Unit 5 Look into the future 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年外研版（三起）英语五年级上册

**基本信息** 以“未来生活与美好愿景”为主题，构建“仿写思路-词汇句型-分层写作”三维训练体系，系统培养语言表达与逻辑思维能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |课文仿写思路|5步框架|分步骤仿写框架（设想-科技-功能-问答-愿望）|从课文结构到写作步骤的迁移| |核心词汇与句型|4类词汇+4类句型|主题词汇分类+功能句型模板|词汇-句型-表达的对应| |分层写作练习|3层次（基础/提高/挑战）|三层递进式写作训练（单一场景-多维度描述-价值表达）|从简单应用到综合创新的能力进阶|

外研版五年级上英语 Unit 5 Look into the future 写作突破专项训练 | 教材同步版 主题：未来生活与美好愿景 【目标】一、写作目标 能想象未来生活，按照“未来会有什么—人们会做什么—科技如何帮助生活—我的愿望”完成表达。 【思路】二、课文仿写思路 1. 提出未来设想 英文例句：In the future, people will drive flying cars. 写法提示：用 will 描写未来。 2. 介绍未来科技 英文例句：There will be pet robot dogs. 写法提示：用 there will be 介绍未来会出现的事物。 3. 说明功能 英文例句：The robot will do our chores. 写法提示：写科技会帮助人们做什么。 4. 提出问答 英文例句：Will it play with us? Yes, it will. 写法提示：练习 will 的一般疑问句。 5. 表达愿望 英文例句：I hope the future will be better. 写法提示：结尾表达对未来的期待。 【词汇】三、核心词汇 未来生活：future, tomorrow, in the year 2080, Mars, the moon, under the sea 科技发明：robot, flying car, 3-D printing, robot dog, space 未来活动：travel, live, grow food, make food, do chores, take care of pets 评价愿望：cool, useful, free time, better, hope, help people 【句型】四、参考句型 未来预测：People will ____ in the future. / There will be ____. 科技功能：It will help people a lot. / It will do our chores. 一般疑问句：Will it play with us? Yes, it will. / No, it won’t. 表达愿望：I hope the future will be better. 【提醒】五、易错点提示 • will 后面用动词原形：People will travel。 • there will be 后面接名词：There will be robots。 • 一般疑问句用 Will 开头，回答用 will/won’t。 • in the future 表示“在未来”，不要写成 on the future。 【组句】六、连词成句 1. future / the / will / be / what / like / ? ____________________________________________________________ 2. will / people / travel / to / Mars / . ____________________________________________________________ 3. there / will / be / robots / . ____________________________________________________________ 4. will / it / do / chores / ? ____________________________________________________________ 5. will / we / have / more / free time / . ____________________________________________________________ 6. hope / I / be / will / better / the future / . ____________________________________________________________ 【仿写】七、写作句型仿写 1. 把 People will travel to Mars. 中的 Mars 换成 the moon。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 把 It will do our chores. 改为“它会照顾宠物”。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 根据提示词写句：there / flying cars ____________________________________________________________ 4. 补全：Will it play with us? Yes, it ____。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 用 because 扩写：I like robots。 ____________________________________________________________ 6. 主题迁移：写一句你对未来生活的期待。 ____________________________________________________________ 【写作】八、三层写作练习 写作1｜未来的家（基础） 要求：写出未来家里会有什么机器人，以及它会做什么。不少于35词。 参考词：future, robot, home, will, help, chores ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 写作2｜2080年的生活（提高） 要求：介绍2080年的交通、居住或食物，至少使用3个will句型。不少于45词。 参考词：in 2080, will, Mars, flying car, space ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 写作3｜更美好的未来（挑战） 要求：写一段关于未来生活的想象，并说明人们怎样创造更好的未来。不少于55词。 参考词：future, technology, help, protect, better, hope ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 【范文】九、参考范文与讲解 写作1参考范文｜未来的家 In the future, there will be a robot at home. It will clean our rooms and do the chores. It will also play games with us. We will have more free time. 范文讲解：介绍机器人功能并写出生活变化。 写作2参考范文｜2080年的生活 In the year 2080, people will drive flying cars. Some people will live on Mars. We will grow food in space and use robots at home. I think future life will be cool and interesting. 范文讲解：使用多个 will 句型描述交通、居住和食物。 写作3参考范文｜更美好的未来 In the future, technology will help people a lot. Robots will do dangerous jobs and take care of old people. People will use clean energy and protect the earth. We will learn new things and help each other. I hope the future will be better for everyone. 范文讲解：从科技、环境和人与人相处三方面表达美好未来。 【小结】十、写作小结 未来生活与美好愿景类作文要围绕主题按顺序表达，注意使用 and、because、but、then 等连接词，使内容完整、连贯。 【答案】十一、参考答案 A. 连词成句答案 1. What will the future be like? 2. People will travel to Mars. 3. There will be robots. 4. Will it do chores? 5. We will have more free time. 6. I hope the future will be better. B. 句型仿写答案 1. People will travel to the moon. 2. It will take care of pets. 3. There will be flying cars. 4. will 5. I like robots because they can help people. 6. I hope I can travel to the moon one day. C. 写作练习参考答案（示例） 写作1：There will be a robot at home. It will clean my room and play with me. 写作2：In 2080, people will drive flying cars. We will travel to the moon and grow food in space. 写作3：Technology will help people. We will use clean energy, protect the earth and help each other. I hope the future will be better. 外研版五年级上册 Unit 5 Look into the future 写作训练 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $