上海交通大学附属中学2026届高三上学期10月月考英语试题作文讲义

上海交通大学附属中学2025-2026学年高三上学期10月月考英语试题 作文讲义 一、写作题目 VI. Guided Writing (25’) 56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学高三学生李明，你在本期你们校报的心理辅导专栏 ——“成长加油站（Guide to Growth）” 读到 Billy 的来信，通过该专栏给 Billy 回信，帮他解决困惑并给他建议。 写作必须包含两点： 1.谈谈你对于此现象的看法； 2.给出具体的建议。 Dear Advisor, Lately, I’ve been feeling confused about myself. To fit into a certain group of friends who are all into famous brands and trendy stuff, I used my savings to buy an expensive pair of sneakers that my family can hardly afford. Now I regret it. I feel like I’m losing myself just to gain approval from others. I see many students trying hard to be “cool” or popular. Is this what growing up is all about? How can I stay true to myself without feeling left out? A confused student, Billy 二、写作思路 第一段（开头） 共情安抚 Billy 的懊悔与迷茫，点明当下学生盲目跟风攀比潮流、靠奢侈品博取同伴认可的普遍现状，引出核心观点：真正的合群不需要刻意迎合、牺牲自我与家庭。 第二段（主体） · 第一部分阐述看法：外在潮流穿搭无法定义个人价值，盲目迎合只会丢掉本心，还会造成经济负担与内心焦虑； · 第二部分给出两条落地可行建议：①理性筛选朋友，结交欣赏你本身特质的同伴；②把精力投入自身爱好与学业，依靠内在闪光点收获认可。 第三段（结尾） 再次鼓励 Billy 接纳自我，不必害怕短暂的孤单，坚守本心才是成长最重要的收获，送上美好祝愿。 三、写作高级表达 开头段 高级短语 · be trapped in inner confusion 陷入内心的迷茫 · cater to peers’ superficial tastes 迎合同伴肤浅的喜好 · chase material trends blindly 盲目追逐物质潮流 · win superficial recognition 博取表面的认可 · slip away one’s true self 迷失本心 高级句子 1.It is totally understandable that you are drowned in regret and confusion after your impulsive purchase.一时冲动消费后满心懊悔迷茫，你的心情完全可以理解。 2.Quite a number of teenagers tend to follow fashion crazily just to blend into peer groups. 不少青少年为融入小圈子疯狂跟风潮流。 3.Seeking others’ approval by sacrificing your own situation is never a wise choice in the course of growth.牺牲自身处境换取他人认可，绝非成长中的明智之举。 主体段 高级短语 · attach excessive importance to material symbols 过度看重物质标签 · inner charm rather than outer decorations 内在魅力而非外在装饰 · fall into the trap of peer pressure 陷入同辈压力的圈套 · cherish your family’s hard-earned money 珍惜家人辛苦挣来的收入 · bond with like-minded companions 和志同道合的伙伴相处 · polish your strengths continuously 不断打磨自身优势 · break free from meaningless comparison 摆脱无意义的攀比 · shape your unique personality 塑造独一无二的自我 高级句子 1.Expensive sneakers cannot make you admirable, while your distinctive personalities do. 昂贵的球鞋无法让人变得出众，独一无二的人格特质才可以。 2.Giving up your actual needs merely to fit in will only bring lasting anxiety instead of true happiness.为合群舍弃自身实际需求，换来的只会是长久焦虑而非真正快乐。 3.It is peer pressure rather than genuine friendship that pushes you to make that unreasonable decision.驱使你做出非理性决定的是同辈压力，并非真挚的友谊。 4.You are supposed to filter friends who appreciate your essence instead of your outfits. 你应当结交欣赏你本身、而非看重穿着打扮的朋友。 5.Devoting time to your hobbies and study will gradually make you outstanding naturally. 投入时间深耕爱好与学业，你自然而然会变得亮眼出众。 6.Meaningful friendship never demands you change yourself to cater to others’ preferences. 真挚的友谊从不需要你改变自我去迎合别人的喜好。 结尾段 高级短语 · stick to your original aspiration 坚守本心 · embrace your genuine self 接纳真实的自己 · shake off the fear of being neglected 摆脱被孤立的恐惧 · harvest sincere friendships in the long run 长久收获真挚友谊 · gain steady progress in personal growth 在成长路上稳步前行 高级句子 1.Temporary loneliness is far better than losing yourself in meaningless flattery. 短暂的孤单远好过在无谓的迎合夸赞中丢掉自我。 2.As long as you stay true to yourself, genuine friends will come to you sooner or later. 只要坚守本心，契合的挚友终会向你奔赴而来。 3.Hope you can walk out of confusion and enjoy a positive and authentic growth journey. 愿你走出迷茫，拥有真诚且积极的成长之路。 四、范文赏析 Dear Billy, It is totally understandable that you are drowned in regret and confusion after your impulsive purchase. Nowadays, many teenagers chase material trends blindly just to win superficial recognition from peers. Actually, catering to others’ tastes at the cost of your family’s finance will only make you gradually slip away your true self. From my perspective, expensive trendy items can never define your value. Falling into the trap of peer pressure brings nothing but anxiety. Here are practical suggestions. First, bond with like-minded companions who appreciate your inner charm rather than your outfits. Second, devote your spare time to polishing your strengths, which helps you stand out naturally and break free from meaningless comparison. Temporary loneliness is never terrifying. Stick to your genuine self, and sincere friends will accompany you eventually. Wish you a pleasant growth journey free from confusion. Yours advisor, Li Ming 中文翻译： 亲爱的比利： 一时冲动消费后你满心懊悔与迷茫，这份心情我完全理解。如今很多青少年盲目追逐物质潮流，只为博取同伴表面的认可。事实上，以家里的经济负担为代价去迎合他人喜好，只会让你慢慢迷失自我。 在我看来，昂贵的潮流单品永远无法定义你的个人价值，陷入同辈压力的圈套只会徒增烦恼。给你两条切实可行的建议。第一，结交欣赏你内在魅力、而非在意穿搭外表的志同道合的朋友；第二，利用课余时间打磨自身优势，既能让你自然而然变得优秀，也能摆脱无意义的攀比。 短暂的孤单并不可怕，坚守真实的自己，你终究会收获真挚的友谊。愿你挣脱迷茫，拥有顺遂美好的成长之路。 你的顾问， 李明 范文赏析要点： 整体结构赏析 严格三段式结构，逻辑闭环。第一段共情引入话题，第二段先亮观点再给两条分层建议，第三段总结升华给予鼓励，完全贴合题目两大硬性答题要求，字数卡在 138 词，符合 120-150 词要求，适配高考阅卷评分标准。 经典例句逐句赏析 例句1：It is totally understandable that you are drowned in regret and confusion after your impulsive purchase. 赏析：采用形式主语经典高级句型 It is +形容词+that从句，摒弃简单句 I understand you；be drowned in 替代基础单词 feel，生动形象描绘深陷懊悔迷茫的状态，开篇温柔共情，贴合心理专栏回信的柔和语气。 例句2：Falling into the trap of peer pressure brings nothing but anxiety. 赏析：动名词短语作主语提升句式档次；固定搭配 bring nothing but 精准表达 “只会带来……”，用词精炼地道，简洁点明盲目攀比的弊端，表意凝练有力。 例句3：devote your spare time to polishing your strengths, which helps you stand out naturally and break free from meaningless comparison. 赏析：非限制性定语从句串联整句，句式错落不单调；polish strengths、stand out、break free from均为高考高频高分短语，替换简单的 improve、become good、get rid of，用词高级贴合高中生写作水平，两条建议衔接流畅自然。 例句4：Temporary loneliness is never terrifying. Stick to your genuine self, and sincere friends will accompany you eventually. 赏析：祈使句 + and 陈述句的黄金写作句型，句式简洁有力；收尾紧扣主旨升华，重申坚守本心的核心立意，情感温暖，完美呼应开头 Billy 害怕被孤立的困惑。 得分亮点总结 全文没有低级语法错误，句式长短结合，基础简单句与定语从句、形式主语、动名词主语穿插搭配；词汇拒绝基础口水词，全篇贴合书信交际语境，共情到位、观点清晰、建议落地，兼具逻辑性与语言美感。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $