Unit 6 Mountains and rivers（复习讲义）英语新教材沪教版五四学制七年级上册

该初中英语单元复习讲义通过知识框架图系统梳理“山川河流”主题的语言知识体系，将核心词汇、数量表达与地点介词语法、景观描述句型及说明文写作要点分层呈现，并用对比表格归纳不定代词用法、例句解析突破宾语从句等难点，清晰展现重难点内在联系。 讲义亮点在于分层练习设计与写作方法指导，如从单词拼写、语法填空到书面表达的递进题型，写作专题提供“总起-分层描写-总结升华”三段式框架及万能句型，培养语言表达与逻辑思维品质。书面表达要求结合游览体验呼吁环保，基础生可套用框架，优秀生能拓展细节，既支持学生自主复习，也为教师精准教学提供素材。

Unit 6 Mountains and rivers（复习讲义) 复习要点 1. 掌握自然地理、山川河流、旅行观光场景核心词汇、固定搭配、交际句型； 2. 吃透两大核心语法：①数量表达与度量句型；②地点介词（along/across/through 等）； 3. 熟练运用描述地理景观、介绍风景名胜、分享旅行见闻句型； 4. 能完成说明文写作 A famous place in China，介绍一处名山大川、地理特征与特色； 5. 感受自然山河之美，积累地理、旅行类写作素材。 复习重难点 重点：1. 长度、高度、面积等量度表达；2. 地点介词 along/across/through 辨析；3. 景观描写、地点介绍句型 难点：1. 易混地点介词区分；2. 大数、度量单位英文表达；3. 景物描写逻辑顺序（由整体到局部） 单元考点：单词、短语、句型 知识点1. Xu Xiake found that the two rivers were separate, not one single river as people thought. 译文：徐霞客发现这两条河流相互独立，并非人们所认为的同一条河流。 【详解】 (1) that 引导宾语从句，作 found 的宾语。 【例句】She found that the answer was wrong. 她发现答案有误。 (2) as 引导方式状语从句，意为 “正如，如同”。 【例句】Do everything as I told you. 一切照我说的去做。 【拓展】 as 多重用法： 连词：如同；当…… 时；因为 介词：作为 知识点2. For centuries, people mistakenly believed that the source of the Yangtze River was the Min River. 译文：数百年来，人们一直错误地认为长江的源头是岷江。 【详解】 (1) that 引导宾语从句，作 believed 宾语。 【例句】We believed that he would keep his promise. 我们相信他会信守承诺。 (2) mistakenly 副词修饰动词 believed；副词修饰动词。 【例句】He mistakenly took my umbrella. 他错拿了我的雨伞。 (3) source n. 源头，来源。 【拓展】 for centuries = for hundreds of years 数百年来 知识点3. The Travels of Xu Xiake is considered one of the greatest books about geography in China. 译文：《徐霞客游记》被认为是中国最伟大的地理典籍之一。 【详解】 (1) be considered (as) 被动语态，被认为是…… 【例句】This place is considered as a beautiful park. 此地被认为是一座美丽公园。 (2) one of + the + 形容词最高级 + 复数名词：最…… 之一。 【例句】Beijing is one of the oldest cities in China. 北京是中国最古老城市之一。 (3) about geography 介词短语后置修饰 books。 知识点4. Rivers carry water from mountains to plains so that plants and animals can live. 译文：河流把水源从山脉输送至平原，以便动植物得以生存。 【详解】 (1) so that 引导目的状语从句，意为 “为了，以便”；从句常搭配情态动词 can/may/will。 【例句】He gets up early so that he can catch the first bus. 他早起是为了赶上首班车。 (2) carry …from…to… 把…… 从…… 运送至…… 【例句】Trucks carry goods from factories to shops. 卡车把货物从工厂运送到商店。 【拓展】 so that VS so…that… so that（目的：以便）；so…that…（结果：如此…… 以至于） 知识点5. Many ancient civilizations grew up along great rivers because water supports life. 译文：许多古文明在大河沿岸兴起，因为水孕育生命。 【详解】 (1) because 引导原因状语从句。 【例句】Many birds fly south because winter is coming. 许多鸟类南飞，因为冬天将至。 (2) grow up 兴起；成长；along great rivers 沿着大河。 【例句】Many towns grew up along the river. 许多城镇沿河兴起。 知识点6. What makes mountains and rivers special is that they connect nature and human history. 译文：让山河独具魅力的是，它们串联起自然与人类历史。 【详解】 (1) What makes mountains and rivers special 主语从句，在句中作主语。 【例句】What I like most is quiet countryside. 我最喜欢的是宁静的乡村。 (2) that 引导表语从句，放在系动词 is 之后；表语从句 that 不可省略。 【例句】The truth is that nobody knew the secret. 真相是没人知道这个秘密。 【拓展】 区分：宾语从句 that 可省略；表语从句、主语从句 that 不能省略。 知识点7. People travel thousands of kilometres to Mount Tai so they can watch the sunrise. 译文：人们不远千里前往泰山，只为观赏日出。 【详解】 (1) to Mount Tai 不定式作目的状语。 【例句】She goes to the market to buy fruit. 她去市场买水果。 (2) so 引导目的状语从句，等同于 so that。 【例句】He saves money so he can buy a new bike. 他存钱想买一辆新自行车。 知识点8. When you stand on the mountain top, you can enjoy beautiful views of valleys and lakes. 译文：当你站在山顶，你能够欣赏山谷与湖泊的秀丽风光。 【详解】 (1) when 引导时间状语从句。 【例句】When the sun rises, birds begin to sing. 太阳升起，鸟儿开始鸣叫。 (2) of valleys and lakes 介词短语后置修饰 views。 【例句】This is a photo of my family. 这是一张我的全家福。 知识点9. The water in the stream was so clear that we could see small fish swimming inside it. 译文：小溪里的水清澈见底，我们能看见小鱼在水中游动。 【详解】 (1) so…that… 引导结果状语从句。 【例句】The room is so quiet that you can hear your breath. 房间安静得能听见呼吸声。 (2) see sb./sth. doing sth. 看见某物正在做某事，现在分词作宾补。 【例句】I saw children playing on the playground. 我看见孩子们在操场上玩耍。 【拓展】 see sb. do（看见全过程）；see sb. doing（看见正在进行） 知识点10. The path was a little steep, but we helped each other and finally reached the top. 译文：山路有些陡峭，但我们互相扶持，最终登上山顶。 【详解】 (1) but 并列连词表转折；and 连接连续动作 helped 与 reached。 【例句】It rained heavily, but we kept walking and arrived on time. 雨下得很大，但我们坚持前行准时抵达。 (2) each other 互相；reach the top 登顶。 【拓展】 reach vt. 抵达（直接接地点）；arrive in/at；get to + 地点 单元语法 Grammar in use 1：同级比较 as…as…（形容词、副词通用） ✅ 肯定式：A + 动词 + as + 原级 + as + B The Yangtze River is as long as many great rivers in the world. 长江和世界上许多大河一样长。 ✅ 否定式：A + not + as/so + 原级 + as + B This lake is not as deep as that one. 这个湖泊没有那个湖泊深。 【名师点睛：倍数句型】 A is + 倍数 + as + 原级 + as B This river is twice as long as that one. 这条河长度是那条河的两倍。 【易错陷阱】 as…as 中间只能放形容词 / 副词原级，禁止使用比较级 ❌ as longer as ✅ as long as Grammar in use 2：不定代词 both /either/neither /all/none 单词 含义 数量范围 谓语动词 例句 both 两者都 两者 复数 Both rivers run eastwards. 两条河都向东流淌。 either 两者任意一个 两者 单数 Either path leads to the mountain top. 两条小路任意一条可达山顶。 neither 两者都不 两者 单数 Neither plan works well. 两个方案都行不通。 all 全部 三者及以上 单复数均可 All mountains here are very high. 这里所有山峰都很高。 none 全都不 三者及以上 单复数均可 None of the plants can live without water。没有植物无水可以存活。 【易混辨析】 both（两者都） VS all（三者及以上全部） neither（两者都不） VS none（三者及以上全都不） 【易错陷阱】 ❌ Neither of the two lakes are small. ✅ Neither of the two lakes is small. neither/either 作主语，谓语动词默认单数！ 【温馨提示】 none 可以回答 How many/much 问句；neither 回答 Which of the two… 问句。 单元写作专题 写作主题 Beautiful mountains and rivers 三段式标准写作框架 1. 开头：总起 —— 山川河流是大自然馈赠，吸引无数游客 2. 中间：分层描写 ①山水景色特点 ②你的游览体验；使用 as…as 同级比较、both/either/neither/all 不定代词 3. 结尾：总结升华 —— 热爱自然、保护山水环境 高分万能句型 1. Mountains and rivers are beautiful gifts from nature. 2. The Yangtze River is as long as many famous rivers in the world.（as…as 同级比较） 3. Both mountains and rivers can bring us peace and joy.（both 不定代词） 4. Standing on mountain tops, we can enjoy wonderful views far away. 5. We should protect natural beauty so that we can enjoy it for many years. 6. No one can live happily without clean rivers and green mountains. 满分范文赏析 Beautiful mountains and rivers Mountains and rivers are great gifts of nature. They make our world colourful and beautiful. Both mountains and rivers give us amazing views. Last summer, I visited a lake. It is not as deep as the lake near my town, but its water is clear. Walking along the river made me feel relaxed. I could see trees and birds everywhere. Natural beauty is valuable. We must protect mountains and clean rivers. If we take good care of nature, we can enjoy wonderful views all the time. 范文解析 1. 语法亮点：单元核心语法 as…as 同级比较、不定代词 both； 2. 结构完整：总起赞美自然 — 景色与个人经历 — 环保主题升华； 3. 单元高频词：mountain, river, nature, view, natural, protect； 满分 100 分 时间 30 分钟 一、单词拼写（每空 2 分，共 20 分） 根据中文提示写出单词，注意词形变化 1. 这条河和世界上许多大河一样长。 This river is as ________ (长) as many great rivers. 2. ________ (两者都) mountains and rivers bring us peace. 3. ________ (两者都不) of the two lakes is deep. 4. ________ (全部) of us love beautiful natural views. 5. ________ (没有一个) of the plants can live without water. 6. This lake is not as ________ (深) as that one. 7. We should ________ (保护) mountains and clean rivers. 8. The ________ (风景) on the mountain top is amazing. 9. This path ________ (通向)to the mountain top. 10. Nature gives us many wonderful ________ (礼物). 二、语法单句填空（每空 2 分，共 20 分） 用括号内词正确形式或填入合适引导词 1. Both rivers ________ (run) eastwards. 2. Neither of the two plans ________ (work) well. 3. This lake is as ________ (clear) as glass. 4. This river is not as ________ (wide) as that one. 5. All of the mountains here ________ (be) high. 6. None of the news ________ (be) true. 7. ________ of the two roads can take you to the top.（任意一条） 8. We should protect nature ________ we can enjoy views longer. 9. This mountain is twice as ________ (high) as that one. 10. ________ (both) of my parents love travelling. 三、短文语法填空（每空 2 分，共 20 分） Beautiful mountains and rivers Mountains and rivers are great gifts from nature. __________(1) of them bring us amazing views. Last summer, I visited a lake. It is not as __________(2)(deep) as the lake near my town, but its water is clear. __________(3) of the two lakes looks dirty. __________(4)people love natural beauty. __________(5) of us wants to see dirty rivers and bare mountains. We __________(6)protect nature ____ ___(7) we can enjoy wonderful views for many years. The path __________(8) leads to the mountain top is not easy to walk on. __________(9) of the two paths can take us there. I hope everyone __________(10)(take) good care of our natural world. 四、完成句子（每空 1 分，共 30 分；每题 3 空） 根据中文意思完成句子，每空限填一词 1. 山川两者都能给我们带来宁静。 ________ mountains ________ rivers can bring us peace. 2. 这湖没有那个湖深。 This lake is not ________ ________ ________ that one. 3. 两条小路任意一条都能通向山顶。 ________ path ________ to the mountain top. 4. 这两条河流都不短。 ________ of the two rivers ________ short. 5. 我们应该保护环境以便欣赏美景。 We should protect nature ________ ________ we can enjoy beautiful views. 五、书面表达（10 分） 题目 Beautiful mountains and rivers 要求：60 词左右，包含三点： 1. 山川河流是自然馈赠；2. 你的游览体验；3. 呼吁保护自然环境 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 6 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 6 Mountains and rivers（复习讲义) 复习要点 1. 掌握自然地理、山川河流、旅行观光场景核心词汇、固定搭配、交际句型； 2. 吃透两大核心语法：①数量表达与度量句型；②地点介词（along/across/through 等）； 3. 熟练运用描述地理景观、介绍风景名胜、分享旅行见闻句型； 4. 能完成说明文写作 A famous place in China，介绍一处名山大川、地理特征与特色； 5. 感受自然山河之美，积累地理、旅行类写作素材。 复习重难点 重点：1. 长度、高度、面积等量度表达；2. 地点介词 along/across/through 辨析；3. 景观描写、地点介绍句型 难点：1. 易混地点介词区分；2. 大数、度量单位英文表达；3. 景物描写逻辑顺序（由整体到局部） 单元考点：单词、短语、句型 知识点1. Xu Xiake found that the two rivers were separate, not one single river as people thought. 译文：徐霞客发现这两条河流相互独立，并非人们所认为的同一条河流。 【详解】 (1) that 引导宾语从句，作 found 的宾语。 【例句】She found that the answer was wrong. 她发现答案有误。 (2) as 引导方式状语从句，意为 “正如，如同”。 【例句】Do everything as I told you. 一切照我说的去做。 【拓展】 as 多重用法： 连词：如同；当…… 时；因为 介词：作为 知识点2. For centuries, people mistakenly believed that the source of the Yangtze River was the Min River. 译文：数百年来，人们一直错误地认为长江的源头是岷江。 【详解】 (1) that 引导宾语从句，作 believed 宾语。 【例句】We believed that he would keep his promise. 我们相信他会信守承诺。 (2) mistakenly 副词修饰动词 believed；副词修饰动词。 【例句】He mistakenly took my umbrella. 他错拿了我的雨伞。 (3) source n. 源头，来源。 【拓展】 for centuries = for hundreds of years 数百年来 知识点3. The Travels of Xu Xiake is considered one of the greatest books about geography in China. 译文：《徐霞客游记》被认为是中国最伟大的地理典籍之一。 【详解】 (1) be considered (as) 被动语态，被认为是…… 【例句】This place is considered as a beautiful park. 此地被认为是一座美丽公园。 (2) one of + the + 形容词最高级 + 复数名词：最…… 之一。 【例句】Beijing is one of the oldest cities in China. 北京是中国最古老城市之一。 (3) about geography 介词短语后置修饰 books。 知识点4. Rivers carry water from mountains to plains so that plants and animals can live. 译文：河流把水源从山脉输送至平原，以便动植物得以生存。 【详解】 (1) so that 引导目的状语从句，意为 “为了，以便”；从句常搭配情态动词 can/may/will。 【例句】He gets up early so that he can catch the first bus. 他早起是为了赶上首班车。 (2) carry …from…to… 把…… 从…… 运送至…… 【例句】Trucks carry goods from factories to shops. 卡车把货物从工厂运送到商店。 【拓展】 so that VS so…that… so that（目的：以便）；so…that…（结果：如此…… 以至于） 知识点5. Many ancient civilizations grew up along great rivers because water supports life. 译文：许多古文明在大河沿岸兴起，因为水孕育生命。 【详解】 (1) because 引导原因状语从句。 【例句】Many birds fly south because winter is coming. 许多鸟类南飞，因为冬天将至。 (2) grow up 兴起；成长；along great rivers 沿着大河。 【例句】Many towns grew up along the river. 许多城镇沿河兴起。 知识点6. What makes mountains and rivers special is that they connect nature and human history. 译文：让山河独具魅力的是，它们串联起自然与人类历史。 【详解】 (1) What makes mountains and rivers special 主语从句，在句中作主语。 【例句】What I like most is quiet countryside. 我最喜欢的是宁静的乡村。 (2) that 引导表语从句，放在系动词 is 之后；表语从句 that 不可省略。 【例句】The truth is that nobody knew the secret. 真相是没人知道这个秘密。 【拓展】 区分：宾语从句 that 可省略；表语从句、主语从句 that 不能省略。 知识点7. People travel thousands of kilometres to Mount Tai so they can watch the sunrise. 译文：人们不远千里前往泰山，只为观赏日出。 【详解】 (1) to Mount Tai 不定式作目的状语。 【例句】She goes to the market to buy fruit. 她去市场买水果。 (2) so 引导目的状语从句，等同于 so that。 【例句】He saves money so he can buy a new bike. 他存钱想买一辆新自行车。 知识点8. When you stand on the mountain top, you can enjoy beautiful views of valleys and lakes. 译文：当你站在山顶，你能够欣赏山谷与湖泊的秀丽风光。 【详解】 (1) when 引导时间状语从句。 【例句】When the sun rises, birds begin to sing. 太阳升起，鸟儿开始鸣叫。 (2) of valleys and lakes 介词短语后置修饰 views。 【例句】This is a photo of my family. 这是一张我的全家福。 知识点9. The water in the stream was so clear that we could see small fish swimming inside it. 译文：小溪里的水清澈见底，我们能看见小鱼在水中游动。 【详解】 (1) so…that… 引导结果状语从句。 【例句】The room is so quiet that you can hear your breath. 房间安静得能听见呼吸声。 (2) see sb./sth. doing sth. 看见某物正在做某事，现在分词作宾补。 【例句】I saw children playing on the playground. 我看见孩子们在操场上玩耍。 【拓展】 see sb. do（看见全过程）；see sb. doing（看见正在进行） 知识点10. The path was a little steep, but we helped each other and finally reached the top. 译文：山路有些陡峭，但我们互相扶持，最终登上山顶。 【详解】 (1) but 并列连词表转折；and 连接连续动作 helped 与 reached。 【例句】It rained heavily, but we kept walking and arrived on time. 雨下得很大，但我们坚持前行准时抵达。 (2) each other 互相；reach the top 登顶。 【拓展】 reach vt. 抵达（直接接地点）；arrive in/at；get to + 地点 单元语法 Grammar in use 1：同级比较 as…as…（形容词、副词通用） ✅ 肯定式：A + 动词 + as + 原级 + as + B The Yangtze River is as long as many great rivers in the world. 长江和世界上许多大河一样长。 ✅ 否定式：A + not + as/so + 原级 + as + B This lake is not as deep as that one. 这个湖泊没有那个湖泊深。 【名师点睛：倍数句型】 A is + 倍数 + as + 原级 + as B This river is twice as long as that one. 这条河长度是那条河的两倍。 【易错陷阱】 as…as 中间只能放形容词 / 副词原级，禁止使用比较级 ❌ as longer as ✅ as long as Grammar in use 2：不定代词 both /either/neither /all/none 单词 含义 数量范围 谓语动词 例句 both 两者都 两者 复数 Both rivers run eastwards. 两条河都向东流淌。 either 两者任意一个 两者 单数 Either path leads to the mountain top. 两条小路任意一条可达山顶。 neither 两者都不 两者 单数 Neither plan works well. 两个方案都行不通。 all 全部 三者及以上 单复数均可 All mountains here are very high. 这里所有山峰都很高。 none 全都不 三者及以上 单复数均可 None of the plants can live without water。没有植物无水可以存活。 【易混辨析】 both（两者都） VS all（三者及以上全部） neither（两者都不） VS none（三者及以上全都不） 【易错陷阱】 ❌ Neither of the two lakes are small. ✅ Neither of the two lakes is small. neither/either 作主语，谓语动词默认单数！ 【温馨提示】 none 可以回答 How many/much 问句；neither 回答 Which of the two… 问句。 单元写作专题 写作主题 Beautiful mountains and rivers 三段式标准写作框架 1. 开头：总起 —— 山川河流是大自然馈赠，吸引无数游客 2. 中间：分层描写 ①山水景色特点 ②你的游览体验；使用 as…as 同级比较、both/either/neither/all 不定代词 3. 结尾：总结升华 —— 热爱自然、保护山水环境 高分万能句型 1. Mountains and rivers are beautiful gifts from nature. 2. The Yangtze River is as long as many famous rivers in the world.（as…as 同级比较） 3. Both mountains and rivers can bring us peace and joy.（both 不定代词） 4. Standing on mountain tops, we can enjoy wonderful views far away. 5. We should protect natural beauty so that we can enjoy it for many years. 6. No one can live happily without clean rivers and green mountains. 满分范文赏析 Beautiful mountains and rivers Mountains and rivers are great gifts of nature. They make our world colourful and beautiful. Both mountains and rivers give us amazing views. Last summer, I visited a lake. It is not as deep as the lake near my town, but its water is clear. Walking along the river made me feel relaxed. I could see trees and birds everywhere. Natural beauty is valuable. We must protect mountains and clean rivers. If we take good care of nature, we can enjoy wonderful views all the time. 范文解析 1. 语法亮点：单元核心语法 as…as 同级比较、不定代词 both； 2. 结构完整：总起赞美自然 — 景色与个人经历 — 环保主题升华； 3. 单元高频词：mountain, river, nature, view, natural, protect； 满分 100 分 时间 30 分钟 一、单词拼写（每空 2 分，共 20 分） 根据中文提示写出单词，注意词形变化 1. 这条河和世界上许多大河一样长。 This river is as ________ (长) as many great rivers. 2. ________ (两者都) mountains and rivers bring us peace. 3. ________ (两者都不) of the two lakes is deep. 4. ________ (全部) of us love beautiful natural views. 5. ________ (没有一个) of the plants can live without water. 6. This lake is not as ________ (深) as that one. 7. We should ________ (保护) mountains and clean rivers. 8. The ________ (风景) on the mountain top is amazing. 9. This path ________ (通向)to the mountain top. 10. Nature gives us many wonderful ________ (礼物). 答案解析 1. long；as…as 原级 2. Both；两者都，谓语复数 3. Neither；两者都不，谓语单数 4. All；三者及以上全部 5. None；三者及以上全都不 6. deep；原级 7. protect；should 后动词原形 8. view/views 9. leads; lead to 固定搭配 10. gifts；many 后复数 二、语法单句填空（每空 2 分，共 20 分） 用括号内词正确形式或填入合适引导词 1. Both rivers ________ (run) eastwards. 2. Neither of the two plans ________ (work) well. 3. This lake is as ________ (clear) as glass. 4. This river is not as ________ (wide) as that one. 5. All of the mountains here ________ (be) high. 6. None of the news ________ (be) true. 7. ________ of the two roads can take you to the top.（任意一条） 8. We should protect nature ________ we can enjoy views longer. 9. This mountain is twice as ________ (high) as that one. 10. ________ (both) of my parents love travelling. 答案解析 1. run；both 作主语，谓语复数 2. works；neither 作主语谓语单数 3. clear；as…as 原级 4. wide；原级 5. are；all 指代复数 mountains 6. is；none 指代不可数名词 news 7. Either；两者任意一个 8. so that；目的状语从句 9. high；倍数句型 as…as 中间原级 10. Both；句首大写 三、短文语法填空（每空 2 分，共 20 分） Beautiful mountains and rivers Mountains and rivers are great gifts from nature. __________(1) of them bring us amazing views. Last summer, I visited a lake. It is not as __________(2)(deep) as the lake near my town, but its water is clear. __________(3) of the two lakes looks dirty. __________(4)people love natural beauty. __________(5) of us wants to see dirty rivers and bare mountains. We __________(6)protect nature ____ ___(7) we can enjoy wonderful views for many years. The path __________(8) leads to the mountain top is not easy to walk on. __________(9) of the two paths can take us there. I hope everyone __________(10)(take) good care of our natural world. 答案解析 1. Both；两者都 2. deep；as…as 原级 3. Neither；两者都不 4. All；三者及以上所有人 5. None；三者及以上全部不 6. should；应该 7. so that；目的状语从句 8. that/which；定语从句修饰 path 9. Either；两者任意一条 10. will take / takes 四、完成句子（每空 1 分，共 30 分；每题 3 空） 根据中文意思完成句子，每空限填一词 1. 山川两者都能给我们带来宁静。 ________ mountains ________ rivers can bring us peace. 2. 这湖没有那个湖深。 This lake is not ________ ________ ________ that one. 3. 两条小路任意一条都能通向山顶。 ________ path ________ to the mountain top. 4. 这两条河流都不短。 ________ of the two rivers ________ short. 5. 我们应该保护环境以便欣赏美景。 We should protect nature ________ ________ we can enjoy beautiful views. 参考答案 1. Both; and；both…and 固定搭配 2. as deep as；同级比较否定式 3. Either; leads；either 主语谓语单数 4. Neither; is；neither 谓语单数（高频易错） 5. so that；目的状语从句 五、书面表达（10 分） 题目 Beautiful mountains and rivers 要求：60 词左右，包含三点： 1. 山川河流是自然馈赠；2. 你的游览体验；3. 呼吁保护自然环境 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【参考范文】 Beautiful mountains and rivers Mountains and rivers are great gifts from nature. Both of them make our world colourful. Last summer, I visited a clear lake. It is not as deep as another lake, but its views are wonderful. Walking beside the water made me relaxed. Natural beauty is valuable. We must protect mountains and rivers. If we take good care of nature, we can enjoy amazing views all the time.（全文65词） 【详细解析】 [第一步：审题立意] 体裁：写景抒情文（自然美景+个人体验+环保呼吁） 词数要求：60词左右，必须包含三大要点：①山川河流的自然价值；②个人游览体验；③保护自然的呼吁 时态规划：自然常识、环保观点用一般现在时；个人过往游览经历用一般过去时，时态区分清晰 写作基调：清新优美、立意升华，嵌入Unit6同级比较、不定代词核心语法，贴合写景作文评分要点 [第二步：构思布局（三段式短结构）] 段落 功能 写作内容规划 第1段（2句）开篇点题：赞美山川河流是自然馈赠，总述自然之美，对应要点一 第2段（2句）主体叙事：讲述个人游览湖泊的经历，运用同级比较描写景色，对应要点二 第3段（2句）结尾升华：强调自然的珍贵，发出保护环境的呼吁，升华文章主题，对应要点三 [第三步：要点展开（逐点对应原文）] 要点1：自然山川的价值 原句：Mountains and rivers are great gifts from nature. Both of them make our world colourful. 语法亮点：both不定代词用法，指代两者，谓语动词用复数，单元核心不定代词考点；gift from nature 自然的馈赠，写景高分搭配。 要点2：个人游览体验 原句：Last summer, I visited a clear lake. It is not as deep as another lake, but its views are wonderful. Walking beside the water made me relaxed. 语法亮点：运用单元not as…as同级比较否定结构，核心必考语法；动名词作主语，句式丰富高级。 要点3：环保呼吁与总结 原句：Natural beauty is valuable. We must protect mountains and rivers. If we take good care of nature, we can enjoy amazing views all the time. 语法亮点：must情态动词表义务；if条件状语从句，句式规范；protect自然景物，贴合单元环保主题。 [第四步：加分词句积累（Unit6 课内专属）] 必备单词：natural adj. 自然的；view n. 风景；protect v. 保护；valuable adj. 珍贵的 高频短语：gifts from nature 自然馈赠；take good care of 爱护；amazing views 美景 核心语法：as…as同级比较；both/either/neither/all/none不定代词用法 万能升华句：It’s our duty to protect beautiful mountains and rivers. 6 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 12 / 12 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $