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冀教版六年级上英语 Unit 5 Holiday fun
写作突破专项训练 | 教材同步版
主题:我最喜欢的节日与节日活动
【目标】一、写作目标
能围绕“介绍一个节日”写短文,按照“节日名称—时间—节日特色—活动安排—感受”的顺序完成表达。
【思路】二、课文仿写思路
1. 点明节日
英文例句:My favourite holiday is the Spring Festival.
写法提示:开头直接写出最喜欢的节日。
2. 介绍时间
英文例句:It is in January or February.
写法提示:可用 on / in 介绍节日日期或月份。
3. 说明节日特色
英文例句:It is a time of new beginnings and new hope.
写法提示:用简单句说明节日的意义。
4. 介绍活动
英文例句:We invite our family and friends. We give gifts, too.
写法提示:用并列动词写节日活动。
5. 表达感受
英文例句:I love this holiday because my family is together.
写法提示:结尾写喜欢的原因和感受。
【词汇】三、核心词汇
节日名称:holiday, Christmas, New Year’s Day, the Spring Festival, Carnival, the Tomatina Festival
时间表达:on December 25, on January 1, in January or February, on Christmas Eve
节日物品:Christmas tree, lights, Santa, gifts, card, Chinese lanterns
活动与感受:invite, sing, dance, dress up, get together, excited, happy, fun
【句型】四、参考句型
介绍节日:My favourite holiday is ____. / ____ is an important holiday.
介绍时间:It is on ____ . / It is in ____ .
介绍活动:At the holiday, we ____. / We are going to ____.
表达原因:I like it because ____. / It is a time to ____.
【提醒】五、易错点提示
• 节日名称前常用 the:the Spring Festival;专有节日如 Christmas 不加 the。
• 具体日期用 on,月份或季节用 in:on January 1 / in February。
• be going to 后用动词原形:I am going to make a card。
• invite 后接人:We invite our family and friends。
【组句】六、连词成句
1. favourite / holiday / my / is / Christmas / .
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2. on / is / December 25 / it / .
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3. family / invite / our / we / friends / and / .
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4. gifts / give / we / them / .
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5. going / I’m / a card / to / make / .
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6. together / have / fun / we / .
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【仿写】七、写作句型仿写
1. 把 My favourite holiday is Christmas. 中的 Christmas 换成 the Spring Festival。
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2. 把 It is on December 25. 改为“它在一月或二月”。
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3. 根据提示词写句:sing / Christmas songs。
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4. 补全:First, draw a tree. ____, draw some gifts。
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5. 用 because 扩写:I like the Spring Festival。
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6. 主题迁移:写一句你在节日里打算做的事情。
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【写作】八、三层写作练习
写作1|我最喜欢的节日(基础)
要求:介绍你最喜欢的节日,写出节日名称、时间和两项活动。不少于40词。
参考词:favourite holiday, on/in, family, gifts, happy
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写作2|节日的一天(提高)
要求:写一段节日日记,使用 yesterday/today/tomorrow 或 first/then/finally,写清活动顺序。不少于50词。
参考词:yesterday, today, tomorrow, first, then, finally
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写作3|节日邀请卡(挑战)
要求:写一段节日邀请或节日介绍,写清时间、活动、感受和邀请语。不少于60词。
参考词:invite, get together, sing, gifts, because, welcome
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【范文】九、参考范文与讲解
写作1参考范文|我最喜欢的节日
My favourite holiday is the Spring Festival. It is in January or February. My family gets together and has a big dinner. Children get lucky money. We also say “Happy Chinese New Year” to each other. I love this holiday because it is happy and warm.
范文讲解:按照“名称—时间—活动—原因”展开,句子短而完整,适合基础写作。
写作2参考范文|节日的一天
Yesterday I went to the shop with my mum. I saw Santa and he gave me some candy. I was very excited. Today I am going to put lights on the Christmas tree. Then I am going to take some pictures. Tomorrow I am going to open my gifts. I love Christmas!
范文讲解:用 yesterday、today、tomorrow 串联三天活动,体现时间顺序和日记感。
写作3参考范文|节日邀请卡
Christmas is coming. It is on December 25. I want to invite you to my home. We are going to put up a Christmas tree, sing songs and give gifts. We can also make a card together. I am happy because our family and friends will be together. Welcome to my Christmas party!
范文讲解:先交代节日和时间,再写邀请对象、活动和感受,最后用 Welcome 发出邀请。
【小结】十、写作小结
我最喜欢的节日与节日活动类作文可按照“点明主题—补充时间/地点或背景—写具体活动或做法—表达感受与行动”的顺序完成。写作时注意使用 first, then, next, finally, because, so 等词,让内容更连贯。
【答案】十一、参考答案
A. 连词成句答案
1. My favourite holiday is Christmas.
2. It is on December 25.
3. We invite our family and friends.
4. We give them gifts.
5. I’m going to make a card.
6. We have fun together.
B. 句型仿写答案
1. My favourite holiday is the Spring Festival.
2. It is in January or February.
3. We sing Christmas songs.
4. Then
5. I like the Spring Festival because my family gets together.
6. I am going to take some pictures and share them with my friends.
C. 写作练习参考答案(示例)
写作1:My favourite holiday is Christmas. It is on December 25. We put up a Christmas tree and give gifts. We sing songs and have fun together. I love it very much!
写作2:Yesterday I went to the shop with my mum. Today I am going to put lights on the tree. Then I am going to take pictures. Tomorrow I am going to open my gifts.
写作3:Christmas is coming. It is on December 25. I want to invite you to my home. We are going to sing songs, make cards and give gifts. I am happy because we can have fun together. Welcome!
冀教版六年级上Unit 5 Holiday fun 写作训练
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