上海市进才中学2024-2025学年度第二学期高二英语期中试卷作文讲义

上海市进才中学2024-2025学年度第二学期高二英语期中试卷 作文讲义 一、写作题目 VI. Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高二学生李华，学校即将开展 “传奇人物对话” 主题活动，拟利用 AI 技术实现与传奇人物（legendary person）的虚拟互动。现面向全体同学征集意见。你的文章需要： 1.基于名单选定一位采访对象； 2.向他提出两个具探讨价值的问题； 3.简要阐述每个问题的提问意义。 候选人： □ Mandela (fought for South Africa’s freedom) □ Picasso (revolutionary artist) □ Mozart (musical genius) □ Tan Dun (modern composer who adapted Peony Pavilion) 二、写作思路 开头段 介绍学校即将借助 AI 举办和传奇人物线上虚拟对话活动，表明自己选定的采访人物：曼德拉，简单说明选择他的缘由。 主体段 依次抛出两个精心设计的问题，分别逐条解释每个问题想要探究的内容、提问的价值与现实教育意义。 结尾段 总结期待，希望这次 AI 对话可以汲取伟人精神力量，激励当代青少年直面困境、坚守初心。 三、写作高级表达 开头段 高级短语 · launch a themed activity 举办主题活动 · conduct virtual interaction 开展虚拟互动 · collect suggestions from students 面向学生征集意见 · a distinguished legendary figure 杰出的传奇人物 · admire his lofty spirits 敬佩他崇高的精神 高级句子 1.Our school plans to launch a themed activity where AI helps us have virtual communication with distinguished legendary figures.我校打算举办主题活动，借助 AI 技术实现我们与杰出传奇人物的线上虚拟交流。 2.After careful consideration, I choose Nelson Mandela as my ideal interviewee. 经过慎重思考，我选定纳尔逊・曼德拉作为我的理想采访对象。 3.I have long admired his persistent pursuit of equality and freedom all the time. 我一直十分敬佩他为平等与自由不懈奋斗的精神。 主体段 高级短语 · overcome numerous hardships 克服无数艰难险阻 · hold fast to original aspiration 坚守初心 · racial discrimination 种族歧视 · gain precious spiritual inspiration 获取宝贵的精神启迪 · shape teenagers’ values 塑造青少年价值观 · face frustrations bravely 勇敢直面挫折 · stick to noble beliefs 坚守崇高信念 · break through tough situations 突破困境 高级句子 1.My first question is how he managed to hold fast to his belief when suffering long-term imprisonment.我的第一个问题是，在长期牢狱生涯中他是如何坚守自身信念的。 2.This question matters because we teenagers often give up easily when meeting setbacks in study and life.这个问题很有意义，因为我们青少年在学习生活中遭遇挫折时常常轻易放弃。 3.The second question focuses on what power supported him to fight against unfair racial discrimination for decades.第二个问题聚焦是什么力量支撑他数十年反抗不公的种族歧视。 4.Answers to this question can offer us guidance on building firm willpower. 该问题的答案能够为我们锤炼坚定意志提供指引。 5.We can learn how to stay positive when trapped in difficult circumstances from his experience. 我们可以从他的经历中学到身处逆境时保持积极心态的方法。 6.Such valuable conversation is beneficial to shaping our correct outlooks on life. 这样有价值的对话有益于塑造我们正确的人生观。 结尾段 高级短语 · draw spiritual strength 汲取精神力量 · carry forward precious virtues 传承宝贵品质 · strive for personal goals 为个人目标奋力拼搏 · cherish the equal peaceful life 珍惜平等安稳的生活 · benefit greatly from the activity 从本次活动中收获颇丰 高级句子 1.I sincerely expect that this virtual talk can help us draw lasting spiritual strength from Mandela’s life story.我由衷期待这场虚拟对话能让我们从曼德拉的人生中汲取长久的精神力量。 2.We will carry forward his perseverance and strive bravely for our own life goals afterwards. 今后我们将传承他坚韧不拔的品质，勇敢为人生目标奋斗。 3.Undoubtedly, every participant is bound to benefit greatly from this meaningful activity. 毫无疑问，每位参与者都必将从这场有意义的活动中收获良多。 四、范文赏析 Dear organizers, Our school will hold an AI-powered virtual dialogue activity with legendary figures. I choose Nelson Mandela as my interviewee out of deep respect for his devotion to South Africa’s freedom. I have two thoughtful questions for him. First, how did he keep his faith unshaken during years of imprisonment? It matters because many teenagers tend to lose heart when facing study setbacks, and his experience can teach us to persist bravely. Second, what inner strength drove him to fight racial discrimination persistently? The answer will guide us to build strong will and hold firm beliefs when meeting unfair troubles in daily life. I sincerely hope this dialogue can help us draw spiritual strength. We will learn from his perseverance and cherish our equal peaceful life, making steady progress in our growth. Li Hua 中文翻译： 尊敬的活动组织者： 我校即将开展依托 AI 技术、与传奇人物进行虚拟对话的主题活动。出于对曼德拉为南非自由不懈奉献的敬佩，我选择他作为采访对象。 我准备了两个具有探讨意义的问题。第一，多年牢狱生涯中他是如何坚定内心信念不动摇的？该问题很有价值，当下许多青少年遭遇学业挫折就容易灰心丧气，他的经历能教会我们勇敢坚持。第二，是何种内心力量支撑他持之以恒反抗种族歧视？答案将指引我们锤炼强大意志，在生活遭遇不公困境时坚守本心。 我由衷希望本次对话能让我们汲取精神力量。我们将学习他坚韧的品格，珍惜当下平等安稳的生活，在成长路上稳步前行。 李华 范文赏析要点： 整体结构赏析 三段式精准契合题干三项硬性要求：选定人物→两个问题 + 各自意义→收尾期许；全篇 138 词，落在 120-150 词标准区间，行文逻辑清晰，格式贴合校园征集意见的书面文体。 重点例句逐句赏析 例句1：Our school will hold an AI-powered virtual dialogue activity with legendary figures. 赏析：复合形容词AI-powered简洁高级，替代简单句式；开篇快速交代活动背景，开门见山引出自己选定的人物，切入紧凑自然。 例句2：It matters because many teenagers tend to lose heart when facing study setbacks, and his experience can teach us to persist bravely. 赏析：状语从句衔接自然，紧扣题目要求解释提问意义；lose heart、study setbacks贴合高中生日常现状，理由真实贴切，论证充分。 例句3：The answer will guide us to build strong will and hold firm beliefs when meeting unfair troubles in daily life. 赏析：build strong will高分书面搭配，句式流畅，清晰点明第二个问题对青少年精神塑造的现实价值，完成答题要点。 例句4：We will learn from his perseverance and cherish our equal peaceful life, making steady progress in our growth. 赏析：句尾现在分词作伴随状语优化句式结构，收尾升华主题，落脚到自身成长，立意积极正向，收尾完整得体。 整体得分亮点 句式多样，状语从句、非谓语结构合理穿插，避免通篇简单句堆砌；用词正式贴合校园书面投稿语境，无语法拼写错误；严格踩全题干全部得分要点，人物选择合理，问题设置有深度，意义阐述贴合高中生身份，完全符合高中英语考场评分标准。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $