内容正文:
Welcome Unit
单元话题满分范文必背
序号
体裁
写作核心主题
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发言稿(书信)
向老师分享难忘初中经历,阐述高中英语学习方案以及高中生活期待
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电子邮件(告知信)
给美国笔友介绍高一校园日常、自身感受,展望后续高中生活
3
电子邮件(告知信)
向英国笔友介绍高中现状:学业难度提升,期待结交新朋友,师生相处融洽
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开学典礼发言稿
新生代表发言,分享校园生活,讲述如何规划高中时间,展望未来
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电子邮件(告知信)
向外国笔友介绍学校学科、课堂氛围、参与的课外活动、个人理想与校园期盼
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电子邮件(情况说明信)
向英语外教反馈入学后的英语学习:取得的进步、现存难点、课堂改进建议
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电子邮件(建议信)
安慰适应困难、压力大的英国好友,提供适应高中新生活的多条建议
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电子邮件(告知信)
向英国笔友介绍高一现阶段学习生活、后续学习规划与长期期待
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电子邮件(告知信)
给澳大利亚朋友介绍入学近一个月的校园印象、学习情况、课外社团活动
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电子邮件(道歉信)
因提交 AI 代写作文向外教诚恳认错,做出保证并提出补救方案
1.假设你是李阳,你的英语老师Ms. Smith让同学们分享自己的初中生活,并谈谈对高中学习的计划。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文:
1. 初中最难忘的一件事; 2. 高中打算如何学习英语; 3. 对高中生活的简单期望。
词数80左右。
Dear Ms. Smith,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Yang
【答案】Dear Ms. Smith,
I’d like to share my junior high life. The most unforgettable thing was winning the English speech contest last year. It built up my confidence and made me love English more. For senior high, I plan to improve English by listening to BBC news and reading more English novels so that I can expand my vocabulary. I also hope to make new friends and learn to be more independent in the coming three years.
I’m really looking forward to my new journey because it will be a fresh start where I can explore unknown possibilities and become a better version of myself.
Yours,
Li Yang
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生写一篇短文,分享自己的初中生活,并谈谈对高中学习的计划。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
难忘的:unforgettable → memorable
比赛:contest → competition
即将到来的:coming → forthcoming
扩大:expand → enlarge
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’d like to share my junior high life.
拓展句:I’d like to share my junior high life, which was filled with both challenges and joys.
【点睛】【高分句型1】For senior high, I plan to improve English by listening to BBC news and reading more English novels so that I can expand my vocabulary. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m really looking forward to my new journey because it will be a fresh start where I can explore unknown possibilities and become a better version of myself. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句和where引导的定语从句)
2.假定你是高一新生李华,你的美国笔友Mike来信询问你的高中生活。请你由以下提示给他写一封回信。
内容包括:1.学校生活;
2.感受;
3.对未来高中生活的展望。
参考词汇:选修课elective course
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to receive your letter, in which you expressed interest in the Chinese Senior High school life.
Life in Senior High seems to be fresh and exciting, but I find it difficult to learn some subjects. Fortunately, our school has offered a range of after-class activities. I take the tea culture class in which the teacher not only introduces the history of tea drinking, but also shows us how to make tea.
The future days will see me face up to challenges and make more progress. I am sure hard work will pay off. Would you tell me about your new semester? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Mike回一封电子邮件,介绍自己的高中生活、感受以及对未来高中生活的展望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad → delighted
表达:express → convey
提供:offer → provide
展示:show → demonstrate
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:Life in Senior High seems to be fresh and exciting, but I find it difficult to learn some subjects.
拓展句:Fresh and exciting as senior high school life seems, I have great difficulty in learning some of the subjects.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I take the tea culture class in which the teacher not only introduces the history of tea drinking, but also shows us how to make tea.(运用了in which引导的定语从句以及not only...but also...的并列结构)
【高分句型2】I am sure hard work will pay off.(运用了省略了引导词that的宾语从句)
3.假定你是李华,最近你的英国笔友Tom给你写了一封电子邮件,询问你进入高中后学校生活的情况。请你根据以下内容提示给他回封电子邮件,介绍一下你的情况。
1. 学习难度加大,学习内容增多;
2. 渴望交到新朋友;
3. 老师和同学们很好相处。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。注意书写。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for writing to me. In your last letter, you asked me about my new school life. Now I’ll tell you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
Thank you for writing to me. In your last letter, you asked me about my new school life. Now I’ll tell you.
Going to senior high school is a really big challenge, which puts us under a lot of pressure. Learning has become much more difficult because the knowledge we learn in class is wider and deeper. Besides, I was worried about whether I could fit in and make new friends on campus. Luckily, our teachers and classmates are kind and easy to get along with. Now I have built confidence in myself and my happiness is beyond description. I will keep working hard and go all out to improve myself every day.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Tom回封电子邮件,说明学习难度加大,学习内容增多、渴望交到新朋友以及老师和同学们很好相处。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困难:difficult→tough
担心:worried→concerned
幸运地:luckily→fortunately
提高:improve→promote
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:I will keep working hard and go all out to improve myself every day.
拓展句:I will keep working hard so that I can go all out to improve myself every day.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Going to senior high school is a really big challenge, which puts us under a lot of pressure.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Learning has become much more difficult because the knowledge we learn in class is wider and deeper.(运用了because引导原因状语从句)
4.假定你是李华,你即将作为高一新生代表在开学典礼上发言。请根据以下要点写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1. 分享校园生活;
2. 谈谈高中学习如何规划时间;
3. 展望未来。
注意:写作词数应为100个左右。
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of all the freshmen in the opening ceremony. How time flies! We have entered a new world full of challenges, but the campus life is so colorful and exciting. There are friendly teachers and classmates, and after class we have various clubs. As we all know, high school time is very busy and limited, so we should arrange time wisely. In my opinion, we should make full preparations in advance, listen attentively in class and finish our homework in time. Meanwhile, I hope I will make great progress with the guidance of my teachers. Thanks for your listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇发言稿,分享校园生活、谈谈高中学习如何规划时间以及展望未来。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动人心的:exciting → thrilling
荣幸:honor → privilege
指导:guidance → instruction
明智地:wisely → advisably
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:We have entered a new world full of challenges, but the campus life is so colorful and exciting.
拓展句:Although we have entered a new world full of challenges, the campus life is so colorful and exciting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of all the freshmen in the opening ceremony.(运用了不定式作真正主语)
【高分句型2】Meanwhile, I hope I will make great progress with the guidance of my teachers.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
5.假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Jack想了解你们学校的日常生活。请你给他写封邮件。
主要内容:1.学校所设学科及课堂氛围;
2.你所参加的课外活动及感受;
3.个人的理想及对学校的期望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
How’s everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
How’s everything going? I’m delighted to share my school life with you.
We have a wide range of subjects, including Chinese, math, English, chemistry, physics and so on. Our classes are lively and interesting, with teachers guiding us to discuss and explore knowledge actively. After class, I joined the volunteer club, where we visit nursing homes regularly, chatting with the elderly. It really taught me the true meaning of kindness. Additionally, my ideal is to gain admission to a top university, and I sincerely hope our school will attract more excellent educators, build more advanced labs and become a great place for more young talents.
What about your school life?
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的告知信。要求考生给外国笔友Jack写封信,向其介绍自己学校的日常生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→ overjoyed
各种各样的:a wide range of→ a variety of
此外:additionally→ what’s more
真诚地:sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our classes are lively and interesting, with teachers guiding us to discuss and explore knowledge actively.
拓展句:Our classes are lively and interesting, where teachers guide us to discuss and explore knowledge actively.
【点睛】【高分句型1】After class, I joined the volunteer club, where we visit nursing homes regularly, chatting with the elderly.(运用了where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Additionally, my ideal is to gain admission to a top university, and I sincerely hope our school will attract more excellent educators, build more advanced labs and become a great place for more young talents.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
6.假定你是高一学生李华,外教Mary想了解你们班每个人入学后的英语学习状况,请你给Mary写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的进步;
(2)你的困难;
(3)你对课堂的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
I’m Li Hua. It’s great to tell you about my English learning since entering senior high.
I’ve made obvious progress in speaking. I used to be afraid to talk in class, but now I can actively answer your questions and even join group discussions confidently. However, I still struggle with vocabulary. I often forget new words quickly, which affects my reading and writing. Besides, I find grammar rules hard to master.
Could we have more interesting activities like English games in class? They can help us remember words better. I hope my sharing helps you know our learning situation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义给外教Mary写一封邮件,告知其自己入学后的英语学习情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
明显的:obvious→apparent/evident
加入:join→affiliate
害怕做某事:be afraid to→be terrified to
记住:remember→learn...by heart
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, I still struggle with vocabulary.
拓展句:However, I still struggle with vocabulary, which causes me much trouble.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I often forget new words quickly, which affects my reading and writing. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope my sharing helps you know our learning situation.(运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句)
7.假定你是李华,你的英国好友 Peter 发来邮件,倾诉他进入高一以来,学习压力很大,不适应新的学习生活环境,请你给他回复一封邮件,给他一些建议。
要求:
1. 写作词数应为 80 词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Peter,
I understand you’re under great stress since entering senior high. Don’t be overly anxious! First, make a detailed study plan that suits your own situation, which can help you manage your time more effectively.
Second, what you need to know is that everyone adapts to new environments at their own pace, so be patient with yourself. You can join some clubs where you can meet like-minded friends; this is a great way to fit into the new surroundings.
If you still feel overwhelmed, don’t hesitate to talk to your teachers or classmates, who can offer you useful advice.
I believe you’ll get used to it soon.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国好友Peter回邮件,针对其进入高一后学习压力大、不适应新环境的问题给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力:stress → pressure
有效的:effectively → efficiently
适应:adapt to → adjust to
耐心的:patient → tolerant
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Don’t be overly anxious!
拓展句:Don’t be overly anxious, because everything will work out in the end.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, make a detailed study plan that suits your own situation, which can help you manage your time more effectively.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Second, what you need to know is that everyone adapts to new environments at their own pace, so be patient with yourself.(运用了what引导的主语从句、that引导的表语从句)
8.假如你叫李华,你的英国笔友Alice来信想了解你高一目前的学习生活,以及你为接下来的学习生活所做的打算以及你的期待。请你给她写一封回信,要点如下:
1.介绍你入学以来的学习生活;
2.你对接下来的学习生活所做的打算;
3.你对以后学习生活的期待。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.开头已写好,不计入词数。
Dear Alice,
I am more than happy to receive your letter.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alice,
I am more than happy to receive your letter. Since starting senior one, I’ve had a busy but rewarding life. I have six classes a day, with math and Chinese being my key subjects. After class, I join the basketball club and practice with classmates, which relaxes me a lot.
Next, I plan to make a weekly study plan to strengthen my weak subjects like physics. I also want to read more English novels to improve my reading skills.
I expect to build a solid knowledge base, make more friends and become more self-disciplined. Hope to hear about your life soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义给笔友Alice回信,介绍自己高一的学习情况和打算。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有意义的:rewarding → meaningful/significant
计划:plan → schedule
巩固:strengthen → enhance
基础:base → foundation
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: I have six classes a day, with math and Chinese being my key subjects.
拓展句:I have six classes a day, among which math and Chinese are my key subjects.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I have six classes a day, with math and Chinese being my key subjects.(运用了with的复合结构)
【高分句型2】After class, I join the basketball club and practice with classmates, which relaxes me a lot.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
9.假定你是李华,你进入高中学习已快一个月,最近收到来自澳大利亚的朋友Tom的电子邮件,他询问你在新学校的基本情况。请根据以下提示,给他回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.你对学校的总体印象;
2.你的学习情况;
3.课外活动情况。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
Glad to hear from you! I’ve been studying in my new senior high school for nearly a month and I’m getting used to the life here.
My school is a wonderful place with a big playground, bright classrooms and helpful teachers. Everyone around me is friendly, which makes me feel warm. In terms of study, the courses are more challenging than before, but I’ve made some new friends and we often study together.
After class, there are various activities. I joined the English club, where we practice oral English and watch English movies.
How’s your school life going?
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给澳大利亚朋友Tom写回信,介绍自己进入高中近一个月的新学校情况,需包含对学校的总体印象、学习情况和课外活动情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad → delighted
适应:get used to → adapt to
就……而言:in terms of → as regards
各种各样的:various → all kinds of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My school is a wonderful place with a big playground, bright classrooms and helpful teachers.
拓展句:My school is a wonderful place which has a big playground, bright classrooms and helpful teachers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Everyone around me is friendly, which makes me feel warm.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I joined the English club, where we practice oral English and watch English movies. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
10.假定你是李华,外教Mr. Chuck 发现你的作文完全由AI 生成(generated),判为不及格。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 承认错误; 2. 做出承诺; 3. 补救措施。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Chuck,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Chuck,
I’m writing to extend my sincere apology for submitting an AI-generated essay.
I’ve completely realized that it violated academic integrity and I deeply regret my actions. This shortcut reflects poorly on my commitment to learning, and I take full responsibility. I promise this will never happen again.
From now on, I will complete all assignments independently, focusing on developing genuine writing skills through careful practice and research.
To make amends, I’ll rewrite the essay manually this weekend. Thank you for your understanding.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外教Mr. Chuck写一封道歉邮件,因提交AI生成的作文被判不及格一事致歉,需涵盖承认错误、做出承诺、提出补救措施三方面内容。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真诚的:sincere → heartfelt
捷径:shortcut → cutoff
承诺:promise →swear
技能:skill → technique
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:From now on, I will complete all assignments independently, focusing on developing genuine writing skills through careful practice and research.
拓展句:From now on, I will complete all assignments independently, which will help me focus on developing genuine writing skills through careful practice and research.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve completely realized that it violated academic integrity and I deeply regret my actions.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】From now on, I will complete all assignments independently, focusing on developing genuine writing skills through careful practice and research.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
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$Welcome Unit
单元话题满分范文必背
序号
体裁
写作核心主题
1
发言稿(书信)
向老师分享难忘初中经历,阐述高中英语学习方案以及高中生活期待
2
电子邮件(告知信)
给美国笔友介绍高一校园日常、自身感受,展望后续高中生活
向英国笔友介绍高中现状:学业难度提升,期待结交新朋友,师生相处融
3
电子邮件(告知信)
治
开学典礼发言稿
新生代表发言,分享校园生活,讲述如何规划高中时间,展望未来
向外国笔友介绍学校学科、课堂氛围、参与的课外活动、个人理想与校园
电子邮件(告知信)
期盼
电子邮件(情况说明
向英语外教反馈入学后的英语学习:取得的进步、现存难点、课堂改进建
信)
议
7
电子邮件(建议信)
安慰适应困难、压力大的英国好友,提供适应高中新生活的多条建议
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电子邮件(告知信)
向英国笔友介绍高一现阶段学习生活、后续学习规划与长期期待
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电子邮件(告知信)
给澳大利亚朋友介绍入学近一个月的校园印象、学习情况、课外社团活动
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电子邮件(道歉信)
因提交AI代写作文向外教诚恳认错,做出保证并提出补救方案
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假设你是李阳,你的英语老师Ms.Smith让同学们分享自己的初中生活,并谈谈对高中学习的计划。
请你根据以下要点写一篇短文:
1.初中最难忘的一件事;2.高中打算如何学习英语;3.对高中生活的简单期望。
词数80左右。
Dear Ms.Smith,
Yours,
Li Yang
2.假定你是高一新生李华,你的美国笔友Mk来信询问你的高中生活。请你由以下提示给他写一封回
信。
内容包括:1学校生活;
2.感受:
3对未来高中生活的展望。
参考词汇:选修课elective course
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
Yours,
Li Hua
3.假定你是李华,最近你的英国笔友To给你写了一封电子邮件,询问你进入高中后学校生活的情况。
请你根据以下内容提示给他回封电子邮件,介绍一下你的情况。
1.学习难度加大,学习内容增多;
2.渴望交到新朋友:
3.老师和同学们很好相处。
注意:
1.词数80左右:开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。注意书写。
Dear Tom.
Thank you for writing to me.In your last letter,you asked me about my new school life.Now I'll tell you
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
4.假定你是李华,你即将作为高一新生代表在开学典礼上发言。请根据以下要点写一篇发言稿,内容包
括:
1.分享校园生活;
2.谈谈高中学习如何规划时间:
3.展望未来。
注意:写作词数应为100个左右。
5.假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Jck想了解你们学校的日常生活。请你给他写封邮件。
主要内容:1学校所设学科及课堂氛围;
2.你所参加的课外活动及感受:
3.个人的理想及对学校的期望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
How's everything going?
Yours.
LiHua
6.假定你是高一学生李华,外教May想了解你们班每个人入学后的英语学习状况,请你给May写一封
邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的进步:
(2)你的困难:
(3)你对课堂的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
Yours,
Li Hua
7.假定你是李华,你的英国好友Pter发来邮件,倾诉他进入高一以来,学习压力很大,不适应新的学
习生活环境,请你给他回复一封邮件,给他一些建议。
要求:
1.写作词数应为80词左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
8.假如你叫李华,你的英国笔友Alic来信想了解你高一目前的学习生活,以及你为接下来的学习生活
所做的打算以及你的期待。请你给她写一封回信,要点如下:
1介绍你入学以来的学习生活:
2你对接下来的学习生活所做的打算;
3.你对以后学习生活的期待。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯:
3.开头已写好,不计入词数。
Dear Alice.
I am more than happy to receive your letter
Yours,
Li Hua
9.假定你是李华,你进入高中学习已快一个月,最近收到来自澳大利亚的朋友To的电子邮件,他询问
你在新学校的基本情况。请根据以下提示,给他回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.你对学校的总体印象:
2.你的学习情况:
3.课外活动情况。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
l0.假定你是李华,外教.Chuck发现你的作文完全由AI生成(generated),判为不及格。请你给外
教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.承认错误;2.做出承诺;3.补救措施。
注意
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Chuck,
Yours.
Li Hua