Unit 5 Amazing Places 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年仁爱科普版英语八年级上册

**基本信息** 以“词汇-句型-方法-篇章”四级训练链系统构建景点介绍与旅行游记写作能力，融合语言能力培养与文化意识渗透。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|6类主题词汇、15组高频搭配、4类功能表达|主题词汇分类记忆法，功能表达情境化运用|从基础词汇到情境表达，构建写作语言基础| |黄金句型库|12个基础句型、5组句型升级示例|句型升级四步法（添加细节/数据/背景/情感）|从简单句到复杂句，实现语言表达进阶| |高分写作方法|5步写作法（审题-结构-内容-语言-检查）|说明文/游记三段式结构模板，事实与观点区分法|对应两类写作任务，形成标准化写作流程| |阶梯训练|3级句子训练（汉译英/仿写/升级）、2篇篇章训练（征文/邮件）|以题载法，从句子到篇章的能力迁移训练|由基础到综合，覆盖中考高频写作题型|

Unit 5 Amazing Places 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 世界名胜 the Great Wall 长城 the Palace Museum 故宫博物院 Mount Huangshan 黄山 Mount Taishan 泰山 Fujian Tulou 福建土楼 the Potala Palace 布达拉宫 the Eiffel Tower 埃菲尔铁塔 the Taj Mahal 泰姬陵 Bird’s Nest 鸟巢 Niagara Falls 尼亚加拉大瀑布 West Lake 西湖 Lake Hillier 希利尔湖 Yangshuo 阳朔 地理位置 lie / be located 位于 province 省份 capital 首都 south / north / east / west 南/北/东/西 center 中心 area 面积 coast 海岸 valley 山谷 自然景观 mountain 山 river 河 lake 湖 sea 海 waterfall 瀑布 landscape 风景 scenery 景色 forest 森林 desert 沙漠 grassland 草原 rice terrace 梯田 cloud 云 描述性词汇 amazing 令人惊奇的 famous 著名的 beautiful 美丽的 wonderful 精彩的 special 特别的 unusual 不寻常的 colorful 多彩的 peaceful 宁静的 lively 生动的 fantastic 极好的 活动 visit 参观 travel 旅行 take photos 拍照 climb 攀登 enjoy 享受 explore 探索 2. 高频搭配 lie in 位于 be known for 因……而闻名 be famous for 因……而闻名 be rich in 富含 have a history of 有……的历史 places of interest 名胜古迹 all year round 全年 feel free to do sth. 随意做某事 take photos 拍照 it is said that 据说 what’s more 更重要的是 a symbol of ……的象征 in the center of 在……的中心 from north to south 从北到南 from east to west 从东到西 3. 写作功能表达 介绍位置 ... lies / is located in ... ……位于…… It is in the ... of ... 它在……的……部。 ... is ... kilometers long / wide. ……长/宽……公里。 描述特色 ... is famous for ... ……因……而闻名。 It has a history of ... years. 它有……年的历史。 You can see ... there. 你在那里能看到…… It looks like ... 它看起来像…… 描述活动 We can ... there. 我们可以在那里…… Visitors can enjoy ... 游客可以享受…… People often ... there. 人们经常在那里…… 表达观点与感受 ... is really amazing. ……真的很令人惊叹。 I think it is worth visiting. 我认为它值得一游。 I had a wonderful time there. 我在那里度过了美好的时光。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 I would like to introduce ... to you. 我想向你介绍…… ... is one of the most amazing places in the world. ……是世界上最神奇的地方之一。 Have you ever been to ...？ 你去过……吗？ ... lies in ... and is famous for ... ……位于……，以……而闻名。 2. 主体句型 ... is located in the ... of ... ……位于……的……部。 It is ... meters long from the north to the south. 它南北长……米。 There are more than ... palaces in different sizes. 有超过……座大小不同的宫殿。 The buildings look like ... 这些建筑看起来像…… It is said that there are about ... rooms. 据说有大约……个房间。 People can ... there. 人们可以在那里…… 3. 结尾句型 I hope I can visit ... one day. 我希望有一天我能参观…… It is not only a place of interest but also a symbol of ... 它不仅是一个名胜古迹，也是……的象征。 I’m sure you will have a great time there. 我相信你在那里会玩得很开心。 It is really a place worth visiting. 它真的是一个值得参观的地方。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 The Great Wall is in China. 长城在中国。 The Great Wall runs from the west to the east in northern China. 长城在中国北部从西延伸到东。 The Palace Museum is beautiful. 故宫博物院很漂亮。 The Palace Museum is in the center of Beijing. It covers a very large area of more than 720,000 square meters. 故宫博物院在北京的中心。它占地超过72万平方米。 I want to visit the Palace Museum. 我想参观故宫博物院。 I really want to visit the Palace Museum some day and see the beautiful palaces. 我真希望有一天能参观故宫博物院，看看那些美丽的宫殿。 Fujian Tulou is special. 福建土楼很特别。 Fujian Tulou is located in south-west Fujian. It is made of earth and wood and has a history of over 1,000 years. 福建土楼位于福建省西南部。它由土和木建成，有超过1000年的历史。 It is a place of interest. 它是一个名胜古迹。 It is not only a place of interest but also a symbol of the wisdom of the Chinese people. 它不仅是一个名胜古迹，也是中国人民智慧的象征。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 假如你是李华，你校微信公众号正在开展主题为“An unforgettable holiday trip”的英语征文活动，请你根据下面的提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你和家人的一次难忘的假期旅行经历。 写作提示： 1.你在什么时候去哪里度假？和谁一起？ 2.你们都做了什么？感受如何？ 3.为什么你觉得这次假期旅行难忘？ 写作要求： 1.短文内容必须包含所提供的要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名； 3.词数：100左右 (短文开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。 An unforgettable holiday trip I am Li Hua from Class 2. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目给出三个要点：旅行时间/地点/人物、活动与感受、难忘原因。时态上，全文用一般过去时。结构上分三段：开头已给出，顺势引出旅行基本信息；主体段写具体活动和感受；结尾段说明难忘原因并总结感悟。 【范文欣赏】 An unforgettable holiday trip I am Li Hua from Class 2. Last summer, I went to Sanya with my parents. We stayed there for five days. We swam in the clear blue sea and built sandcastles on the beach. My father taught me how to dive, and we saw many colorful fish under the water. We also enjoyed fresh and delicious seafood. All of us felt happy and relaxed. This trip was unforgettable because it was my first time to see the sea. The amazing scenery and fun activities brought our family closer. I will always treasure this wonderful memory. 【亮点解析】 开篇信息集中。 第一句即交代时间（last summer）、地点（Sanya）、人物（with my parents）、时长（five days），四个要素一句说完，干脆利落。 描写具体，多用感官细节。 “clear blue sea”调动视觉，“colorful fish”调动视觉，“fresh and delicious seafood”调动味觉。具体可感的细节让读者如临其境，远胜于笼统的“we had fun”。 活动与感受交替呈现。 每项活动后紧跟着感受——堆沙堡后的放松，潜水看鱼的新奇，吃海鲜的满足。最后用“All of us felt happy and relaxed”收束全段，主次分明。 结尾直接点题。 “because it was my first time to see the sea”一句话交代难忘原因，理由真实充分。“brought our family closer”将个人体验升华为家庭情感，结尾简短而有温度。 首尾呼应。 结尾“treasure this wonderful memory”呼应标题“unforgettable”，结构圆合。 时态统一。 全篇使用一般过去时（went, stayed, swam, built, taught, saw, enjoyed, felt, was），叙述流畅，无时态混乱。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 故宫博物院位于北京的中心。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 它占地超过72万平方米。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 据说故宫有大约9000个房间。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 长城是中国最令人惊叹的奇观之一。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 它不仅是一个名胜古迹，也是中国人民智慧的象征。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：... is located in ...（介绍位置） 例句： The Palace Museum is located in the center of Beijing. （1）黄山位于安徽省南部。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）泰姬陵位于印度。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：It covers an area of ...（描述面积） 例句： It covers a very large area of more than 720,000 square meters. （1）故宫占地超过72万平方米。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）这座公园占地约500公顷。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：It is said that ...（描述传闻） 例句： It is said that there are about 9,000 rooms in the Palace Museum. （1）据说故宫有大约9000个房间。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）据说这座桥有超过1000年的历史。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：... is famous for ...（描述闻名原因） 例句： The Great Wall is famous for its long history. （1）黄山以美丽的云海闻名。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）西湖以美丽的风景闻名。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：It is not only ... but also ...（描述多重价值） 例句： It is not only a place of interest but also a symbol of the nation. （1）它不仅是一个旅游景点，也是中国文化的象征。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）它不仅是一座建筑，也是一件艺术品。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：I really want to ... some day.（表达愿望） 例句： I really want to visit the Palace Museum some day. （1）我真希望有一天能去爬黄山。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我真希望有一天能看到埃菲尔铁塔。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：The Palace Museum is beautiful. 升级句：The Palace Museum is in the center of Beijing. It covers a very large area of more than 720,000 square meters. 1. 基础句：The Great Wall is in China. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：Fujian Tulou is special. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：I want to visit the Palace Museum. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：Mount Huangshan is beautiful. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：The Great Wall is a place of interest. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：The Palace Museum has many rooms. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1. 下面是Emily和Li Hua的微信聊天记录，请根据他们的聊天记录给Emily写一封邮件。 Hello, Li Hua. Are you there? Yes, Emily. What’s up? My family want to take a trip to Hangzhou. Could you tell me what we can do in Hangzhou? Of course. I will send an email to you later. And my parents always ask me to help with housework. But I am too busy to do it. Do you think we should help do the housework at home? And why? please tell me about it in your email too. OK. 注意： 1.邮件需包含微信中所有的要点信息，可适当发挥； 2.文章不得出现真实姓名等个人信息； 3.语言表达准确，语意连贯，词数80左右（邮件的称呼和落款不计入总词数）。 Dear Emily, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. The Palace Museum is located in the center of Beijing. 2. It covers a very large area of more than 720,000 square meters. 3. It is said that there are about 9,000 rooms in the Palace Museum. 4. The Great Wall is one of the most amazing wonders in China. 5. It is not only a place of interest but also a symbol of the wisdom of the Chinese people. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）Mount Huangshan is located in the south of Anhui Province. （2）The Taj Mahal is located in India. 句型 2 （1）The Palace Museum covers an area of more than 720,000 square meters. （2）This park covers an area of about 500 hectares. 句型 3 （1）It is said that the Palace Museum has about 9,000 rooms. （2）It is said that this bridge has a history of over 1,000 years. 句型 4 （1）Mount Huangshan is famous for its beautiful sea of clouds. （2）West Lake is famous for its beautiful scenery. 句型 5 （1）It is not only a tourist attraction but also a symbol of Chinese culture. （2）It is not only a building but also a work of art. 句型 6 （1）I really want to climb Mount Huangshan some day. （2）I really want to see the Eiffel Tower some day. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：The Great Wall runs from the west to the east in northern China. It is one of the greatest wonders in the world. 2. 升级句：Fujian Tulou is located in south-west Fujian. It is made of earth and wood and has a history of over 1,000 years. 3. 升级句：I really want to visit the Palace Museum some day and see the beautiful palaces and learn about Chinese history. 4. 升级句：Mount Huangshan is famous for its sea of clouds and strange rocks. Many people visit it every year. 5. 升级句：The Great Wall is not only a place of interest but also a symbol of the wisdom and hard work of the Chinese people. 6. 升级句：It is said that the Palace Museum has about 9,000 rooms, and all of them are made of wood. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1．例文： Dear Emily, I’m glad to hear that you will visit Hangzhou. You can visit the West Lake, which is very famous. You can also enjoy delicious local food there. As for your question, I think we should help our parents do housework. Firstly, our parents are tired after work, so doing housework can help share their burden. Secondly, doing housework can help us develop our independence. Although we are busy with our study, we can do some easy chores like sweeping the floor. Hope you have a good time in Hangzhou! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：英文电子邮件，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①为Emily一家推荐杭州游玩项目；②回答做家务的疑问，给出两条理由；词数80词左右，称呼与落款不计入总词数。 确定人称：第一人称李华 注意事项：无真实个人信息，行文通顺，完整覆盖微信聊天全部要点 [第二步：构思布局] 开头：问候Emily，回应杭州旅行的咨询 主体：第一段介绍杭州游玩去处；第二段针对家务问题给出观点和两条原因，给出学业繁忙时的小建议 结尾：送上旅行祝福，完成邮件落款 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：杭州游玩建议 visit West Lake; enjoy local tasty food；take a boat trip, Hangzhou Longjing tea 要点二：家务观点 we should share housework at home；take chores 要点三：做家务的两点理由   share parents’ tiredness after work；improve our life skills and independence；lighten family pressure 要点四：学业忙碌的小方案 finish simple housework, like cleaning rooms after study 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $