Unit 4 Period 5 Writing（配套课件PPT）-【步步高】2025-2026学年高一英语必修第二册学习笔记（外研版·新教材）

该高中英语课件聚焦Unit 4 Stage and screen的写作模块，核心涵盖应用文写作——影评与读后续写微技能。课堂从电影名称、类型等基础信息导入，通过影评三段式结构解析、常用句式积累、分步演练搭建学习支架，衔接从基础表达至实战应用的知识脉络。 其亮点在于以结构化写作指导提升语言能力，如影评分开头（基本信息）、主体（情节分析）、结尾（观点评价）三部分，结合《哈利·波特》《流浪地球》实例强化思维品质。读后续写微技能通过名词性从句升级、情感动作词汇积累，助力学生精准表达，教师可利用该资料高效开展分层教学，提升学生写作素养。

Period 5 Writing Stage and screen Unit 4 1 内容索引 写作一　应用文写作——影评 写作二　读后续写微技能 写作一　应用文写作——影评 本单元要求写一篇影评。影评就是观众在看完电影以后的所感所想。影评从体裁上属于夹叙夹议文或议论文，主要是以一般现在时介绍剧情并就自己感兴趣的地方发表观点。影评要求评论者就影片特点进行评论，叙议结合，以分析、议论为主。影评一般可分为三个部分： 1.开头段：给出所评论电影的基本信息，如电影名称、电影类型、导演和主演等； 2.主体段：简单讲述情节，主要是影片内容概述。影片概述只需要叙述大概情节，最主要的是分析人物和重点情节，突出自己要评论的内容。 3.结尾段：就影片中自己感兴趣和有价值的故事情节发表观点，可有选择性地就电影的结构、节奏、角色等方面展开评论，最后还可对电影进行总体评价。也可向读者推荐该电影作品。 常用表达 首段常用句式： 1.Recently I saw a movie，the name of which is... 最近我看了一部名为……的电影。 2.The movie is a comedy directed by...and starring by... 这部电影是由……执导……主演的喜剧。 3.It is a(n) sad/romantic/...movie about...named...and is directed by... 这是一部……执导的关于……的悲剧/爱情/……电影，名为…… 4.The movie is set in... 电影的背景是…… 5.The movie named...mainly tells us a story that... 这部名为……的电影主要讲述了…… 中段常用句式： 1.The main character(s) is/are... 主要角色是…… 2.The movie explores the theme of... 电影探索了……的主题。 3.The most memorable scene is... 最令人难忘的场景是…… 4.I like the film...very much！...is brave and funny. 我很喜欢……这部电影！……勇敢又诙谐。 尾段常用句式： 1.I think the subject is more than instructive—we need peace and we don’t want war. 我认为主题很有启发性——我们都需要和平，不想要战争。 2.I think it is well worth watching/it is a masterpiece. 我认为它非常值得观看/它是一部杰作。 3.After watching the movie...，I’m deeply impressed by...，because... 看完电影……，我被……深深打动了，因为…… 4.In a word，the movie is a success/failure. 总之，这部电影很成功/失败。 5.I (don’t) like the movie，and I think it’s... 我(不)喜欢这部电影，我认为它…… 电影《哈利·波特与魔法石》是根据英国作家J.K.Rowling的小说改编而成的。现请你根据下表中的提示写一篇影评。 片名 Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone 故事 梗概 小哈利失去双亲，在姨母家受到虐待。11岁生日时，他被邀请到霍格沃兹(Hogwarts)魔法学校上学，这是一个神奇莫测的魔幻世界。在霍格沃兹，哈利学习了魔法，经历了许多惊险和神奇的事情，学会了怎样获得真正的友谊、如何变得勇敢。 我的 评价 这是一部非常成功的电影，风靡了全世界。通过这部电影，我们应该学会相信自己和帮助别人。 分步演练 第一步　审题谋篇 审题 1.体裁：议论文之影评； 2.人称：以第三人称为主； 3.时态：一般现在时。 谋篇 第一部分：简单介绍背景。对电影的名称、特点、导演等作简单介绍。 第二部分：情节概述。 第三部分：作出评论。 第二步　遣词造句 核心词汇(单元写作词汇运用) 1.根据，以……为基础 2.受到虐待 3.承担责任 4.全世界 5.信任 6.吸引某人 7.失望的 8.度过；经历……而幸存 ________________ ______________ ____________________ ________________ _________ ___________ ____________ ___________ be based on/upon be badly treated shoulder responsibility all over the world believe in appeal to sb disappointed live through 连词成句(教材句式仿写) 1.《哈利·波特与魔法石》是一部奇幻电影，改编自英国作家J.K.罗琳的小说。 Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone is a fantasy film，which __________ J.K.Rowling. 2.在电影中，哈利的父母都去世了，他在姨妈家受到了虐待，他感到失望和沮丧。 In the movie，Harry，whose parents are dead，is badly treated at his aunt’s home and . is based on the novel of the English writer he is disappointed and frustrated 3.但幸运的是，在他11岁生日那天，他被邀请去霍格沃兹魔法学校，那里有很多魔法可供探索。 But fortunately，on his birthday of eleven，he is invited to go to Hogwarts，a magic school， . 4.因为他在那里经历了许多惊险和奇妙的事情，他学会了如何获得真正的友谊，如何变得勇敢。 Because he has _________________________________________________ ，he learns how to get true friendship and how to be brave. with a lot of magic to explore lived through many adventurous and wonderful things there 5.这部电影非常成功，吸引了全世界的人。 The film is and as a result ___________ . 6.看完这部电影后，我意识到相信自己、承担责任和帮助他人的重要性。 After watching the film， believing in myself，shouldering responsibilities and helping others. a great success/greatly successful it appeals to people all over the world I become aware of the importance of 第三步　句式升级 1.用having done作状语改写句4。 ，he learns how to get true friendship and how to be brave. 2.使用so/such...that....改写句5。 The film is _____________________________________________________ . Having lived through many adventurous and wonderful things there such a great success/so successful that it appeals to people all over the world 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。 参考范文 Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone is a fantasy film，which is based on the novel of the English writer J.K.Rowling. In the movie，Harry，whose parents are dead，is badly treated at his aunt’s home and he is disappointed and frustrated.But fortunately，on his birthday of eleven，he is invited to go to Hogwarts，a magic school，with a lot of magic to explore.Having lived through many adventurous and wonderful things there，he learns how to get true friendship and how to be brave. The film is such a great success that it appeals to people all over the world.After watching the film，I become aware of the importance of believing in myself，shouldering responsibilities and helping others. 假定你是李华，你校英语报开设了一个介绍影视作品的专栏，请根据下面表格中的提示为该栏目写一篇关于电影《流浪地球》的影评。 达标检测 片名 The Wandering Earth 导演 郭帆 剧情 该片改编于刘慈欣的同名小说。影片讲述了在不久的未来，太阳即将毁灭，太阳系已经不适合人类生存。面对绝境，人类开启“流浪地球”计划，试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类的新家园。 评论 1.该电影是中国科幻电影史上的里程碑，自上映以来，深受观众欢迎； 2.该影片表达了“希望”和“永不放弃”的主题； 3.相信中国电影的未来会更好。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：里程碑 milestone 参考范文 The Wandering Earth is a science fiction film directed by Guo Fan and adapted from Liu Cixin’s novel of the same name. The film tells the story that in the near future the sun is dying out and the solar system is no longer suitable for human survival.Faced with the danger of human extinction，people starts the “wandering earth” project，trying to escape from the solar system with the earth and looking for a new home for human beings. The film is a milestone in the history of Chinese science fiction film and has been popular with audiences since its release.What impressed me most was the theme of “hope” and “never give up”.The success of The Wandering Earth makes me believe that Chinese movies can be better in the future. 返 回 写作二　读后续写微技能 Ⅰ.增分语料积累 读后续写高级句式升级：名词性从句 名词性从句是在句子中起名词作用的从句，使用名词性从句可以使表达更加丰富、地道。 1.主语从句：it作形式主语/what引导的主语从句 功能：为避免头重脚轻，英语中习惯将真正的主语放在句尾，句首用it作形式主语。 what引导的主语从句常用作句型：最令某人印象深刻/吃惊/震惊的是…… (1)他突然意识到屋里的那一家人正处于危险之中。 It suddenly occurred to him that the family inside was in danger. (2)最让他印象深刻的是，他的母亲从未对找到他失去信心。 What impressed him most was that his mother never lost faith in finding him. 2.同位语从句 功能：主要是that引导的同位语从句，对前面的抽象名词(fact，news，truth，idea，word，suggestion...)进行解释说明 (1)Harry完全不知道他们在说什么。 Harry doesn’t have the slightest idea what they are talking about. (2)他竞赛获得一等奖的消息传来，我们又高兴又激动。 Word came that he had won first prize in the competition，making us delighted and excited. 3.宾语从句 (1)她知道自己必须鼓起勇气去面对往后的困境。 She knew that she had to gather her courage to face the difficult situation ahead. (2)我想知道你是否能告诉我有关这个活动的更多的信息。 I am wondering if you could tell me more about this activity. 4.表语从句 他没被重点大学录取的原因是他的分数太低了。 The reason why he wasn’t admitted into a key university was that his grades were too low. [即时演练]　根据汉语提示补全句子 1.从她的表情我能看出，她对结果十分满意。(宾语从句) I could tell from her expression . 2.那只受伤的狗被好心的兽医救了，这让人松了一口气。(it 作形式主语) that the injured dog was saved by the kind-hearted vet. 3.我接受了父亲的建议，要成为一名医生。(同位语从句) I accepted my father’s suggestion . that she was very satisfied with the result It was a relief that I should become a doctor 4.最让我感到难过的是我最亲密的朋友误解了我的意图。(what 引导的主从句) was that my closest friend misunderstood my intentions. 5.他希望他能够找到弥补所犯错误的方法。(表语从句) His hope was . What upset me most that he could find a way to make up for the mistakes Ⅱ.教材语料积累 词汇 情感 描写 on the edge of one’s seat 极为激动　emotion n.强烈的情感　anger n.愤怒，怒火　grief n.悲痛　grateful adj.感谢的，感激的　overcome v.控制(感情)，克服(困难)　absorbed adj.专心致志的　disappointed adj.失望的，沮丧的　awkward adj.紧张的；不舒适的 动作 描写 clap v.拍(手)，鼓(掌)　applaud v.(为……)鼓掌　escape v.(从危险或糟糕的处境中)逃离，逃避，摆脱　put on表演(节目)　live up to符合(标准)，不负(盛名) 描述性词汇 incredible adj.难以置信的　dazzling adj.令人印象深刻的，特别吸引人的　energetic adj.精力充沛的，充满活力的　romantic adj.浪漫的　appealing adj.有吸引力的，有趣的　definitely adv.确切地，肯定地　rude adj.粗鲁的，无礼的 句型 1.Then，seeing the main characters come on stage，I was surprised！(情感描写) 2.The voices themselves sounded really unique—some of the female voices were so high that I was sure they could break glass！(夸张手法) 3.Everyone was clapping.(动作描写) 4.But，in fact，I was on the edge of my seat! Feeling the strong emotions of love，anger，fear and grief in the performance，I could easily recognise the theme of Hamlet.(情感描写) 5.There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people’s eyes.(主旨升 华句) 续写语料运用 请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。 玛丽表演了一个特别吸引人的节目。沉浸于她迷人的表演，当她最后表演完的时候观众都忘记鼓掌了。在等待最终结果的时候，玛丽的父母极为激动，玛丽很紧张，如坐针毡。 Mary put on a dazzling show.1. ，the audience forgot to applaud when she finally finished it.While waiting for the final result，Mary’s parents 2. and Mary was nervous，being on pins and needles. Absorbed in her appealing performance were on the edge of their seats 当玛丽被宣布为获胜者时，观众们热烈鼓掌。在颁奖典礼上，她热泪盈眶，声音颤抖，表达了她对那些帮助过她的人的感激之情，并承诺会表演更多好的作品，不辜负观众的期望。 When Mary was announced as the winner，the audience 3.____________ .At the award ceremony，with tears welling up in her eyes and her voice trembling，she expressed how grateful she was to those who had helped her and promised to put on more great works and 4. . 返 回 clapped their hands warmly live up to the expectations of the audience 本课结束 $