读后续写纯语料合集-2027届高三英语一轮复习

2027年高考英语读后续写纯语料合集 一、情感描写词块 （1）喜悦开心 1. tears of excitement pour down one's cheeks 激动的泪水顺着脸颊滚滚而下 2. one's heart is thumping with joy 内心因喜悦怦怦狂跳 3. with indescribably wild joy 怀着难以言喻的狂喜 4. be overwhelmingly delighted 欣喜若狂 5. could hardly conceal one's joy 难掩内心的喜悦 6. a mixture of excitement and happiness 满心激动与欢喜 7. a satisfied look 一脸满足 8. smile with relief 宽慰地一笑 9. burst into laughter 突然放声大笑 10. break into a smile 豁然展露笑容 11. a big smile on one's face 脸上挂着灿烂的笑容 12. all smiles 满面春风 13. smile broadly 咧嘴开怀大笑 14. with a smile on one's lips 嘴角噙着笑意 15. flash a bright smile 绽放一抹明媚的笑容 16. dance for/with joy 高兴得手舞足蹈 17. jump for/with joy 喜极雀跃 18. be full of joy 满心欢喜 19. take delight in sth 以某事为乐 20. to one's delight 令某人欣喜的是 21. a sweet smile 甜甜的微笑 22. yell with delight 开心地大喊 23. be delighted at 为…… 感到欣喜 24. smile sweetly/faintly 嫣然一笑 / 淡淡浅笑 25. be content with 对…… 心满意足 26. brighten sb's heart 让某人心情豁然开朗 27. be in cheerful spirits 心情舒畅愉悦 28. in a good mood 心情大好 29. be over the moon 欣喜若狂 30. in a cheerful voice 欢快地说道 31. wear a shining smile on one's face 脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容 32. go wild with joy at the thought of 一想到…… 就欣喜若狂 （2）愤怒烦躁 1. boil with rage 怒火中烧 2. shake one's fist with anger 愤怒地挥舞拳头 3. storm out of the room 怒气冲冲冲出房间 4. slam the door furiously 狠狠摔上门 5. arouse one's displeasure 惹得某人不悦 6. be displeased at one's conduct 对某人的行为心生不满 7. be easily annoyed at trifles 一点小事就容易烦躁 8. be speechless with indignation 气得说不出话 9. complain constantly 不停抱怨 10. rage at sb 对某人大发雷霆 11. flame with anger 气得面红耳赤 12. fly into a rage 勃然大怒 13. get irritated at sb 被某人惹恼 14. get mad at/cross with sb 对某人发火 15. have a worried look 愁眉紧锁 16. in a burst of anger 一时怒火上头 17. in angry words 言辞愤怒地 18. one's eyes shine with anger 眼中燃起怒火 19. hold back one's anger 强忍怒火 20. mask anger with a smile 强装笑意掩盖怒气 21. be filled with anger 满腔怒火 22. glare at sb 怒目瞪着某人 23. stamp one's feet in anger 气得直跺脚 （3）悲伤失落 1. one's heart aches 心中阵阵刺痛 2. tears stream down one's cheeks 泪流满面 3. a strong sense of loss 浓烈的失落感 4. fall into despair 陷入绝望 5. put sb into a sentimental mood 勾起某人的伤感 6. crying gives some emotional release 哭泣能宣泄情绪 7. be numb with grief 悲伤到麻木 8. cry one's heart out 痛哭失声 9. with a heavy heart 心情沉重地 10. feel sad and empty 内心难过又空虚 11. burst into tears 突然潸然落泪 12. tears roll down one's face 泪珠顺着脸庞滑落 13. close to tears 快要哭出来 14. weep silently 默默垂泪 15. in low spirits 情绪低落 16. fight back tears 强忍泪水 17. to one's disappointment 令某人失望的是 18. wipe tears from one's face 擦去脸上的泪水 19. feel disappointed and frustrated 满心失望与挫败 （4）恐惧胆怯 1. tremble with fear 吓得浑身发抖 2. freeze with terror 惊恐地僵在原地 3. too scared to move an inch 吓得寸步难行 4. a feeling of fear 一阵恐惧感袭来 5. a frightened look/expression 惊恐的神情 6. a wave of fear 一阵恐惧涌上心头 7. with one's eyes full of horror 眼中满是惶恐 二、人物描写语料 1. 外貌描写 1. a double chin 双下巴 2. bushy/thin eyebrows 浓眉 / 细眉 3. rough hands 粗糙的双手 4. deep-set/sunken brown eyes 深陷的棕色眼眸 5. a pale face 面色苍白 6. a weather-beaten face 饱经风霜的脸庞 7. wear shoulder-length hair 留着齐肩长发 8. a girl in rags 衣衫褴褛的女孩 9. a middle-aged woman 中年妇人 10. be of medium height 中等身高 11. be ordinary-looking 相貌平平 12. delicate looks 眉清目秀 13. smartly/neatly dressed 穿着得体 / 整洁 14. be of slim/slender figure 身形纤细苗条 15. be of medium weight 身材匀称不胖不瘦 16. well-shaped body 身形匀称好看 2. 性格描写 1. a quick temper 急性子 2. a difficult person 难以相处的人 3. be ready to help others 乐于助人 4. be easy to get along with 随和好相处 5. down-to-earth spirit 踏实务实的品性 6. lack self-confidence 缺乏自信 7. with pleasant personality 性格温和讨喜 8. be fashion-minded 思想新潮前卫 9. be capable and aggressive 能干且有上进心 10. stubborn pride 死要面子、自尊心极强 11. be both wise and diligent 聪慧又勤勉 12. be honest and reliable 诚实可靠 13. be sensitive about/to sth 对某事格外敏感 14. be considerate about 为人体贴周到 15. a cold-blooded man 冷漠无情的人 16. a self-possessed person 沉着冷静的人 17. a well-informed man 见多识广的人 18. a good-humored/good-natured person 性情温和和善的人 19. a woman of engaging/fascinating personality 性格迷人的女子 20. a well-mannered and considerate man 举止文雅、体贴入微的男士 3. 动作描写 头部动作 1. raise one's head 抬起头 2. turn one's head 转过头 3. hold one's head high 昂首挺胸 4. hang one's head in shame 羞愧地低下头 5. nod/lower/shake one's head 点头 / 低头 / 摇头 6. suffer head injuries 头部受了伤 手部动作 1. hug tightly 紧紧相拥 2. wave one's arm 挥舞手臂 3. pat sb on the shoulder 拍某人的肩膀 4. hold hands 手牵手 5. take one's hand 牵起某人的手 6. reach for one's hand 伸手去拉某人 7. shake one's hand 与某人握手 8. hold out a hand 伸出手 9. put one's hands to one's cheeks 双手捂住脸颊 10. slide one's hand into the pocket 手悄悄插进口袋 11. hold sb in a tender embrace 温柔地抱住某人 12. take sb in one's arms 将某人揽入怀中 13. put one's arms around sb 双臂环住某人 14. fold sb in one's arms 把某人紧紧抱在怀里 15. with crossed arms 双臂交叉抱于胸前 16. fold one's arms 交叉双臂 17. grab sb by the arm 一把抓住某人的胳膊 18. wave goodbye to sb 向某人挥手道别 腿部动作 1. struggle out of the bed 挣扎着下床 2. kneel down 跪下 3. slip into/steal into 悄悄溜进 4. quicken one's pace 加快脚步 5. slip out of ... 从…… 偷偷溜走 6. stagger to one's feet 摇摇晃晃站起身 7. rush into 冲进…… 8. hobble down the stairs 一瘸一拐走下楼梯 9. drag one's legs 拖着双腿前行 10. jump to one's feet 猛地站起来 11. stamp one's feet 跺脚 12. stand on tiptoe 踮起脚尖 13. put one's feet up 把脚抬起来 14. tiptoe to the bed 蹑手蹑脚走到床边 15. get down on one's knees 双膝跪地 16. spring to one's feet 一跃而起 17. drag oneself through 费力穿过 18. walk on the street aimlessly 漫无目的地在街上闲逛 感官动作 1. listen attentively 专心聆听 2. be all ears 洗耳恭听 3. hear a dog barking 听见狗叫声 4. hear footsteps behind sb 听见身后传来脚步声 5. look into one's eyes 直视某人的双眼 6. one's eyes fall on ... 目光落在…… 上 7. look at sb straight in the eye 直直注视某人 8. roll one's eyes 翻了个白眼 9. one's eyes drop to 目光垂向…… 10. say with tears 含泪说道 11. speak in a serious voice 语气严肃地说 12. ask with curiosity 好奇地发问 13. speak in a husky whisper 沙哑地低声诉说 对话配套动作句式（said 后置修饰） 1. ... said, sounding confused …… 说着，语气满是困惑 2. ... said, staring at sb …… 一边说，一边盯着某人 3. ... said, frowning …… 皱着眉头说道 4. ... said, looking at sb with disdain …… 轻蔑地看着某人说 5. ... said, answering quickly …… 立刻开口答道 6. ... told me, pointing towards ... …… 指着…… 告诉我 7. ... added, laughing …… 笑着补充道 8. ... urged, shouting loudly …… 大声催促道 行走跑动拓展句式 1. He ran down the stairs, breathing heavily. 他喘着粗气跑下楼梯。 2. He walked swiftly, resisting the urge to break into a run. 他快步走着，强忍住奔跑的冲动。 3. He came running along with quick feet full of joy. 他满心欢喜快步跑来。 4. ... added and marched off without a backward glance. …… 说完便大步离开，头也不回。 5. He slipped out of the building without anybody noticing it. 他趁没人注意，悄悄溜出了大楼。 6. He paced back and forth in the room, like a wild animal in a cage. 他在房间里来回踱步，如同困兽。 三、环境描写语料 1. 自然环境 雨雪风霜 1. a stormy night 暴风雨之夜 2. be hit/struck by heavy snow 遭遇暴雪侵袭 3. continuous/constant rain 连绵阴雨 4. snow melts away 冰雪消融 5. be full of dark clouds 乌云密布 6. clear up （天气）放晴 7. fierce/heavy/violent storms 狂风暴雨 8. rain cats and dogs 下起倾盆大雨 9. a fresh breeze 一阵清爽的微风 10. peals of thunder 雷声滚滚 11. clouds darken a city 乌云笼罩整座城市 12. the enveloping darkness 四下一片漆黑 13. be covered with thick snow 覆盖着厚厚的积雪 14. a blanket of frost/snow/cloud 一层薄霜 / 厚雪 / 漫天云层 花草树木 1. flowers come out 鲜花绽放 2. in (full) bloom 繁花盛开 3. (trees) bear fruit 树木结出果实 4. a burst of fragrance 一阵花香扑面而来 5. the rustling leaves 树叶沙沙作响 6. be laden with fruit 硕果累累 7. be immersed in the sea of flowers 置身花海之中 8. in the bushes 灌木丛间 山河湖海 1. beat the seashore/bank 海浪拍打海岸 / 河岸 2. the upper/middle/lower reaches 河流上 / 中 / 下游 3. reach high up into the sky 山峰直插云霄 4. run gently down to the sea 河水缓缓奔向大海 5. wind one's way forward 蜿蜒向前流淌 6. a delightful sea/mountain view 赏心悦目的山海风光 7. rough seas 波涛汹涌的海面 8. a steep-sided valley 陡峭幽深的峡谷 9. towering walls of rock 高耸的岩壁 10. the peaceful lake 平静无波的湖泊 11. rough and stony ground 崎岖多石的地面 12. rough and narrow mountain roads 崎岖狭窄的山路 日月星辰 1. the cloudless sky 万里无云的晴空 2. the starry sky 繁星点点的夜空 3. stars twinkle their eyes 星星眨着眼睛 4. dim moonlight 朦胧月色 5. be lit by a full moon 被满月照亮 6. a burst of sunshine 一缕阳光穿透云层 7. hide itself behind the clouds （日月）躲进云层后 8. burst through the clouds 冲破云层洒落 9. the rising/setting sun 朝阳 / 落日 10. be bathed in the silver moonlight 沐浴在银色月光下 2. 社会环境 1. busy streets 熙熙攘攘的街道 2. with many people coming and going 人来人往 3. panicked crowds 惊慌失措的人群 4. a variety of commodities 琳琅满目的商品 5. a flood of vehicles 川流不息的车辆 6. a busy and bustling city 热闹繁华的城市 7. rows and rows of new houses 一排排崭新的房屋 8. busy and crowded cities 拥挤喧闹的城市 9. in the slight yellow light of road lamps 在微黄的路灯光晕下 四、句子扩写通用手法例句 1. 加形容词、副词 1. Little Tom unwrapped his delicate present box. 小汤姆拆开了精致的礼盒。 2. Tom unwrapped his present box excitedly. 汤姆兴奋地拆开礼盒。 3. Curious and excited, Tom unwrapped his present box. 汤姆又好奇又激动，拆开了礼盒。 4. Full of joy/excitement, Tom unwrapped his present box. 满心欢喜的汤姆拆开了礼盒。 2. 加介词短语状语 1. Tom unwrapped his present box in/with excitement. 汤姆怀着激动拆开礼盒。 2. Out of curiosity, Tom unwrapped his present box. 出于好奇，汤姆拆开了礼盒。 3. Without hesitation, Tom unwrapped his present box. 汤姆毫不犹豫拆开礼盒。 3. with 复合结构 1. Tom unwrapped his present box with a greeting card attached. 汤姆拆开附带贺卡的礼盒。 2. With his mouth open, Tom unwrapped his present box. 汤姆张大嘴巴，拆开礼盒。 3. With his heart beating wildly, Tom unwrapped his present box. 汤姆心跳狂乱，拆开礼盒。 4. 非谓语作状语 1. Screaming in/with excitement, Tom unwrapped his present box. 汤姆激动地尖叫着拆开礼盒。 2. Tom, screaming in/with excitement, unwrapped his present box. 激动尖叫的汤姆拆开了礼盒。 5. 定语从句拓展 Tom unwrapped his present box which he had been looking forward to. 汤姆拆开了他期盼已久的礼盒。 6. 完整融合长句 With his heart beating wildly, little Tom，screaming in/with excitement, unwrapped his delicate present box with a greeting card attached, which he had been looking forward to.翻译：小汤姆心跳剧烈，激动地尖叫着，拆开了那个附带贺卡、他期盼许久的精致礼盒。 7. 动作具象化改写 1. Jane stood up and continued to walk forward. 简站起身，继续往前走。→Jane struggled to her feet and moved forward with her shaky legs. 简挣扎着起身，拖着颤抖的双腿往前挪。 2. Mac opened the car door and went in. 麦克拉开车门坐进去。→Mac pulled the car door open and jumped into the car without any hesitation. 麦克一把拉开车门，毫不犹豫跳上车。 3. The little boy said sorry to his mother. 小男孩跟妈妈道歉。→The little boy hung his head and mumbled an apology to his mother. 小男孩低着头，小声嘟囔着向妈妈道歉。 4. She went to catch the butterfly. 她去抓蝴蝶。→She crept along the path, bent over swiftly and cupped her hands around the butterfly gently. 她沿着小路蹑手蹑脚走去，迅速俯身，双手轻轻捧住蝴蝶。 5. The wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, shouting at Paul and Becky. 狼注意到他们，回头冲两人嘶吼。→At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and fiercely turned its head back, shouting loudly at Paul and Becky. 与此同时，狼发现了他们，恶狠狠地转过头，对着保罗和贝基高声嘶吼。 五、语段融合描写范例（景 + 人动作 + 心理 + 情感） 1. Margery sat on the doorstep, and wondered, as the sea sounded louder, and the sunshine grew warmer around her.玛格丽坐在门前台阶上沉思，海浪声愈发清晰，温暖的阳光笼罩着她。 2. I can smell the sweet flowers in the garden. The sky is all bright with sunset; I can see purple, pink, and golden. I do not believe that anyone on the earth has a paint box with such lovely colors in it.我能闻到花园里清甜的花香。落日将天际染得透亮，紫、粉、金三色交织。我想世间没有哪个调色盘，能调出这般动人的色彩。 3. As she looked out, she first saw the western sky and some bright, sunset clouds. “Oh, Mother！” she exclaimed. “What a splendid sunset！”她抬眼望向窗外，西边天空铺满绚烂晚霞。“妈妈你看！” 她惊呼，“这日落太美了！” 4. And suddenly everything went dark, like right before a tornado. My ears were ringing, I felt dizzy, and I threw up.天地骤然昏暗，如同龙卷风来临前的景象。我耳鸣不止，头晕目眩，忍不住呕吐起来。 5. Daytime though it was, I felt as if it were dark night. In the middle of an empty jungle, I was scared to death, standing rooted to the spot.明明是白昼，我却如同身处深夜。空旷的丛林中央，我吓得魂飞魄散，僵在原地一动不敢动。 6. Taking a deep breath and gathering all our courage, we gave each other a nod and took off. At first I barely moved, but slowly I allowed myself to gain some speed. Soon I was shooting down the mountain with my heart beating wildly.我们深吸一口气，鼓足全部勇气，互相点头后动身出发。起初我步履艰难，慢慢才加快速度，转瞬便冲下山，心脏狂跳不止。 7. When my brother and mother suddenly turned up before me, I felt as if I had seen my family after ten years' departure, and tears were welling up in my eyes. I ran to them like a bird with my arms outstretched. At this point, I felt the air as fresh as a rose, the sun as gentle as a girl and the smile on my face as sparkling as diamonds.妈妈和哥哥突然出现在眼前，我如同与阔别十年的亲人重逢，热泪瞬间涌上眼眶。我张开双臂，像小鸟一般奔向他们。此刻空气带着玫瑰般清甜，阳光温柔似水，我脸上的笑容璀璨如钻石。 8. At last I heard my own name called. I was at the top of the world. All sadness and fatigue escaping from my body, I sprang to my feet, waved furiously towards the direction that voice came and raised a cry of warning, “Here I am.”终于有人喊我的名字，我欣喜若狂，所有疲惫与难过一扫而空。我一跃而起，朝着声音传来的方向用力挥手，高声呼喊：“我在这里！” 9. In the hot summer, the jungle is impenetrable, which made me sweat. Finding no way to go home, I had difficulty breathing as if there were ten suns burning in the heart due to my anxiety. Feeling a surge of helplessness, I couldn't resist crying in despair.盛夏的丛林密不透风，我浑身冒汗。找不到回家的路，焦虑如同十个烈日灼烧心口，连呼吸都困难。一股无力感席卷而来，我忍不住绝望落泪。 10. The sun on the noon was blazing down on the ground, casting tree shadows like snakes crawling back and forth. They threw themselves at me with their long tongues, and I was terrified, crying my eyes out. I felt as if my heart had been ripped from my body.正午烈日炙烤大地，树影像来回游走的毒蛇，仿佛吐着长舌朝我扑来。我吓得痛哭流涕，只觉得心脏都快要撕裂。 11. Seeing the attacker flee/disappear/run into the darkness, Jim thought of the girl. Still breathing heavily, Jim walked towards her. The girl was sitting behind the bushes, sobbing. Although in the darkness Jim could hardly see the girl clearly, he could sense her trembling alarm with certainty. To avoid frightening the girl further, Jim spoke to her at a distance. In a soft voice, Jim told her that the attacker had run away and that she was safe. There was a long silence and then in astonishment he heard the girl ask, “Dad, is that you？”看着袭击者逃入夜色，吉姆立刻想起那个女孩。他仍喘着粗气，缓步走向灌木丛。女孩正坐在树丛后低声啜泣。黑暗中吉姆看不清她的脸，却能真切感受到她止不住的颤抖。为了不再吓到她，吉姆站在远处柔声告诉她坏人已经离开，她安全了。长久的沉默过后，他震惊地听见女孩问道：“爸爸，是你吗？” 12. The next day, Meg went to tell Mrs Gilson why she couldn't hand in her homework. To avoid being known by her classmates, she secretly slid into Mrs Gilson's office without being noticed. Her head dropped, Meg told Mrs Gilson the truth that she just could not find her homework. “I promise that I did finish my homework and ...” she explained, tears welling up in her eyes/eyes brimming with tears. Seeing this, Mrs Gilson interrupted her. With a smile, she told Meg that she had handed in her homework with her paper the day before. She knew Meg was not lying because of laziness. Hearing this, Meg felt a surge of relief. She smiled brightly, drops of tears rolling down her cheeks.第二天，梅格去找吉尔森老师解释没交作业的缘由。她不想被同学看见，趁无人注意悄悄溜进办公室。她垂着头，如实告诉老师自己弄丢了作业。“我真的写完了……” 她眼眶含泪解释道。老师见状打断她，笑着说梅格昨天已经把作业和试卷一起上交了，她知道梅格绝非偷懒撒谎。听完这话，梅格如释重负，露出灿烂的笑容，泪珠顺着脸颊滑落。 六、逻辑连接过渡词 并列 and 和；also 也；as well 同样；as well as 以及；or 或者；too 也；not only ... but also ... 不仅…… 而且；both ... and ... 两者都；either ... or ... 要么…… 要么；neither ... nor ... 既不…… 也不 递进 besides 此外；in addition/additionally 另外；moreover 而且；what's more 更重要的是；more importantly 更为关键的是；furthermore 此外；what's worse 更糟的是 转折 but 但是；however 然而；yet 可是；instead 取而代之；on the other hand 另一方面；on the contrary 相反；although 尽管；despite 尽管；in spite of 虽然；nevertheless 尽管如此；while 然而 原因 because 因为；because of 由于；since 既然；as 由于；for 因为；now that 既然；thanks to 多亏；due to 由于；as a result of 因为；owing to 归功于 / 由于 结果 so 所以；as a result 结果；consequently 因此；therefore 所以；hence 由此；thus 因而；so ... that ... 如此…… 以至于 时间 when 当…… 时；while 当…… 期间；after 在…… 之后；before 在…… 之前；until 直到；as soon as 一…… 就；later 之后；soon 很快；recently 近来；since 自从；from ... on 从…… 起；at present 目前；the moment/instant 一…… 就；immediately 立刻；after a while 片刻后；early this morning 清晨；on one's arrival 一抵达；before long 不久 条件 if 如果；unless 除非；once 一旦；as long as 只要 顺序 first 首先；second 其次；above all 首要的是；first of all 第一；then 然后；next 接下来；finally 最终；in the end 最后；at last 终于；eventually 到头来；meanwhile 与此同时；last but not least 最后同样重要的是 换述 in other words 换句话说；that is to say 也就是说；namely 即；to put it another way 换而言之 举例 for instance 例如；for example 比如；like 像；such as 诸如 事实陈述 in fact 事实上；actually 实际上；as a matter of fact 其实；to tell the truth 说实话 强调 certainly 当然；surely 无疑；indeed 的确；above all 最重要的是；most importantly 关键在于；no doubt 毫无疑问；undoubtedly 毋庸置疑；truly 实在地；obviously 显然；fortunately 幸运的是；after all 毕竟 比较 like 如同；unlike 不像；in the same way 同理；similarly 相似地；similar to ... 与…… 相似 目的 for 为了；for this purpose 为此；so that 以便；in order to (that) 为了；so as to 以求 总结 in a word 总而言之；in general 大体而言；in short 简而言之；to sum up 概括来说；in conclusion 最后；in summary 综上 七、结尾主题升华语料 万能拟人升华句模板 Seeing sth, sb felt as if it had been doing ... and saying ...翻译：望着某物，某人仿佛觉得它一直在……，仿佛在诉说……配套例句： 1. Seeing the suitcase, Arthur felt as if it had been praising him, “You did a great job！”望着行李箱，亚瑟仿佛听见它在夸赞自己：“你做得太棒了！” 2. Seeing the tent, I felt as if it had been sighing and saying, “I want to experience the outside world.”看着帐篷，我仿佛听见它轻叹：“我想去看看外面的世界。” 3. Seeing the paper bag, I felt as if it had been reminding me that I should pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me every time I meet someone in need.看着纸袋，它仿佛时刻提醒我：往后遇见身处困境的人，一定要传递这户墨西哥人家给予我的善意。 通用升华句 1. Just follow your heart and you'll be happy. 遵从本心，方能喜乐。 2. We will be successful as long as we keep working hard. 只要坚持不懈，终会收获成功。 3. Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart. 美不在容颜，而在心底的微光。 4. A little bit kindness will be rewarded with a large amount of benefit. 点滴善意，终会换来温暖回馈。 5. My patience and love let him believe that the world is full of kindness. 我的耐心与温柔，让他相信世间满是善意。 6. Love everybody because that's the greatest thing you can give and it is the start of your life trip. 心怀善意善待所有人，这是你能给予世间最好的馈赠，也是人生旅途的起点。 7. No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. 无论职业多么平凡，都在支撑社会运转，值得我们心怀尊重。 8. The harder you work, the greater progress you will make. 越努力，越幸运，进步越可观。 9. As everybody knows, the lazier a person is, the more things he needs to do tomorrow. 众所周知，今日偷一分懒，明日多十分忙。 10. Cold as the rain was, great warmth filled his heart like never before. 雨水寒凉，可他心底却涌上前所未有的暖意。 11. True love is the most invaluable thing in the world. 真挚的情感，是世间最无价的珍宝。 12. So say goodbye to the past and embrace the present. 放下过往，拥抱当下。 13. It dawned on me that we should always be an honest person whatever situations we are in. 我忽然醒悟，无论身处何种境遇，都要坚守本心、诚实待人。 14. I am firmly convinced that the slight power of every person can make our country more prosperous. 我坚信，每个人的微薄之力，都能让祖国愈发繁荣。 15. All the students come to realize that everyone wants and deserves to be treated with respect，dignity and warmth. 所有同学都渐渐明白，每个人都渴望、也理应得到尊重、体面与温柔对待。 16. It is not how much we do but how much love we put into what we do that benefits our work most. 决定一件事价值的，从来不是付出多少体力，而是投入了多少真心。 17. I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life. 我终于懂得，成功无关出身与天时，只看你一生所为、行事之道。 18. The gift you give is not something your loved one keeps, but a voluntary contribution towards the people who really need it in their lives. 赠予的礼物，不必留给至亲珍藏，更该赠予真正需要它的陌生人。 画面定格结尾句 人物定格 1. Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora's hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and moved, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.鲁本紧紧攥着汽水罐，奔向商店买下胸针。一拿到精致的胸针，他就冲进家门，交到多拉手中。多拉从未收到这般珍贵的礼物，感动得说不出话，紧紧抱住儿子，泪水盈满眼眶。 2. Tears of joy and gratitude welling up in her eyes, she threw her arms around her brother, thinking what a blissful world it was and how lucky she was to have Tony as her brother!喜悦与感激的泪水漫上眼眶，她一把抱住哥哥，心中感慨：世间何其美好，能拥有托尼这样的兄长，是她莫大的幸运！ 3. Caressed by the faint breeze carrying the fragrance of the air, the two dogs jumped across the alleys of the neighborhood while their owners were chatting and laughing. Tingling with ineffable joy and excitement, they chatted and laughed with love and warmth brimming in their hearts, which bonded the family forever.微风裹挟着草木清香轻轻拂过，两只小狗在街巷间蹦跳嬉戏，主人们谈笑风生。难以言喻的欢喜萦绕心头，满室温情，将一家人紧紧联结在一起。 4. A beam of sunlight shed a soft glow on her rosy cheeks. She raised her head, pointed towards the sky and felt she was the luckiest girl in the world.一缕柔光落在她红润的脸颊上。她抬手指向天际，觉得自己是世上最幸运的女孩。 景物定格 1. The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come.漫天星光澄澈明亮，脚下青草青翠，昼夜在此刻相融成一幅绝美的画卷 —— 黎明，已然降临。 2. Outside the window, the light breeze was blowing, leaving the leaves rustling, as if cheering for them.窗外微风徐徐，树叶沙沙作响，仿佛在为他们送上祝福。 3. The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.雨点敲打窗棂，送别天边最后一缕夕阳。 4. Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold under foot. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.大地被雨水浸润，泛着晶莹水光，脚下微凉。泥土清甜的气息四下弥漫，温柔包裹世间万物。 5. Dotted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality.藏青夜空缀满闪烁星辰，眼前的一切宛若童话仙境。 留白式结尾句 1. A greater surprise was waiting for her. 一份更大的惊喜，正在前方等候着她。 2. “Is that you, Paul？” his partner opened the door, “What the hell is going on？” Paul struggled to his feet, saying, “Oh, it's a long story.”“是你吗，保罗？” 搭档推开门问道，“到底发生了什么？” 保罗撑着身子站起来：“说来话长。” 3. Too late to apologize, she realized with grief, that she was the rude one, the ingrate, the thief! How many times have we absolutely known that something was a certain way, only to discover later that what we believed to be true was not?此刻道歉已然太迟，她满心悲痛地醒悟：无礼、忘恩、贪心的人，原来是自己。我们多少次笃定自己所见为真，到头来却发现，我们深信不疑的事实，从一开始就是错的？ 4. The beggar hesitated for a moment, and then he decided to open it. He declared aloud，“Who cares? He wanted me to have it anyway. I might as well enjoy it now.” With that, he unwrapped the white tissue paper, but to his surprise, there was no hard rock candy inside. Instead, into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars.乞丐犹豫片刻，还是决定拆开包裹。他喃喃自语：“管他呢，他本就是要送给我的，不如现在看看。” 他拆开白色包装纸，却大失所望 —— 里面根本没有硬糖，一颗价值千金的莹白珍珠落在他掌心。 八、修辞写作语料 明喻（as...as/like） as...as 词块 as soft as water 柔情似水as drunk as a mouse 烂醉如泥as weak as water 弱不禁风as clear as crystal 清澈如水晶as unique as a fingerprint 独一无二，如同指纹 like 词块 like a duck to water 如鱼得水like a rat in a hole 瓮中之鳖like a drowned cat 落汤鸡like a cat on hot bricks 热锅上的蚂蚁like looking for a needle in a haystack 大海捞针 例句 1. His heart is as hard as a stone. 他心如磐石，冷酷无情。 2. Her soul is as pure as snow. 她的心灵如雪般纯净无瑕。 3. He didn't think he could go any further: His legs felt like pieces of wood—heavy and stiff.他再也走不动了，双腿如同木头般沉重僵硬。 4. The parents' instructions were of little use to the boy, just like water off a duck's back.父母的叮嘱对男孩毫无作用，如同水过鸭背。 5. Tired from a whole day's journey, she slept like a log. 奔波整日，她睡得十分沉熟。 6. I couldn't move my legs. It was as if they were stuck to the floor. 我的双腿动弹不得，仿佛粘在了地面上。 7. Those old favorite songs are very dear to me as though they are long-lost friends that make me cry.那些老歌于我格外珍贵，如同久别重逢的老友，每每听起都让我落泪。 8. Getting some financial assistance from your uncle was like getting blood out of a stone.想从你叔叔手里拿到资助，简直难于登天。 9. As happy as a lark is my daughter, whose presence makes everyone happy and relaxed.我的女儿像云雀一样活泼开朗，有她在，所有人都轻松愉悦。 10. Memories flashed through his mind like an old newsreel as he sat quietly remembering his childhood days.他静坐回忆童年，往事如同老旧新闻短片，一幕幕在脑海闪过。 暗喻 1. All the world is a stage and we are all players. 整个世界是一座舞台，我们皆是台上的演员。 2. The old man's face is a map of time. 老人的脸庞，是岁月刻下的地图。 3. He is a walking dictionary. 他是一本活字典，学识渊博。 4. Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face. 笑容是阳光，驱散人脸上的阴霾。 5. I'm drowning in a sea of grief. 我沉溺在悲伤的深海里无法自拔。 6. Spending too much time with him is worse than swimming in a sea of sharks.和他相处久了，比置身鲨鱼群还要煎熬。 7. Her voice is music to his ears. 她的声音，于他而言宛若天籁。 8. My big brother is a couch potato. 我大哥是个沙发土豆，总爱宅家看电视。 9. Life is an unexplored river full of twists and turns. 人生是一条未经探索的长河，曲折蜿蜒。 10. She's going through a roller coaster of emotions. 她的情绪如同过山车，起伏不定。 夸张 1. We have to wait in line for centuries! 我们排的队，仿佛要等上一个世纪！ 2. I was walking along the road when suddenly a dog as big as an elephant stood in front of me.我在路上走着，忽然一条大象般巨大的狗挡在身前。 3. His blood froze when he heard a sudden roaring. 突如其来的嘶吼声，吓得他血液都凝固了。 4. The moment Jenny finished her speech, thunderous applause erupted from the class.珍妮演讲一结束，班里爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。 5. When she heard the bad news, a river of tears poured out. 听到噩耗，她泪流成河。 6. When she told her father about this, his heart burst. 她把这件事告诉父亲，父亲的心都要碎了。 7. They turned into an endless street. 他们拐进一条望不到尽头的长街。 8. My heart almost stopped beating when I heard my friend's voice on the phone.电话里传来朋友的声音，我的心跳几乎骤停。 9. I was so hungry that I could eat a horse. 我饿得能吞下一匹马。 10. He was so sad that he was drowning in tears. 他悲痛万分，快要被泪水淹没。 拟人 1. The river swallowed the earth as the water continued to rise higher and higher.河水不断上涨，仿佛吞噬了整片大地。 2. Slowly, the city began to breathe again. 慢慢地，这座城市重焕生机。 3. Time flew and before we knew it, it was time for me to go home. 时光飞逝，转瞬就到了我该回家的时候。 4. The moon winked at me through the clouds above. 月亮穿过云层，朝我眨着眼睛。 5. The first rays of morning tiptoed through the meadow. 清晨第一缕晨光，轻手轻脚掠过草地。 6. She did not realize that opportunity was knocking at her door. 她未曾察觉，机遇已然叩响家门。 7. The curtain of night fell upon us. 夜幕缓缓降临，笼罩大地。 8. The thunder clapped angrily in the distance. 远处雷声轰鸣，如同暴怒的呐喊。 9. Seeing such extraordinary beauty, I think every cell in my body woke up.目睹这般极致美景，我身体里每一个细胞都苏醒过来。 10. I could hear Hawaii calling my name. 我仿佛听见夏威夷在轻声呼唤我的名字。 排比 1. The sky is so dignified; the mountain is so majestic; the water is so profound.长空辽阔肃穆，群山巍峨壮丽，湖水沉静深邃。 2. Innovation needs wisdom; innovation needs brains; innovation needs inspiration.创新需要智慧，创新需要思考，创新需要灵感。 3. A number of streets were flooded. A number of schools and kindergartens were closed. A number of flights and railway services were cancelled.多条街道被淹，多所学校停课，大量航班、铁路班次停运。 4. I travel to unusual places and work alongside people from all over the world. Sometimes working outdoors, sometimes in an office, sometimes using scientific equipment and sometimes meeting local people and tourists, I am never bored.我奔赴各地，与世界各地的人共事。时而户外奔波，时而伏案办公，时而操作仪器，时而接待游客，生活永远充满新鲜感。 5. Stay in a local hotel, visit the museums, admire the architecture, enjoy the excellent local food, and go shopping at the local markets.入住当地民宿，参观博物馆，欣赏特色建筑，品尝地道美食，逛逛本地集市。 6. The only way I can get my head around all that is to consider what alcohol gave me, what it took away and how the balance of power changed.唯有梳理清楚酒精带给我什么、夺走我什么、如何改变了我的生活，我才能真正理清一切。 7. Stimulus is when a dog barks at you and bares his teeth. Response is that your heart beats faster, your palms get sweaty and you prepare to run.刺激，是恶犬冲你龇牙低吼；反应，是心跳加速、手心冒汗、时刻准备逃离。 8. Driving through the countryside was always an adventure: There were animals to see, people to visit, and chocolate cookies if you knew where to stop.驱车穿行乡间永远充满惊喜：能遇见各式小动物，拜访淳朴乡民，找对地方还能吃到巧克力曲奇。 9. You choose how you react to situations. You choose how people will affect your mood. You choose to be in a good mood or bad mood.如何应对境遇，由你选择；他人如何左右你的情绪，由你选择；心怀欢喜还是满心烦闷，同样由你选择。 对比 1. Many people will soon find themselves rich in goods, but ragged in spirit.不少人物质富足，精神世界却一片贫瘠。 2. Everyone in the classroom was chatting happily while Rafael sat alone, at a loss.教室里众人谈笑风生，唯有拉斐尔独自静坐，茫然无措。 3. The pain in my foot and the cold soaking rain made my journey tough to continue, but the warm tea from the woman and the heroic shout of the man helped me set off again.脚底刺痛、冷雨倾盆，前路举步维艰；可那位女士递来的热茶、男士仗义的呼喊，让我重新鼓起前行的勇气。 4. Out at sea it was calm. No wind came up. Yet from every direction—east, west, south and north, strong winds blew upon the unlucky city.海面风平浪静，一丝风也无；可狂风却从东西南北四面八方，席卷这座不幸的小城。 5. While we can become aware of something by seeing or hearing from a distance and without really trying, if we want to learn about something by means of touch, we must make a move.远观耳闻，不必费力就能知晓事物；可若想亲手触碰、真切感知，就必须主动靠近。 反复 1. The trees were blown down, the billboards were blown down and the houses were blown down, some of which even lay in pieces.大树被刮倒，广告牌被刮倒，房屋也被刮倒，不少建筑直接碎成废墟。 2. Now is the time to forget everything in the past. Now is the time to get down to the business. Now is the time to work hard for the future.此刻，该放下过往；此刻，该脚踏实地；此刻，该为未来奋力拼搏。 3. Mother not only had cooked countless bowls of noodles for me; she also had been offering her countless love as well.母亲不止为我煮过无数碗热面，更给予我数不尽的温柔与爱意。 4. It was Mom who encouraged me to try it again when I failed. It was Mom who told me to calm down and take one step further when I succeeded. And it was also Mom who did all she could to make sure that I would grow healthily and happily.失意时，是妈妈鼓励我重新尝试；小有成就时，是妈妈劝我沉下心稳步前行；从小到大，倾尽所有护我平安喜乐的，也永远是妈妈。 5. For three days the water in the village wells rose and fell, rose and fell.整整三日，村里井水涨了又落，落了又涨。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $