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高频文体13 应用文写作(祝贺信)
一、文体说明
祝贺信用于祝贺他人获奖、比赛夺冠、升学、考试成功、担任学生会干部、生日、活动圆满成功等;
1.正式:写给老师、学长、活动负责人;2.非正式:写给同学、好友、交换生。
核心时态:一般现在时(写信祝贺)+ 一般过去时(对方取得的成绩)+ 一般将来时(祝福未来)
二、写作核心要素表格
要素
写作要求
例句示范
①开篇问候 + 直接祝贺
开门见山,第一句就表达由衷祝贺,点明祝贺事由
听闻你在英语演讲比赛夺得一等奖,我特地写信向你致以热烈祝贺。
Hearing that you won first prize in the English Speech Competition, I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations.
②回顾对方付出 / 成功过程(得分核心)
简述对方长久的努力、坚持、克服的困难,体现你的真心认可
过去几个月你每天坚持练习发音、反复修改演讲稿,这份坚持终有回报。
You kept practicing pronunciation and polishing your speech every day for months, and your efforts finally paid off.
③夸赞对方品质 / 优点
赞美对方勤奋、自信、有毅力、天赋等优点
你的毅力与自信值得我们每一位同学学习。
Your perseverance and confidence set a great example for all of us.
④表达自身感受 / 向对方学习
写出你为他开心,或自己受到鼓舞、以他为榜样
你的成功深深鼓舞了我,今后我也要像你一样坚持付出。
Your achievement inspires me greatly, and I will keep working hard just like you.
⑤送上美好祝福 + 小小期许
祝福对方今后越来越好,再创佳绩,可顺带邀约庆祝
祝你今后不断突破自我,收获更多荣誉,周末有空我们一起聚餐庆祝吧。
Wish you greater progress and more achievements in the future. Let’s have a meal to celebrate this weekend if you are free.
⑥结尾客套 + 期盼回信
再次简单祝贺,期待对方回复
再次祝贺你的出色成绩,期待你的回信。
Congratulations again on your wonderful performance. Looking forward to your reply.
1. 祝贺开篇短语
致以热烈祝贺 ______________________________
由衷地祝贺 ______________________________
得知…… 十分开心 ______________________________
为你感到无比骄傲 ______________________________
2. 描述努力与成功
付出终有回报 ______________________________
日复一日坚持练习 ______________________________
克服重重困难 ______________________________
夺得一等奖 ______________________________
成功当选学生会主席 ______________________________
顺利通过考试 ______________________________
3. 夸赞品质短语
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坚持不懈 _________________________
自信大方 _________________________
勤奋刻苦 _________________________
树立好榜样 _________________________
4. 祝福与邀约
再创佳绩 _________________________
前程似锦 _________________________
不断取得进步 _________________________
一起庆祝 _________________________
举办小型聚会 _________________________
【开头祝贺句】
得知你成功考取重点高中,我由衷地向你表示祝贺。
I’m delighted to learn that you have been admitted to the key high school, so _________________________.
刚刚听说你当选学生会主席,我为你感到十分高兴。
I’ve just heard that you were elected president of the Students’ Union, and _________________________.
你的诗词朗诵拿下全校第一名,我迫不及待写信祝贺你。
You won the first place in the school poetry recitation contest, and _________________________.
【回顾努力、夸赞对方】
平日里你总是抓紧碎片时间背诵稿件,这份坚持造就了今天的成功。
__________________________________________________, and your persistence led to your success today.
面对高强度训练你从未放弃,这份毅力让所有人都十分佩服。
_________________________, and everyone admires your strong will.
你踏实认真的态度,是我们所有人学习的榜样。
__________________________________________________.
【表达内心感受】
看到你的努力得到认可,我发自内心为你感到开心。
__________________________________________________ your hard work recognized.
你的经历激励了我,让我明白坚持就会有收获。
___________________________________________________________________________.
【祝福 + 邀约结尾】
祝愿你在新岗位上大展拳脚,一切顺利。
_________________________ and great progress in your new position.
这周末我想请你吃饭,一同分享这份喜悦,不知你是否有空?
I’d like to invite you to dinner this weekend_________________________. Are you available?
再次祝贺你的优异成绩,期待听到你的回复。
_________________________ your brilliant achievement. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Dear ______,
How is everything going? I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to congratulate you on ______(获奖 / 升学 / 当选等喜事).
I was so glad to hear the good news. You ______(长期付出的努力). It’s no surprise that you made it, because you never gave up.
I really admire your ______(品质:毅力 / 勤奋 / 自信). Your success encourages me a lot.
Wish you ______(美好祝福). If you are free, let’s ______(邀约庆祝).
Congratulations again! Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
题型 1 祝贺同学英语演讲比赛夺冠
假定你是李华,你的好友李明获得全校英语演讲比赛一等奖,写信祝贺:1. 表达祝贺;2. 回忆他平日刻苦练习;3. 邀约周末聚餐庆祝。
题型 2 祝贺笔友考上理想高中
假定你是李华,英国笔友 Peter 顺利考入理想中学,写信祝贺:1. 表达由衷祝贺;2. 称赞他长期坚持学习;3. 祝福他新校园生活顺利。
题型 3 祝贺同学当选学生会主席
假定你是李华,同学王浩成功当选学生会主席,写信祝贺:1. 表达祝贺;2. 认可他热心负责的品质;3. 愿意之后协助他开展工作。
题型 4 祝贺外教讲座圆满成功
假定你是李华,学生会干事,外教 Mr.Smith 的绿色校园主题讲座圆满结束,写信祝贺:1. 祝贺讲座大获成功;2. 称赞讲座内容丰富、收获很大;3. 期待后续更多分享。
题型 5 祝贺好友诗词诵读大赛获奖
假定你是李华,好友 Anna 在校诗词诵读大赛斩获二等奖,写信祝贺:1. 表达祝贺;2. 夸赞她反复打磨朗诵情感;3. 向她请教诵读技巧。
题型 6 祝贺学长志愿活动圆满举办
假定你是李华,写给学长李阳,祝贺他组织的社区敬老志愿活动圆满落幕:1. 祝贺活动顺利完成;2. 称赞活动温暖有意义;3. 希望下次能参与帮忙。
$高频文体13 应用文写作(祝贺信)
一、文体说明
祝贺信用于祝贺他人获奖、比赛夺冠、升学、考试成功、担任学生会干部、生日、活动圆满成功等;
1.正式:写给老师、学长、活动负责人;2.非正式:写给同学、好友、交换生。
核心时态:一般现在时(写信祝贺)+ 一般过去时(对方取得的成绩)+ 一般将来时(祝福未来)
二、写作核心要素表格
要素
写作要求
例句示范
①开篇问候 + 直接祝贺
开门见山,第一句就表达由衷祝贺,点明祝贺事由
听闻你在英语演讲比赛夺得一等奖,我特地写信向你致以热烈祝贺。
Hearing that you won first prize in the English Speech Competition, I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations.
②回顾对方付出 / 成功过程(得分核心)
简述对方长久的努力、坚持、克服的困难,体现你的真心认可
过去几个月你每天坚持练习发音、反复修改演讲稿,这份坚持终有回报。
You kept practicing pronunciation and polishing your speech every day for months, and your efforts finally paid off.
③夸赞对方品质 / 优点
赞美对方勤奋、自信、有毅力、天赋等优点
你的毅力与自信值得我们每一位同学学习。
Your perseverance and confidence set a great example for all of us.
④表达自身感受 / 向对方学习
写出你为他开心,或自己受到鼓舞、以他为榜样
你的成功深深鼓舞了我,今后我也要像你一样坚持付出。
Your achievement inspires me greatly, and I will keep working hard just like you.
⑤送上美好祝福 + 小小期许
祝福对方今后越来越好,再创佳绩,可顺带邀约庆祝
祝你今后不断突破自我,收获更多荣誉,周末有空我们一起聚餐庆祝吧。
Wish you greater progress and more achievements in the future. Let’s have a meal to celebrate this weekend if you are free.
⑥结尾客套 + 期盼回信
再次简单祝贺,期待对方回复
再次祝贺你的出色成绩,期待你的回信。
Congratulations again on your wonderful performance. Looking forward to your reply.
1. 祝贺开篇短语
致以热烈祝贺 offer sincere/warm congratulations
由衷地祝贺 congratulate sb. from the bottom of my heart
得知…… 十分开心 be delighted to hear that…
为你感到无比骄傲 feel extremely proud of you
2. 描述努力与成功
付出终有回报 one’s efforts pay off
日复一日坚持练习 keep practicing day after day
克服重重困难 overcome lots of difficulties
夺得一等奖 win first prize /get the first place
成功当选学生会主席 be elected chairman of Students’ Union
顺利通过考试 pass the exam successfully
3. 夸赞品质短语
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坚持不懈 hold on to one’s goal
自信大方 confident and generous
勤奋刻苦 hard-working and diligent
树立好榜样 set a good example to others
4. 祝福与邀约
再创佳绩 achieve greater success
前程似锦 have a bright future
不断取得进步 make continuous progress
一起庆祝 celebrate together
举办小型聚会 hold a small celebration
【开头祝贺句】
得知你成功考取重点高中,我由衷地向你表示祝贺。
I’m delighted to learn that you have been admitted to the key high school, so I send you my sincere congratulations.
刚刚听说你当选学生会主席,我为你感到十分高兴。
I’ve just heard that you were elected president of the Students’ Union, and I’m really happy for you.
你的诗词朗诵拿下全校第一名,我迫不及待写信祝贺你。
You won the first place in the school poetry recitation contest, and I can’t wait to write to congratulate you.
【回顾努力、夸赞对方】
平日里你总是抓紧碎片时间背诵稿件,这份坚持造就了今天的成功。
You always made use of spare time to recite drafts, and your persistence led to your success today.
面对高强度训练你从未放弃,这份毅力让所有人都十分佩服。
You never gave up even under heavy training, and everyone admires your strong will.
你踏实认真的态度,是我们所有人学习的榜样。
Your careful and hard-working attitude sets a perfect example for all of us.
【表达内心感受】
看到你的努力得到认可,我发自内心为你感到开心。
I’m truly glad from the bottom of my heart to see your hard work recognized.
你的经历激励了我,让我明白坚持就会有收获。
Your experience inspires me and makes me realize that efforts will bring rewards.
【祝福 + 邀约结尾】
祝愿你在新岗位上大展拳脚,一切顺利。
Wish you every success and great progress in your new position.
这周末我想请你吃饭,一同分享这份喜悦,不知你是否有空?
I’d like to invite you to dinner this weekend to share your joy. Are you available?
再次祝贺你的优异成绩,期待听到你的回复。
Congratulations once more on your brilliant achievement. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Dear ______,
How is everything going? I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to congratulate you on ______(获奖 / 升学 / 当选等喜事).
I was so glad to hear the good news. You ______(长期付出的努力). It’s no surprise that you made it, because you never gave up.
I really admire your ______(品质:毅力 / 勤奋 / 自信). Your success encourages me a lot.
Wish you ______(美好祝福). If you are free, let’s ______(邀约庆祝).
Congratulations again! Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
题型 1 祝贺同学英语演讲比赛夺冠
假定你是李华,你的好友李明获得全校英语演讲比赛一等奖,写信祝贺:1. 表达祝贺;2. 回忆他平日刻苦练习;3. 邀约周末聚餐庆祝。
Dear Li Ming,
How is everything going? I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to congratulate you on winning first prize in the school English Speech Competition.
I was overjoyed when I heard the good news. For months, you spent every break practicing pronunciation and revised your speech again and again. Your great efforts finally paid off.
I really admire your perseverance and courage to stand on stage. Your success inspires me to work harder on oral English.
Wish you greater progress in English learning. Let’s have dinner together this weekend to celebrate your victory.
Congratulations once more! Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
题型 2 祝贺笔友考上理想高中
假定你是李华,英国笔友 Peter 顺利考入理想中学,写信祝贺:1. 表达由衷祝贺;2. 称赞他长期坚持学习;3. 祝福他新校园生活顺利。
Dear Peter,
Hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your admission to your dream high school.
I know you kept studying hard every day and overcame many difficulties in your study. It’s totally deserved that you achieved such a wonderful result.
Your diligence sets a good example for me. I believe you will enjoy your new school life.
Wish you a bright school life and make more new friends there.
Looking forward to hearing more about your new school.
Yours,
Li Hua
题型 3 祝贺同学当选学生会主席
假定你是李华,同学王浩成功当选学生会主席,写信祝贺:1. 表达祝贺;2. 认可他热心负责的品质;3. 愿意之后协助他开展工作。
Dear Wang Hao,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to congratulate you on being elected chairman of the Students’ Union.
Everyone knows you are warm-hearted and responsible. You always take an active part in class activities and help classmates solve problems. No wonder all students voted for you.
I really admire your sense of responsibility. If you need any help with student activities later, I’m always ready to give you a hand.
Wish you smooth work and great achievements in the new position.
Congratulations again!
Yours,
Li Hua
题型 4 祝贺外教讲座圆满成功
假定你是李华,学生会干事,外教 Mr.Smith 的绿色校园主题讲座圆满结束,写信祝贺:1. 祝贺讲座大获成功;2. 称赞讲座内容丰富、收获很大;3. 期待后续更多分享。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua from the Students’ Union. I’m writing to congratulate you on the huge success of your lecture about green campus.
Your speech covered plenty of practical low-carbon tips and brought us vivid videos. All students listened carefully and learned a lot from your sharing.
We all speak highly of your wonderful lecture. It greatly raised our environmental awareness.
We sincerely hope you can deliver more similar lectures for us in the future.
Thank you for your hard work again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题型 5 祝贺好友诗词诵读大赛获奖
假定你是李华,好友 Anna 在校诗词诵读大赛斩获二等奖,写信祝贺:1. 表达祝贺;2. 夸赞她反复打磨朗诵情感;3. 向她请教诵读技巧。
Dear Anna,
I’m Li Hua. I’m so glad to hear that you won the second prize in the Chinese Poetry Recitation Contest. Congratulations to you!
I watched your performance last week. You spent lots of time adjusting your tone and emotions to match poems, and all your hard work showed on stage.
I really admire your love for traditional poetry. Could you share some recitation skills with me when you are free?
Wish you better results in future competitions. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
题型 6 祝贺学长志愿活动圆满举办
假定你是李华,写给学长李阳,祝贺他组织的社区敬老志愿活动圆满落幕:1. 祝贺活动顺利完成;2. 称赞活动温暖有意义;3. 希望下次能参与帮忙。
Dear Senior Li Yang,
I’m Li Hua from Grade Two. I’m writing to congratulate you on the successful ending of the volunteer activity for the elderly.
The activity brought great warmth to the old people in the community. All volunteers got along well and finished every task perfectly under your arrangement.
It is such a meaningful activity that I really want to take part next time. If you need helpers later, please tell me.
Wish you more wonderful volunteer activities in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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