible at Disneyland. As you wander around the fantasy amusement park, you may see Snow White or Mickey Mouse in a parade or even on the street, Of course, Disneyland also has many exciting rides to amuse you, from enormous swinging ships to scary free­fall drops. If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland! Dollywood, in the beautiful Smoky Mountains in the southeastern USA, is unique because it shows and celebrates America's traditional southeastern culture. Famous country music groups put on performances there all year round, indoors and outdoors. People come from all over America to see skilled workers make wood, glass, and iron objects in the old­fashioned way. Visiting the candy shop and trying some of the same kind of candy that American southerners made 150 years ago is a rare experience. Riding on the only steam engine still working in the southeastern United States is a special treat. And for those who like rides, Dollywood has a superb old wooden roller coaster, Thunderhead. It is world­famous for having the longest track in the smallest space. Come to Dollywood to have fun learning all about America's historical southeastern culture! Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China, is one of the leading ocean­themed parks in the world. Here you can walk under the Whale Shark Aquarium—the world's largest—and see up to 20,000 fish, in addition to a whale shark 68 metres in length. Watching the dolphin and sea lion shows is both educational and fun. Of course, you can also see all kinds of interesting animals, including polar bears. The park has more rides than you can imagine: join a water fight against pirates, get turned upside down by an exciting roller coaster, or get wet in one of the water rides! Then at night, see the splendid Journey of Lights Parade and fireworks display. Hungry? The park has plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite—you can even eat while watching the fish swim by. If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom! 三、导入思考题 提问1：What makes the three theme parks different from each other? 提问2：What does "fun and more than fun" mean according to the text? 2. Pre-writing 一、课本习题梳理（P32-P34） 1. P32 表格填空（标准答案） A Name and location B Rides & activities C Shows & special sights/animals D Food service Disneyland (various locations) Travel through space; visit a pirate ship; meet cartoon characters; exciting rides A parade of cartoon characters Plenty of restaurants with tasty food Dollywood in the Smoky Mountains (southeastern USA) Ride steam engines; ride wooden roller coaster Thunderhead Famous country music groups put on performances; traditional craft shows Tasty traditional southern candy Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China Water fight against pirates; exciting roller coaster; water rides Whale Shark Aquarium; dolphin & sea lion shows; polar bears; lights parade & fireworks Plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite 2. P33 语言特征总结 1. 表格栏目表头补充 A Name and location 名称与位置 B Rides & Activities 游乐项目 C Special Sights, Shows & Animals 特色景观、表演与动物 D Food Service 餐饮服务 2. 语言要素用法及作用 A. 形容词：magical, incredible, superb, splendid, fantastic 等，修饰公园景观与体验，增强文字画面感与感染力，突出公园独特魅力。 B. if-clauses 条件状语从句：精准定位游客需求，针对性推荐对应公园，逻辑清晰，强化宣传效果。 C. imperatives（祈使句）：以 "Come to..." 开头，语气亲切有力，直接号召游客，适配景区宣传文体。 3. P34 短文填空（标准答案） My name is Svetlana and I have worked as a guide at Lake Baikal (贝加尔湖 ) for more than 10 years. Lying in a pretty location in Siberia, the deep and lake with more than 300 rivers flowing into it is one of the world's greatest natural wonders. Every season, I and guide tourists. Baikal is a with unique wildlife, breathtaking beauty, and local culture. Ancient, inspiring, mysterious, and beautiful, Lake Baikal visitors like no other place on the earth. I feel to have been born here, and I am looking forward to many more years of welcoming visitors to an unforgettable experience at Baikal. 4. P34 -ing 形式问答示范（标准答案） 1. What impressed you most when visiting Zhangye Danxia Geopark? 2. What tops the list of tourists' favourite activities in Zhangjiajie? 3. What do tourists like to do at Guilin's Li River? 4. What activities would appeal to adventurous tourists in Lijiang, Yunnan Province? 二、写作任务呈现 Choose one theme park or natural geopark you like, write an introductory passage for it. Introduce its location, theme, attractions, shows, food and unique features. 写作要求： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 内容完整，包含位置、特色、游乐项目、景观表演、餐饮等核心要点； 3. 灵活使用-ing形式、if条件句、祈使句等课本高级句式； 4. 行文连贯，逻辑清晰。 三、四维拆解 维度 分析 关键要点 体裁 景区介绍说明文 客观介绍、条理清晰、语言优美，适配宣传介绍场景 话题 My Favourite Theme Park / A Fascinating Park 位置→核心特色→游乐项目→景观表演→餐饮→结尾号召 内容 紧扣课本原文素材 迁移课本三个公园的描写句式与词块，灵活复用 语域 formal and vivid 多用形容词、非谓语、条件句，句式丰富不单调 四、范文呈现 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 五、范文解构 段落 功能 语言标注 开头 介绍位置与核心主题 形容词修饰、famous for 核心句式 主体段 描写景观、游乐项目、特色表演 动名词作主语、besides 衔接、并列短句 结尾段 补充餐饮、号召收尾、回扣主题 if条件句、祈使句、点题句 六、支架搭建 1. 提纲模板 段落 功能 内容要点 开头 总体介绍 (Park) in (place) is a famous (theme) park known for... 主体1 景观与表演 Introduce special sights, animal shows and parades 主体2 游乐与体验 List thrilling rides and interactive activities 结尾 总结+号召 Food service + if-clause + imperative ending 2. 衔接词清单 功能 词块 递进补充 Besides / In addition / Apart from this 总结收尾 In short / All in all 条件引入 If you are looking for... / If you want to... 3. 高分万能句式 1. 开篇定位句：(Park) located in (place) is one of the most popular theme parks featuring... 2. 动名词描写句：Doing sth. is the most impressive part of the park. 3. 亮点突出句：What makes it unique is its special theme and amazing experiences. 4. 结尾号召句：If you want to enjoy fun and learn more knowledge, come to this fantastic park! 3. While-writing 一、写作任务 Please choose one theme park mentioned in the text or a local park you know, write a 100-word introduction passage. Cover the key points: location, theme, attractions, activities and features. 二、写作空白区 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. Post Reading（Self-assessment） 一、写作1评价量表 审题项目 具体内容 自检问题 体裁格式 短文 □ 是短文不是演讲稿？□ 没有称呼和致谢结尾？ 题目与首句 给定题目和首句 □ 题目写对了吗？□ 首句原样抄写了吗？ 内容要点① 公园基本简介 □ 选定具体公园了吗？□ 有位置、主题基本信息吗？ 内容要点② 公园特色与游玩价值 □ 特色介绍具体吗？□ 有景观、项目、表演细节支撑吗？ 逻辑结构 简介→特色价值 □ 有过渡词吗？□ 段落逻辑连贯吗？ 语言表达 准确、流畅 □ 时态正确吗？□ 正确使用-ing/if从句/祈使句等高级句式吗？ 字数 80词左右 □ 字数在70-90词之间吗？ 常见雷区 学生易犯错误 □ 避免堆砌零散词块无逻辑 □ 避免只写游乐无特色升华 二、写作2评价量表 审题项目 具体内容 自检问题 体裁格式 短文 □ 是短文不是演讲稿？ 题目 给定自拟主题 □ 题目贴合公园主题吗？ 内容要点① 公园基础介绍 □ 公园定位明确吗？□ 位置、主题信息完整吗？ 内容要点② 核心景点与游玩体验 □ 特色项目具体吗？□ 有景观、表演、美食细节支撑吗？ 内容要点③ 游玩价值与总结 □ 体现fun and more than fun吗？□ 有价值升华吗？ 逻辑结构 简介→特色体验→价值总结，三层递进 □ 有过渡词吗？□ 三层内容有逻辑推进吗？ 语言表达 准确、流畅 □ 时态正确吗？□ 单元核心句式运用熟练吗？□ 描写词汇丰富吗？ 字数 100词左右 □ 字数在90-110词之间吗？ 常见雷区 学生易犯错误 □ 避免只罗列项目无描写 □ 避免体验与价值升华脱节 三、高分范文1（80词标准版） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、高分范文2（100词提升版） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. Homework 同类巩固 学校英文报社正在举办主题为 Wonderful Parks Around Us 的征文活动，请你结合本单元所学，写一篇英文短文介绍一处你最喜欢的主题公园或自然景区。内容包括： 1. 景区基本简介； 2. 主要特色与游玩项目； 3. 游玩意义与感受。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $