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编写说明:本卷依据最新版《中等职业学校英语课程标准》和历年真题编写。本系列定位为45分钟训练卷,用于课堂限时训练、周测检测和阶段复习。本卷为应用写作专项训练,主要训练邮件、通知、建议信和活动介绍等常见任务。
【2027版】广东省(“3+证书”考试)《英语45分钟训练卷》
第16卷 应用写作
考试时间:45分钟 满分:100分
班级______姓名______学号______成绩______
应用写作(共4小题;每小题25分,满分100分)
请根据每题写作内容和要求,用英语完成相应应用文写作。
1. 【写作内容】假定你是李华。你的朋友Anna最近学习压力较大,请你给她写一封邮件,给出两条放松建议并表达鼓励。
【写作要求】正文约40个英文单词,文中不可出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Anna,
I am sorry to hear that you feel stressed these days. Please do not keep all worries to yourself. You can take a short walk after class and listen to soft music before bedtime. It is also helpful to make a small study plan and talk with your teachers when you need help.
I believe you will become relaxed and confident soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本题要求写建议信,针对朋友学习压力提出两条具体放松建议,并表达关心和鼓励。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有压力的:stressed→under pressure
担忧:worry→trouble
放松的:relaxed→comfortable
自信的:confident→sure of oneself
2.句式拓展
原句:You can take a short walk after class.
拓展句:You can take a short walk after class when you feel tired or worried.
邮件语气真诚,先回应朋友压力大的处境,再提出散步、听音乐、制定学习计划和向老师求助等具体建议,最后表达鼓励,内容由关心到建议再到鼓励,层次清楚。
【点睛】邮件语气真诚,先回应对方压力,再提醒不要独自承受烦恼,随后提出散步、听音乐、制定计划和向老师求助等建议,最后给予鼓励。
【高分句型1】I am sorry to hear that you feel stressed.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Talk with your teachers when you need help.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句,建议具体可行)
2. 【写作内容】假定你是校学生会成员。学校图书馆本周六上午需要志愿者整理图书,请你写一则通知,说明时间、地点和报名方式。
【写作要求】正文约40个英文单词,文中不可出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
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【答案】例文:
Notice
Volunteers are needed in the school library this Saturday morning. We will help put books in order, clean the reading tables and guide students to return books correctly from 9:00 to 11:00. Please meet at the library gate ten minutes earlier. If you want to join, tell your monitor before Friday afternoon.
We hope more students can take part.
【导语】本题要求写通知,面向学生招募图书馆志愿者,需写清服务时间、地点、任务和报名方式。
【详解】1.词汇积累
志愿者:volunteer→helper
整理:put...in order→tidy up
归还:return→give back
参加:take part→join in
2.句式拓展
原句:Volunteers are needed in the school library.
拓展句:Volunteers who are careful and helpful are needed in the school library.
通知语言简明,先说明招募志愿者,再写清服务时间、地点、整理图书、清洁桌面和引导还书等具体任务,最后交代报名方式和集合要求,信息完整,符合校园通知的写法。
【点睛】通知语言简明,既写明图书馆志愿服务的时间、集合地点和报名方式,又补充整理图书、清洁桌面、引导还书等任务,信息更充实。
【高分句型1】Volunteers are needed in the school library this Saturday morning.(运用了被动语态,突出招募信息)
【高分句型2】If you want to join, tell your monitor before Friday afternoon.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
3. 【写作内容】假定你是李华。你校英语社团将举办“职业体验日”活动,请你给外教Mr. Brown写一封邮件,邀请他参加,并说明活动时间和一个活动内容。
【写作要求】正文约40个英文单词,文中不可出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Mr. Brown,
Our English club will hold a Career Experience Day in the school hall this Friday afternoon. We warmly invite you to join us. During the activity, students will introduce their dream jobs, act out short workplace dialogues and show simple tools used in different fields. If you can give us some advice on career planning, we will learn more from the experience.
We are looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本题要求写邀请邮件,邀请外教参加学校职业体验日,需交代活动时间、活动内容和邀请意图,文体为电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→organize
参加:join→take part in
建议:advice→suggestion
职业规划:career planning→job planning
2.句式拓展
原句:Students will introduce different jobs.
拓展句:Students will introduce their dream jobs, act out short workplace dialogues and show simple tools used in different fields.
文章格式完整,开头点明活动和邀请对象,中间交代时间、地点、职业介绍、情景表演和工具展示等活动内容,结尾说明外教建议对学生职业规划的价值,逻辑清楚,邀请意图明确。
【点睛】文章格式完整,开头点明活动时间和地点,中间用introduce、act out和show串联活动内容,结尾说明外教建议对职业规划的帮助,邀请理由充分。
【高分句型1】We warmly invite you to join us.(运用了invite sb. to do结构)
【高分句型2】If you can give us some advice on career planning, we will learn more from the experience.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4. 【写作内容】假定你是学校烹饪社团成员。请你写一篇英文短文,向交换生介绍一次社团包粽子活动,包括活动内容和你的感受。
【写作要求】正文约40个英文单词,文中不可出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
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【答案】例文:
Last Friday, our cooking club learned to make zongzi for the coming festival. First, our teacher showed us how to wash leaves, put rice inside and tie them with string. Then we worked in groups and helped each other correct the shape. Although it was not easy, everyone was excited when the zongzi were cooked.
I felt proud because I learned a useful traditional skill.
【导语】本题要求写活动介绍,向交换生说明烹饪社团包粽子的过程和个人感受,属于活动经历类应用写作。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展示:show→demonstrate
纠正:correct→fix
兴奋的:excited→happy and interested
传统的:traditional→classic
2.句式拓展
原句:It was not easy, but everyone enjoyed it.
拓展句:Although it was not easy, everyone was excited when the zongzi were cooked.
短文按时间顺序介绍包粽子活动,包含教师示范、清洗粽叶、装米、捆扎、小组合作和成品完成后的感受,活动过程更充实,结尾点明学习传统技能的自豪感,逻辑连贯。
【点睛】短文按时间顺序介绍活动,写出清洗粽叶、装米、捆扎、小组互助和等待成品等细节,最后表达学习传统技能的自豪感,内容充实。
【高分句型1】Our teacher showed us how to wash leaves, put rice inside and tie them with string.(运用了疑问词+不定式结构)
【高分句型2】Although it was not easy, everyone was excited when the zongzi were cooked.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
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编写说明:本卷依据最新版《中等职业学校英语课程标准》和历年真题编写。本系列定位为45分钟训练卷,用于课堂限时训练、周测检测和阶段复习。本卷为应用写作专项训练,主要训练邮件、通知、建议信和活动介绍等常见任务。
【2027版】广东省(“3+证书”考试)《英语45分钟训练卷》
第16卷 应用写作
考试时间:45分钟 满分:100分
班级______姓名______学号______成绩______
应用写作(共4小题;每小题25分,满分100分)
请根据每题写作内容和要求,用英语完成相应应用文写作。
1. 【写作内容】假定你是李华。你的朋友Anna最近学习压力较大,请你给她写一封邮件,给出两条放松建议并表达鼓励。
【写作要求】正文约40个英文单词,文中不可出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 【写作内容】假定你是校学生会成员。学校图书馆本周六上午需要志愿者整理图书,请你写一则通知,说明时间、地点和报名方式。
【写作要求】正文约40个英文单词,文中不可出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
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3. 【写作内容】假定你是李华。你校英语社团将举办“职业体验日”活动,请你给外教Mr. Brown写一封邮件,邀请他参加,并说明活动时间和一个活动内容。
【写作要求】正文约40个英文单词,文中不可出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4. 【写作内容】假定你是学校烹饪社团成员。请你写一篇英文短文,向交换生介绍一次社团包粽子活动,包括活动内容和你的感受。
【写作要求】正文约40个英文单词,文中不可出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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