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外研版六年级上英语 Unit 2 What's your opinion?
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主题:表达观点与说明理由
【目标】一、写作目标
能围绕一个事物或问题表达自己的看法,按照“提出观点—说明理由—进行比较—给出建议或总结”的顺序写短文。
【思路】二、课文仿写思路
1. 提出观点
英文例句:I think eating apples with the peel is better.
写法提示:开头直接表达自己的看法。
2. 说明理由
英文例句:Because it is healthier.
写法提示:用 because 说明理由。
3. 进行比较
英文例句:It is more important than a nice taste.
写法提示:使用比较级比较两个方面。
4. 补充不同观点
英文例句:Some people think apples without the peel taste better.
写法提示:可以写出他人观点,使表达更完整。
5. 给出建议
英文例句:Wash the apple carefully before eating it.
写法提示:结尾给出简单、可行的建议。
【词汇】三、核心词汇
事实与观点:fact, opinion, think, agree, disagree, reason
比较与感受:good, better, healthy, healthier, sweet, sweeter, easy, easier, important, more important
食物与活动:apple, peel, fruit, taste, wash, eat, colour, picture
观点连接:because, but, so, also, I think, I don’t think so
【句型】四、参考句型
表达观点:I think ____ is better. / I don’t think so.
说明理由:I think so because ____. / The reason is that ____.
进行比较:____ is healthier than ____. / ____ is more interesting than ____.
表达事实:There are three horses in the painting. / This picture has different colours.
提出建议:We should ____. / Don’t forget to ____.
【提醒】五、易错点提示
• 比较级后面常用 than:Apples are healthier than sweets。
• good 的比较级是 better,不能写 gooder;easy 的比较级是 easier。
• more interesting / more important 前面不能再加 -er。
• because 后面接完整句子:I like it because it is healthier。
• I think so 表示“我这样认为”;I don’t think so 表示“我不这样认为”。
【组句】六、连词成句
1. your / what / opinion / is / ?
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2. think / I / it / is / healthier / .
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3. apples / than / sweets / are / healthier / .
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4. because / it / is / important / .
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5. don’t / I / think / so / .
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6. wash / carefully / the apple / before / eating / it / .
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【仿写】七、写作句型仿写
1. 把 I think apples are healthier. 中的 apples 换成 bananas。
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2. 把 Apples are sweeter than pears. 改为“苹果比糖果更健康”。
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3. 根据提示词写句:important / health / than / taste
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4. 补全:I think so ____ it is easier and faster.
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5. 用 but 连接:Apples are good. Do not eat dirty peel.
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6. 主题迁移:写一句你对“每天阅读”的看法。
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【写作】八、三层写作练习
写作1|我喜欢的水果(基础)
要求:选择一种水果,写出你的观点、两个理由和一个建议。不少于40词。
参考词:fruit, think, good, healthy, sweet, because
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写作2|我的观点与理由(提高)
要求:围绕“带皮吃苹果好不好”表达观点,使用比较级和至少2个连接词。不少于50词。
参考词:opinion, healthier, sweeter, better, because, but
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写作3|给朋友的一封建议信(挑战)
要求:给朋友写一封短邮件或书信,表达你对一种食物或习惯的看法,说明理由并提出建议。不少于60词。
参考词:Dear, think, important, more, should, don’t forget
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【范文】九、参考范文与讲解
写作1参考范文|我喜欢的水果
My favourite fruit is an apple. I think apples are good and healthy. They are sweeter than some other fruits. I like eating apples because they are tasty. We should wash them carefully before eating.
范文讲解:先点明水果,再写健康、口味两个理由,最后提出清洗建议。
写作2参考范文|我的观点与理由
I think eating apples with the peel is better. First, the peel is healthier. Apples with no peel may taste sweeter, but health is more important than a nice taste. We should wash the apple carefully before eating it.
范文讲解:开头提出观点,中间用 healthier、sweeter、more important 进行比较,最后给出建议。
写作3参考范文|给朋友的一封建议信
Dear Tom,
I think eating fruit every day is important. Fruit is healthier than sweets and it can help us grow. You may think sweets taste better, but too many sweets are not good for your teeth. So I think you should eat an apple every day. Don’t forget to wash it carefully.
Your friend,
Amy
范文讲解:书信格式完整,使用 because/ but/ so 的功能表达观点、转折和结论,结尾用祈使句提出建议。
【小结】十、写作小结
“表达观点”类作文可以按照“我认为……—因为……—和另一事物相比……—所以我们应该……”的顺序来写。事实要客观,观点要有理由;比较级和 because、but、so 能让文章更有说服力。
【答案】十一、参考答案
A. 连词成句答案
1. What is your opinion?
2. I think it is healthier.
3. Apples are healthier than sweets.
4. Because it is important.
5. I don’t think so.
6. Wash the apple carefully before eating it.
B. 句型仿写答案
1. I think bananas are healthier.
2. Apples are healthier than sweets.
3. Health is more important than taste.
4. because
5. Apples are good, but do not eat dirty peel.
6. I think reading every day is important.
C. 写作练习参考答案(示例)
写作1:My favourite fruit is an apple. I think it is good and healthy. It is sweet, too. I like it because it tastes nice. We should wash it before eating.
写作2:I think eating apples with the peel is better. The peel is healthier. Apples with no peel are sweeter, but health is more important than taste. We should wash the apple carefully.
写作3:Dear Tom, I think eating fruit every day is important. Fruit is healthier than sweets, but sweets taste better. Too many sweets are bad for our teeth. So you should eat fruit every day. Don’t forget to wash it carefully. Your friend, Amy.
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